~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
OMGGGGG what a beautiful scene I just SAW😲😲😲...I wont say I read........I actually saw it.......I could see each and everything.....was imagine everything....and thats nothing but ur writing power ragi!!!!
OMGGGGGGG m so speechless...........this is just WOWWWWWW
OMGGGG what a starting...........everything was so magical and just PERFECT!!!!! and specially that last scene......omggggggggg...🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
Sanaya........the way she spoke and he turned back......OMGGGGG I wish I could make siggies out of it🤣🤣🤣
for real..........I want somehting like this man!!! hayeee m really running out of words........this is just AWESOMEEEEE
muahhhh muahh muahhhh


when r u updating next part btw???🤣🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -MohitzPari-

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
OMGGGGG what a beautiful scene I just SAW😲😲😲...I wont say I read........I actually saw it.......I could see each and everything.....was imagine everything....and thats nothing but ur writing power ragi!!!!
OMGGGGGGG m so speechless...........this is just WOWWWWWW
OMGGGG what a starting...........everything was so magical and just PERFECT!!!!! and specially that last scene......omggggggggg...🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
Sanaya........the way she spoke and he turned back......OMGGGGG I wish I could make siggies out of it🤣🤣🤣
for real..........I want somehting like this man!!! hayeee m really running out of words........this is just AWESOMEEEEE
muahhhh muahh muahhhh


when r u updating next part btw???🤣🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣Pari meri jaan, ur comment i tell you, the most unique one 🤣 OMG u toh straight hi siggy 🤣🤣 i wish man, red and black is our fav colour combo for Monaya and just imagine sigs and avis on it, shit man, i wish it could be real 😍
next part 🤣🤣🤣 may be another two three days...u are my biggest inspiration jaanu, u have taught me how to drool and write so well on my drooling imaginations 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwww thats so sweet.........muahhhhhhh my sweetheart
yes u r my inspiration and m urs......simple is that🤣
and m glad to be one....bz we r getting FFs like this!!! m so PROUD of u......muahh

hahaha I knoww.....unique toh he bhai🤣.......and true bhi.....we WISHH mann..........siggies or avies........🤣.............I wish man I wish:((

black and red.........this cant get any better....PERFECT!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Pari bhai ...i know mannn! Red and Black are just MOnaya's colours man and did u see the "look at me" scene had red and black and how intense it was 😍🤪
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
loved it to the core
i can imagine how they r looking
i m blanked after reading
no more words
simply gr8
thanx a ton for the pm🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...ragz....its really amazing,fantabulous,superb!!!!
jst loved it to the core❤️ n wanna hug u for this beautiful ff on monaya..🤗🤗🤗🤗 n wow mohit in black cool😎 he looks damm Hawwttt man...i can see him on my imagination😍🤣🤣 n awwww...our doll sanaya in red outfit❤️... red n black jst perfect for Monaya👍🏼 arey
m in Monaya's dreamland now😍😍 n yaa agree u made me drool over Monaya again😆🤣
Monaya's first meeting was mindblowing n so cool😎.....the way mohit pulls Sanaya towards him OMG...OMG....*faints* m in love wid this ff.... as u hav writtened it brilliantly n beautifully👏👏 n as it is on my jannuable Monaya...so loving it more n more❤️
now m desparately waiting for ur nxt update...please do continue soon😉
n thanks for d PM ragz🤗 n also do pm me nxt time too huh..vld love to read ur update...muahh muahh..luv yaa🤗
Edited by meera_20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ragini plz add.me to ur buddy list n PM the nxt update. i'll add u 2.
Rabia.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meera_20

OMG...ragz....its really amazing,fantabulous,superb!!!!

jst loved it to the core❤️ n wanna hug u for this beautiful ff on monaya..🤗🤗🤗🤗 n wow mohit in black cool😎 he looks damm Hawwttt man...i can see him on my imagination😍🤣🤣 n awwww...our doll sanaya in red outfit❤️... red n black jst perfect for Monaya👍🏼 arey
m in Monaya's dreamland now😍😍 n yaa agree u made me drool over Monaya again😆🤣
Monaya's first meeting was mindblowing n so cool😎.....the way mohit pulls Sanaya towards him OMG...OMG....*faints* m in love wid this ff.... as u hav writtened it brilliantly n beautifully👏👏 n as it is on my jannuable Monaya...so loving it more n more❤️
now m desparately waiting for ur nxt update...please do continue soon😉
n thanks for d PM ragz🤗 n also do pm me nxt time too huh..vld love to read ur update...muahh muahh..luv yaa🤗

