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Posted: 14 years ago
bestest part till date................the song made it even more beautiful..............i could even imagine the scene................. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

and ofcourse why did you stop 😡 😡 😡 😡

update soon 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Neeru......🤗............Awesum update.....👏👍🏼........Hope,CV's real mein bhi Maaneet ka b'day dikhaye...........😕..........Truly, u r amazing.......⭐️.........main thodi si smily emotions dalne mein kacchi hoon,but,it seems tumhare liye main woh bhi sikhungi......😃.............Desperately waiting for next part......😉...
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Posted: 14 years ago


Awww... 🤗


😊

Thanks all for the comments
i will come up with the update now... 😛 😳
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago



PART-26


All of them sang together.... "Happy birthday to you"

and .....


And Geet is standing in shock,surprise,happiness but in silence...
Pinky patted her on shoulder,which bought her back to the world....
and as pinky holding her hand took her aside... She could not help
but hugged Pinky and cried in happiness,and pinky hugged her back
and calmed her by saying....

PINKY : sshhh... Chup hojaa Geet aaj tera janam din hain....
kitnaa royegi????

GEET : hmmm... huh...

she tried to control her emotions and to be calm... she broke the hug slowly
and Pinky started speaking...


PINKY : Geet.... aaj tak jo hua bhool jaa... yeh dekh... tera scooty...
Mujhe tho lagaa tha ki tu khush hogi...
par tu tho roye jaa rahi hain... 😔

Geet felt bad as she thought she hurted Pinky with her behavior..
and made an sorry face holding her ears...and said...

GEET : sorry pinky ... Maine tera dil dhukayaa hain naa...
Main bhi paagal hoon... tu itni door se mere liye aayi hain
aur main ro rahi hoon....

PINKY : Geet... main nahi maanungi...

She turned away....

GEET : Please Pinky maan jaana... sholly... 😔
achaa bol tujhe main kya du???
jaise tu mujhe maaf karde???



PINKY : Tere SCOOTY PE EK RIDE.......

she said looking for answer....

Then Geet looked at her scooty and touched it, felt her memories....
and asked Pinky about its arrival.... to which Pinky said how bauji
was emotional to gift her on b'day,without others notice...
she shifted the topic soon and said...

PINKY : Oye Geet... tu ab Baat mat palat haan....
Chal na ride pe...

GEET : Ride tho main deti .... par mujhe yahaa ke rasteey
nahin pataa...😔 aur main bheed main nahi...
kisi khaali raaste main chalaana chaahti hoon....

PINKY : Tho kya hua??? agar tu nahi jaanti tho???
yahaa AADI sir hain na... wo MUMBAI main
paanch saal the....unhey tho zaroor pataa hoga...
kyu AADI sir...?

She said seeing him heading towards them.....

AADI : Hahah...haah..ha...
Haa pinky... Mujhe pataa hain yahaa ke khaali rastey...
Chalo mere saath....tum aur Geet scooty pe aajao...
aur main bike pe aata hoon... [ he used one bike he found near by ]

Geet thought of inquiring about Man in the Mask and Paris magical
appearance... as they disappeared, but seeing Pinky's happiness
and excitement,she stopped herself doing it....

Geet got onto her scooty and started it.....She felt like she was
living her memories....and they followed AADI....they went on
and on.... till they reached the highway..... and then were on to
the roads... which absolutely beside the fields... and Geet was
loving to drive her DHANNO...😆 while it stopped suddenly....


She got down... But AADI dint notice...He crossed them as he was ahead,
but when he turned to warn them about something,he saw they were nowhere....
Then he drove back and came across Pinky and Geet... who were standing
with their dropped faces,.... He went towards them and asked....

AADI : G..G..GEET.... kya... hua???

PINKY : Yeh Gaadi tho karaab hogai hain..
AADI SIR... 😔

both of them looked at him, and he said...

AADI : tum..tum log... chintaa mat karo...
yahaa se kuch hi door ek mechanic hain...
main leke aata hoon... tum....tum..dono
yaheen intezaar karo...

Geet and Pinky agree... as they have no option...
They walk along the road side... and they find a lake..
they sit near the lake finding a BIG tree to give
them shade...and start talking about some of their sweet
memories... And Geet asks Pinky if She had really seen Pari
of it was her mind running in thought? and Pinky shrugs her
shoulders and says it wasn't true... this statement really relives
Geet and she starts playing with the water...While Pinky says
How Maan was searching the whole city to find Geet and that
she had seen an unconditional and immense love for Geet in Maan's
eyes... to which Geet tears... and says she is not fit to be loved by
such a Good person due to her bitter past... They keep speaking and
AADI comes with a mechanic to bring the scooty.... He asks Pinky to
come along with him on bike... and Geet had to take a cab.... as the scooty
will be delivered after the service... Geet din't want to trouble Pinky because
of her... so,she said Pinky and AADI to leave... Pinky dint want to... But they
were getting late for the train which was scheduled on the same evening,as they
had to attend office the next day....

Geet was waiting for a cab since a long time.... while she got none...
and she started trying to get a lift... but failed thrice.... now she dint
have the strength... she was about to sit,when a car stops in front of her...
a couple are going and stopped for her,they took her along... and she was
sitting alone... looking at the greenery... she saw a house in the mids of
greenery and got fond of it... but they crossed it....

