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Posted: 14 years ago

Helllooo Guys

Ke haal hai …I mean how r u 😉………I m right now on cloud nine😃 dancing n celebrating🥳….u know y..ofcourse u know😛…because of u all sweet hearts🤗….ap logo ny jo examination diya us mein …I cleared with flying colors😆😃😃🤗😳…thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh😳😊….for loving me tht much..whn I started ths ff never ever I thought I'll receive such response…thanks aloot

Ur rplys are also being rplyd by me😉….n hope I can cum up too ur expectations too…this is a filler as I need ths part to continue the story😕 …else it would have lost its continuity ..so hope u like it..n plz do press like button..it work as statistical meter ..how many people read my FF..

Luv ya lot🤗

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER 18

Diya: hello..kya kaha tha tm ny….thy broke apart…shakal nhi dkho gi us ke….samhjta kya hai apny ap ko ….jo chahy ga boloay ga aur mein kuch nhi kahao gi..

Nupur: diya mein ny asa kuch nhi kaha

Mayank: kaha bhi tu sahi kaha

Diya: uff…tum tu na poray hindi film k hero ho….wasay tum ny is ko buhat roolaya

Mayank: with loads of guilt…I m so

Nupur: tm ny ek baar aur sorry kaha tu mein sach mein tm se khabhi baat nhi kero gi

Mayank: acha baba nhi kaho ga..sorry na

Nupur diya: Mayankkkk…n the trio laughd after a long time

Diya: lets celebrate

Mayank: gr8 idea….chalo aj diya hamein bahar kahna khelay gi dramatically

Diya: no Mr.sharma ap k reunion hoa hai treat ap ke

Mayank: tu guests se treat lo gi…so shameless

Diya: so tu mein hoon..than

Mayank: I m nt going to

Nupur: uffff..ffoooo…u two…mein bill day do gi…bth of u r so cheap..chalao

She left n diya was abt to follow her….whn mayank hugged her tightly

Mayank: thanks a loooot

Diya: its ok…bt urn t welcum..acha

Mayank: I cant imagine doing it again

They went ouside to have fun n party….

Nupur: meri ek baat samhj nhi arhi k bill kaun day ga…

Mayank: Florida

Nupur: with a dead look..mayank

Diya: sach tu kah raha hai

Nupur: tm dono mjhy irritate ker rahy ho ..batao na…u even didn't allow me to bring money…hum kya bhookay rahy gay

Diya snatch a gaiter frm a boy setting beside…mayank ask nupur's hand…she put it in his hand with a surprise n question…n he jerk her close to him …n she was in his arm..she was lost at hs surprise reaction…he mischievously raised his eyebrows n she just can help to smile …..bth of them enjoyed the twirls…masti…fun filled dance…n forget tht thy actually were doing it purposefully… diya stop playing guiter whn she realize tht the love birds in sumother world

Diya: romeo bs kerdo….

Mayank shyly lookd her n brushed his hand in hairs…every1 clapd at thm ….n than start paying thm……..nupur was hell shocked embarrassed n angry at there act

Myank: wah kya baat hai diya khub kamaya

Nupur: had hai had hai tm dono ke….agar mjhy pata hota tu mein khabhi ati hi nhi tum doono k sath…yeah koi tarreqa hai

Mayank: islyan tu bataya nhi tum ko….kitny hai diya..enough na

Diya: ya mayank…maza aaya kasam se…thy shared a high five

Nupur: mein tum dono se baat ker rhin hon …shameless people

Mayank: nupur enjoy tu tm ny bhi kiya hai na…hai na bolo na

Nupur: ahh..hh….tum dono na complelty

Mayank n Diya: IMPOSIBLE,,,burst in to laugh…n she too join them

They left florida W*H the feel of completeness of being together again..she enter her house

Nupur: its so good to be back home

Mayank: lovingly: yes it is…we miss ya toooo much

Nupur: v?????

Mayank: ya me, ths house, tht kitchen, my cupboard, ur balcony n steeve too..n he chuckled

Nupur: mayankkkkk …she smiled ….itna pyar kyun kerty ho…

Mayank: kyun k ,, I love u …he said tht with utmost sincerity tht nupur just cant help bt stare at him ….chalo u must be tired....v'll talk in morning

Nupur; ok gud night

Mayank: Gud night..he turn back…each step he was taking away frm here..he was feeling his fears increasing…fear of losing her…fear of doing a mistake…he turn back to assure she is there..she smiled at him…he turnd again n left to his house…he changed n all on bed

Uff…aj tu itny dino bad..im gona sleep

N tht turns to b a joke….nt so quick Mr.sharma…he couldn't sleep

He was continuously shifting sides…pata nhi she'll b alright na…bhook tu nhi lag rahi hogi..na she had dinner in flight….kuch chaiya tu nhi …

He couldn't sleep so decided to have a look of her once…he stood up n went to see her..may be watching his angel can give him sum peace

Nupur changed n went towards her bed…she lyd n start playing with her hairs…thinkng abt her love…how blissful she is feeling……how loving he is..pagal hai…she smild…she so wanna to b with him 24/7….close to him as close as possible…clutching the pillow in hug…her thought make her blush…bt suddenly she realize wht she was demanding….uff kya soch rahi thi tu…nhi socho asa…u promise tht u wont demand him any commitment…so enjoy ker…is pyar k ehassas…convincing her self…she hugged her pillow…n doz off to sleep with a smile…

Mayank enter the house…n slowly went to her room…a smile appears on hs face…she was sleeping like a baby…he went inside n covered her with a sheet….through a kiss to her…I love u he whispered…..he was gazing at her n was feeling losing himself …he turnd his face away..an slaped his head with his hand….went to her living room n slept at sofa

Morning:

She woke up n stretch her self…went outside yawing..her kept remained in air…n was stunt to see him..HIM…in her house.

