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Posted: 13 years ago


PART-57


MAAN starts to walk away again…

Thats when Vicky enters in and rushes towards Geet...
He starts enquiring where has she been all this time...
Maan slows down waiting to listen to her answer but Our smart Geet
Notices her Hero 😉 and switches the conversation this way...😛

Geet : Pata hai Vicky ji aaj kya hua...???

Vicky : Kya huaaa??

Geet : mai bahar gayi thi ?

Vicky : Haa gayi thi..

Geet : aur mera Gaadi ghum gayaa...

Vicky : kya??? 😲

Geet : Yaaa yaaa... Ghum gayaa

Vicky : fir... aaap kya uss... stupid si... badi...
rectangle jaisi gaadi mai waapis aayi hai ???

Geet : Rectangle jaisi??? kyaa???

Vicky : wo... tho mujhe bhi yaad nahi... car nahi... truck nahi... tractor nahi...

Now Maan Gets irritated to an extent... and comes into picture ... by quickly saying...

MAAN : BUS... Vicky... usey BUS kehte hai... Aur Geet ne usmay travel nahi kiya hai
ab kya tumhaari permission ho tho aagey badey... ?

VICKY :😕 ya... sure.. go on Bhabi doll...

MAAN : Hmmm... Tho Geet tum kaha thi???

Geet : 😡 Haan... tho devar ji mai apni gaadi dhoond rahi thi...
aur wahi mujhe ek sher nazar aaya...

Vicky : Ji...? wo kaun hai...

GEET : 😲 😕 haaa??? ... sh...e...r... aa..p..ko... sher nahi pata??
aji wo ... hmm... MAAN hai na... wahi...

Vicky : hahhah... ohh... aap brodude ko pyaar se sher bulaati hai... how SWEET...😳

GEET : Haaye Baabaji... kaisey kaisey log banaaye aapney..?
inhe sher nahi pataa???

Now Maan is fuming more

GEET : Haan... ji... wahi wahi... jo bhi aapko teekh lagey...
Haan .. tho Maan aaye... Mujhe kheench ke road ke uss taraf legaye...
mujhe tho pata hi hai ki kya ho raha hai... par log...?
Unhe tho pata nahi hoga na...😳


Vicky : tho??? Big deal... unhe kyu bataaye??

Geet : 😕 Ji unhe laga ki yeh mujhe Kidnap kar rahe hai...

Vicky : Kya??? how dumb... wo news nahi dekhte kya??? aapki marriage ki itni video
coverage karvaayi hai maine...sab ... waste hogaya??

Geet [ In her mind 😡 ] : Haan tho wo aaye... aur Maan ko maarne ki koshish kiye...
Vicky : Hahaha... BRODUDE ko... maarnaa??? R THEY NUTS???

Maan turned away... while vicky slowly said...

VICKY : Hmmm... aagey ki kahaani rehne dijiye...mujhe tho
un bechaaron ki shakal bhi dikhaayi de rahi hai...

Saying this Vicky walks away...

GEET quickly turns to Maans side... and says

GEET : Acha hua Maan ne unhe jaate hue nahi dekha...

GEET : Tho fir pata hai... Maine un logo se kaha ki...





Logon Na Maaro Ise
Yahii To Meraa Diladaar Hai

Now Maan turns Back to see... Vicky's Reaction...
and notices that his little brother is no where around...He looks at Geet
with the peak of anger he can emote...and in response Geet sings


Logon Na Maaro Ise
Yahii To Meraa Diladaar Hai
Dil Se Jo Dil Takaraaye
Nahin Dushamani Ye Pyaar Hai


Maan Turns his face away from her...

Ham Zaraa Jo Ulajh Gaye
Kyuu.N Ladaaii Samajh Gaye?

Geet ran to him and hold his arms while tried to free himself...

Pyaarii Pyaarii Ye Thii Hamaarii
Mohabbat Kii Dil Lagii Zaraa

Now Holds his chin and tries to show love...

