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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful & awesome part Dew-dropred😍, love cute scenes of Maaneet😍
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Part 15:

Maan & Geet on the way to the hospital ….

Geet – hum hospital kyun jaa rahen hain …

Maan – Tumhe jaldi pata chal jaayega …aur phir uske baad hum dadi maa sae milnae jaayenge hamare shaadi kae baaren main baat karne …..

Geet – Jaise aap teek samjhe …par …. dadi maa ko meri sachayyi kae baaren main pehle batayenge ….phir shaadi kae baaren main baat karengae ….to teek hogaa …. Hain na ….

Maan – sachayi batanae ka waqt abhi nahin Geet …. Jaroorat padnae par main khud dadi maa ko sab sach sach bata dungaa … par abhi nahin …. Tumhein mujh par bharosa hain naa … main sab kuch dekh loongaa …

Geet – mujhe aap par khud sae bhi jyaadaa bharosa hain …. Par sachayi abhi nahin batana iska matlab hum unko dhoka dae rahein hain … yehin hua naa …

Maan – nahin geet … hum kisi ko dhoka nahin dae rahen hain …. Jahan tak sachayi ki baat hain … wo tumne mujhe bata di …mere alava yeh sach kisi aur ko batana jaroori nahin hain … ab ismae dhoka kahan sae aya …raha sawal dadima ka ….unki tabiyat bhi teek nahin rehti hain aaj kal… aur aisi haalat main hum unko yeh sachayi bataengae tho yeh sachayi sun kar unki tabiyat par kya asar hoga malum nahin hain ….pehle unkae tabiyat ko teek hone do … hum sachayi unko sahi samay aanae par bata denge … samjhi tum …

They reach the hospital ….

They both go to meet the gynec ….

Maan asks the doctor to do geet's check up …. While the check up is going on he is waiting outside ….

The doctor asks maan to come inside her room as she needs to talk to both of them ….

Dr. – So Mr. ….

Maan – You can call me Maan …

Dr. – Mr. Maan … lagtha hain aapko apni patni sae pyar nahin hain …

Geet – JI … patni … main …

Maan presses her hand firmly …. & signals her to keep quiet ….Geet does not open her mouth ….

Maan – Kyun doctor aap aise kyun bol rahin hain ….

Dr. – Wo isliye … kyun ki aapki wife bahut stress lae rahin hain kisi baath ko lae kar … ya phir aap inko kuch stress or tension dae rahen hain … wo apna teek sae khayal nahin rakh rahin hain … lagtha hain unko kuch baat sata rahin hain …

Maan – Stress … tension … (thinks about every thing that has happened so far … feeling bad about that) …

Dr. continues ….

Dr. – yes … stress …aap ko malum hain problem kya hain aur wo ithna stress kyun lae rahin hain … aap janthae hain … Iski wajah sae bachhae kae upar asar ho sakhtha hain … aisi haalat main inko apna kayal rakh na bahut jaroori ho jaata hain … aur unko hi nahin aap ko bhi inka khayal rakhna zaroori hain … aap ko bhi dekh na hain ki inko kisi bhi cheez kae baaren main tension na ho … aur yeh hamesha kush raha karen ….

Maan – haan main … wo … in dino thoda busy hogaya tha …. Par aaj kae baad aisa nahin hoga … main geet ka khayal rakhungaa doctor … I will take care of her & all the problems …

Dr. – ok then … every thing else looks fine .… she prescribes some medicine to geet & asks her to take it regularly ...

Maan & Geet take leave of the doctor & on their way to home ….

Maan – Geet main aaj dadi sae hamare shaadi kae baaren main baath karne wala hun … main unko aaj bol dungaa ki yeh shaadi ek hafthae kae andhar andhar ho jaani chahiye ….

Geet – ek hafta …

Maan – haan Geet … ek hafta … jyada daer karna teek nahin hoga … thodi dinon main yeh sachayi sab kae samne aa jayegi … uss sae pehle hamain shaadi kar leni chahiye … ek baar shaadi ho gayi tho koi tumhe kuch bhi nahin kahegaa …

Geet is looking at Maan & thinking that – " Yeh kitnae ache hain … mere aur mare hone walae bache kae baren main kithna soch thae hain …mujhe hospital lae gaye meri check up kar wayi ....yeh sunnae kae liye ki sab teek hain ki nahin … aur ab ab mujhse shaadi karna chahthae hain … taaki meri badnami na ho …."

Geet – dadimaa sach bolthi thi ...

Maan – dadimaa nae kaun sa sach bolaa …

Geet - aap kae baren main ….

Maan – mere baren main ….acha mere peeth peechae meri burai abhi bhi chal rahin hain ….

Geet – nahin burai nahin … aapki tareef …… dadima bol rahin thi ki aap nariyal jaise hain …… upar sae kadak …par andhar sae naram ..… aur shuru main maine yeh socha tha ki aap jilebhi jaise hain ..… par ab mere liye tho aap choclate jaise ho gaye hain …

Maan – nariyal,jhilebhi aur choclate …sab khane khi cheezen ….

Geet – haan … jhilebhi … jhilebhi jaise thede medhe aur aapki baathein uski jaise gol gol … of course … jhilebhi bhi meetha hain…

Maan smiling now at geet's words – aur chocolate …..

Geet – haan …choclate … dikhnae main …ithna kadak … par zubaan par dalthe hi phigal jaathi hain …aur swad main meetha bhi hain … isliye maine choclate kahan ….

Maan now smiling even more widely – tumne mujhe …ab tak kithnae naam diyae geet …mujhe aisa lagtha hain ki tum mujhe har roz ek naya naam dethi ho ya phir aagae jaakae aur naam dogi … aage bhi mujhe naya naam dene ka khayal hain kya …

Geet's feeling shy – nahin … aisi baath nahin hain …

Maan – Geet mujhe bura nahin lagtha hain … balki mujhe acha lagtha hain … tumhari baathein …tum … tumhari haseen …sab … sab … mujhe sab acha lagtha hain Geet …ek baath kahun geet hamesha muskuraathe raho … aur main aaj sae yeh khayal rakhungaa ki kabhie bhi tumhare aankhon main aasu nahin aaye … tumhari kushi meri liye bahut maynae rakhthi hain … samjhi tum ...

Maan & Geet reach home … Maan asks her to get ready so that she can meet dadimaa …

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Maan is sooo caring.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveeee the part.
Maan is sooo caring.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima

Maan's always caring😍 ... even in his anger we can see his care😍 ... don't you think so ...
U R welcome fatima ....
Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Maaneet ki shaadi in 1 week
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this part is so nice geet comparing with all eating items was so cute and maaa finally smiling was too good
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very nice FF.

Thanks for affirmimg caring and loving Maan. Continue...'coz i loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats lovely
Geet calling Maan chocolate is soooooooooo sweet
Loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love ur part dear🤗, Maan soo caaring he is so understanding her😍, post soon ur next part😳
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Wow nice plz add me to ur pm list...

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