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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

awesome update.......so prithvi know tani...........anyways i want to know what happened in geets life........anyways plzzzzzzz update soon



Yes they now each other... Prithvi already recognized her but she hasn't yet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here is the last part of this evening... Thank you for the love you guys have showered me with you.

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Part Twelve

At Pinky's place everyone are worried for Geet because she didn't come on time for her menhdi and now its most time for the sangeet.

Riddhima decide to send Armaan out... looking for Geet.

Armaan: I wouldn't mind but I know where she might be...

Riddhima: Where?

Armaan winked "when two people meet without informing each other about their life and the decision they take always effect others"

Riddhima: You mean to say... oh no!

Armaan nod his head.... and now Riddhima looked worried.

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Nakul came inside the mansion and gave Maan his phone. Maan looked at him with anger eyes, but Nakul quickly mumble "Bari Ma'am told me" and left the room.

Maan took the phone and place it under his right ear "hello" on the other side "Beta.. woh Geet" Maan interrupted his Dadi "haan Dadi woh Geet yahan hai"

Dadi: What?

Maan: Haan Dadi and its long story... I'll tell you once we meet at Geet's place until than relax.

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Prithvi couldn't believe his ears and started jumping inside his mind "She's Tani... Tani... Meri Tani... I mean Meri Jungle Billi (wild cat)"

Tani: Why are you starring at me? Are you okay?

Prithvi came out of his world and looked at Tani for awhile "its too early to reveal anything yet, but she's right. Everything happens with reason behind it" he jump on his feet "thank you Ms. Tani... for helping me sort out my problems. I better go and clear some misunderstanding... Bye"

Tani about to ask what his name was, but he left like wind.

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Geet finally woke up, but her eyes are searching for someone "he's not here" she heard the Dhust Dhanav speak.

Geet: Why do you open your bitter mouth?

Maan growled: Geet!

Geet: Don't you Geet me!

Geet trying to get up, but Maan wasn't letting her go "can you move" Geet was taking out her anger on him.

Maan: No... and we have to go Pinky's place for our sangeet than around the evening its our wedding.

Geet hits her head "you are worried about your wedding when my life is in danger... How rude?" Geet stomped on his foot.

Maan: You!

Maan actually jumping up and down like a monkey due the pain...

"You will never change?" both stop arguing when they heard another male voice...

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Prithvi knew where he would find his mother so without wasting time he arrived at Khurana mansion and by the noise he was hearing he knew where his mother was.

Prithvi tried controlling his big mouth from saying anything while watching the scene in front of him, but he could not help without interrupting.

Afterwards, he was welcome by huge rib crushing hug by his mother "I missed you... mere Shona... vhona"

Prithvi trying to free himself "Mom.... relax... I am not running away" finally broke free and took deep breathe "now can we talk like adults instead of childish naming-saming"

Maan made weird facial expression "oyee... don't make that look" both guys heard Geet saying "Mom I think he got the message that's he's stuck with us for rest of his life. Anyways Mom when are you guys getting married?"

Maan smirked and walk up to the duo "tonight my son" Geet smacked her head with her hand... only reaction Prithvi could think of is "what?"

Maan to himself "kya filmy family I've got in deal package"

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Meanwhile Pinky's house was slowly getting filled with guest, but the awaited guest haven't arrived yet... Dadi was getting worried... Vicky looking here and there for his friend.... boys are getting dressed in one room while the girls are in another room.

Mr. Mallik was looking for excuse in going into the girls room to meet his wifey. Armaan taunt himself "Come' on dude... she's your wife and you don't need any sort of excuse to meet her" Armaan making his way towards the stair when someone shouted his name.

Armaan turns around with fake smile "ye-s" looked at the person who stopped him from meeting his wifey.

Vicky gather some courage and hesitantly asked "you are Prithvi's Mamu" Armaan nods his head "so do know where he is"

Armaan: Don't worry... he'll be here soon

Vicky didn't understand what Armaan meant in mean time Armaan escaped... to be stop by his Rajveer Uncle.