Kaahe Ko Ruuthaa Divaanaa Meraa?
Tuu Hii To Sapanaa Suhaanaa Meraa

Now runs back of maan blocking his ways...And shows her thumb down to say👎🏼

Ye Lo Saiyaa.N Mai.N Hii Haarii
Ulataa Padaa Nishaanaa Meraa 👎🏼
Kaahe Ko Ruuthaa Divaanaa Meraa ?


while doing this she starts running faster and Maan is now worried and tries to stop her

Yuun To Shuruu Se Huu.N Main
Tum Hi Par Ye Dil Haare Hue

He now turns away angrily...


Lekin Kafaa Hoke Tum
To Aaj Aur Bhii Pyaare Hue😳

Takes his hand and twirls to sides...

Pyaar Thaa To Sataayaa Tumhein
Rang Adaa Kaa Dikhaayaa Tumhein

Now when Maan unable to manage his angry looks ,
gives a little smile unnoticed by anyone, but its Geet the other side... so...??😉

Kaisaa Naadaan Bholaa Bhaalaa
Abhii Tak Hai Mastaanaa Meraa😉

Now Maan gets back to his usual self and walks away...

Kaahe Ko Ruuthaa Divaanaa Meraa ? ... 😕 😲

Now running by his side, Geet trips and as always ...finds place in his arms...
Now you can imagine a Maahi moment wih Geet

Tere Milan Se Yun Hi
Mahakataa Rahe Meraa Jahaan

Now Maan lifts her in his arms and starts walking towards their room
Geet as always has her arms around Maan

Sadaa Sajii Rahun Gale
Kabhii Na Dhale Ab Ye Samaa

Now when Maan smiles amused by his wifes numerous reactions...Geet sings

Terii Chaahat Javaanii Merii
Teraa Gam Zindagaanii Merii
Tujh Ko Chaahuu.N Tujhii Ko Puujuun
Yahii Bas Ho Afasaanaa Meraa
Kaahe Ye Ruuthaa Divaanaa Meraa ? ...😉😳🤗

And both of them sit by side... in each other's embrace

Thats all for today...
As its my first comeback part...
i am not quoting any suspense...
but... be ready for the next...
to reveal somethings...you are waiting to see...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks my first reader... 🤗😳😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
Great FF
I loved it keep on posting it ,and i hope you get lots of likes .
Don't 4get to pm me.
~Sana~
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FunDipTropical

Great FF

I loved it keep on posting it ,and i hope you get lots of likes .
Don't 4get to pm me.
~Sana~


Thank you sooo much...

I too hope that people come back to read this post on IF

And YES I WILL NOT FORGET TO PM YOU DEAR 😛🤗😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye Neeru...🤗...back wid the bang rite...👏...Dekho,ek FF se kaisi mast mast hawayein chalne lagi hain,mohabbat ke patte udne lage hain,kaanon mein violins bajne lage hain...❤️😍...Maaahi Maaahi sunai dene laga hai...👍🏼...M luving this,darling...😉...After such a long time,phir se Maaneet dreamland mein aa gaye hain...😳...ab now what else 2 say ???????
Just,fantabulous.⭐️...maine toh song ko imagine bhi kar liya n u know m .😳😍...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Oye Neeru...🤗...back wid the bang rite...👏...Dekho,ek FF se kaisi mast mast hawayein chalne lagi hain,mohabbat ke patte udne lage hain,kaanon mein violins bajne lage hain...❤️😍...Maaahi Maaahi sunai dene laga hai...👍🏼...M luving this,darling...😉...After such a long time,phir se Maaneet dreamland mein aa gaye hain...😳...ab now what else 2 say ???????

Just,fantabulous.⭐️...maine toh song ko imagine bhi kar liya n u know m .😳😍...

.

Wooow

Thank you sooo much...

Mai marjaawa tere comments pe...😍❤️😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear when will u be able to post the next part waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

hey dear when will u be able to post the next part waiting eagerly...


Hahahah 😛

I just started typing the Part - 58

It can be posted anytime... Keep watching 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago




PART-58




And both of them sit by side... in each other's embrace

Maan : Geet...

Geet : Hmmm...

Maan : wo...

Geet : Kya baat hain Maan ???

Maan : OH MY GOD... GEEET... Time dekho... mujhe jaana hoga...
GEET : Jana hoga??? kaha jaana hoga??😕

Maan [ sarcastically says ] : Geet... Tum aaj kal Bhool kyu rahi ho?
ki MAAN SINGH KHURANA Kaam bhi kartaa hain...😎

GEET : MR . MAAN SINGH KHURANA...mai nahi aap Bhool Rahe , Yaad kijiye..

