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Posted: 15 years ago
cute part dewdropred😳, please post soon ur next part😍
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyakrishna9

geet shd call maan as SUNIYE not MAAN

nowadys who is calling their husband or would be suniye .... tht's Y I thought it would B better if it would be Maan ...'she used to call him Maan in hoshiarpur .... & Maan is a modern guy ... so I thought he would prefer Maan .... tht's according to my story line .... in the show they can show wht they want ....&
normally some husbands like their wives to call them by their name ... it shows a different feel or love when they hear their name called by their loved one ....& ... some men do think it is old fashioned to be called suniye ....
& thn wht I C in todays episode the same thing came ... I was like OMG ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update... geet feeding maan.. how cute... do continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rocking update!!
plz cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you every one for allthe lovely comments ....& welcome 2 all who said thank you ....

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Part 14: -

Geet nods her head while feeling shy … thinking to herself …"Baabji main maan sir ko kaise khilau … hmm … par kal tho unhone mujhe khilaya tha … tab tho aaram sae maine khaliya …. Ab kyun jhijhak ho raha hain … agar wo chahthe hain tho …. yehi sahi … waise bhi maine aaj tak unko kuch jyadaa hi sataya tha ….jaan bhuj kae tho nahin … par aisa karna padaa mujhe uss waqt …Sir sae darga kae baarae main bhi punchana hain … "

Thinking all this she keeps 2 plates on the table…. the one in her hand which was 4 maan then another one 4 her…

Geet – chaliye breakfast kariye ….

Maan – yeh 2 plates kyun ….

Geet – ek mere liye aur ek aap ke liye …..

& thn 2 herself -" kyun mujhe nahin khana hain kya sirf akele akele khana chahthe hain … "

Maan – wo main jantha hun … kyunki hum dono hi hain idhar … par main tho apne haathon sae nahin khane wala hun …. Tum mujhe khilaogi tho dho kyun … ek khaafhi hain …. Hain na ….

Geet 2 herself – "oh …inka wo matlab tha kya … main tho kuch aur hi samjhi thi …"

Geet – teek hain … jaise aap teek samjhe ….

Maan – ab mujhe khilaogi ya phir mujhe bhookhe hi maa…

Geet again keeps her hands on his mouth ….

Geet – aap phir sae aisi baath kar rahen hain …. Mujhe aisi baathein aapki muh sae sunna acha nahin lagtha maine kal bhi aap ko roka tha … phir aap baar baar aisi baathein kyun karthe hain …. Samajh thae kyun nahin hain …

Maan takes her hand & kisses it … geet's feeling shy & pulls her hand back from him ….

Maan – teek hain agli baar main aisi baathein nahin karungaa … ab kush …

Geet nods her head … saying OK …

Both sit down at the dining table ….

Geet starts feeding maan …. He is actually enjoying it ….

Geet – sir … mera matlab hain … Maan … main app sae kuch punchu ….

Maan takes 1 small piece of paratha & asks geet

Maan – apna muh tho kholo …

Geet opens her mouth ….

They both are feeding each other parathas ….

Geet – ab main aap sae kuch punch sakhthi hun …

Maan – haa haa puncho kya punchna chahthi ho …

Geet – aap ko kaisae pata chala ki main darga kis wajah sae aayi thi …

Maan – hmmmm … wo … main jab uss din packing karr raha tha tho mujhe table kae paas photo frame kae glass kae broken pieces milae thae aur photo bhi … aur usi kae paas table sae ek nail bhi bahar nikla hua tha aur us main tumhara duppatta ka ek chota saa tukda reh gaya tha jo mujhe dikhayi diya tha …. Tho baad main maine guess kar liya tha ….aur mujhe tho dargae main hi tumhari ankhon main dikh gaya tha ki tum mere liye kuch mehsoos karthi ho …tho maine andaaza laga liya …. Kyun main sach bol raha hun … hain ki nahin ….

Geet – haan .. aap kaa andaaza teek nikla ….main bahut gabra gayi thi … isi liye udhar aa gayi thi …. Aap ka phone call kae baad …. Aur mujhe jaise aapne kaha tha subah ki wo baat bhi yaad agayi thi … is liye us waqt meri samajh main kuch nahin aaya tha … tho main chali aayi ….

They both continue feeding each other breakfast ….

Maan - Geet main tumhe daadimaa sae kal nahin aaj hi milwanae wala hun …. Aaj shaam ko tum kuch acchi si saari pehanna … aur waise bhi daadi maa sae pehli baar mere fiancee ki tor par tumhe milwaane wala hun tho saree acha lagega …. Salwar kameez tho roz hi pehenthi ho …

ek baat kahun …. tum sari main bahut khubsoorat lagthi ho … uss din party main tum bahut sundar dikh rahin thi … saree main … (thinking about kurban hua night)

Geet – wo sari tho apne diya tha naa mujhe … par kyun …

Maan – Maine …. Tum kya bol rahin ho….

