Obssessed about you,(AR FF) 9th prt updtd. - Page 7

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part 8


After one week:


malik mansion :

"hello billi,shashank bol raha hun,kaisa hai yaar"

"main theek hun,tu bata bada khush lag raha hai,baat kya hai?"

"haan yaar main bahut khush hun,riddhima ka rishta tay ho gaya"

hearing this billi went silent.

"hello,billi,kahan kho gaya?"

"haan...haan shashank badahi ho,par yaar tune to kaha tha ki jab tak riddhima ki internship khatm nahi ho jaati tu uske rishte ke baare mein nai sochega"

he recalls when he had asked shashank randomly about riddhima.

"haan yaar,par virendra,mera bachpan ka dost,tu bhi janta hai usse,usne jab riddhima ka haanth abhi ke liye maanga to main usse mana nahi kar paya aur pehle riddhima ne kuch time manga tha par ab woh bhi taiyar hai to socha mangni kar dete hain bachon ki"

"oh...acha...bahut bahut badhai ho"

"aise phone pe badahi nahi lunga,parson riddhima ki engagment hai,tujhe aaur armaan ko zarur aana hai"

"haan,haan kyun nahi.acha shashank main rakhta hun,baad mein call karta hun tujhe"

and he hung up the phone and gets lost in his thoughts.

he always thought of riddhima for armaan and this sudden news of riddhima's engagement surprised him and shook him.riddhima was the only girl who he saw a ray of hope in.he always thought that its only riddhima who can mend his son's wild ways,give a direction to his life.but now his dreams came crushing down hearing this sudden news of riddhima's engagement.

On the other hand,armaan was pacing up in his room,it was 1.30 a.m but sleep was far away from his eyes.

just then his mobile rings,

"hello"

"hello,armaan?"

"abhi,what a surprise dude,kaisa hai?"

"am great,tu bata"

"kya baat hai bada khush lag raha hai?"

"haan yaar,main india aa raha hun kal and guess what..am getting engaged"

"wow ! ! ! Thats a great news,who is the lucky girl?"

"yaar kya kahun uske baare mein,jitni tareef karun kam hai...lucky woh nahi,lucky main hun..main usse kabse chahta tha aur dekh ab woh zindagibhar ke liye meri hone jaa rahi hai,i cant believe this man....i am sooooo happy that i cant tell u"


"kya baat hai....aakhir aisa kya hai usme jo tujh jaisa handsome hunk uspe flat ho gaya"


"woh sabse alag hai....itni pyari hai,itni pyari hai ki koi ullu ka paththa hi hoga jo uspe flat naa ho,us pe to koi bhi mar mitte yaar"

"accha?ab yeh bhi bata de ki woh hai kaun?"

" phone pe nahi bata sakta saari baaten,tu khud dekh lena usse meri engagement ke din,main kal aa raha hun aur parson engagement hai humari"

"sure dude,congrats! am very happy for u"

"thanks,hey but what happened to u,u r not ur usual self...koi problem hai kya?"

"oh nothing at all,dont u know amy...he is a cool dude,always happy"

"yeah i know i know...chal ab rakhta hun..bye"

"bye"


he lied down on his plush bed,trying to figure out whats going on with him....its been more than a week since that barista incident,why cant he let that incident off his mind?why cant he just forget it?why cant he forget those pairs of beautiful eyes filled with tears,which of course were caused by him....why cant he get her off his mind?why all of a sudden,he has started feeling strangely about her,why cant he get back to his normal self?why is she the only thing that he has been thinking about since that incident...all these questions kept haunting him and he had answer to none...

Originally posted by: sweetnirali

Hi guys,

I am a newbie,have been reading fanfics for quite some time now and amazed by ur writing skills.u all r gifted writers,wish the creatives of these serials were as creative as u all:)then all serials would have remained super interesting even if they went on and on:)

Well,i just have a rough concept in mind after reading all these fanfics but i dont think am prepared as yet to write it as beautifully as it shuould be,so am just giving u a concept if anyone finds it interesting and can write a fanfic on it.

Its about AR,our fav couple:)

Its something like riddhima is a very simple and shy girl who loves armaan to death but could never muster up the courage to let him know as she knows she is not his kinda girl,they r family friends.though armaan talks nicely to her he never thought of her as more than a formal friend.

Riddhima's parents are looking for a groom but her heart is all with armaan,so finally before saying yes to her parents,she decides to talk to armaan on the insistence of her best friend muskaan,so that she does not regret all her life that she did not even give her love one chance...she does talk to him but he laughs out saying arrogantly that she is not his kinda girl.she gets hurt and finally agrees to get engaged to a boy her parents have chosen for her,abhi who happens to be armaan's best friend.

After getting engaged,seeing abhi and riddhima together,he starts feeling wierd...he wud feel jealous seeing them together and finally gets obssessed abt riddhima and wants her back.

So this is the plot guys,if u can convert it into a story:)

INDEX

PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 2.
PART 3 PAGE 3
PART 4 PAGE 4
PART 5 PAGE 5
PART 6 PAGE 7.
PART 7 PAGE 8.

PART 8 PAGE 9.

awesoem part

no comments?:(
Well from the no. of responses i guess,nobody is liking my ff much,i dont know if i should be continuing it or not.

Pls let me know.

Hey nirali....

Very nice part continue soon.....

Originally posted by: sweetnirali

no comments?:(
Well from the no. of responses i guess,nobody is liking my ff much,i dont know if i should be continuing it or not.

Pls let me know.

oh plssss ..don't think like that ...do continue...I wait for ur updatess daily...its very interesting..

bbz i everyday wait for ur updates. it's so fun to read ur updates. loved the part and just be a bit patience. loved it

Awesome update
Loved it
Can't wait 4 the engagement
Can't wait 2 c armaans reaction
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm