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Posted: 15 years ago
hey muskaan ..long tym no update !!!!! u r making me sad !
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Posted: 15 years ago
i amm deing to read the next part!! please update fast!!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Muskan, pls update soon....
Wanna read the update and den sleep....
Pls jaldi karo na.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs u guys..for ur replies..u guys are star of my life...
geet - (aa..she moans & snaps)aab jaavoo
maan - yeh breakfast to jaldhi thanda ho jatha hain..(maan frawns & leaves)

part 61

maan left to office ..priya & krish were busy playing
geet goes to meet daadi
daadi - aavoo betoo mera paas
geet hugs her & sits next to her...
daadi - kya baat hain aap bhaut khush lag rahen hain
geet - woh..maan..she paused & blushed
daadi - so tell me..wat is the good news
geet - daadi..maan ne di ko ring phenadiya..
daadi gets worried - kya matlab?
geet - I think soon di may decide to come back
to maans life..
daadi - wat are u saying?
geet - their differences are sorted now..
daadi doesn't say anything...
she gets confused at geets innocense..or ignorance
or foolishness..daadi wanted to speak to maan about it
& clear it out...
daadi calls maan
daadi - mujhe aap se baath karne hain
maan - ji daadi
daadi - mujhe priya aur aapke bare main baath kani hain
maan - mujhe kuch nahi kehna hain..
daadi - maan aap aise baath ko nahi taal sakthe
maan - I am busy will talk latter
daadi gets really worried for geet..


mean while priya & krish plan for a movie..
geet comes back to the outhouse..

she catches up with her kavya, pooja & smriti on a conference call..
smriti - hi guys..my wedding is fixed..
pooja - holly cow!! when how, where
kavya - with whom..
geet - congrats yaar..
smriti - Ranbhir khurana..
pooja - don't tell me..Maan khurana ka cousin hain kya
geet - haan..unke uncle ka beta hain (babaji..yeh kya ho raha hain)
kavya - geet yaar..u seem to know every thing about Maan off late
pooja - off late nahin yaar hamesha se..
smriti - yah guys..guess wat Maan will be coming for my wedding too!!
geet - then I am not coming
pooja, smriti & kavya - wat???
geet was getting cornered..she avoids the topic..&
the door bell rings...geet opens the door..while
pooja - nahi geet you have to tell..us
why did maan came looking for u to my place at 4am
kavya & smriti - he did?
geet..geeeet...she was shocked to see maan at the door..
she stood mesmerised looking at him..
maan - geet darwaze se hatoo..mujhe kuch file lina hain
geet stood lost looking at him..maan slowly held her from
her shoulder & jerked...geeeet...
she snapped back from her trans..& moved aside
pooja - geet woh..maan ki awaz thi na..
geet - nahi ..i will speak to u guys latter..
geet was suprised to see maan back so soon..not even lunch time yet..
maan went to the study & picked up some files & started working
geet slowly peeps into see he was quite involved..
geet makes a coffee & places it in the table..
geet - coffee
maan - umm!!(maan sips the coffee..looking into the files)
geet - aap lunch karke ?
maan - umm!!

geet was so excited & thrilled..she never felt so nice seeing him
around..geet wondered why is she feeling so happy..
she went into the kitchen & makes a lavish italian lunch
Ravioli Quattro Formaggi, Pollo Toscano and Tiramisu(that takes a while to set)
so she started with Tiramisu first & left it in the fridge..
it took her couple of hrs to complete her work..
laid the table & went into the study..maan seemed really busy..
she turned back to leave
maan - kuch kaam tha geet..
geet - ji woh lunch..
maan - umm..abhi nahi..latter
geet turned back & wondered why was she feeling bad..
she knew he was busy..she went to the dining table & waited..
after an hr..she servred the food in the plate &
went to the study..maan still looked busy..
she slowly went close to him...& started feeding him..
maan did'nt resist at all..infact he relished every bite..
she could see that in his face..even though his eyes was lost
in those files & documents..she wiped his mouth with the napkin
& gave him water..& was leaving
maan - mera dessert kanha hain
geet - ji abhi laayi
maan smiled

geet fed him the tiramisu..& left..
maan - geeeeeet geeet
geet ran from the kitchen wondering wat happened..
geet - ji kya hua?
maan - mera dessert kanha hain?
geet mummers..yehllo..file main dekhthe..dekhthe khayenga tho
yaad bhi nahi rehtha hain kya?
geet - ji aap ne abhi to khaya tha..
Maan - are u sure..(There was a noticeably naughty gleam in
his eye as he said that)
geet - yeh to mujhe bhi confuse kar rahen hain..
teehk hain main aur lai aathi hoon
& walks to get some more..maan pulls her hand & she falls into his lap
geet swallowing hard to clear her throat..as if all she wanted to do was fall
in his arms and stay there, safe ... and sound..Her hair was matted against his
chest..he kissed her lips...his lips were tasting tiramisu..
his tongues entwined in a dance of passion, exploring the inside of her mouth
geet sat motionless, enraptured by the erotic feel...
maan slowly let go her lips ..& looked at her eyes..they were closed
& still lost in the taste of his lips...he smiled & kissed her again
more passionately & ..said
maan - geet tum aise mujhe dekho ghi to kaam kaise karoonga..
geet struggles to stand up & walk away..
maan - lunch was exotic...I am planning to come home for lunch
every day...
geet shied & walked away..


precap
maan & priya hug & geet watches confused....😕

hi guys...hope u like this part...thanxs for all ur replies
thanxs again.. love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
muskaan it was very good

but thodha short tha .this weekend u r giving only one update that too short .u r making me cry😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.
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Edited by amritsar007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kya yaar, bechari Geet and bechara Maan. All the characters in your story are bechara 😆 When will they all get their acts together, oh well I am sure not anytime soon cause if they do then what will we look forward to. Every-time I see you have posted a new update, I ask "Will they, wont they" Will they realize the love for each other, wont they stop hurting each other unknowingly.

Waiting for your next update. Keep up the great work.

Polki

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Posted: 15 years ago
Mushan tum everyday two part post kiya karo..waise i always feel that you stop in cliff..

when are U planning Geet telling her friends about her marriage..I hope before smriti marriage..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow... thats really nice.... but ya utter confusion now.... Im getting worried for Geet... one way she is getting too much involved wid Maan emotionally & one way she herself is getting priya di closer to Maan... what is she upto??? well atleast Maan & priya are not confused.... thats one good part... waiting for the climax desperately....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Like it? Loved this part 😊
I am just waiting for the moment when Geet comes out her dilemma and realizes that Maan loves her truly, passionately.

Thanks for the update, I can now go off to sleep 😛

Update soon 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey i really love your updates. I do wake up in the middle of the night to see if you have updated. I am not even sleeping properly. You have a very good creativity. Please update fast.

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