MAAN : Mai??? main kya bhool gaya??? Wallet hain, Gaadi hain, Gaadi ki chaavi hain,...
GEET : Gaadi, aur chaabi kaafi nahi hain Maan...

Maan : Kya baat karti ho Geet... office jaane ke liye aur kya chahiye???

Geet : Gaadi mai kisi ka saath Kam nahi hai ??? Yaad kijiye ..

Now Maan understands what Geet is trying to say... But its MAAN SINGH KHURANA,
And he decided to take an advantage of the situation Instead... 😉 [ how?? guess]

MAAN : achaa... Tum vicky ki baat kar rahi ho na...
Geet : kya??? na...i... w...o...

Maan : Lekin wo tho aaj kal kisi kaam se busy hain Geeet isliye nahi aa raha mere saath...

Maan is now waiting to see... and acts ... as if he's leaving...

Maan : Teekh hai Geet... ab mai jaa raha hoon... Bye... Apna khayaal rakhna...

Geet : Khayaal se yaad aaya Maaan...
aap nahi rahoge tho mera khayaal kaun rakhenge?😒

Maan : kYu Gee...

Before Maan could speak out Geet runs to him and says

Geet : Mai bhi aapke saath chalti hoon...

Maan : Lekin...

Geet : chaliye na Maan... hum late hojaaenge...
aur humaari important meetings bhi hain na...
Mai abhi apne tablets leke aati hoon...

She has her tablets and returns back to him...

Maan : RUk jaao Geet, Tum nahi jaaogi mere saath office

Geet : Par... abhi tho... aapne kaha...ki...

Maan : Geet tum pehle mujhe bataao ki pari ne
tumse aisey kya kehdiya ki tum tablets lena
hi nahi... Balki, TIME pe lena shuru kar diyaa hain...

Geet : Maan ... aap khush nahi ho ki mai tablets le rahi hoon???

Maan : yeh tum kya keh rahi ho Geet?

Geet : fir aap baar baar ye sawaal kyu poooch rahe ho mujhse?

Maan : ...

Geet : Ab chale Maan...???

Maan : Nahi...

Geet : Maan... aap Baaz nahi aayenge na... kyu peeche pade hai?

Maan : mujhe kuch nahi pata Geet.. aaj tho tumhe wo baat bataana hi hogaa...
Warna tumhe office nahi aane dunga mai..

Geet : Maan... aap...

Maan : bataao Geet... maine itne saarey koshishe ki hai tumhe manaane ke liye...
fir bhi tum nahi maani... Mai aisi kaunsi baat bhool gayaa ki... tum...

Geet : KASAM... Maan... Aapne kasam bhool gaye

Maan : Kasam??? kausi kasam...Tumhe ache se pataa hain Geet
MAAN SINGH KHURANA apni di hui kasam kabhi nahi bhoolta...

Geet : Arey mai aapki kasam NIBHAANE KI NAHI DENE KI baat kar rahi hoon MAAN...

MAAN : Dene ki????

GEET : Haan... PARI NE MUJHE AAPKI KASAM DI HAI...
aur yeh tho sabko pata hai... ki Geet kabhi Maan ke
Naam ki KASAM nahi todegi...

Maan stands still...

GEET : sunliya??? ab khush ho??? tho ab chale ???

MAAN : Lekin Geet tumhaare liye bahut mushkil hain na tablet lena...tho fir...???

GEET : ab log Pari ko aisey hi Docter nahi bhulaate hain na Maan...
usmai bhi koi kaabiliyat hogi na , jo wo ek achi docter ban
paayi hain...

MAAN : kyaaa???😡😕

GEET : Usne kuch tareeke sikhaaye they mujhe...
jinse mai aasaani se dawaai le sakthi hoon...
AB CHALEEE😡

Now Maan is very much relieved with her answers... but want know something more..


Wat is it?????
KEeep Guessing😉
Goood Night🤗

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update..hey am having myxams..so wont be avle to comment or read ur update till my xams are over...plzz keep sending me Pms, will read them later

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