Armaan: Haan Uncle

Rajveer: Beta... can you please check how far Geet is? Guest have arrived and they are talking among themselves regarding the bride's absent.

Armaan: Don't worry Uncle... they will be here soon... trust me

Rajveer pats Armaan's head than leaves... finally Armaan made it up the stairs toward the girls room... only to be scold by Nikki and Pinky.

Armaan: By god! I thought you guys were my friend come sister but you are worst than Hitler himself. And why do I need your guys permission to meet my legal wedded wifey? Now w? Cat got your tongue.

Nikki: Dude... don't cross the limit cause we aren't Geet. Anyways have patient after few days Riddhima is all yours until than let her be with us. Understood my lover boy.

Pinky giggles...

Armaan: Just wait... for the moment where you'll be stopped from meeting your lover... I mean Mr. Idot after your newly wedded. Than I'll ask you the same question.

Pinky giggles more while Nikki fuming with anger on her nose.

Armaan winked at Pinky than left without meeting Riddhima cause already something crawling in his devilish mind.

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Vicky finally saw Prithvi entering with his bro and bhabhi.... Vicky walked up to them and started shouting at Prithvi "where did you go? Don't you know how much I was worried for you? I know you are adult, but this place is totally new for you?"

Prithvi just smiled "Dude....dude" Maan smiling at their friendship "I needed some time to think over sudden events came crushing down on me... but now everything is fine along as my Mom is happy in life."

Geet trying hard to hold her tears back by biting inside her tongue....

Vicky: Your Mom! But where is she?

Prithvi: Your Bhabhi is my Mom...

Vicky: What?

He looked at his bro for answer.... Maan just smiled while Geet trying hard to divert her mind else where from the awkwardness.

Prithvi: Oye... close your mouth before bug goes inside...

Vicky: But how?

Prithvi: Have you heard the saying Masi Maa jasis?

Vicky nods his head...

Prithvi: Toh she's my biological mother's younger sister who have taken care of my needs after my parent's death. From that moment she became my entire world who lives for my happiness and I can do anything for her happiness except....

Geet couldn't hold herself any longer and hugged Prithvi "I know you can do anything for me except for..."

Prithvi saw his Tani walking inside the party with his Atul Mamu....

Prithvi whisper: Mom... for now lets forget the mother and son relationship for temporary wise cause I wanna have some fun, but I promise I won't hurt any ones feeling.

Geet: What? Prithvi not again...

Prithvi: Come' on Mom... tonight after twelve its anyway lord Krishna's b-day so what's bad in living his naughtiness.

Geet: Par...

Prithvi: I promise to stay in my limits... and now bye.

Prithvi ran away without waiting for anyone's permission....

Geet nods her head "Babaji why do I have to choose between those two? And I promise to give Armaan left right left for brain washing my sweet angel" talking inside her mind while Maan catch up with his younger bro.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Actually... in second thought here is last part for the weeks of delay. Thank you for the wonderful replies.

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Part Thirteen

Geet smiles at everyone who came to congrats her and Maan while she was getting menhdi applied on her hands.

Suddenly lights go dim...

Atul & Abhi: Ladies and Gentlemen.... thank you for coming today and giving us your valuable time in bringing these two individuals together in the name of marriage.

Another voice from back of Atul & Abhi "Guys, have you heard marriage is the most pure bond of any relationship either if its boyfriend or Girlfriend terms"

Abhi: Absolutely, Armaan Mallik

Atul: Hey Abhi....

Abhi: Haan Champ...

Atul: Why not hear some tips from the newly wedded couples?

People who are attending the function are confused... including Maan's family even Prithvi himself with his Tani (Guys only Prithvi know that Tani is his childhood love, but Tani yet didn't recognize him... so whenever I say his Tani... means Prithvi talking to himself or reminding himself. Just don't want to get anyone confused)

Abhi: Why not? After all Mr and Mrs. Armaan Mallik might as well share some tips for the other couple who are gonna get married soon. You won't mind

(Abhi asking Armaan)

Armaan: Why would I mind... when marriage itself is a new beginning of a beautiful life itself.

