mayur ss - As Time Goes By..! part 4!

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jeni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
hmm..so gunjan and nupur are best of frds....cool yaar.....

and what abt this mayank?

nice start....but i am confused regarding the dlgs....

and where is dia?

how wud mayank react?

comeon!

now update soon....

love,
Mahak

dia is not introduce yet,....

mayank lets see on next update about your query...

sure i will

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jeni😃

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
Hey Jeni,

OOTY....!!!!! Mayank is getting engaged in Ooty??? Bechara....... Engagement toot jayega.....!!! Ha ha......

Hmmmm...... so, Gunjan is Mayu's sis and Nupur's best friend..... Cool haan.....!!!

but i guess i had another plan right....absolutely u had one more plan...no tit for tat😆am trying to say somehting on which we had discussed before hope u got it...else am there nah for brief explanation🤣

I wanna know how is Dia's behaviour with Nupur..... Is she nice or arrogant???

i told she is not in for some more updates😳

So, Are Mayur gonna fight a lot now??? Hmmmmm...... The way they shouted I dunno what to expect more from Mayur......

really will they be fight...if u expect to fight then there is small twist for u dear😆

WOW..... But, I just loved this concept and this update......

Waiting for more of Mayur in the next update.... *day dreaming*....
Dia..... Please don't disturb Mayur..... !!!!! LOL...

So, tomorrow two updates na??? Waiting to read loads of Mayur in it.......
Very Eager to read......
Continue soon.....

yesterday i thought i will be returning earlier after my shopping but i returned late night...so i felth tired so am updating now...😆my special appologies

loves

jeni😳

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
nice

thx dear😳

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: kirti123
wow
thanks again for the link
nice concept
enjoyed the 1st part
gunur convo was cute
wtg to read next
nice start 😊

thx dear....

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
happy friendship day to you too

now congrats on your new ss

as usual crazy abt your concepts

feel in love with it at once

and part one was amazing

perfect begining

gunur were so cute

mayur wre amazing

gunjan as mayank's sis..... nice

dia as mayank's fiance..... oh no

update soon

luv

mahima

so lovely mahi...now a day ur being so mysterious...😆

i mean ur so hard to be found online...missing u...try to leave me a message once...

so nice...i can feel the happiness seeing u comment....love u for making me feel special...

loves

jeni

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
dear jenni sooy yaar but don't worry buddy we like your concept but first give me the update of all your previous ff
buddy congrats for your new ss but want previous too you have to update
jenni these days you are to lazy i want update
and i really like the concept my sweet sis updater soon
i know this will be really different and i will wait for thsi too

hey adi sweety...i thought u will be drooling over ur own dreamland...but yaar ur replying to my ss...dats so cute dear...😉

sure i will pm u my links ....

yuo withought u i have become so lazy...faru is trying harder to make me brisker but she end giving up soon which makes me go lazy again😆

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jeni

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -DazlingAngel-
hey jenni
nice concept yaar

Happy Friendship Day
I know I am a bit late but sorry actually I have tests this week, was busy in preparations

Sorry Again!!

-Tasheen-

no sorry dear...thx for leaving comment with remembrance...

love u...say me how ur exams went on?

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jeni

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Chapter Two - Friendly reunion

So you guys both know each other huh, gunjan asked out of excitement for which mayank nodded as a yes, while nupur nodded as a no.without continuing further .talk she looked at gunjan asked please let us go in gunjan...

gunjan looked at her brother who signalled her to take her inside...she just nodded...turned to see her friend who is standing bit anger,without no querries gunjan took her inside the house...

Gunjan why didn't you said that mayank is your brother

Before gunjan talked shilpa came there welcoming her daughter ...an her

Maa she is nupur, I have already told you enough... my best buddy she said smiling😉

How are u nupur?she only used to talk a lot about you in the phone.

Maa she is not only gunjans friend she is my friend too said mayank entering the hall

Shilpa looked confusingly at mayank as he continued I had told na we 3 friends had a big fight in our final year for a stupid reason later we had lost contact with each

Ahh she smiled looking at nupur fine its so nice to hear, now better gunjan beta take her to your room , let her rest for some time....

Ok mom So nupur this is my room...do you like this...!

nupur had a quick glance room was sufficient enough...no fans but it was very colder....she loved that place...its very nice gunjan...

you sit and relax,within that i will have hot bath she said taking her dress to change after then we both will go to have our lunch..

Nupur was no mood to sit and relax thought of unpacking her dresses opened the bag started arranging her dresses on the wardrobe ,she still don't know why she was ignoring mayank she no its so stupid for them 3 to fight on such a stupid matter it was so funny to think of it as for as now...ck

Nupur she turned back coming out of her dreamland as mayank came inside giving a small knock at the door
nupur ...

she looked at him standing there for asking a appology which was not really needed...

Both looked at each other seriously nupur turned to leave the room...as she couldn't control her smile which is peeping out uncontrollably mayank caught her wrist not willing to make her move out of the room..

Am sorry nupur he was damn serious...me and sammy felt so sad ... while saying this which made nupur laugh loudly...

enough mayank please dont act out of your character😉..you no what it really doesnt suit your physique too...😉

Mayank took a deep breath saying thank god you smiled I thought you were still angry on me !😛

Mayank it was so funny both smiled a lot..while mayank just hugged her tight in sudden said I missed you a lot nupur

Nupur took some time to understand that he had actually hugged her she felt a bit hard to take a breath as he was holdin her so tight...making her turn red...she replied shyly... I too missed you mayank its so nice meeting you again..she blushed as he had never touched her before it was a really different feeling for her and mayank though...as they never hugged each other before...

hearing the bathroom being unlocked both embarrassingly moved back from embrace...as its different and new sensual starting...with a friendly reunion...😃😛

loves

jeni...😳

no complains on shorter parts please as am gonna update one more part 2mrw itself😃

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago