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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the update.
Maan is madly in love with her.
Plzz continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update... maan to gaya kaam se...sach me he is a gone case.... update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
swimming pools me hate deep ones...........lol get is lucky to have the guard for her...........nice update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. great update. plz add me to ur pm list
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Chapter 6: Jugnoo (1st part)

"Maan Bachao", saying this Geet is struggling against the water, flailing arms and head bobbing uncomfortably in the water. In what seems like an eternity but is only a moment, Maan jumps up from his kneeling position and dives into the water. Quickly grabbing a hold of her, he floats them into the shallow end of the water until his feet touch the swimming pool floor. On reaching the floor, he eases the death grip that Geet has around his neck and lifts her into his arms. Slowly walking up the pool stairs, he carries her over to one of the chaise lounges scattered around the pool. Looking down at her the whole time, he sees that she has kept her hands locked around his neck and has buried her face into his shoulder. Uncaring of why she is here, only that she is Here. He does not speak a word, unable to breath into speech anything.

Slowing easing down he lays her across the chair and as she has refused to let go of his neck, he bends down with her, planting one knee on the chair. When he has finally laid her down, his hands release his hold from under her and instead he plants them on both sides of the chair. Slowly easing back from her hold on his neck, she releases him and realizing their proximity leans back as much as she can on the chair, without breaking their gaze. As she starts to speak, he lifts one hand and lays it on her mouth. Thought he does not know what she will speak, he does not want this moment broken. He had received news of her wellness, but being unable to see her, he had harbored a ball of worry inside him, it was an illogical fear but he had thought that how was she going to care of herself without him there. Seeing her here now, really here, he wanted to look for himself and satisfy the beast inside him, this beast that was urging that he hold onto to this woman and hold her close, so close that they become with one heart so that she was never able to leave him again.

Seeing the look in his eyes, my heart beats rapidly, the darkened gaze, the dilated eyes, eyes gone almost black in feeling, I turn my head, suddenly breathing rapidly unable to take his passion, his feelings. So many questions that my mind had uttered when I had realized that the hand touching me and the man kneeling beside me were real, were

burned away by the heat of his gaze. It was as if I was alive only in the moment with no past, no identity except for that which I saw in his eyes. My hands clutch and un-clutch the sides of the chair, stationed as they were so close to his. I turn my head back again, and try as I can to stammer out something, maybe a why or a how, but with a hot hand suddenly on my mouth all recollections leaves me as to what the question was.

Half expecting to see fear or a rebuke in those beautiful eyes, I am surprised and please to see confusion and passion. Easing back my hand, when I am satisfied that she would not speak again, I drift my hand down and taking both hands, ease them over her fidgeting ones, halting all movement. At that contact, the current which passes through me steals my breath and I am glad to see she too was in bated breath. I close the gap between us and with lips so close, I close my eyes and simply lay my forehead against hers. I cant say how many moments pass us, but when I finally ease back her eyes are still closed. Pulling back more, I finally utter the thought which was running through my mind. "Kyun Geet, ek phone bhi nahi, Tumhe nahi pata mein tumhare bina…., itne bhi kya narazgi mujhse, tumne mere bare mein ek pal ke liye Socha bhi nahi, ke Tumhare na milne par mujhpe kya beeti hogi"

Opening my eyes at the softly spoken question, I am lost in his hurt. Easing my hand from under his, I lay it across his cheek and slowly rub it as if rubbing away a tear. "Ji to bohot kiya, par ghabrati thi, ek pal aisa nahi gaya ki maine tumhare bare mein soch nahi, uss raat tumne kaha uss se daar gayi thi……" Suddenly realizing what I was saying, I snatch my hand away from his surprised face and move it down to ease his other hand off mine. Yeh mein kya keh rahi hoon, Geet tunhe to ye tair kiya tha na ki tu iss sab bato ke bare mein nahi sochegi, toh phir tu yeh kya keh gayi. With sudden movement I dislodge his hand from one side and moving my body off of that side of the chair, I go to run from this madness, before anything else occurs, anything else is asked or said. As I run a few feet forward, I abruptly feel a tug on my saris pallu.

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG thats awesome dear
pls pls pls contionue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.loved it.
pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
so cute finally they will have sum close moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
typical maaneet .. just imagined it as an episode!!
very nice .. part 2 please???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow! Amazing! Great update! It was intense.......loved it! Do continue soon.

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