OMG thanks for the wonderful comment jaan 🤗 ..love you sooo much and of course will send u PMs too, after all ur one of my sweetest friends 🤗 thanks again hon..muah
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello everyone 🤗

Guys i really wanna apologize to all those who have been waiting to read the third part..but im so sorry guys im so late and i hate myself for that, i was so tied up with work, and after i come back from work i get so tired and then on my days off i just wanna relax 😆 but now im a lilttle free, slowed down a little so here i am with the 3rd part of Love is Madness featuring Mohit and Sanaya.
And this time this part of my FF is dedicated to two of most special and best friends for life..pari and shruti..Pari is busy with her pharmacy studies, so shes not thatactive and Shru is down with fever and i feel so lonely without my two sweeties, so this ones especially for you guys 🤗 love you both forever 😳
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Mohit woke up in the morning , it was a beautiful morning, bright sunlight, birds chirping and subtle greenery around which looked no less than heaven, Shimla had never looked this beautiful. Mohit freshened up and thought about the girl last night, he thought was it all a dream or did he really meet that beautiful girl last night under the gorgeous moonlight! Mohit was still dreaming , it was difficult for him to get out of it, he thought to himself , that what is wrong with him, why all of a sudden is he thinking about this girl, he just wanted to remove her from his thoughts and focus on what he had actually come to this college for. It was time for his first class of the session and he was really excited about it. He could hardly wait to make his dream come true. He finally got out of his dreamy world of that beautiful girl and was all set to go to his very first class , but before his class he had to first eat breakfast in the dining hall for hostelites, so he got out from the room with his roommate.
Sanaya couldn't sleep all night, she was homesick but then she thought about her father who didn't really care for her presence and that made her all the more lonely. Sanaya was a beauty , had everything a perfect lady should have, except for a family life, She really missed having a family and she really missed her mom a lot..Then suddenly amidst all these thoughts a flash of the boy last night occured to her, She wanted to let go off it , but she gave it a thought, that what was that all about , was that boy for real and did he actually ask her name, she was still a little angry on how a stranger could just come up to her and ask her name just out of the blue! She said to herself, " why am i even thinking about it, who was he anyway" so murmuring this , she got out of her bed and got out of her room in a rush and for a second she thought shes forgetting something in her room , but she didn't have time to look back , she just rushed out like a whiff of air. She was off for breakfast first.
The hostelites gathered in the dining hall and started to eat their meal, everyone was busy eating, talking , making noise, making jokes , loud laughters. Sanaya who was wearing a white dress with half sleeves and a floral print with her hair left loose; got into a conversation with some of the girls at her table and hence the girlie talk. Mohit wearing a black shirt and blue jeans and a silver watch on his left hand; didn't notice but Sanaya's table was right opposite his, but he was so busy eating like he had never eaten before, he was starving and he ate to his heart's content. After his meal , he thought how he saw Sanaya at her table last night at dinner, who looked so pretty, how could he even forget her name that easily, she was one of a kind. He was kind of disheartened to not see her there ,where she was actually right there and Mohit could not even notice her. They all started getting up slowly all ready to go to classes and looking forward to an eventful day. Mohit still kept sitting there and lost in Sanaya's thoughts yet again, he thought thats enough dreaming , he really needed to get to his class. But he sat there waiting for his friend Sameer to finish. He was bored . Just in his boredom he noticed this girl in white facing her back sitting right opposite his table, but didn't bother to go up to her, thinking least that it could be Sanaya. She was also waiting for her friends Ruhi and Neha to finish their meals. Just when she got up from her table she started to walk away, that is the time when Mohit noticed the same girl in white walking out of the dining hall , he had a thought it was Sanaya and he told Sameer , he'll be right back, but only if Sameer would let him go.Mohit was a little miffed but then he kept his calm and thought his friend is right..! Luckily his friend finished and Mohit got more curious to find the girl in white. Finally after walking for 5 mins ,she was with Ruhi and Neha on her way to class. Just then Mohit called out to her ," excuse me madam" and she turned back and looked , it was none other than Sanaya..! Mohit was shocked and elated at the same time. Now he thought, this has to be another dream, it can't be real. She looked at him and said ," oh my god, is that you the same guy from last night , who asked me my name, tum kaun ho and why are you following me" she looked angry! He said ," tumhara gussa hamesha naak par chadha rehta hai, i just asked you your name and now i am not following you, i just thought u were familiar" , she didn't look surprised and exclaimed," dekho, tum jo koi bhi ho, please for god sake stop following me, and tum saare ladke have only one thing to say, u looked familiar, HUH, waah kya tareeka hai line maarne ka, just go to hell stranger" and after this instead of getting angry Mohit just sat on the road laughing out loud saying ," tum ladkiyaan na, all of you are same, sirf ek hi cheez karni aati hai..GUSSA, always angry and throwing tantrums" saying this and laughing out loud he walked off with Sameer and both of them were laughing like they hadn't laughed in a while. Seeing this behaviour she was all the more angry and was left in shock , thinking boys will be boys, can they ever improve , she walked off too with the girls and went to attend her first class.
All the students sat in the classroom looking fresh and eager to learn. Mohit and Sanaya like destined to be together not surprisingly enough were in the same class and like always , they were not aware of each others presence. Mohit sat right in front whereas Sanaya sat somewhere in between. The class went on, all the students were looking at their books,were engrossed in the subject's content ,the prefessor was busy teaching , just when Mohit felt some breeze on his face and something made him turn back and look , and he felt as though he saw Sanaya sitting there, but he was not sure if it was her and he had this huge smile on his face and again feeling lost and dreamy..Just when he was lost in those thoughts again, the professor noticed it and said ," hey you, the boy in black and blue, pay attention, otherwise you will repent your actions" and then Mohit looked a little scared and looked into his book , after all he had to concentrate, work towards his dream and make it come true, Sanaya looked and thought who is the boy the professor is talking about, just then she saw more carefully but she could still not notice who it was. she could care less, just then the class got over and she rushed out of the crowd and wanted to see who this boy was, but then she thought, why does she even care who that boy was , just when she walked past him, something made her turn back and look , and the boy was none other than the naughty oh so mr.stranger Mohit..She was not surprised, and she told him " who else would have been scolded by professor other than you" and he was like , " see Sanaya, this is enough now, who are you to throw your anger on me, just because i asked you your name , thats why?. what wrong did i do" and she said," its fine for a person who has just made friends with me to ask me my name, where on earth a stranger like you could ask me my name just so randomly?" this is ridiculous he said, " dekho , itna attitude mat do mujhe, i have it too, and i can use it on you too, but i wont coz i didn't commit a crime by asking a girls name, tumhe jo bhi karna hai karo, if you think theres something wrong in asking a girls name, its ok ,it upto you, gossh u girls have so much attitude for nothing" saying this he just walked out of the classroom, and Sanaya was a little mad at him , but she was feeling a little repentant for her behaviour and she walked out too to first look for him and then apologize to him 😳
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Thats all guys, i dont want to make it longer than this , as i have some more interesting stuff coming up in the next part and i dont wanna spoil the fun now 😳 Hope you guys like this one as well.. enjoy drooling 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤣


OMGGGG u made me speechless once again girl🤗🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
so beautifully written!!! how can u think of this yaar???🤣...its so hard!!!! to come up with a all new story...so diff and unique!!! so Monayalicious man!!! I could imagine each and every scene!!! and even the clothes...black and white☺️☺️☺️☺️ PERFECT man!!! loved it!!!!!

U have a great talent ragi...use it as much as u can!!! m saying this for real hun...not everyone can do this!!!!

awwwwww u dedicated it to me🤗.............love u so much!! par I didn't know u still feeling lonely😲😆/......m trying my best to make u not feel so 🤗🤗

muahhh...and waiting for the 4th one..GOSHH..never end this FF🤣🤣

Edited by -MohitzPari- - 15 years ago

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