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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

sweet update.

mayur ws so cute.................love nups caring side, she ws so worried abt mayank.............bt wht does mayank wanna say???
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

thanks
thanks for like nupur part
next is soon..very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Lovely cute update Fiza

really loved mayur n dia moments
even mayur were scenes was sweet
thanks hun

thanks dear thanks a loot

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Lovely so lovely update dear

Hope to see Mayur weeding soon
Thanks for pm and cont soon

thanks a loot
glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahakmev

lovely and fantastic update

thanku

Originally posted by: aancchal

nice update dear and thanks for pm

thanku
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komal991

hey fizzaa!!!!

kya update maree hay bygod zaberdast!!!!!
i thinkkkkk k mayank nupur ko propose keray ga!!!!!
hay fizzaa ur update is really freshhh ek dum tazaaa!!!! not repetative scenes!!!!! plzz update soon haan n thanx 4 the pm!!! ( sirf pm check kenay baithi thi per tumhara update dekh ker raha hi nahi gaya )))
love
komal ❤️

hey sweety
glad u liked it
thanks for taking out time n reading it
luv ya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Veru nice update.. even I am missing the old Mayank here...

thanku
oye thts so sweet ur missing him...he 'll be back with loads of fire😉

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

lovely update

luved mayur n dia scene.....
cont soon

thanks a loot
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanku
QUOTE=Favouriteofall]loved the update!
missing the old mayank 😔
plz continue soon
nd thnx a ton for the pm 😊
thanks for liking
dnt worry he'll b back soon

Originally posted by: ..Shreyu..

Nice update Fiza


:))
thanku

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Amazing update fiza

loved it

thanks a lot

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

Beautiful update

do continue soon

thanku

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

amazing update sry for replying late i was out of town

thx alot for the pm

thanks a loot
n plz dnt b sorry
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 19:

Mayank: mein tu bs…asay he…im sorr

Nupur:shhh…bs mayank…tumhara baat baat per sorry bolna…her waqt ek daar mein rahan mjhy acha nhi lagta….tum ko kiya baat pershan ker rahi hai…she cuped his face…kya baat hai mjh se tu kahao

Mayank: he clutches her hand lying on his face…pata hi mjhy kya horaha hai…mjhy sach mein nhi pata…bs mein her waqt tumahray sath rahna chahta hn…mein tum se buhat dino se kuch kahna chahata hoon ..per kasy kaho kya kaho..

Nupur: kay baat hai bolo plz…mjhy se tmahri kamsohi aur pardasht nhi horhi..its scaring me ….plz bolo

Mayank: tm mjhy galat samjho gi…lowering his eyes

Nupur: idhar dekho…mein ..mein tum ko galat samjho gi

Mayank: nups.. Promise me phly tum meri pori baat suno gi phir react kero gi

Nupur: oh..ok…

She was getng realy scared. She has never seen mayank so serious ..even at thr confession he was angry bt nt tht serious….

Mayank: mjhy nhi pata yeah sahi hai ya galat……tm is baat ko kasay lo gi…bt whn u weren't here for a wk….i lost myself…I lost my trust tht u'll stay with me forever

Nupur: mayank … how can u say

Mayank: shhh…nups plz let me speak…warna mein kuch nhi bool pao ga

Nupur: sorry ..bolo

Mayank: nups I wont to b with u 24/7…holds her hand….i just cant get out of my own stupid insecurities….i know..my way of solving ths is against ur principle…n I really repect tht.(.in an assuring tone)….n now I just dnt bother to go for ur way …it doesn't matter….if having u in my life forever mean marriage…..I WANA MARRY U

Nupur was listening to all ths patiently…she was in a dilemma …the phrase." I wanna marry u" .ahhhh…for how long she wana hear it…only she knew….hs words were echoing in her ears….true she was on cloud nine for few seconds…as she lost the hope of hearing ths frm him…bt than he isn't doing ths cause he really wanna marry her….she couldn't decide wht should she do…she closed her eyes..just to thnk wht should she say

Mayank's POV

I knew it …I just knew it…I was looking at her..n dying at her silences…I so knew tht ths gonna happen..thts y I wasant saying ths..mjhy yeah khana hi nhi chaiay tha..jb mjhy meri baat per bharoosa nhi hai ( trust) tu mein us ko kasay yaqeen dilao..tm khamsoh kyun ho kuch tu bolo…

He went on his knees..and sit in frnt of her…still holding her hands…n now intermingle hs finger in her …ths made her open her eyes

Mayank: I know tht isn't the way you want it but..he bow down in frnt of her

With deepest joy I receive you into my life that together we may be one. I will be to you a loving and faithful husband. Always will I perform my headship over you. I promise you my deepest love, my fullest devotion, my tenderest care. I promise that I will lead our lives into a life of faith and hope. throughout life, no matter what may lie ahead of us, I pledge to you my life as a loving and faithful husband. I promise to love, honor, cherish and protect u, forsaking all others and holding only u I promise my love to you.

