SAJAN-FF( DIL KA RISHTA) - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
second update was soooo cute.....cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum ud yar cant wait 4 sajan's date
do cont soon plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
oyeee hoyeeeeee dinner....
awsomeeeeeeeee
keep it up...
continuee soonn...
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Posted: 15 years ago
aweeessssooommmeee
do cont soon
thnx for the pm
love
sneha
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing n awessssumm update tha!!
luvvd it...sam nup convo...
thanx for the pm
sry for late rply..was busy...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please Please update next part soon.Can't wait to read Sajan's Dinner....
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Posted: 15 years ago
part-8
at night.....gunjan was working in her cabin.....she was busy discussing some cases with shilpa...n had forgotten about the time...
g=ab shilpa...suno..ye patient ki kya progress ha???
sh=ummm...kuch khass nahi ha..par ha...thorasa bukhar kaam hua ha....
gunjan cell starts ringing....
g=uffo..ye bui bhi na..thorisi der hojati ha..to bas.hello bui....
bui=gunjan kab tak ayegi beta?????
g=bui..ap aur bauji khana khalijye...theek ha???? mujhe der hojayegi...
bi=acha...par zyada der maat karna..theek ha beta????
g=acha bui....
sh=bui tumhari bohot fiar karti ha rite??????
g=ha....accha ek kaam karti hu..ma cell off karleti hu....phir disturb nahi hoga...
sh=ok...
gunjan swiitches the cell of...she had forgotten about samrat n theere dinner..meanwhile samrat was there at sanjevani....he goes to the receptioon...the nurse said that she was busy in her meeting with dr shilpa n has told everyone not to disturb her.....then samrat went in his car n was waiting for gunjan......
gunjan n shilpa were dicussing in the room....
sh=yaar gunjie..bass ha..abhi ma bohot thak gayi hu..armaan mera ghar pe wait karaha ha...so ma chalti hu..bakika kaam kaal karenege......
g=chal theek ha..are bapre 10.30 baj raheha......mujhe to waqt ka dhayn hi nahi raha ha.....chal..ek stah chalte ha..
gunjan comes to the reception with shilpa..then the nurse says....
nu=dr gunjan..apse milne koi aya tha..
g=accha kaun????
nu=wahi..jo..subhah apse takraye the..yaha..
sh=kahi samrat to nahi???
g=samrat yaha......oh no..ma to bhoolhi gayi..
sh=kya hua????
g=time nahi ha...ma chalti hu...bye..
sh=are sun to...
gunjan rushes out....she sees around n sees samrats car....she runs to there....samrat seeing gunjan comes out of the car...
s=hi...
g=im really sorry...woh ma case discuss karneme busy thi..aur mera phone bhi swithed off tha...so...ma bhoiol gayi..really sorry samrat...
s=chashmish.,....calm down...its ok...ma janta hu doctor ho..aur doctor keliye sabse pehle kaam aur patients ate ha.....isiliye ok...
g=par tum kitni derse mera wait karahethe...accha nahi lagta........
s=its ok...abhi chale????
g=chalo.....
both sits in the car...n samrat starts.....driving...
g=ek baat puchu????
s=go ahead....
g=hum itni raatko kaha jayenge??? i mean....itni rata hogayi ha,....so....kaunsa resturant khula hoga????
s=woh to socha hi nahi......
g=ab kya karen??
s=ummmmm.....dekhte ha..chalo..dekhte ha....
samrat was driving....when gunjan told him to stop......
g=samrat gari rokhna....
s=kyu kya hua???
g=rokko na...
samrat stopped the car....gunjan got off the car...then samrat followed him......
s=kaha jarahihu????
g=chalo to sahi...
samrat followed her....gunjan stopped at a panipuri stall....
s=yaha kya ha??? panipuri???
g=kyu kabhi khaya nahi ha kya???
s=welll....nahi......
gunjan laughs...
g=tum na..bohot cute ha....
s=kyu??
g=esehi.......bhaiya...panipuri dena....
s=chashmish...tumhe yesab acha lagta ha??
