sajan/mayur os updated (page 5)

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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

heya.. thnks for da pm..

i luv both the couplesss soo it was superbb...

lovely updatee..

ur a grr88 writer..

do cont soonnn

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

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Wow Sara 👏,

Now that was one amazing OS, i really love your concepts .. This was awesome i really loved reading it ! I read the SaJan one and really loved it beautifully written!

I loved how she fell in love with him "love at first sight" .. And then how she took him home and took care of him, and then she left her house and went to make their house that was truly amazing ! You should write an FF yaar .. Truly awesome loved it

Thnks for the PM !

Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 15 years ago

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@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Ressss!!! Sanju wants to give u a biiiiigggggggggggg comment!!!

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Omggg!! Sara! Tum tho jhatke pe jhatke maarti jaa rahi ho! 😆 wowowow! Firstly, thx sooooo much sweetheart for dedicating this OS to me! =) I reaaaalllyy lovee u yaar! Muaaah!! And now, coming to ur OS! Wonderful jaan!! Just wonderful! I love SaJan from the beginning! And u just made me fall in love with them! And I absolutely loved how u finished it! Plzplzpl, mere liye, keep writing on SaJan and MayUr and SaNu and SaYank yaar! U write MAGNIFICENTLY!!! I will be waiting for ur pm! Plzplzplz write soon!! And thx for the first pm!! Luvvvv u!! once again, first OM HASSSS to go to me! Okkkk my shweet big sister!
Luv,
Ur Chumchum bubloo!!! 😳

Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Hey Sara
U r an awesome write dear
I read both OS
and both r just mind-blowing
excellent
superb OS dear

In ur 1st shot -sayank r fantastic
i loved their bonding,feelings,emotion of each other.

and ur 2nd one
mayur r too good
nups is a sweet heart.
loved mayur a lot

very well written
Fabulous Job

plz plz do write more.

And thanx a lt for ur PM

Take care

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

marvelous os...i was too good......cont soon

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

sara touching n emotional OS
loved mayur

nups sweetheart i love this line

"kahen gy my daughter was madly in love with a mad person

thanks 4 d pm 😊

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

HEy sara OMG you are just amazinggg yaar!
First of all the concept was beautiful and truly wonderful dear!👏
I loved reading your Sajan OS and you know even i,m from pakistan so it was easy for me to imagine them in the certain places which you mentioned in your OS.I must say you are an amazing writer and if you would start your own FF then i can say without a doubt that it will be a rocking one.AMazing dear just loved reading it.

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

awesoooooooooooome......

superb....

rocking....

wonderful........

loved both SAJAN'S-MAYUR'S part........

to the core......

thanx for the pm........

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Lovely OS loved it very much

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Lovely!

Simply amazing!👏👏

my favest part was

"everyone in this word is mad, some behind money, other behind status. N I don't want such double face crazy people in my life. He is the best n no one can be like him, not even a dream boy of a girl.

^^Beautiful lines hun n so true...!!😳

It was a lovely read, n i must say u r one talented writer:D I dont have much words today just tht i loved each n every bit of it! It was so SaJan-ish!😳 Thanks for the PM Do write more n add me to ur PM list, i am excited to see as to wat u r gonna come up with next time...!!:):)

Luv U

ZeeJay!🤗