Strategy of life!(Mayur)(Part 2 pg 9)

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

awwww Komal

u know I just love part 1

itna beautifully written u know ur amazing writer

so Nupur getting married to Adhi

n then Mayank comezz n she sayz that she doesn't love him

n then just love their convo

itzz choo touching

n then Mayank tellz her that she does love him

n she sayz yes but she doesnt want to =(

n later they leave !!
awwww y??
I just wish that Nupur stopz caring about the world n tellz Mayank that she really loves him

n cant be without him.

anywayzz just loved this part sis

do contiue ASAP na

cant wait to read more

luvv ya

n haan good luck in ur examzz na

I am sure u'll do gr88

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

It was senti update

They were in big pain man

Hop they meet

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Jennifer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

just loved the part awsome amazing

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sai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

awesome update

loved it

cant believe nupur is getting married 2 adhi

mayank is sooo sweet

cant wait 2 read more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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ramsha

@ramsha.aslam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

very nice.....great concept,it didn't seem like the first part......you're going to narrate the story through flash back,right???that would be fun😃

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samira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

komal that was awesome update plzz try 2 update soon thanks 4 d pm

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Nikki

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Komal! It's amazing!

I love it!

And I'm really excited for this

Really happy! =)

Add me to your pm list

and best of luck on your exams

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Lovely part....
Curious to know their story....

Continue soon....

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

komzeeeeeeeeeeee
Awesome update januuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
amazing part

it was so touchy and emotional update.

mayur r rocking as usual
but waht happen to nups
why sje behave n this way.
she also love mayank unconditionally.
then why she ran away from mayank?

komzee the way u describe their feelings- hats off to u
but tremendous update.

lekin dekh komzeeeeeeee ye accha baat nehi hai- mere mayur ko alag larneki zara bhi koshish maat karna.
agar aisa kuch bhi kia tou- main tujhe !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anyways yodate was too good

fantastic job hunn
keep it up

and update next prt soon

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago