Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100 - Page 71

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

awesome update Fiza!

loved it to the core

waiting for the next part

plz continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

thanks a ton jani

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

bahut hi pyara update tha

i loved the flashbak

it was so emotional

i was so happy wen mayank came back

mujhe toh aga ab sad part start ho jayega

mayanks concern for his baby was cherry on the top

thanku so much

Originally posted by: .rumki.

flashback was really touched

the way u broke mayur jhagda liked it 😃 .it i didnt expected it this way,everyone thought koi serious kuch ho gaya 😆
mayur got a baby girl 😳 😃 so sweet

rumki

lolz....thanks..glad u liked

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaa
it was one of the wowest and aweomoest update of ur ff
i really really really loved it...................

awwwwwwww now everything is fine
my nupur with their cute baby- yehhhhhhhhhhhhhh a perfect family.

i wanna to read further more.
plz do cont it.
take care

Originally posted by: acAasthamayur

really lovely part.....update soon fiza😊

thnks a loot

Originally posted by: drmaha

hey it was awsome update.......loved it......😊
well i thought end would be gr8....😉... rite...??
but i must say u were unpridictable..........😛

hey jani

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

It ws superbestestestest.......Now write the last part as long as u can...😳😳

thanku so much dear

Hello guys

Mix feelings …

Thanks for loving last update..i have rplyed to u all….

Im a bit apprehensive about ths update…I hope u all find it worth as closing chapter….

I almost could'nt find enough words to write an End…but I have tried…n hope it do cum with ur expectations

Plzzzzzzzz do comment

Luv

Fiza

Because You Loved ME…

Last Part

9 years later:

Hustle bustle was all around Sharma Mansion………Decorations were all over…..the house was fully decorated with white, red roses…just the way Nupur likes..with a bit of orchids the way He likes…..Satan curtains flowing down….

A girl of abt 8 years and a boy abt 4 years…where playing tom n jerry..when the bump into a lady in her thirties

Tasfia: mama…dkho isko……he is not giving me back my doll

Pranave( sorry im obsessed with this name): mama see her…..yeah itni bari hogai hai…aur doll se khelti hai…. He laughed teasingly ….woh koi khelny ke cheez hai….aur when I asked her to join me in TAKEN she said no….

Nupur: hai Pranave….ths is 'nt the way to talk with ur di..ok…n u my old lady….stop arguing with ur brother…Pranave give her back her doll…n plz stay in peace….buhat kam hai abhi….aur ap k papa as usual late hain phr se…..bth of the children giggle on thr mom

Mayank: very bad biwi….bacho se meri shikayat ho rahi hai…nt fair…

Before Nupur can say anything….bth of the kids rushd towards him

Mayank: hello my princes….hey champ…shared a high five

Tasfia: dad dkho na…he is not give me my doll back…it so precious…sam uncle brought ths for me..its so beautiful

Pranave: its so beautiful…mimics her…its so boring han…n dad she isn't playing with me…always fight..pouted

Mayank: ek min ek min…..shanti shanty…Pranave give her the doll back…n u bth stop fighting …dad is here …we will play Taken whole evning

Pranve: hey dad ur the coolest…shared a high five

Nupur: nt so cool….kam kaun keray k tmhara baab

Mayank: u guys go…I need to handle my wife….dnt fight han…b careful….

He moved fwd n turn her around n hugged her from back

Nhi tmhara pati

Nupur: mayank…choro..sab hai yaha

Mayank: tu….mein apni 10 saal prani biwi k sath hoon…kis ko koi problem hai…pocho

Nupur: mayank…ur impossible

Slowly she leaned back her head..resting it on his shoulder….10 years mayank…kitni jaldi time guzar gaya….its seems like yeaterday when u confessed infrnt of me…

Mayank: he giggled….ya n u ..as usal fighting with me…

Nupur: hmm…bt u as usual stubborn

Mayank: so tu hoon…if I would have not ..we haven't be like this…u acted impossible tht day..

Nupur: acha pati dev ur always right

Mayank: lauaghed…..10 years… he entwining his fingers between her…n gave a peck on her cheek….he was caressing her wedding ring……you know wht….i never ever thought I will get married…never… she chuckled… n if by chance I'll than handling a family....n I will felt so blissful…waooo…never ever I thought so….when evr I look at this ring…when ever I touch it…..i felt….i felt like I m content…in peace…tigthing his grip…ek ajeeb sa sukkon milta hai…

.i really feel proud….honestly its because its u…..its because of ur love that I have expect wht I fear the most….u made me proud of the relationship which I fear to regret…you gave me everything….thank you…

He turn her around to find her in tears…she smiled widely..