Nupur: yeah yaha kya ker raha hai……….Mayank

Mayank: kya hua ..kya ..kya hua..u..woh mein …sachi yaha asay hi aaya tha..sorry

Nupur: she laughed…tm kya khawab mein bhi mjhy sorry bol rahay thy By God…relax

Mayank: tm yaha kya ker rahi ho…adjusting himself

Nupur: mein..???? APPP yaha kya ker rahy hai Mr. Sharma

Mayank: hmmm..wh…woh…mjhy daar lag raha tha

Nupur: cant just belive wht he said …a moment she was shocked the next moment she burst into laughter……kya kya kaha tum ny …daar lag raha tha…tmhaein daar lag raha ….

Mayank: putting his hand his waist…whts so funny…mjhy akeelay neend nhi arahi thi

Nupur: tu ek hafaty se tm kisi k sth……ops..she realized wht she was abt to say…..kaha soo rhy thy

Mayank: tension na loo kisi k sath SOO nhi raha tha…..

Nupur: wasay mayank….ek hafaty tak ghar band rhany se bhooot ajatay hai….again start laughin

Mayank: ek tu mjhy tmhari wajha se neend nhi arhi upper se ap mahasahy hasay jarhin hai….

Nupur: hello mein ny kya kiya

Mayank: Ap demagh se hati tu hum sootey na

Nupur: acha…really

Surprisingly she wasn't feeling shy rather she was teasing him…tu ap kahtay hum ap ko ek teddy bear day tay us ko galay laga ker sojatay

She was shaking her head n laughing…..n was about to leave whn he caught her..n pull her near..her hands on hs shoulder n his on her waist…

Mayank: acha …asa kya….tu is ka matlab hai kal raat ap mjhy itni tightly( tighting his grip) hug ker k soo raha tha…hmm…really

Now she was blushing like anything….chori tu pakri gai…she was actually thnking so at night…n now caught…

Nupur: choro na

Mayank: nhi …pehly jawab do

Nupur: plzz

Mayank: mmmhmmm

Nupur: plz…she looked up in hs eyes n shyly pleded..he smoothly let her

Mayank: jao maaf kiya

Days were passing …but he was changing..his possesivenss…..over protection….extreme careful attitude….restlessness was increasing….nupur was very worried by ths changed Mayank..one who use to b care free…now was tooooooo much careful….

Nupur: mayank…plz cum n sit here

Mayank: kya hua…he shuted his laptop…n nt once ask or requested her…tht thy will talk after he completes his work…nupur shocked her head in disbelieve..ths wasn't mayank

Nupur: kya baat hai myanak….tm pehly tu asay nhi thy

Myank: kya hua nupur..mein kya kiya..mjhy kya hua

Nupur: jab se hum florida se wapas aay hain…tm kuch zayada he careful hogay ho…her baat nap tool ker kertay..ho..sochty ho phr bolty hai..tm tu mjh se her baaat..Her BAAt…bina sochy kerty tha..ek baar bhi tu mjhy argue nhi kiyya aur itny aram se laptop band kerdiya…mera mayank asa tu nhi tha

Mayank: mein tu bs…asay he…im sorr

Nupur:shhh…bs mayank…tumhara baat baat per sorry bolna…her waqt ek daar mein rahan mjhy acha nhi lagta….tum ko kiya baat pershan ker rahi hai…she cuped his face…kya baat hai mjh se tu kahao

Mayank: he clutches her hand lying on his face…pata hi mjhy kya horaha hai…mjhy sach mein nhi pata…bs mein her waqt tumahray sath rahna chahta hn…mein tum se buhat dino se kuch kahna chahata hoon ..per kasy kaho kya kaho..

Nupur: kay baat hai bolo plz…mjhy se tmahri kamsohi aur pardasht nhi horhi..its scaring me ….plz bolo

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved.. Wohoo reserved first... 🥳 and u update... 😳


edited..

A really sweet, very cute update... I loved the restaurant scene, it was so cute still hillarious... Love the Mayank-Dia duo... 😊

And MayUr... uff.. Out of this world...😳
But the emotinal and caring side of Nupur is very sweet, and the way she is worried for Mayank... 😊

Hmm.. What does he wanna say... I ahve this veryy tiny feeling he will propose or something... Or move in with her... As he always want her in front of him... 😳 At least i think it's something big...

Gr8 update Fiza... Amazing.. Do continue soon... 😳




-Laiba
Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow good 1
thnx a lot for d PM
pls update soon........

do u mind if i do this advertising....

"akhir mayank kya kehna chahta hai ????"janege agle update mein
till then stay tunned"😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update..............n really mayank n dia r just too much that was the hilarious part🤣............trust me it is no filler this update was most demanded as it showed the other side of mayank n this will lead them to the most beautiful relation on earth............i think mayank is gonna propose her😃.............do update soon plss n thnx for pm..............!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an unexpected update dear.........the update was.awesome ......
loved the mayuria scene.....mayur's dance was so cute..mayank and dia r sooo addorable.....hmmmm...y mayank is so insecured????
am very much bad in predicting things.....so let us see where the things r heading......
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Posted: 14 years ago

sweet update.

mayur ws so cute.................love nups caring side, she ws so worried abt mayank.............bt wht does mayank wanna say???
waiting for next update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely cute update Fiza
really loved mayur n dia moments
even mayur were scenes was sweet
thanks hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely so lovely update dear
Hope to see Mayur weeding soon
Thanks for pm and cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear and thanks for pm

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