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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
kya yaar kyun tarsa rahi ho, itna bade bade updates😔😔 slept readin it was so big.😭😭 tum chati ho ki hum request kare ,toh maaneet ka liye kuch bhi karega.plsssssssssssssssssssssss long update fastttttttttttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sapnaajay

kya yaar kyun tarsa rahi ho, itna bade bade updates😔😔 slept readin it was so big.😭😭 tum chati ho ki hum request kare ,toh maaneet ka liye kuch bhi karega.plsssssssssssssssssssssss long update fastttttttttttttt



Sorry *holding ears* really sorry for the wait, just want to get it right, will give you long update with Maan soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: blueangel13



Sorry *holding ears* really sorry for the wait, just want to get it right, will give you long update with Maan soon


chal koi baat nahi,is bar geet ke babaji tumhe maaf karešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
next time asi galti hui tohhhhhhhhhhhšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3: Na Sahi (end)
July 20th
As he surveyed the on going party, his mind was only focused on Geet. "Shayad mujhe uss se waise sab nahi kehan chahiye tha, but what to do, mujhe uss se dur rehna hai varna jo thoda hos mujhme baccha hai woh bhi chala gaye ga." Suddenly feeling a presence near him, he sees Sasha, Adi and the clients waiting to get his attention. "Mr. Khurana, thank you for the wonderful party, it was great to see India represented so well, aaj kaal yeh kam dekhne ko milta hai". As he continues to assure the clients of his plans for their project, he internally wallows in the surging guilt. "Geet sahi thi, yeh concept bilkul sahi nikla clients ke liye". As the party winds down, he makes the plan to return Geet's sandal to her. "Mein aaj hi yeh wapas dedeta hoon, woh thik se ghar pohonch gayi yeh bhi tasali ho gayegi, yeh ladki itne gusse mein nikli thi, itna bhi nahi sochti ki usne dono joote nahi pehne,, kya karu mein uska?"
Remembering the way he had spoken to her and about her, he knows that he will have to apologize to her again, "Woh sachme job chod ke to nahi jayegi? Pata nahi par jab usske baat atti hai toh mein jaise sochta hoon waisa Kabhi nahi hota; mein pehle office check karta hoon". On reaching the office he strides into Geet's office, looking around to observe it's state. "hum'uski cheeze toh yahan hai, accha hai" Looking relieved, he decides to call Geet back to her old position and types up an appointment letter as a way to assure her and to apologize. "Waise yahan hogi toh mein uske nazar rakh sakoonga'I mean'.uss ke ulte seedhe ideas ko correct kar sakoonga" Grabbing the letter from the printer, he signs it and decides to reach Geet's home as soon as possible. On the way all he can think of are their moments together.
Tum Raasta Mein Ajnabee, Lagta tha kyun yeh har ghadi
Aadhe Adhure Geet ki, Ek Tum Kadi Ek Main Kadi.
Tum Raasta Mein Ajnabee, Lagta tha kyun yeh har ghadi
Tumhe Dekhke Lagta tha ye, Tum ho Bane mere vaaste,
Milna Hi Tha Humko magar, Hum na mila to na sahi,
Ho..Zindagi..
When he reaches Geet's house, the first thing he notices is the fact that Pinky and Adi seem to be pacing outside the house and looking extremely worried. Sensing the panic behind their movements and desperate to see Geet he quickly jogs over to them. "Sir, aap yahan'" "Haan woh main'..Adi tum yahan pei kya kar rahe ho?" "Betaji, yeh kon hai?" "Papa, yeh humare boss, Maan Singh Khurana hai" "Accha..Geet ne bataya tha app ke bare mein" "Mere bare mein'.Geet ne''hummm" "Namaste Uncle, waise mujhe Geet se milna tha, woh yeh uska appointment letter office mein reh gaya tha" Adi looks startled at this, but thinking of Geet he, and everyone else, gets the desperate looks on their faces again. Seeing this and with a sinking heart, "Batao, hya hua?" "Sir woh Geet abhi tak ghar nahi aayi hai, nahi uska phone aaya, woh Kabhi ghar late nahi aati hain aur woh iss seher mein humare siva kisiko jaanti bhi nahi'.maine Adi sir ko phone karke poocha agar unko kuch pataho lekin woh keh rahe hain ki Geet to party chalu hone ke pehle se ghar ke liye nikal gayi thi, hume pata nahi chal reha ke hum kya kare?" "Adi sir ki help se humne pura neighboorhood dhoond liya, wapas venue pe bhi check kiya'.kisi ko kuch bhi pata nahi hai.."