Nupur: i do…a tear fall frm her eyes

Mayank: he look up to see her smiling …he couldn't belive she said yes

Mayank: sach

Nupur: muuch…

Mayank: tm sach mein mjh se shadi kerna chati ho…sb kuch janay k baad bhi…

Nupur: han mayank…tm se nhi tu kya steeve se kero gi…

He put hs head on her lap..hiding hs face in her…she ruffle hs hair…such mein pagal hai….she smiled bt was deep inside concern of wht she was doing

Ding doong

He didn't looked up

Mayank: ab yeah kaun agaya

Nupur: mayank,, utho mein dkhti hon

Mayank: pasand nhi hai mjhy koi Mr.n Mrs Sharma k private time mein disrturb keray By God….

Saying so he stood up n went to door

She was siting there shock n srprise at his word

Nupur: whn ur with me…I hav e no fears n doubt abt wht im doing….

He went to the door n open it

Mayank: tm….wah kya timing hai…tmharay elawa tu aur koi ho hi nhi sakta tha is waqt…kya masala hai hr dossray din moo utha ker chali ati ho….prblm kya hai

Diya: hhhhhh…how mean…tmharayy ghar nhi aai thi mein acha….nupur k pass aii hon..wh ghar per nhi thi islyan majboran ap k ghar ana par gaya..

Nupur: kis se lar rahy ho…Diya …wht a pleasant surprise

Mayank: kahay k pleasant surprise

Bth ladies look at him with dead look ….

Myanak: ap dono mjhy marnay wali tu nhi hai na …bth nodded thr head in yes…sami ..yaar I miss u so much

Samrat: I miss u too dude

Mayank: samrat…tu yaha ..kasay agaya..bataya bhi nhi …bth hugged each other tightly,,,surely he missed him so much ..sami his friend cum brother…

Samarat …aram se itny saray sawal ek sath

Mayank: who chor….yeah nupur hai

Smarat went towards her n circle around her checking her……ohhh tu yeah nupur hai….he smiled hi nupur

Nupur: hi samrat..gud to cya

Sami: wasay ap dono ek ghar mein ker kya rahy thay basically…teasingly

Mayank went to nupur..n put his hand on her shoulder

Mayank: aadat dal lo….ab hum ek hi ghar mein milay gay…v r planing to get married

Samrat: yaar demagh na kah..wasay hi bht labi flight thi

Nupur: wh sach kah raha hai

Sami was stretching hs hand…wch kept hanging like tht

Diya n smai: whattttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Samrat: he fall on sofa..koi pani lao..mein behosh horaha hoon..yeah shock meri massom se jan nhi sah sakti…

Mayank: kya tu bhi…diya k sath rah rah ker full on nautanki hogaya hai

Sami: natak….mein ny life mein khabhi nhi socha tha k tu … TU..khabhi asa khay ga…I just cant belive it ..he hugged nups lightly congrats

Mayanl: pechay hat

Sami: bhabi hai meri…zayada possessive hony ki zaroorat nhi…tu jo her waqt diya k sath cheepka rahta hai

Mayank: who meri dost hai

Sami: yeah meri bhabhi hai…wasay bhabi ap ny who kerdiya jo bhagvan bhi nhi kersakty thy

Nupur: bs khabi garror nhi kiya

N all burst in to laughter

AT KITCHEN

Diya: nupur …are u sure of wht ur doing…mayank ny yeah fasal kyun liya yeah tu janti ho…

Nupur: …han mein janti hon..diya yeah koi hindi flim nhi hai..jaha hero ko pyar hoa aur us ko her us chees per yaqeen hogaya jis se us ko nafrat thi ya jis per us ko trust nhi tha…….yeah life hai..min janti hon is waqt us ny yeah step sirf islyan lliya kyun k wh meray pass rahna chat hai..islyan nhi k is rishty per, is ke taqat per us ko bharoosa hai….per us ny atleast ek step tu lya….us ny rishty nhi dkhy..jo log us k apny hai us k dost ya mein hon..tum mein sam..sab us k chose kiay hua rishtay hai…by nam hai…aur mera jo experience raha shadi k ly ker us se us k yaqeen aur strong hogay….,,jab tak wh yeah rishta jiay (live) ga nhi…us ko yaqeen kasay hoga…I trust hm…n more thn tht I trust my relationship….

Diya: she smiled…thank God for bring u in hs life…tmharay elawa us k asay koi nhi samhj sakta

Nupur: diya plz…now u dnt act like hm….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey Guys

Finally...i was dying to write ths chapter....uff....i hope u also liked its...sorry i thought of updating it before 7 as one of my oldest reader was leaving that day "achose"....
ths update is dedicted to person who found hrself in nupur....thanks dear its a huge compliment
ok start commenting 😉
luv fiza
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!finally
he proposed her.....dats superb
luved mayur scene n den dia sam enrty was mindblowing
cont soon dear n tnx fr pm

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