sajan/mayur os updated (page 5) - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

90

Views

11.3k

Users

50

Likes

235

Frequent Posters

Posted: 14 years ago
#71
lovely SaYank os!!

loved it
loved sajan 's nd mayur's toooo


itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#72

" My three nautanki friends, mayank, nupur and samrat. They in many ways filled the void created by the death of my parents. From that time they are my only family, my life"

"gunjun just close it " nupur just entered the room snatching the diary gunjan was holding and started looking in the mirror "tell me how m I looking???"

No doubt she was looking gorgeous in her dusty pink lehnga embellished with floral work. Gunjun was going to praise her 15th time when mayank peek through the door and shouted her name in frustration "for God sake, we have thousands of other things to do nupur, leave the mirror alone for sometime"

"mr. Wikipedia I know u will never get time to get engaged so let me fulfill all my wishes in samrat's engagement plz, right now he is my only hope"

"then plz call ur only hope to come back soon, m calling him from last 3 hours and he is not attending my call. It's already 6 and guests will be here after an hour. And gunjun check the decorations in the main hall plz" he left the room in hurry giving instructions.

It was already 7, everyone was gathered in the hall waiting for samrat but he was nowhere. Mayank was trying to call him but his mobile was turned off.

"he can never be on time" mayank whispered. Anger and frustration was visible on Samrat's father's face.

Suddenly a car entered in the garage, the sound was quite relaxing for everyone over there. Samrat finally opened the door with a jerk, giving fleeting look to everyone present in the hall. He entered in the hall devoid of any expression on his face, walking at a snail's pace.

"everything fine sam???" mayank asked with great concern in his voice meanwhile nupur held samrat's hand "come on samrat get ready, u r already late" she was going to drag him when samrat held her hand "now its not needed nupur"

"what???" his statement was shocking for almost everyone standing there. Samrat moved towards priya, who was waiting to affirm their commitments through the beauty of the engagement rings. Samrat was standing facing her, held her shoulders delicately, who was looking him with questioning eyes. Samrat closed his eyes for a second or two to gain all the courage, although there wasn't left any. "priya m" he paused halfway "m priya m ... suffering with AIDS" his sentence was the least anyone had predicted.

Priya moved a step back "how can you suffer with aids samrat??? U said u love ME"

"I love you priya, where I said I don't???"

"then from where this disease came from samrat???"

"m dying and u r asking for the reason??? Who thinks about the reason when someone gonna die???" he almost shouted, getting a sounded slap on his face by his father

" can u even imagine what sort of mistake u have done samrat???" his father scolded him badly

"priya samrat is not like that" gunjun interrupted in between with tears beaming in her eyes "I know him from great time, u all r misunderstanding him, he is.."

"its not needed gunjun" samrat stopped her midway "I lost everything today my life, my love and my family. They will not think about me but about their image that they think is shattered by me badly. My father is not losing his son but the reputation he gained till today" saying this he left the room

"samrat just listen" nupur was going to stop him when mayank hold her arm "let him go"

"he is so much upset mayank"

"he will manage, u don't cry plz" he said wiping her tears gently with his fore finger

"he is gonna die, he is leaving us guys and u r saying not to cry"

"he needs us nupur if u will cry like this then what about him???"

"but m not that much strong mayank, y this happening with us??? How will v live without him???"

Mayanak hugged him tightly giving her the strength but meanwhile his own eyes were wet.

She broke the hug looked here and there "where is gunjun???"

On the top of the stairs in front of samrat's room she was sitting on the middle step folding her hands lost in her own world. They both approached her and sat beside her. Finally gunjun buried her face in nupur's lap letting all her tears to come out

"our lives are twisted so badly. Everyone was so much excited n now. m gonna lose my family again nupur. How will he bear all this??? I know he always pretend that he is strong enough but he is not in real"

nupur started brushing her hair softly to comfort her, with a thin film of tears forming in her own eyes, she too rested her head on mayank's shoulder to calm herself.

The environment was filled with great choking sobs that was broken when samrat opened the door of his room. His red swollen eyes and smile on his face were giving conflicting picture of whats going on inside him. He sat on the top step, trying to start the conversation. To talk with his friends was not that much tough before.

"u guys still here???" was the abrupt question he asked "I think its too late u should leave"

Mayank's pov

"but samrat" nupur just turned around

"nupur m strong enough to deal with my own problems, I don't need u guys" samrat said with a slight smile on his face, but he was unaware that the tears that he was holding back were not invisible, at least not for us

"v know u don't need us, but v three need u samrat" nupur n samrat love arguing with each other for hours and that was just a trailer

"I don't want people to point finger on u only becoz u r my friends "

"for me my friends are more precious than my image, got that"

"stop it guys" gujnun finally added a full stop, she is the only sensible person apart from me in our group "ok samrat as u wish han, but plz do take care"

Samrat nodded slightly. He turned towards his room and we three were going to proceed towards the exit. I was standing over there watching his every move, which was not at all usual. A strange terror rose up in me seeing his trembling body and his shaky hands.