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Geet smiled...

Maan looked at Geet smile "I always want this smile to remain on your face.. but i'll always end up destroying her smile. Now I promise to keep this smile of yours forever" Vicky nudged Maan on his shoulder and whispered into his ear "bro have some shame... its not like you won't see her anymore after midnight she'll be staying with you for rest of your life."

Maan glared at his brother and Geet caught him "Babaji... what am I gonna do about him? He's always ready to strangle anyone either me or his own brother. I never heard of a brother strangling his own sibling. By god! No one knows the path to his heart. Even if he needs to smile... its only sort moment other wise anger lives on his nose. I don't get why people are so attractive to him when he's the biggest Dhust Dhanav hai."

Maan caught Geet starring at him and also making funny facial expression. He leaned forward and whispered into her ears "stop cursing me... in your small head"

Geet jaw drop down in shock "close your mouth before fly enter it" Maan hot breathe touch Geet's left shoulder which sends shiver down her spine.

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Riddhima stood behind Nikki after warning Armaan with her eyes... Armaan being Armaan always does what's in his mind.

Armaan looking dashing in his white suit & Riddhima looks stunning in her blue sari...

Armaan:Ladki badi anjaani hai
Sapna hai sach hai kahaani hai
Dekho ye pagli bilkul na badli
Ye to vohi deewani hai

Riddhima smiles remembering their fights and how Armaan would do silly things to convince her...

Riddhima:Ladka bada anjaana hai
Sapna hai sach hai fasana hai
Hay hay ye pagla bilkul na badla
Ye to vohi deewana hai

Riddhima twirling her hip... Armaan couldn't remove his eyes of her... Riddhima caught Armaan starring at her and suddenly her eyes got moist "Paas rehke bhi thi doori
Jaane kaise thi majboori
Vaqt vo bhi ajeeb tha
Jab tu mere kareeb tha"

Armaan notice a tear escape from her eyes "Kho gayi tu ye kis jahaan mein
Main wahaan hoon dekh to zara" wipe her tear away.

Riddhima smile "Hum bheed mein bhi thi tanhai
Yaad har pal teri aayi
Roke koi mujhe zara
Bhar na aaye ye dil mera"

Armaan trying catching Riddhima from behind and she ran away. (In between her payal make noise) Hide behind Geet and Maan "Kaisa hai yeh khumar
Kaisa nasha
Duniya lage naye
naya sama
Sapna hai mera tu hi armaan
Saason mein dhun chede Puche mujhse bataa yeh kaise"

Riddhima blush behind Geet and Maan "Dill mill gaye (3 girl 3 boys alternately)" Armaan finally caught Riddhima, but by her pallu.

That moment Riddhima held her breathe while Armaan brought his hand upwards on her arm to her shoulder "Kitna tha pyaasa kitna tanha
mann bujha bujha soona jahaan
khali khali har ek lamha
mili tum rang mille jhoome zindagi yeh aise jaise"

Dill Mill Gayee ( 3 boy 3 girl alternatively)

Both of them remember how they met... fought... fell in love... how they got separated by destiny... and how they got married because of Geet.

Riddhima: Ab har pal hogi chaahat ki batein

Armaan: Khushiyon ke din honge sapno ki raatein

Riddhima: haathon mein haath liyen

Armaan: Khwabon ko saath liyen

Both hug each other "Zindagi ki rahon mein chalte chalte" Armaan also give her peck on the forehead while Dill Mill Gaye repeats in the background.

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks again i appreciate for pm i cant wait for the wedding part pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was superb update plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read everything..and must say u are amazing..
it is just so good...my bad that i had missed it all
for this long...really superb...amazing...loved it..
keep writing as ur awesome 👏👏👏
and do add me 2 ur pm list thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing updates.. do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
both parts r amazing continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

simply amazing ud yaar....

loved prithvi n vicky...

n maan house arrest...hahahahha....

eagerly waiting for next part...

thnx for the pm...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
gr88 updates luved every bit of it

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