~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28

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Shreya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

superb part...finally monaya frnds... 😳 ..plzz add me 2 ur pm list...

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

hey Ragini first of all congratzz on your first FF na sis🤗

I know em a little,

lol, no a lot late

but I am really happy that you wrote a FF na

never knew about this FF

warna would of read it right away na

ohhh so itz on Mohit n Sanaya na

thatzz gr88 couple

really really looking forward to read this FF na

loved the title to the core na

"Love is Madness"

em sure this FF is going to rock 100%

CS/Part 1

awwww really really love ur Character stretch na

so Mohit doesn't believe in love n runs away frm it

haha cant wait for him to meet Sanaya na😳n he wants everything in life, and he wants to be rich and a successful bussiness man, he lives in a small town, n he did his MBA n he works in a small restaurant, n he decides to go to collage na,

n em sure he meetzz Sanu there na😍

loved Sanaya's character too

so she's rich

the mayor of Shimla's daughter

she wantz to start her own bussiness na

but without her dad's help

n then she going to collage too na

can't wait to read more

I just love this FF na =D

-Lina-

Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Part 2

awwwwwwww em fidaaa over this part u know na

sachi mein

from the starting to ending😍
da way u desribe everything na

have absoutly no wordzz for it na sis

Mohit

uffffffff😍😍the way he waz walking with his medium biceps😆

u r amazing writer na

can't believe this is actually ur fist FF na

but Mohit in blackkkkkkk

wat a sighttttt☺️😍😍

n Sanayaz starting waz gr88 too na

again I love how u describe everything na

so both settle down with their room mate n went off to sleep

OMGGG so Mohit saw Sanaya in the red dress na

how cuteee

n later his eyes keeps looking for her😳

n later he saw her

n he asked her name

n she is like

"Who r u"

n "Y y should I tell you my name"

n then her friend calls her name

n then she turns around

n Mohit smiling

he did get her name afterall na😆

but she leavezz=(

but he waz happy after meeting her

awww cant wait for them to meet again na

I loved this part na

have no wordzz for it !!!
me just excited to read the next part =D

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Part 3

awwwwwww every time this FF keepzz getting cuter n cuter na 😳

sachi mein sis

em telling the truth na

just love how u describe everything

again sachi mein u'r a brilliant writer👏🤗

frm the starting of Mohit waking up n birds chirpping😍

haiyeeeeeeee could picture the entire part na

n he thinking of Sanaya n then he gets ready to go to his first class na, but goes to break fast first na

n on the other side when Sanaya missing her home

n she too finking about Mohit na😳

she doesn't want to

but who can resist Mohit na😳

n then she getzz up n goes to breakfast

in there Mohit looking for Sanaya

n he did not see her when she waz right there

then he sees someone in white n he stops her

n itzzz Sanaya

n their cute fight again

how cuteeee😆

just loved it na

enjoyed reading a lot

but then she leavezz again =(

awwww

but amazing part na really really loved it

n he too goes to his first class

n of corse

them in the same class na =P

n then again there too she startzz fight

n then he askes her

y is she mad at him

just becuz he asked her name

n later when he leaves

she goes after him

n sayzz sorry to him

awwwwwwwwww kitna cutee part hai na

I just loved it

cant wait to read the next part na

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Part 4

awwwwwwwwwwwwww sachi mein

I told u na

this FF keepzz getting cuter n cuter

I really really loved this part to the core

first Sanaya looking for Mohit to say sorry to him

n then she findz him

n he says that she waz really sorry

n he said

that if she didn't want to make a fool out of herself she should go

but he waz only kidding na

but she too it seriously n left crying=(

n later he goes to up her

n sayzz that hezz sorry from the bottom of his heart

awwwww n she forgives him

n then they become friend like that na

just love this FF na

plezz plezz plezz Ragini do add me in ur pm list na

really want to read more

actually cant wait to read more na

love ya

tc🤗

eagerly waiting still😆

-Lina-

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Oyster

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

Hey Ragini. Since I just got to know about your FF, I'll have to read it from part one. Could you indicate the page numbers of parts 3 and 4 cuz I figured out part 1 has to be on pg. 1

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Oyster
Hey Ragini. Since I just got to know about your FF, I'll have to read it from part one. Could you indicate the page numbers of parts 3 and 4 cuz I figured out part 1 has to be on pg. 1

Yeah sure hon, ive edited it all on the first page but here u go

First part-Page 1

Second part-Page 10

Third part-Page 18

Fourth part-Page 23

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan
OMG... awesome yaaar... i can t express how much i loved it..
it was like superb.....
really nyc to see them being frends at last...
it was totally like monaya... monaya magic...
fab job done yaar
please continue soon.. i am loving this one...

Thankss Pragziee 🤗 love ya and will write soon 😳

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: aashizin
gosh ragz superb and outstanding update really loved it to the core and thanks for pm do continue soon

Thankss a ton aashi, so glad u like it and will definitely write soon, hopefully 😆 sooner this time😳

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20
Ragz🤗 Beautiful update hun.. it was superbbb.. loved the end part specially.. 😍 aww when mohit touched her shoulder lightly!!😳 And Monaya friends now..😳 😍Loved it to the core.. pleasee cont soon hun!! Love you!!

Thankss Jyoo 🤗🤗 ya they are finally friends 😆

will soon continue it hon, love ya too 🤗🤗