With a heart cracking in two and such extreme desperation that it showed on his face, "Kya police ke pas gaye?". "Ji, sir, per they said ke jab tak missing person ko 24 hours nahi ho gate, they cannot do anything" Channeling his fear into his anger, he quickly dials his phone, "Hello" "Main Maan bol reha hoon" "Maan beta, aap iss waqt phone kar reha hain, sab khariyet toh hai na" "Uncle, I need your help", Surprised to hear these words from the fiercely independent Maan and wary of the furious tone, the man replies, 'Maan, aap se kuch ho gaya ka'." "Nahi, nahi uncle, mere ek doost pechle kuch ghanto se missing hai, she is not the type to''uncle I just have a bad feeling about this" "Beta, main jaante hoon ke hum commissioner hain lekin event I cannot file a complain until at least 24 hours have past, But mein 2 officers ko local hospitals aur public places mein check karne ke liye bhagetaa hoon, just give me name and description and I will try my best to help you" Giving the information, he thanks him and hangs up. Amazed at Maan's actions and relieved at knowing that there would be an investigation into the matter, they take Maan inside.
"Maan beta, aap bethiya, aap ka raang bohot utra hai, ab hum sirf babaji se prathna kar sakte hain ki humari Geet sahi salamat ho" Saying this, uncle walks into the kitchen to make some coffee, he knew tonight no one was getting any sleep until Geet was safely home. Dropping his head into his hands, he tugs at his hairs, " I can't believe ke yeh ho raha hai, please mujhe maaf kar do, kahan ho tum Geet?" He recalls all the moments he saved her, from the goons, drowning, her brother, that creep Rahul, with each memory the scenarios in his mind only gets worse and worse as to what could have happened. "Beta, coffee" Taking the cup mindlessly, he once again retreats into the memories of his Geet. Thinking back to what he had said, he wishes desperately to take back That statement, "Tum bohot important ho mere liye, bohot zyada hi important ho". "Agar meri Geet ko kuch ho gaya, mein usko choddunga nahi jisne bhi use chune ki himmet kare hogi". His hand is gripping the cup so tightly that it breaks causing his hand to bleed, but he is unaware and uncaring of the pain. Only when his attention is brought to his hands by Pinkies and Adi's exclamations does he glances down but even then all he can remember is time when Geet bandaged his hand.
har gaam harek aasoon hume apna banana aa gaya,
har haal mein har daur mein hume muskurana aa gaya.
har gaam harek aasoon hume apna banana aa gaya,
gaam hai bhi toh rukna nahi jeena toh jhuka nahi
yeh zindagi koi khusi ab na bhi toh na sahi
ho zindagi...
After bandaging his hand, he once again resumes his vigil. At the first ring of his phone "Beta, saare hospitals aur public places check ho gaye hain, aap ke discription se milta koi waha pe nahi tha aur iss raat koi kidnapping ya accidents ke reports bhi nahi hue hain, hopefully yeh koi chotti si hi baat ho aur usska phone ghar pe aajaye. Jaise hume kuch aur pata chalta hain humare officer aap ko phone kar denge. Aap ke paas koi nayi information aaye to hume bata dena". After hanging up, Maan starts to move again, unable to take the inaction he decides to check the streets himself. Suddenly the house phone rings, uncleji rushes to the phone and has a brief conversation before hanging up. Seeing the smile and relief in unclejis face they know that must have been good news about Geet. "Saab theek hai, hume Geet ka pata chal gaya hai"
Aye Zindagi.... Har Ek Raaste Se,
Humne Pukaara Tumhe, Socha Savara Tunhe,
Par Tumko Accha Na Laga, Koi Wada Saccha Na Laga,
Tum Roothe Ho Yeh Socha Kar, Tum Ko Manayege Magar.
Ab Humse Roothi Teri Yeh Nazar.
Agar Na Hase To Na Sahi, Na Bane To Na Sahi,
Na Mile Na Sahi, Kuch Na Rahe To Na Sahi .
Zindagi..
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Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm wht shuld i say now, atleast the story is movin .wht abt maaneet scenes that u promised.moreeeeeeeeeeee updates, will hound u till u put more updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapnaajay

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm wht shuld i say now, atleast the story is movin .wht abt maaneet scenes that u promised.moreeeeeeeeeeee updates, will hound u till u put more updates


don't worry i have not forgotten my promise
Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
That was amazing Dear
pls continue sooooooooooon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Amazing update!! Awww maan is worried for geet...and he broke the mug 😲 wow lol...can't wait for some maaneet scenes. Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update....eagerly waiting for the next part n some gud maneet moments.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...........though felt sorry to see maan inthis state, but it's his fault.............will be waiting eagerly for the next update........continue and thanks for the pm.

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