Strategy of life!(Mayur)(Part 2 pg 9) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hey Komal
part one is really gud
gud luck for ur exams
but complicated nupur married to adhiraj??
hope everything goes well
will be waiting for ur next part 😊



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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Komal that part was amazing... they are getting married to different people.. plz.. update fast..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
heyyyyy komal
loved the start
it was fab
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

U P D A T E T I M E P A R T - 2

I'm Updating after ages......😆.......So hope you all will like it and appreciate it......😛

"FLASHBACK"

A girl in blue shirt, blakc jacket,blue jeans with her suitcase on her hand is walking on the road of London at the mid night looking worried.She looks worried and scared its maybe because she was walking down a lonely street.She was passing by but then she notice some goons there staring at her.She gets even more scared now as she dont know to protect herself.Goons to eachother....

Goon1: Look at that chick,lets go get her?

Goon2: oh yeah lets her and have a party...

They started following her.She noticed that but in first she was walking slowly but when she noticed they just got her she started runnig and goons ran after her.She ia runnig all worriedly and searching for help ,There was guy passing thorugh on a car,A guy with spikes hair-do,totally in party wearing, he looked at that girl and went to help her.She was runnig then the smae CarGuy stand infronto f her nad took her hand she was confused whether to trust him or not?The goons stopped as they saw him.

Goons: Woh the hell are you?

CarGuy: Are its me yaar.....pehchana nahi?

Goons: What you said?

Carguy: I said kutton kamino mein tumhara baap hoon....

Goon: I cannot understand your language.

Nupur was confused about what he is trying to do.

CarGuy: I mean she is my wife.

Nupur looked at him sohckingly.That CarGuy just shook his head and make her believe.

Goon: Oh really?? like we will trust you.Any prove?

CarGuy: You need prove? Can't you see a sexy bomb holding my hand?

Nupur: What?

CarGuy: I mean we had a fight so she wasm ad at me and left the house.Thank god pumpkin pie you are save....

He hugged her tightly....She was irritated...

Goons: I odnt believe you guys?

CarGuy: Ok i have one more thing to prove this.......

Goons: What??

CarGuy: This..

He hold her nad faked a kiss.BUt while between that they were so closed that Nupu was able to feel his breathe,she dont know why felt a heat by being so much close to him.

Ofcourse he was a handsome a guy.A guy with charming look,tall,dark,handsome,fashionable,cute,he had everything that a girl wants in HER men.

He broke that fake kiss.And blinked at her.

CarGuy: Now you believe?

Goons: Guys lets get out of her.

The goons left and then that CarGuy looked proudly at her andgave a beautiful smile,in return she gave a angry look and his smiel went away.

Nupur: Why you kissed me?

CarGuy: Madame correction i didn't we just supposely kissed ok?

Nupur: Ok yeah but why?

CarGuy: Are tum toh ajeeb ho yaar.........you should thanks me to save you but no in return you are yelling at me.

Nupur: Mr?????(Paused)

CarGuy: Mayank...

Nupur: Mayank why doing so much drama when you just had kicked them.....

Mayank: Hello can't u see i'm gonig to a party and i dont wanted to untidy my clothes.Or wiase bhi Gandhi g ne kaha hai Hinsaah Nahi....

Nupur: Agar itna hi Gandhi g ko admire karte ho toh dhoti kyun nahi pehen lete?(Mocked him)

Mayank: Listen....Chodo im in a good mood and i dont want ot ruin it just becaise of a stranger....

Nupur: Nupur(pointed to herself)

Mayank: Oh nice name....Mayank and Nupur wow it sounds so good na?

Nupur: Shut up.

Mayank checked his watch...

Mayank: Ms. Nupur i need to go now.....(He saw she is having luggage with her) By the way luggage kyun?

Nupur: Actually i missed my flight and i'm unknown of this place completely..From your body language it seems like u live here?

Mayank: Yes i do.And i know what you are gonig to say come on you can come with me.

Nupur: Hello i just wanna clear one thing as im ready to go with you as i dont have any second option just dont think that im That type of girl.

Mayank: Believe me i never thought you are.Now come on....

Nupur: I dont wanna give any trouble to you its just a favour of one night.

Mayank: Madame one thing i wanna clear i only helped those who are my friends ok? so i think you get it what i mean to say?

Nupur: Yeah thanks.(smiled)

Nupur and Mayank ni his car on thier way.BUt as Nupur don't had any idea where they were gonig so she asked eagerly.

Nupur: Where are we going?

Mayank: To the club.....

Nupur: Club?? you live in a club?

Mayank literally laughed.

Mayank: No we are gonig to have fun thats it.

Nupur: But we were suppossed to be i guess at your place.....

Mayank: I know we will go there later first clubbing baby...

Nupur: What no clubbing please?

Mayank: See we are gonig to one of them ost popular club and you are new here you should aware of what london's nighto ut is all about..

Nupur: But.......

Mayank: Shhhhhh.......Believe me no harm to you.....

Nuupr believed him.But still he was a stranger .He was Guy whom she know only for 2 hours nad now believing whatever he says.She believed every single word of him.They may be were together just for 2 hours but it seems like she know him from ages i know its kinda filmy well she felts that too.

Mayank and Nupur on the Club....

Mayank introduced Nupur to his friends.

Mayank: Nupur meet my friends tony,bala,rocky and guys this is Nupur my new friend.

Rocky: Badi tagdi hai yaar.

Nupur was irritated by his words and Mayank noticed that.

Mayank: Abe chup kar she know hindi.

ROcky: Oops sorry .

Rocky appologize to Nupur.After 1 hour Nupur was at the bar and Mayank was dancing with his friend Bala.Nupur saw then dancing they were so close.Bala was touching him all the over and wasgetting cloe to him but Mayank didn't tried for once.For some reason Nupur was feeling bad and in all between that she drinks alot.Mayank noticed her drinking continuosly he immediately ran to her and hold her.

Mayank: Nupur?

Nupur: Nupur nahi phulan devi...

Mayank: Whose she?

Nupur smiled.He lift her in his arms and went out of the club.

They are now at his place hep lace Nupur on his bed nad looked towards her sweetly.Nupur opened her eyes and smiled towards him and cub his face.

Nupur: You are very sweet Mayank..

Mayank smiled and took her hand and place it on the bed and then covers her with sheet.ANd sat beside her and continously staring at her and smiled.

"PRESENT"

Tears were rolling down from Nupur's eyes while Mayank was narrating this.She was in a deep thought of how they are really connected to eachother in every way.And their first meeting really proves that.She looked at Mayank and found Mayank eyes teary.He was completely broken and because he was giving them ost precious tihngo f his life his LOVE.Nupur moved her face away because she know that if she wolud look into his eyes then she will broke out in tears and pains.She was fooling him not even him she was fooling herself she knows how much she love him even he knows but his ears never have been that much lucky to hear it from her mouth.She just closed her eyes let the tears rolling she was feelnig guilty about Mayank's situation.Mayank get closed to her and whishpered in her ear.

Mayank: Don't cry please.

Suddenly Nupur opened her eyesn ad saw towards Mayank he was just standing behind her and all what she wanted to do was just ot hug him and get lost into him but she couldn't.The all she can d owas just to ripped of her tears and tell another lie and that she did.

Nupur: Im not crying.

Mayank: I can see that.

Nupur: What was the purepose to re-call the old moments?

Mayank: Purpose? Nupur in a normal life i dont think anyone believe a stranger in thier frist meeting

Nupur: SO?

Mayank: But you did,you believed me crazily,you were feeling jelaous when i was dancing with some other girl even though we knew eachother for 2 hours,even you felt the heat when i was close to you

Nupur: That doesn't prove anything.

Mayank: That does Nupur,that does mean that we knew from the day one that we are meant to be together Nupur (softly)

Nupur don't have anything else to say she was just left speechless.She knows how much it hurts him whenever she says She dont love him.It was all messed up she dont know whom she is fooling as Mayank knows that she love him , she herself knows that she lovehim but still she don't wanna admit it.

Nupur: You know Mayank sometimes its better to tell a lie than a truth.

Tears rolling down from her face and Mayank was just staring at her and crying.

Mayank: But in your last moment together there will be no place of lies.

Nupur looked direct in his eyes and were lost in his pains.....

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Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
res EDIT
This was really amazing Komal! I had to refresh my memory so I had to go back and read the intro, then I remembered 😆. But amazing part Komz, loved it loads. And I loved how it was causal in the past and then serious in the future
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
u updated it after ages komal........but the update was nice.their meeting was really special the way she feel jealous & all....how she trusted him within few hours.......some ppl do hv connections from the very beginning.........hope nu[ur will not lie to herself any more &not to mayank too...update next part soon dear!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
hi Komal🤗l
the update was superb👍🏼
loved it totally😳
luv Marium
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
a nice update after ages
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Chotu....................amazing update Jaan 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
mind blowing update plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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