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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

amazing story dear....

loved it....

simply superb.....

plz do continue n add me to ur pm list............

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
hi all....thnx 4 da lovely comments...sorry 4 da delay....had some connection prblm....will post the next part as soon as possible....
take carez.... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Part – 4

Its 10:45 am and we see Riddhima pacing here and there in her cabin....looking really worried....tension is clearly seen on her face....just then the phone bell rings and Riddhima's walk comes to a halt...she picks up the phone as quickly as possible...

R:yes suzi is he here???

S:no madam...actually there is a call from mr. Siddhant...he said he is trying your mobile but your not picking up...should i connect to him or you will talk to him later.

R:no...just connect to him...

S:hey sis...whts up??

R: am gud sid...how come you called me....that to early in the morning....???

S: its early morning in India sis....not here...anyway...just called home...and mom told me about the important meeting you are having today...so thought to convey you best wishes...but you weren't picking your phone up...so had to call on the office line than...

R:oh...yah...i was just busy...and mobile was on silent anyway....thanx for your sweet wishes...am so excited...u know..

S:that i can imagine...and extremely nervous too....must be panicking...and with you the whole staff will panic too...just take a chill pill sis...its just a mere meeting...like you meet other associates...be relaxed...

R:how can i sid....he is not an ordinary client...and i don't know also why he wants to meet up...i have have to be nervous...

S:ok...wateva...but just one thing be urself and i know...my sista...will rock...as usual...

R:thanx dear...it means a lot....am a bit relaxed now...

S:ok then bye for now...and mail me the details of meeting as soon as its over ok...and i should not get to know about that from others like this one...

R:you know...i tell you everything....just that...it was all of a sudden...and i was so shocked...i never reliazed i forgot to inform you...anyway...bye from my side to...its already 10:55 ....he will be here any minute...

S:ok then...best of luck again...bye...

R:bye...

After cutting the call...she dials to suzi...

S:yes madam...

R:is he here???

S:not yet madam...

R(disappointed...as its 10:00 now): ok

Tired of the tension and pacing around...she sits on the near by couch...and leans her head back...on the head rest.....closing her eyes...and she goes into a deep slumber...as out of tension...last night also...she hardly slept...after about 20 minutes...she wakes up abruptly and checks the time quickly...shocked to se...its 11:20 am now...and he is still not here...or he came and i was sleeping and he left...she quickly dials to suzi...

R: did he come???

S: no madam..should i call and check...as the appointment was at 11...

R: no its ok...he might call himself...we will wait...do i have any meetings or appointments to look at now...

S: not till...2 pm ...as u instructed yesterday...

R: oh yah...thanx..

She sat down on her chair...thinking about the reason he didn't came for the meeting...then diverted her attention to the work...as it was of no use...to think and give yourself more tension....

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In another office....we see Amit Malik sitting on a lavish chair....big table infront with two seats...and on them are seated...Anjali and Abhi... we hear some discussion going on between the three...

An: but dad...can't you think of any other option....you hardly know the girl...and taking such a big decision on just reading about her...i don't think its correct...

Ab: yes chachu...even i think anji is right...i know...armi goes out of hand at times and we have to let him learn to understand his responsibilities...but depending on a girl...who might have got name on a small scale...due to her hard work...but what about our clients...our reputation...it will suffer a lot...just because of your decision...

Am: i don't think...there should be anything of concern to our clients...till the time we are providing them good supplies and on time...why should they be bother about...a decision...which is our entire personal....

An:but dad...when doing business nothing is personal...we have such a big name in industry...we can't spoil it like that....jus because...we hav to teach armi a lesson...

Ab: it would be letting our all businesses at stake...

Am: i just called you both to inform you...what my decision is...your mom also agrees with it...and i don't think...it will create any problem...and am still here...and have more experience than you guys...so have faith in me...i will leave now...am already late...i had given her time at 11...now its 12:30..

An:dad ....think one more time...there is no rush...in a year or two...arman...himslef might realize...his responsibilities...

Am: Anjali...i don't know...if me or your mom will be there tomorrow with you or not...so we have to secure the future of our every child...let us do our work...

Ab: ok chachu as u say...

Amit looking at anjali for a reply

An: ok ...i agree...i know...i cannot win from you...only armi can...but this time...i think he has lost it badly....too

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thats it for now...i know...no arman in this part...but...it wa needed in the story....so...next part...will have arman too...do comments...critisize...how it was...will be waiting for ur replies..till next time

do take carez....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
nice part bbz
so sid is ridz bro
cool
anyways why was the part so short
i wud have loved to read more
anyways gr8 job
n do continue soon
luv
Nikki
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey guriya😛

nice update
liked it😃
But the part was too short yaar
next time want a big update😃
so sid is ridz's brother😛
cool...keep continue
Thanks for the PM

lots of love
prinz
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Edited by Prinnia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hey such a small part
bt it was nyc
thnks for pm
continue soon
TC
GAURAV
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
awesome update
loved it
loved the brother sister convo
sweet
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

amazing part.....

let see how armi is gonna be a responsible person....

thnx for the pm.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
nyc ff
just read it
plzz continue soon
do pm me plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Awesome update
loved it
loved the bro and sis convo
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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