Geet – haan aapne tho bhijwaya tha …

Maan – nahin geet maine nahin bhejaa tha ….

Geet – tho phir tasha aisi kyun bol rahin thi …

Maan's face is changing feelings now …

Maan – kya bol rahin thi ….

Geet – uss nae kahan thi ki aapne ek waiter ko sari di mujhe daene kae liya aur wo mujhe dund rahan tha …. Tho uss nae us waiter sae wo lekar mere paas le kae aayi thi …

Isiliye main us din sari pehan kar aayi thi …. Uss din tho main kuch aur hi pehhanne wali thi … par aapne diya bolke maine sari pehan li ….

Maan was angry that some one used his name to give her sari … thinking why & who would do that ….. but when he heard about what geet said … he felt happy … forgetting his anger on Tasha & that some anonymous person who gave the sari…

Maan – tumne uss din wo sari … meri wajah sae pehni …. Kyunki maine diya samajh kae …. Mere liye ….

Geet – haa …

Maan – mujhe uss waqt thodi daer kae liye gussa tho bahut aaya tha … par main uss roop tumhe dekh kar tumhe kabhie bhool bhi nahin paayaa tha …. Tum sach main bahut sunder lag rahi thi …

Now that Maan is opening up about his feelings for Geet ….. Geet's feeling shy ….

Their breakfast is done …..

Maan – tum jaldi sae ready ho jao …hummae doctor kae paas jaana hain … phir uskae baad daadi sae bhi baat karni hain shaadi kae baare main …. Ab jyaadaa daer karna acha nahin hoga humare liye …

Geet – Doctor kae paas par kis liye …. daadi … shadi …daer …. Aap kya bol rahen hain meri kuch samajh main nahin aa raha hain ….

Maan – sab kuch tumhe samajh main aa jayega … tum pehle jaa kae ready ho jao jao …. Main sab bathatha hun …

Geet – Jee jaathi hun ….

Maan is waiting for Geet outside her room … ready ho gayi tum ….

Geet – Ji …

Maan – tho bahar aao …

Geet – hogayi hun … bas ek minute main bahar ayi …

Maan coming inside ….. ab kya hua … daer kis baat ki hain …

Geet – bas hogaya …

Maan sees that geet is tying her dori but is having trouble tying it today ….

Geet – "pata nahin aaj kya hua hain… kyun aise ho rahan hain …roz tho main aaraam sae band lae thi thi … aaj yeh dori ko kya hua … mujhe satha kyun rahaa hain … "

Maan goes near her & starts tying the dori …. They have their Maahii in the back ground ….both looking into each other's eyes through the mirror & C them selves in the mirror … maan giving his sweet smile 2 geet …

geet thinking "sir kithna accha lagthae hain muskuraathae hua" …..

& geet looking into maan's eyes…. this time there is not that much awkwardness in geet's face like last time when she saw herself with maan in the mirror … Maan's face is like I finally got my true love …. & Geet … she is still feeling shy ….thinking about the way how Maan was behaving with her since yesterday ….. she was like seeing a totally different Maan …

That Maan whom she never saw before … Maan who is so much in love with her & who is ready to do any thing for her & to safe guard her honor … who is ready to get married to her … inspite of knowing her truth ….

Maan - ab chale …. Aaj humme bahut kaam hain ....

Geet – Ji …

Maan & Geet on their way to the hospital ….

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will be posting the next part soon ....

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...this is so cool but don't you think that the dori part is quite cliche...NVM it still felt good.....can't wait to read more
I am drooling on my keyboard right now...please dont talk about food yaar....yummy...alooooo ka paratha...hai!!!
Please update soon...thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part yaar!!!
Cant wait for the next one!!!
Thanx for the PM

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desigurl953

wow...this is so cool but don't you think that the dori part is quite cliche...NVM it still felt good.....can't wait to read more
I am drooling on my keyboard right now...please dont talk about food yaar....yummy...alooooo ka paratha...hai!!!
Please update soon...thanks

Actually .... I too thought about the dori part the same way😕 .... but then I thought like .... it was never picturised on MaanEet ... till now ...so thought Y not add it over here 😉... who knows we might get to C that for real in the show .... I doubt it they might show ... but if they show I 2 don't mind it seeing thm together 😍 ...wht say .....
hmmm ... so aloo ka paratha is ur fav . then 😊??? ....
Edited by dewdropred - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Awesome part yaar!!!
Cant wait for the next one!!!
Thanx for the PM

Take Care
Zoya

U R welcome Zoya ....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Veryyyy nice update.
Lovee maneet scene.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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