"SAMRAT" I screamed, he turned around, was standing facing me.

He rested his head on my shoulder and clutched my shirt in order not to lose his balance. I wrapped my arms around to comfort him, to share his pain.

"sam" I whispered his name in unease "m fine" were the unexpected words I got to hear in his feeble voice. I was freaking out seeing his condition the way he was holding me with great strength and my shirt was becoming wet becoz of his tears.

Samrat's pov

How come he is still here? I don't want them to see me like this, that's y I wanted them to leave. Before closing my eyes and losing my sense completely the last thing was mayank shriek "nupur plz call the doctor"

The sun rays were exasperating me completely. I finally opened my eyes after a little effort. Nupur was seated beside me with her hair scattered on her face and was in deep sleep. While mayank and gunjun were busy in reading book.

gunjun came closer started brushing my hair with her hands

"How r u feeling"

I nodded slightly, still was trying to gain myself.

"u really frightened us samrat" mayank said sitting beside me, putting his hand on mine awaking nupur

"samrat" nupur said rubbing her exhausted eyes "how r u???"

I smiled vaguely; my continuous silence was irritating them as they were not use to it

Pov end

"whats inside u??? Share whatever bothering u samrat" gunjun asked concerned

"such a miserable and painful end of my life gunjun, soon will going to start a journey where I will b alone. That's the end; it will come so soon, I was unaware" tears were rolling down, absorbing in the pillow

"samrat v r here with u" nupur said trying to console him holding back her tears "n will b with u forever. Nothing will happen to u, will irritate you to an extent that u by yourself will want an exit"

"samrat can I ask a question???"

"mayank do u think u want permission???"

"sam...y didn't u tell anyone that u r not guilty??? Its becoz of blood transfusion and not''.."

"who told you this???"

"doctor told me sam, but y didn't u told everyone, y u listened everything silently???"

"it was not needed mayank, I don't want their support, I don't want them in my life anymore. I came across an accident last month and hide this truth from everyone saying that I have some important work out of town. I didn't want to create any sort of tension. May b God gifted me this disease to let me know, about whom I think the most, for them their reputation is more important than my life. For a moment I felt so alone, this feel of loneliness is killing me"

"u r not alone, v r always there for u samrat.U know what this bond of tremendous foursome is eternal, no one can break it"

Gunjun said with a smile on her face, wiping his tears, followed by a group hug.

Sam's pov

"Death is a reality; v cannot run from it everyone has to face it one day. The difference is I spend every second of my life considering it the last, while others think they have a lot of time ahead. When I needed someone, my friends were only there to support me without knowing m I on mistake or not. Firstly was afraid of death but now it seems the thing more precious than my life is my friend's smile and the thing more worst than my pain is their tears. M hating the fact will leave them in tears one day. The scar left in their lives with my death will shatter them. I pray to God their smiles will last forever. My only family my three nautanki friends... ... ... ..."

Edited by itzMYattitude - 14 years ago
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

lovely SaYank os!!

loved it
loved sajan 's nd mayur's tooo




thanks alot for reading both =)
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#74


really sweet of u to reserve the place
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#75
thanks everyone who read my last os =)
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#76
going to post next one soon
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#77
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY
was hell busy in last few days n inactive as well
a bit free so thought y not to write one
ok written this on specially on independence day
sayank os once again
ur comments means alot

Mayank took up the watch which lay on the table beside the bed and the time displayed on it disturbed him more 08:57pm. He was standing on the window with his gaze fixed on the main gate. 'Where the hell u r samrat???' he said with a sigh of disappointment.

Samrat was trying to run as fast as he could. Three minutes were left only. His whole body was stinging but he was not in mood to get scolding.

He stopped for a second or two before entering in. the elegant or may be for him the arrogant words displayed in front "ARMY ACADEMY" were mocking him increasing his anxiety. His body was burning as was badly injured few minutes ago. He entered the main gate but was stopped by the duty officer midway. He looked at the watch flashing 9:02 and that second he was aware the night will be as crueler as the day was.

Now samrat was not having strength to move towards his room. He finally entered the room all tired. This place was already a nightmare and now he found it worst than his imaginations. He saw mayank standing in front "thanks God I was only 2 minutes late one more minute n I would b dead till now" he said in sleepy tired tone "2 minutes means 2 rounds of the whole academy" he smiled a bit but seeing mayanks's stern expression continued in a sleepy tired tone "plz mayank m in no mood to attend another lecture right now let me sleep plz" he entered his bed "but why u r late, u were saying u will be back till 8:30. Wasn't the movie a bit longer than usual???"

