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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cyum321

loved the story so far...........👏

continue soon. and plz pm me😳



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: taanni

plz plz plz update soon yaar



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina420

please update, like the story so far 👏



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

hey lovely update.. so when r u updating next.....



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 353115


don't worry... hopefully whatever you are going through ends with a happy ending XD
good luck on whatever is happening, and never lose hope



Thank you.. Can not wish for much happy ending anyways.. I am updating now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you so much for the love you have showered on me.. Right now I am sort of facing up and down in my life. So the parts might be small.. please forgive me.

Enjoy

<><><>

Part Seventeen

Nine hours later...

Finally they reached at Sapna's place....

"Thank you for coming in short time... also Geet sorry to bother you on day of your marriage" Sapna told her friends while standing with Amit.

Geet step forward "come' on" place her hand on Sapna's shoulder "what are friends for? To support one another and it may be short notice, but nothing the best than coming back to my home town... God I miss this place"

"Huh Sapna" Riddhima also step forward "I might not be that close to you like Geet, but we are friends and friends are always their to support one another so"

Sapna: So you'll rest for the night and tomorrow is big day.

Geet: And what about the arrangements?
Amit: Jab Tani hai than nothing to worry about. Go and rest (shouts for Tani) Tani come and take your aunties and uncles inside the guest rooms.

Tani: Of course Chachu...

Tani escort them toward their room.. on the way back she bump into Prithvi.. Prithvi smirk (remembering their air-plane sequence.. how he filled her forehead with Sindoor in her own prank) Tani just looked shock.

Tani: What are you doing inside my house?

Prithvi: I know its your house that's why I am here to full-fill my promise...

He walked toward her... She walked backwards..

Tani: What promise?

She kept on walking backwards until her back hit the wall... Prithvi leaned closer to her...

Prithvi: About the promise where you'll hug me within 24hrs and already 12hrs passed...

Tani: That will never happen... cause I belong to only

"Tani" shouted a voice... that startled both.. Prithvi jumped few meters away and Tani ran down the stairs... without looking behind.

Prithvi just smiled...

~ Maan and Geet inside their room ~

Maan looked at Geet's hesitation.. regarding some conversation between friends and their gossip.. that he hardly cared.. just wanted to go home..

Geet walk toward Maan than stop halfway looking outside the window "Geet your always talking non-stop and today you are looking for words. At a point you could argue non-stop with Maan Sir and now just can't without showing your hesitation"

Maan finally broke the silent mode "Geet" Geet look at him with moist eyes.

Maan: What happen? Why are you crying? What's wrong?

Geet: I know.. you must be wondering why I am crying.. but these are tears of happiness..

Maan look confuse..

Geet: I mean after many years I am coming back to my hometown after Juju and Di's death.. And today when I am here it feels as if I am in heaven between my loved ones. Prithvi means the world to me and without him there's nothing.

Maan shook his head and took her shoulder in-between his hands and looked at her with angry glare

Geet close her eyes...

Maan open his mouth but Geet cover his lip with her finger...

Geet: Not today! I know you don't have habit of listening to other people's order but please for my sake...

Maan: What?

Geet: Drop the idea of finding a-way of escape. Its huge celebration for my family. After Juju and Di.. Sapna's family means alot to me.

Maan: Par

Geet: Par var nothing... I've worked with you.. I know your each thoughts... please for my sake and Prithvi.

Maan spin Geet around and make her sit on the sofa... kneel down beside her...

Maan: That's it!

Geet shook her head...

Maan: Good! Now listen to me

Her eyes open widely...

Maan: How to start? Okay, I was looking for away in escaping, but if this place have huge impact in your life than I'll try.

Geet blink her eyes...

Maan: Par

Geet: Phir Par... var nothing... while you are here no "laptop or cell phone" understood

Maan: What? Your commanding MSK

Geet: I just have... now please be a good husband and sleep on the sofa without disturbing me on the bed.

Maan just watch Geet make herself comfortable on the bed..

~ Armaan-Riddhima/Prithvi-Tani ~

Armaan snuggle deeply inside Riddhima's cervical area (medical term for neck) mumbles "you remember the gift I bought for your father before that incident took place in our life. It was in the year 2009 in the month July Second."

Riddhima: Haan!

Armaan: Remember the big white kurta with the Dil Jale written on it..

Riddhima: Haan toh!

Armaan: I think you should have showed him.

Riddhima: What? Do you know what Papa would have done?

Armaan: What would have he done? When he knows that Armaan belongs to Riddhima.

Riddhima moan in pain cause Armaan bit her neck...

Prithvi walking back and forth inside his room... Vicky kept on starring at him.

Vicky: What are you doing?
Prithvi: Nothing! Go to bed

Vicky looked shock...

Prithvi sneak out of his room through the window...

Riddhima whisper "do you remember the time when I broke down in your arm in the fire escape?"

Armaan: Haan! What about it?

Riddhima: I might have been upset with you, but the way you handle me. I was touch!

Armaan smile...

Riddhima: Your words.. make huge impact in my life.

Armaan hugged her more tightly than before the fire between them grow danger...

Tani looked outside her window "Tum" moved back and Prithvi jumped inside...

Prithvi observe her room "nice" Tani just stare at him.

~ Next Day ~

Maan woke up before Geet... looked outside the window... everyone busy in their own ways... Geet twist and turns...

Tani looked depress.. hardly slept entire night... Prithvi's words kept on ringing in her mind..

Prithvi got up.. marched into his mother's room.. ignored his Maan Dad.. jump on the bed beside his Mom...

Maan watch them snuggle.. he took out his phone and captured the moment.

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So how was it? If I get time I might post the other part later in the evening. Going out right now.

Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely👏


its short but as u explained we r ok with it. 😊

thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
even if its short... thnkz for updating...
hope you are strong and make it through whatever you are going through...i don't really know u, but what i know is that where there is a will there is a way XXD (stole this quote from some person who i don't know)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe it was too cute just love all the character and their relationships especially geet and prithvi are just too sweet anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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