Mayank: hey this isn't fair ….he move fwd to kiss her on forehead….n she hugged him …he hold her in his arms tightly n securing her inside him..kissing her hairs….how heavenly she is feeling after hearing his words..only she knew… I love you… kissed her again ensuring tht he always felt the same for her ….more deeper n deeper through these years..

Clapsss….they broke apart n looked towards ths side…maynk shock his head in disbelieve…n nupur chuckled …..

Wah wah …..pori 10 anversary speech tu ap ny abhi day di…sham mein kya hoga

Mayank: yaar…u both husband n wife has sach a wrong timing…ur expert in it

Diya: kya galat timing…we have the best timing..itni achi emotional romantic film roz thori dkh ny ko milti hai…woh bhi free mein

Mayank: acha tu thk hai….aj thk beech raat …tmharay room mein aao ga..mein bhi enjoy kernay…grining…

Diya: extremely besharam ho tu

Mayank: mein ny asa kya kaha hann….enjoy se mera matlab baatien kerna tha….tumhara koi aur plan tha…..for example…. teasingly

Diya: mayankkkkkk….nupur tm ny is ko 10 saal kasay bardasht kiya

Nupur: wasay hi jasay samrat ny tum ko kiya

Sami encircle his arms around Nupur..n rested his head on her shoulder

Sami: heyyy….humari dukh bahri dastan….

Bth laughed

Mayank: wah yeah acha hai wifey…chay diya ho ya sami …sab tmhara hi side lay gay…mera kya

Nupur: hum hain na ap ke side per

He smiled

Diya/sami: ohhhhhhhhh…ufffffff…aj tumhary mazay hain mayank

Mayank: ach abs…buhat hogaya ..act like grown ups…mera gift kaha hai

Sami: now tht what u call..act like grown ups…

Evening:

Mayank enter is room just to found a sight he enjoys the most…the breath taking moments….his angel was standing infront of mirror adjusting her sari n jewelry …moving towards her..she heard his footsteps n looked up in mirror just get lost in watching her hubby walking towards her with utmost passion n love……a blush crept on her face…he smile inside …even after so many years of togetherness…I have tht effect on u

Sliding his hands around her waist..he hugged her n rested his chin on her shoulder

Mayank: took a deep breath….uff

Nupur: kyaaaa

Mayank: koi itna khubsorat kasay dkh sakta hai

Nupur: buhat ashan hai….khub sar make-up. ….designer cloths….n expensive jewelery

Mayank: jee nhi…main ny apni biwi k in sab k bakhar bhi dkha hai…she is more than beautiful….nuzzling inside her

Nupur: maayaankkk

Mayank: kya …..Mrs. Sharma ap bhi…ab bhi hum se pehli daafa ke tarah sharmati hai

Nupur: cause u always make me feel like the first time

Mayank: frowning….first time of wht

Nupur: hited him playfull…ur impossible u know tht na

Mayank: ya I know sweet heart

Nupur: mjhy choro n get ready

Mayank: kya yaar itnay saray logo ko bola liya hai….acha tha hum akelay kis achi se jaga jatay…candle light dinner…thora sa dance…khub sara….

Nupur: nautanki band kero jao ab

He came out wearing a grey black suit …she wearing a white silver sari

He forwarded his hand..she grip it..he put it around his one hand….n put the other on her hand securing his possession…

Cuming down towards the hall the truly look heavenly …the sound of applause was echoing around the mansion

Samrat: uff..hello beautiful..can I try on u

Nupur:opps…sorry…married…showing her weding ring

The bth laughed

Mayank: Mr.shergil will u plz stop cheating on my friend…n flirting with my wife

Samrat: ohh ur soo insecure han

Tasfia: uffo …grow up guys…stop fighting n proceed towards cake cutting

Pranave: ya..it looks so yumi

They all four laughed at there wit

Both of them proceed towards the cake with there two most precious possessions….they cuted it n fed each other..he kissed her on her forhead…thy fed the cake to there beloved when…..

Lights where off

Nupur: yeah kya hua..plz God koi garabar nhi

Mayank: Oho God...dnt take tension..zaroor in k kuch plan hoga

Samrat: hey guys..this surely not a power failure…..as we are here to celebrate nupur's success of handling mayank for 10 long years ….and mayank assignment to fight against his marriage phobia….which is now turned into obsession for wife….

As only friends are here so no need to feel shy Nupur….right guys….right..so can u plz both grace the dance floor

Nupur: samarat

Mayank: common Nupur ….plz

Nupur: she smiled…cnt say no to him….but I'll chose the song

Mayank: he smiled surprisingly….ohkk..sure….