g=booht......mujhe panipuri..sefpuri.....chat masala.....icecream....milkshake...bohot pasand ha.....ha sabse zyada chocolateicecream..aur milkshake.....
s=tum ekdam bacchi jaisi ho...
g=dia bhi yehi kehti ha...acha lo...panipuri khao..
s=are...nahi..ma nahi khata..
g=samrat..jabtak try nahi karoge...to pata kaise chalega?????? kaisa ha??? chalo..ek lo...
gunjan bought a panipuri infront of his mouth....samrat seeing her smile..n her insisting..he opened his mouth..n gunjan put it in his mouth...
s=chashmish.......tum na......
g=kaisa laga???
s=uummmmmm..............itna bura nahi ha..
g=bhaiya aur dijiyee....
s=acha ha..
g=ek aur lo....
she gives him another....
s=are tum to khao...
samrat feeds the half of that panipuri to her....gunjan eats it..
s=chashmish..ye itna teekha ha....
g=kyu tum tekha nahi khate?????
s=khata hu..par itna zyada nahi....ssss...a..aaaaaa
g=ruko..bhaiyaa.....mithi puri dena....aur pani..
samrat drinks water...then he sees the icecream stal beside....
s=icecream khaye???
g=ha.....
samrat brings two choco chips...
g=are..tumhe kaisa pata yehi meri favourite ha????
s=kyuki ye mera fav flavour ha..
g=sacchi?????
s=ha......
gunjan starts eating the icecream like a child...samrat was smiling at her childish behaviour.....a drop of cream was remained in her cheeks...samrat pointed.....
g=kya hua???
s=cream laaga ha.....
g=kaha pe???
s=ek minutee....
samrat forwards his finger to move it..but he sees gunjan a bt hesitant...so he atkes out his handkerchief...n gives it to her...
s=saaf karlo..
g=thanks.....
after the panipuri.....n icecream....they again sat in the car..n reach bhushan house....
g=thanks samrat...
s=thanks to mujhe kehna chahiye..aj mane bohot enjoy kia..aur yakeen mano..ye dinner mujhe har fivestar hotel ki dinner se better nahi..best lagha.....
g=to..ma chalti hu....
s=ok..ek minutee....
samrat opens the cars door..gunjan thought he would again give a rose boque....but this time..he gave her only one rose....
g=ye kya ha???
s=sorry..aj sirf ekhi mila...
gunjan laughs..n takes the flowers...
g=byee...
s=byee...
after that..samrat reaches shergil mansion.he goes to his rooom...opens his coat..n takes the guitar.....then he stands near the window..n was thinking about the moments spended with gunjan.......n starts playing the guitar..hearing the tune..mayur comes to his room...n they starts clapping...samrat comes to sense..
s=are...ap dono soye nahi??
m=dude?? tu ab araha ha....ratake 12 bajraheha.....
s=woh actually....
n=rehne do mayank......lagta ha aj bhi barish hui aur aj bhi ye sir.....apni gunjan ko drop karne gaye the...
s=nahi bhabi....bass woh..
n=accha chal.....maa khana lagati hu....tu niche aja...
s=bhabi bhook nahi ha.....
m=kyu?????/ tuto humesha ghar ake diner karta ha......
s=aj man nahi ha..
n=acha theek ha...ma pani deke jati hu......
s=theek ha...
next morning....
samrat goes to the jogging park..in hope that he will see gunjan......instead of gunjan..shilpa sees him..n goes upto him...
sh=hi....
s=hi...tum???
sh=oh..sorry..im shilpa....gunjan ki frend..tum samrat ho rite?????
s=yup....gunjan ka...mangetar...
sh=i no....nice to meet u...
s=same...
sh=tum gunjan ka wait karaheho na???
s=ha......nahi...mera matlab ha..ke...woh...
sh=ghabrao mat...ma janti hu..gunjan har subaha orphanage jati ha..aur phir mandir...par aj woh thori der pehlehi chali gayi......mujhse mili bhi thi......thorisi der kardi aneme....
s=oh shit......
shilpa smiles...
