(MaanEet) Tere - Final Update on Pg 69-70 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
please add me to ur pm list...
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wow yu back thanks amazing update i cant wait the for next part cont soonnnnnnn can pls put pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you and here is another update... enjoy the wedding week cause after couple replies i'll post another part.

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Part Eleven

Geet start blink her eyes twice before confirming who caught Tani from falling "oh your dead" she mumble to herself before making her way toward the crowded.

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Prithvi drop the girl he wanted to save from falling, but seeing his Mom covered in haldi freaked him out of shock that he dropped her and quickly mumble "sorry, but I have to go if I wanna live" he ran away leaving Vicky double shock.

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Geet on the ran to chase her victim "Geet beta... where are you going in this condition?" stop by Dadi's voice.

Geet calming herself "Dadi... if I don't leave now than everything is destroyed in my life." again looking here and there "please excuse me" ready to run.

Dadi: Come back before the menhdi and sangeet....

Geet: I will

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Maan banging on the door of the main mansion "I swear the next day you'll say goodbye to your job... and its Maan Singh Khurana's promise" giving up in frustration.

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Prithvi finally made it... in piece to Khurana Mansion... making his way toward the main entrance when Nakul stopped him "sir you can't go inside its Dadi's strict instruction"

Prithvi put his arm around Nakul "if you don't let me go inside... than you'll come to my funeral tomorrow" Nakul look confused.

Nakul: Alright but don't tell Ma'am that I let you in

Prithvi nods his head...

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Maan gave up and sat on the sofa with his head bow down.... the minute he heard door open... he got up... making his way toward the entrance to be knock down by Prithvi.

Maan: Watch it!

Prithvi: Sorry, but I don't want to die... Help me

Maan: Instead of helping me... you are asking me to help you...

Prithvi: Woh... my mom

Maan doesn't understand anything and gets up on his own to be pushed down again by someone else....

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Geet fallowed Prithvi in a taxi... but confuse why Prithvi came to Khurana Mansion... maybe he's already in big trouble "my baby" reminding herself of Maan's anger "what if he strangle him since he's locked in his own mansion" making funny face "Babaji... please mere beta ki raska karna from Dhust Dhanav"

Geet nervous of fear walked inside thump into something strong... when she looked down her face color changed "you okay"

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Maan heard Geet's voice and his anger vanished to be shock... instead of helping him or saying sorry he heard "beta you okay... did the Dhust Dhanav hurt you?" Maan notice Geet touching Prithvi on his face from forehead to his shoulder... as if checking for any sort of scar.

Maan cleared his voice "what's going on? And Geet what are you doing here? Why is he calling you Mom?"

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Prithvi totally embarrass by his Mother's reaction... He thought she was going to kill him for coming without informing her.... but here she's touching him with love and care "Mom... Mom... Mom" only think came out my mouth before she attacked me with questions "You okay.... did the Dhust Dhanav hurt you?"

"That's my Mom" I told myself "Mom... relax" before I could finish Vicky's brother interrupted us "what's going on? And Geet what are you doing here?" mostly I am confused how does he know my mother.

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Geet finally let go off Prithvi "woh... yeh.... Maan Sir"

(Prithvi watching them)

Maan: What Geet? Why is he calling you Mom?

Geet looked at Prithvi and closed her eyes "you remember I told you about my sister... Juju and about their son. He's Prithvi my only family I have alive" Prithvi heard Vicky's brother say "wrong you have me and my family too"

"Wait a minute... is anyone gonna explain me" they are interrupted by Prithvi's voice.

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Prithvi who didn't understand... had to interrupt his mom and Vicky's brother.... Prithvi heard his mother say "he is my boss who I am getting married too.... I know I've didn't tell you anything earlier but I was waiting for the right time"

Prithvi: And the right time was never.... Mom... its a big decision regarding my life....

(Now Maan is watching the scene between two people who just became apart of his life.... on unwillingly and the other willingly)

Geet: Its not like that but I don'

Prithvi: I've heard this many times.... that you don't want to loose me... but I have the rights to know when you left Mumbai and what happen to your internship.

Geet: Woh... Beta! I was just waiting for the right time... and I know my each decision are reflected with your life. But I was

Prithvi: What Mom? I am fed up... Can't stay with you... always grown up without halfway and now your getting married... congrats to both of you but I am not important in your life.

Prithvi walked out....

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Maan watch Geet crying while screaming "don't leave me... beta" Geet about to run without carrying about Maan. Maan knew what he need to do "give him some time" grab her by her shoulder.

Geet looked at him with wide eyes....

Maan: I know he's the only one in your family and now us, but even I want to know what he was talking about Mumbai. We met in HP than here in my company.

Geet avoid looking into his eyes.... Maan lift her face... and made her look at him "Geet are you hiding something?"

Geet trying to free herself than gives up "haan" she shouted "my entire life" Maan trying to calm her "you don't know anything... if you did than you would have never agreed to marry me" now Geet was shedding tears badly "I miss di and Juju.... if they were than nothing unwanted would happen in my life and I would be a doctor like my friends and the person who brought me up always wanted me to be a doctor"

Maan trying to take in the info while calming Geet "You wanted to be a doctor than how come we met in HP?"

Geet sobbing "because of the person who destroyed my happy home and now he wants take away my Prithvi... that's why I kept him away from me (how can I explain to Prithvi... He won't understand the circumstance) and went somewhere far so he couldn't find me... than the rest you know how we met and how I came Delhi" in between she taking deep breathe...

Maan doesn't know what to do "who was he" but he doesn't here anything cause Geet had fainted in his arms when he hugged her.

Maan lift her up without realizing the haldi she had rubbed on his clothes and everything of his. Maan carefully made his way toward his room and placed her on the bed without carrying about the haldi.

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Prithvi stormed out of Khurana mansion while Geet's word echoed in his mind "how could she?" tears streaming down his face "she promise she would never hurt me than how could she". Prithvi in anger punched the window of a store "I hate her" he looked upwards "I miss you guys... why did you guys leave me?"

"You know sometime you have to accept things the way they are" Prithvi heard a girl's voice. Prithvi looked at the girl he met and caught twice from falling than dropping her own the floor at my Mom's place.

"You" Only thing came out of his mouth.. "yes me... the girl you drop after catching me second time" it sounded like she was complaining according to Prithvi.

Prithvi: Look I am sorry about dropping you....

Girl sat down beside him on the bench "you know I am cool about the way you had drop me... actually it was my Masa's job, but you completed my finishing act. Anyways why are you cursing your life... you should be thankful for whatever god gave you."

Prithvi: You don't know nothing about me than why are you saying that?

Girl: From my personal experience

Prithvi: What do you mean?

Girl: I was around ten when my father left me afterwards my mother also died than I was left behind with my Mama and Mami but also I had a friend who I use to have fun with and cry but he also left me when I was around eight years old.

The moment Prithvi heard the age "who are you?" "Tani Shergil" the name echoed in Prithvi's mind.... he couldn't believe it was her...

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update i cant wait the for next part 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
really interesting...
please continue...
despite the fact maan hates geet, he still cares for her... soo sweeet
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part i hope everthing be okay between Geet & prithvi & she get married soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update.......so prithvi know tani...........anyways i want to know what happened in geets life........anyways plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simzzzzcool

amazing update i cant wait the for next part 😆



Thank you...


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Originally posted by: 353115

really interesting...

please continue...
despite the fact maan hates geet, he still cares for her... soo sweeet



Thanks... They might think they hate each other but they don't...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

amazing part i hope everthing be okay between Geet & prithvi & she get married soonnnnnnnnnnn



They will... trust me

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