Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

its good yaar...i mean se suffered so much na...

lets see how the story now takes us ahead....

and it wud be "three yrs ago" and not "three yrs later" hope u dont mind me telling ur mistakes.....

continue soon,,,

love,
Mahak

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Asmara.

@Asmara.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Nice one...........

Continue soon.......

And thnks for the pm...........

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
its good yaar...i mean se suffered so much na...

lets see how the story now takes us ahead....

and it wud be "three yrs ago" and not "three yrs later" hope u dont mind me telling ur mistakes.....

continue soon,,,

love,
Mahak

thanx a ton....no no i'll never mind if u point out my mistakes...ramzan are going on so i dont have time to recheck wht i have written......thanx for informing🤗

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
thanx a ton....no no i'll never mind if u point out my mistakes...ramzan are going on so i dont have time to recheck wht i have written......thanx for informing🤗

thanks yaar for not minding....

actually i know how important the first ff is!

i have been through this phase....and i very well know how important it is to be corrected so that our work becomes flawless....

But thanks.....