The couple dropped her at the end of the road... from where they were
about to take another direction....Geet thanked them.... and stood alone,
once again... She looked all around... to see if her fav house was far
away... and to her happiness it was a walkable distance... Hence, she
Marched back...to reach the house.... firstly to watch it from closer view
and secondly she felt someone would help her get back to home...........

She slowly and hesitantly walked towards the door... called to see if
someone answers her calls.... but she failed getting a response.....
just after a moment.... wind started blowing... making all the crops
move like waves....this change awoke the bubbly Geet.... and she
started turning around ... round and round holding her dupatta... following
the directions of the wind,and running in the fields....closing her eyes to
feel the pleasure and happiness to be free in a open land having no bounds
to refrain her .....

She ran... and turned around.... closing her eyes... when she hit something
or someone... she dint know... she closed her eyes tight than before....
she turned to run away not opening her eyes,but she was taken back and
found herself wrapped in someones arms...she could sense the touch....
very familiar,loving and she slowly opened her eyes.... to see ...

IT WAS MAAN ...... her heart plopped out for a moment... she said
having tears slightly about to make a stream.....

GEET : Maan sir ....???

she looked up to his face in surprise....not able to compose herself
from the penetrating Gaze with which Maan looked at her.....
She turned back....tried to move,not wanting to do so....and Maan
held her hand, twirled her and made her look at him....she was about
to sppeak but he stopped her by placing his finger on her mouth and
himself started to say....

MAAN : shh... Chup Geet... kuch mat bolo....
aaj sirf mujhe bolne do....

Geet was in a daze... could not react... he was liking his effect on her
and continued to say...

MAAN : Geet.... tumhey kuch bhi kehne ki zarurat nahi hain...
main sab jaanta hoon.... Aur main wo saari baatein
nahi dohraaunga... jise sunke tumhey dard ho ....
kyu ki ....mein tumhey dard mein nahi dekh saktaa...

MAAN : main jaanta hoon Geet ki tum apne aapko mere layak
nahin samajhti... par mere liye tum .....

He waited to see.... and she waited to hear....

GEET : huh... mm.. main...?

MAAN : TUM meri zindagi ho.....main tumhey khona nahi chaahta Geet

she looked at him for a few moments and said slowly....as a whisper...

GEET : par sir main.... tho....nahi.... main... nahi...

MAAN : Geet... tum jaanti nahi ho... Dev ne Naintara ko divorce diya hain...
aur wo khud Canada chale gaya.... aur jab Tumhaari Zindagi
barbaad karne waale aagey badh gaye tho tum kyu nahi????

GEET : sir... aap yeh sab....

MAAN : haa Geet... Main keh rahaa hoon, tum ek baar socho....
yeh sab jo tumhaarey saath hua... usmain tumhaari kya
galathi hain??? aur jab tum jaanthi ho ke tumaari galathi nahin hai...
tho tum khud ko kis baat ki sazaa de rahi ho???

GEET looks at him in tears... turned around gives a thought to his
last words....she thinks how she had forgiven DEV just to end her
past miseries....and she wiped her tears.... now she looked back,
dint find Maan... she scanned the whole surroundings franticly,shouting his name,
and found him at the door,he was holding white roses for her,
which she dint observe... she just ran towards him in a light speed...
Maan saw her coming and placed the flowers near by him.....
she ran ,came to him,and hugged him tight.... as she by now,
knew the fact that she cant live without him,and not finding him for
a moment made her feel the fear of loosing him forever....she bursted
out with tears and said crying all the while...

GEET : aap... ahuh.. kahaan...mm..chale gaye the...hmuh
mujhe chod kar???...

MAAN looked at her and said in a warm,loving voice..

MAAN : shhh... Geet... main yahi hoon... tumhaarey paas...
aur mein tumhey kaisey chod saktaa hoon???
meri saansein jo chalti hain ab tumse....
tumhaarey bina tho mein mar jaaunga...

GEET came closer to him stopped him to say any further about death...
and angrily said in love, because she cared...

GEET : khabardaar... agar dobaara marne ki baat ki tho...
aap kyu hameshaa mujhe sataatey rehte ho???
kya mein khaak jee paaungi aapke bina??

and saying this she hugged him....Maan hugged her back... and smiled in relief...
and wrapped her warmly....in his strong arms which made her feel secure...and
relived.... They stood like that in each others arms for a while...and Geet slowly
broke the hug... and looked at him ... with love.....





Thats for today..😳 🤗

Good night dosto......... 😛





Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay awwwwww i luved each n every word, emotion
haiiiiiiiiiiiiii
hw i wish this cud be real!!!
hahaha
love it love it
especially since today was a good epi too
:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.....nice update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for not replying to earlier updates....had no net for past 2 weeks!!!!

superb updates....


loved chak de song!!!!

continue sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i like updates endin in happiness
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely....dreamy..you hit the board......this confession was very profound and impactfull...I wish CV had used it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Neeeeeeeeeeruuuuuuuuuuu..........😲..............M dead.........🤢........m reporting from the other world.......😉😆.........Jaan,where r ur fingers,wanted to hold & gonna give a kissi wissi to ur fingers..🤗....tu jaldi se teri fingers ka insurance karwa le........🤣........they r going to kill all of us..😍.....
Awesume,freakin,Fantabulous update....👏👍🏼.................Mind blowing...⭐️..

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