"m only two minutes late what's a big deal??? I use to come home after mid night who knows all this better than you. Still see here I m at 9 have u ever thought that I could be changed that much. I m leaving everything still u guys have problems"

"the life v have to live here never allow us to do whatever v wish sam"

"yeah I know that's y I m here shattering all my dreams of becoming an interntional basketball player. U do live with ur wish to be an army officer. Everyone is not that lucky" he covered his face with the sheet avoiding further heated discussion that was now a daily routine.

Samrat before sleeping rewind the incident happened an hour ago

Samrat and karan were coming back to academy after watching movie walking side by. They saw a driver driving his car in zigzag pattern "another drunk driving case, God knows whose life will be on stake becoz of him" karan muttered. Samrat rushed towards the girl, about 8 years old, on the other side of the road peacefully walking unaware of the trouble she was going to face soon. He tried his level best to save her from the car that was just inches away from her but in this entire he bang with the car hurting himself. The car crossed him swiftly. Samrat approached the girl who was crying badly "r u fine" he asked abruptly. She too got few scratched on her head and knee and was unable to walk properly

"samrat r u fine???" karan asked trying to spot any injury

"I m .karan I will take her to hospital and then will drop her home, she is all alone here. I will be back soon; still I have 30 minutes in hand"

"r u nuts. u want me to go back alone. No ways first v will take her with us and….."

"just don't try to act fool, I have nothing to do but I know ur presence will be needed in the conference tonight, for this they can call u anytime. M fine n will b back soon"

"r u sure" samrat nodded holding the girl in hand "I will be back soon"

Samrat turn off the lamp placed on side table and was lost in the world of dream, unaware of the fact that his statement made someone restless "U do live with ur wish to be an army officer. Everyone is not that lucky" samrat's word made him recollect the memories of his past

"mayank why u choose to go with samrat??? Y didn't u refused to do so???u never told anyone but I know To be an engineer is ur childhood dream, ur passion" nupur hold his black shirt and fold it gently before placing it in suitcase

"dad wants me to go and samrat was not agree to go there alone"

"samrat said this only because he know u will not join him and in this way he can easily get an excuse to leave army. But u spoiled his plan as well by agreeing"

"it was dad's dream to see samrat in army uniform nupur. And u know I can never refuse him. He take care of me after my parents death, he is my guardian, he never asked me anything it was the first time n I failed to refuse"

'samrat how I will tell you that v both r sharing the same situation, v both left our dreams for this place. But m satisfied with my choice and will wish that one day u too will realize that the peace u will get here is incomparable just try to live a new life….new start.'

Mayank rushed towards his room after listening about last night from karan, leaving his breakfast halfway spotted samrat still sleeping. "samrat" shaking him gently he realized that samrat's body was burning . He checked his forehead and was shocked he was actually having fever. He fevered intermittently throughout the night becoz of the wounds he got. "samrat" this time he shouted in disbelief and anger. "mayank let me sleep" samrat said in sleepy tone eating few words "just get up n come for breakfast then……"

"after an hour v have to attend physical exercise atleast till then let me sleep"

"get up n have ur breakfast take ur medicine and then will talk about something else"

Samrat uncovered his face playing with his hair "what the hell yar, don't try to irritate me like mom"

"samrat I guess u r forgetting that v were best friends from great time, sharing every small incident of our life. How u forget to tell me what happened with you last night??? A single decision of mine changed everything. m going to bring breakfast for you just get ready" he left banging the door behind showing his anger "its not like this, its just I never want u to get upset, it was" he said in feeble voice but his words were unheard by mayank who left the room banging the door behind showing his anger "y life is becoming so complicated" he mumbled

Mayank came back with the breakfast but samrat was gone for physical task till then leaving a small sticky note behind "sorry don't want u to get late, if I would be here u will not attend the first task becoz of me and I just hate caring nature of urs"

"samrat y u torturing me that much" he said putting breakfast on table and headed towards the washroom with his uniform in hand

"sir plz let him go, he is not fine, how will he able to complete……" mayank requested after failed attempt of searching samrat anywhere.

'I cannot do this' these words never suits an army officer"

"but sir"

"no buts no ifs, believe me no one ever die with fever, be strong in ur life defeating every weakness that come in ur way"

ok i dont how was it a bit boring may be
but be honest
thanks for reading
will try to continue soon
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#78
At first wanna say Happy Independent Day
a beautiful piece of writng dear
loved it so muchhh
loved caring side of maaynk for sam.
i know army life is very strict and tough yet its a very exciting degnified profession
hats of to them who had sacrificed their life for our county...
good update dear
do cot. it
itzMYattitude thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: -Faria-

At first wanna say Happy Independent Day
a beautiful piece of writng dear
loved it so muchhh
loved caring side of maaynk for sam.
i know army life is very strict and tough yet its a very exciting degnified profession
hats of to them who had sacrificed their life for our county...
good update dear
do cot. it



thanks alot dear
for ur time n patience required to read this
i really apprreciate
although i know u r more a mayur n sanu fan i guess
still ur words means alot <3
Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#80
res
god knows when im goen edit it
but HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY guys...

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 8 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".