He forward his hand …n she place her's on him….he pull her towards him…placing his one hand on her waist …dancing on

MAYANK

NUPUR

For all the stand u stod by me….A smile appers on his face.he knows y she lves ths song

For all the truth u made me see

For all the joys u brought to my life

For all wrong that u made right

He close her to himself…letting her forget all around..

Ture wht he gave her was pure love….in life which was empty , he entered like brightest rays of sun in winter….soothing the soul, warming the body…he stod by her when she her self didn't believe in her…..whether it was her first presentation….or life it self..he made it perfect…looked beyond the imperfections…

Twirling her around…he through her out n twirled to make her cum back in his arms…

For evry dream u made cum true

For all th love I found in you

I'll b for everthank ful

Ur the one who held me up

Nevr let me fall

You're the one who saw me through through it all

You make nt my dreams cum true but u made me feel I have right to dream….i was week..lifeless…u hold me..making me stand up

He signled pleading sami to remove the spot light frm them…he obeyed give thm space….he holds her tight..n make her move with the rythme….

You were my strength when I was weak
You were my voice when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the best there was in me

Lifted me up when I couldn't reach
You gave me faith 'cause you believed
I'm everything I am
Because you loved me,

You gave me wings and made me fly
You touched my hand I could touch the sky
I lost my faith, you gave it back to me
You said no star was out of reach

U hold me in ur arms…make me face everything…u strength my faith..when I was reluctant….. scared ..scared of loving u…..scared of u loving me…ur eyes, ur words, ur gestures…gave me faith…..faith ….tht v do…together….v can stand against all odds

Its not just I who gave u the strength…it was u who make all apprehensions disappear…u stod beside me, excpted me as I am..irrlevent, stubborn,…the faiths I never belived to belive….u make worhship a relationship I hate to be in…

You stood by me and I stood tall
I had your love, I had it all
I'm grateful for each day you gave me

Maybe, I don't know that much
But I know this much is true
I was blessed because
I was loved by you

You made me proud n content…u blessed me with ur presence…..u complete my soul..u made my existence worth…

lights were on but they remain in each other….he twirled her round n round….along in circular path…she giggled at his behavior…

You were always there for me, the tender wind that carried me
The light in the dark shining your love into my life
You've been my inspiration through the lies you were the truth
My world is a better place because of you

Twirling her round…he bowed her down..throughed her out n pull her back..she hold his shoulder tight between there chukles..as was feeling dizz…but was enjoying there way of celebration

You were my strength when I was weak
You were my voice when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the best there was in me

Enjoying waltz, salsa…n whatever together…...thy were in there own small little world

Lifted me up when I couldn't reach
You gave me faith 'cause you believed
I'm everything I am
Because you loved me

I'm everything I am
Because you loved me

He grap her from waist n she putted her hands on his shoulder…he kissed her forehead…lingering there for sumtime….they came back to earth ..whn Tasfia n Pranave hugged there legs…Mayank taking her princes up in his arms n encircling his other around Nupur n Nupur taking up her little champ….they laughed n smile….celebrate there content life

TOGETHER THEY LIFE HAPPILY EVERAFTER

EPILOGUE:

BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME…..it was just a simple story…maybe seems like a fairy tales…but life can be fairy tale…if v started to give our relations…respect, faith, love, honesty…being a little less demanding…n finding peace in little things…..

Marriage a bond tht share utmost purity is sumhow or the other converting into just either a formality or just a way to fulfill our "NEEDS"….ths FF was just a try to make evry1 a little careful when handling there relations…thy r fragile n cums with the tag of "handle with care, acceptances n respect"….

To MY Readers…..

It happen on 28 JULY 2010, that I start writing this story….extremely nervous….whole loads of fear. I posted it on IF. The response I got from sum of keen readers, n writers…was a the only source n force that drag me write this story for past 6 moths….

I am extremely thankful to all of you….from my readers lika "ACHOSE", NEETU, SHRUTI , SARISKA, SAMIRA, FIZA, ALINI who where there from start n remain n tolerate me till end..to Sonam..😭whom we lost in the middle…

Soon join in TASFIA JANI🤗 ( loved whn u call me api), FARIA.SWEETY, ARU who always do elabroted comments ...helps me aloot in evaluations….SUJA…thanks aloot…..LAIBA…whom I couldn't find these days

.n my sweet heart KOMAL….ahh miss u here..whn u always fight to be atleast second to comment..hope to cya soon

AURONI…..luv ur lovely comment

MAHIMA…who made my thread colorful n bright with her unique way of commenting

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N thanks DR.MAHA😃😛

Ufff..itni labi speech…paka diya sab ko….😆

I hope u all will stay with me…with my other work also..

So cya at Ardhangini😳

I really luv ya all………its just because of u all tht BYLM cross 100 pages….

Fiza Ahmed 🤗