s=i mean..ko oh....agar thori der pehle ata to..mil sakta tha...
sh=ya.....wase...ma na gunjan keliye bohot khush hu......kyuki tumhe mane jab kaal hospitalme uske sath dekha tha na......tabhi mujhe pata chal gaya ke....tum usse humesha khush rakhoge...kyuki samrat gunjan jaise achi ladki..shayed hi koi nahi ha.......
samrat was llistening to her carefully....
sh=gunjan ne jabse apni ma ko khoya ha....woh andaarse tutt gayi ha..par woh ajbhi ese behave karti ha...jaise uski ma yehi ha.....woh humesha dusroki keliye jeeti ha.....par kaal mane pehli baar uski akhome....kuch alag hi dekha....jo shaye dutmhare liye thaa....isiliye meri ekhi request ha..usse humesha khush rakhna...ok???? karoge na???
s=promise.........
sh=lagta ha..tumhare uar meri khub jamegi.....
samrat reaches shaergiill mansion.....nupur gies him prasad...
n=sun..aj koi bahana nahi chalega....aj tujhe ghar jaldi ana ha...
s=kyu bhabi????
n=kyuki mr....aj humhe bhushan house jana ha....sagai ki tareek pakki karne keliye...
s=sach????
m=kya baat ha....itna khush...
s=i mean...itni jaldi???
n=accha??? to delay karu....abhi mom ko batati hu...mom..
s=nahi bhabi...theek ha.......ek kaam karta hu..ma na shamko gunjan ko pick karke sidhahi bhushan house ajaunga..theek ha???
n=uski koi zarurat nahi ha.aj hum aur mom usse mandir me mile the...usse humne bata dia ha.....so plzz...ap jaldise ajana...theek ha????
s=ok bhabi.....
at evening......bhushan house..
shergills come...gunjan opens the door....she takes ashirwad from sm.....hugs nupur..samrat takes ashirwad from bauji n bui....
ba=bethiye na...
sm=bhaisab...ab hum aur intezar nahu karsakte.......hum jaldise gunjan ko humari gharki bahu banana chahte ha..
gunjan blushes....samrat looks at her..
n=ha uncle..aur isiliye..panditji ne..gunjan aur samrat ki sagai ka mohraat....parso ka nikala ha......
bui=are wha....sunday to barahai shubh ha.....
sm=samrta theek ha na???
s=ab...mom..yes....
ba=gunjan???
g=ji bauji.,...
n=mom.....woh..picnic.....
sm=are...ha bhaisab in baaacho ki iccha ha..ke....sagai ke agle din ye sab panchgani humare farm house..ek haftekeliye picnic pe jaye......
d=picnic woh??
n=plzz...bui...
bui=beta mujhe koi problem nahi ha......ma aur bhaiya to morena jayenge....humbe puja di ha.....par dia gunjan aur day jayenge...
s=ab.......bhabi....armaan...aur shilpa..
n=are ha....gunjan tum apne dost armaan aur shilpa ko bhi lelena...
gunjan was surprised to see samrat knows her about frends..
g=ji bhabi..
sm=to te raha..parso ha....in donoki saagai...aur agle din..bacche picnic pe jayenge..theek ha????
gunjan n samrat look at eachother...n smiles...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Res!
heyy maisha! sry im late yaar!!
anyway! superb!
Sagai n then picnic!! yay!!!!!
btw vivah was one of my favourite films
and this ff is very much like that!
n i loveee it too the core
and you have given it such a nice twist!
you have made it even more januable!
love youu n this ff 2 the core!!
update soon!!
n thnx 4 the pm!
(btw this is my favourite ff outa all ur ffs)
Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Blossom Part!!
SaJan Are So CUTE!!
The Stall And Ice Cream Scenes Was Shoo Sweet...
This FF Going Great!!
Pllzz Cont Soon!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow wat an update loveeee it loved sajan date haha Sammy never ate pani puri lolz lovee der scene wen sajan feeding each other pani puri n den lovee da icecream scene awesome n den wow wow after 2 days sagaiii awesome n den picnic woohoo can't wait now do continue soon

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