Obssessed about you,(AR FF) 9th prt updtd. - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Hey Nirali!
I'm really sorry I couldn't comment on your earlier parts but I was surely reading them
N my! my!
What fab parts yaar!
Loved the way how Muskaan stood up for Riddhima
N I'm eagerly waiting for Armaan's reaction n the real drama to unfold
Thanks for the PM
Take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
plz accept my sincere thanks !
I know i still have a long way to go before i can write half as good as all the writers in IF but u people have been soo sweet for accepting and praising this amatuerish style of writing.i just jot down whatever comes in my mind,nothing is pre planned:)
Yes now its armaan's turn to realise things...lot to come!
Keep reading and commenting.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Hey Niru!
Jaan-E-Mann the sweetest update yet!!!
I loved Armaan's so-called feelings!
Awee Abhi is cute! Waiting for next!

Jinsz!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Part 9

Next day :

after office hours...he did not go to any party or gym....which was his routine,as the flashes of those "teary eyes" would follow him everywhere he went...so he headed to a bar to get drowned in wine and feel relaxed.

a girl in a skimpy dress approached him,kissed him and sat next to him asking the bartender to make her a drink .

"hi amy"

armaan looks at her and then rubs his eyes...and stares at her in disbelief.

"hey riddhima?????tum yahan bhi????how come u r here???????....by the way u look hot in this dress"

he said winking at her.

the girl gets up,giving him a slap to bring him into his senses.

"i am not riddhima u bloody womaniser..i am tina...u r such a playboy that u dont even remember the name of the girls u date???"

and she walks away stomping.

armaan got shocked,whats happening....and then he says to himself caressing his cheek.

"wah armaan beta,jo ladkiyan armaan malik ke sath do pal bitane ko bekarar rehti thin,woh aaj usse chaanta mar kar chalti ban rahi hain...jai ho riddhima devi ki !"

he gulps down the whole peg in one go and continues..

"kyun mera peecha nahi chhodti???kyun har jagah nazar aati ho tum,ghar mein,office mein,gym mein aur ab yahan bar mein bhi chali aayi????kyun mujhe itna bechain kar rakha hai tumne????why...damn it...why????"

just then abhi walks in.


"hey dude"

"hi abhi,u here?"

both friends meet warmly and hug eachother.

"ghar gaya to uncle ne bataya u r not at home,i tried calling on ur mobile also,but u did not pick up the phone,dhundte dhundte yahan aa gaya....hey baat kya hai ,u dont seem to be the amy i know....uncle bhi bata rahe the ki tu aajkal kuch khoya khoya sa rehta hai,kahin mann nahi lagta tera...what happened dude?"

he tried to get up but could not as he was drunk and abhi supported him and they sat on a couch placed in a corner,away from the crowd.

"hey u gonna tell me"

finally armaan tells him the whole story without mentioning her name..and continues,

"i dont know whats happening to me abhi,why do i keep thinking about her all the time even when i never gave her a thought before"


"hmmmm...i think finally the great armaan malik is falling in love"

"what rubbish abhi,that cant be..u know i dont believe in these stupid things,there is nothing like love"

"well dude,there is and i can see that in ur eyes,man...u have fallen for her"

"noway...maybe its just the guilt of hurting her....nothing else"


"nahi amy,its love...its sooo evident in ur eyes man,whether u accept it or not"

"oh really?cumon,armaan malik roz nayi nayi ladkiyon se milta hai to kya woh sabse pyar karta hai?"

"nahi mere bhai,woh pyar nahi...pyar to sirf ek se hota hai jo sirf apke liye bana ho"

"i dont believe in this"

"but i can see that in ur eyes"

"oh really?now that u r such a genius in love,will u be kind enough to let me know what exactly is this thing called "love" is all about?"

"love is when u find someone imperfect,that u see perfectly.. someone who in a second u can look at for the first time and see the world in their eyes...its when u can know them for 5 minutes and feel like u have known them forever..... love is undescribable.u can put every word in the world that has a sense of amazingness or all the good things u can think of and at the end of the day,u cant describe true love...u can only feel it...and when you have it u just know!its finding the person who not only can complete u but can show u who u r,its finding a person who can give meaning to ur life,give reason to ur existence...its finding a person u want to spend ur entire life with,someone u feel belongs to u"

"hmmmmm" armaan nodded,gulping down his drink.

"ok lets find out if u r in love or not,abhi pata chal jayega....apni aankhen band kar aur un sab ladkiyon ko baari baari se yaad kar jinhe tu jaanta hai aur bata kya unme se koi ladki asi hai jiske saath tu apni puri zindagi bitana chahta hai,someone u can actually fall for and do anything for"

"what rubbish"

"maan ke to dekh mere bhai,kabhi kabhi jo cheez hum khuli aankhon se nahi dekh paate,woh band aankhon se dekh lete hain"

armaan denied but finally agreed on abhi's insistence.

"kaun dikha?"

he frowns as he sees sheena in a revealing dress approaching him.

"ab?"

he again frowned.

he sees tina.

"ab?" abhi asked smiling.

he sees many girls but none of them seemed appealing enough with whom he could spend his life with.

finally he sees a figure in white suit with her soft silky hair swaying in air approaching him smiling,she looked like an angel...but the vision was blurred as he could not see her face since she was distant.


armaan smiled as an unknown feeling of soothness and calmness engulfed him.he got anxious to see her face....

she got closer....armaan at once opened up his eyes in shock.....

"dikh gayi na?""


"no,it cant be...."and without a word he rushed out putting on his glares even when it was dark to hide his tears and zoomed off in his BMW, leaving stunned abhi behind.

he put on the radio to divert his mind and the song started.at first he felt like putting it off as it again reminded him of her,but somehow could not and listened to the whole song.


Na hai yeh paana
Naa khona hi hai

Tera naa hona, jaane
Kyu hona hi hai

Tum Se hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh paana
Naa khona hi hai

Tera naa hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai

Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhen teri
Baahon mein Baahen teri
Mera na mujhme kuch raha
Hua kya

Baaton mein baathen teri
Raate saugaate teri

Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya

Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jaata hun

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khaamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Aa aa aa aa aa aa…

Aadhaa sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyaada kabhi
Jee chaahe karlu is tarah
Wafaa ka

Chhode na chhute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo dhaaga tumse jud gaya
Wafa ka

Mein tera sarmaaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paaya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Raaste mil jaate hai
Manzile mil jaati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi


Na hai yeh paana
Naa khona hi hai
Tera naa hona, jaane
Kyu hona hi hai

Tum Se hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se hi Tum Se Hi

Edited by sweetnirali - 15 years ago
sweetnirali thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
plz leave ur comments,ur suggestions,criticism:)
anjie22 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Hey Nirali continue soon.....superb part
Norz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
nice part
finally armaan realized that he is in love
but its too late
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
do update soon
with longer part


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved abhi and armaans convo
Glad armaan realised his in love
Armaans going 2 b heartbroken 2 c ridzy with abhi
Can't wait 2 read more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
wow yaar so finally that was like a last stroke for armaan. hope vo kam akkal jaldi samjhe that he's in loveeeeeeeeeeeeee😆
gosh ur going well bbz.
love
sani

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