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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

heeyyy debzz.. lovley update sweettiiee.. bahut hi amazing thaa..

n soo interestingg... grr88 job yaar....

tnks a zillion for da pmm..

aur dedication ki list mein mera naam bhool toh nahi gayi???

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Nish

@nish0910

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

hey girly! 😊 awesome start!!! 👏 I loved it! 😃 do continue soon! add me to ur pm list please 😊
*anisha

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: samratrocks
heeyyy debzz.. lovley update sweettiiee.. bahut hi amazing thaa..
n soo interestingg... grr88 job yaar....

tnks a zillion for da pmm..

aur dedication ki list mein mera naam bhool toh nahi gayi???

hey hina! 🤗
thank u soo much
actually yaar..maine tujhe online nehi dekha kaafi din se so i thought ki tu online neh aa rehi hain
isiliye tera naam nehi likha n for that kaan pakar ke sorry :D
but thanks alot for ur awesome comment sweetie!

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: anishalakhani78
<font color="#3399ff">hey girly! 😊 awesome start!!! 👏 I loved it! 😃 do continue soon! add me to ur pm list please 😊
<font color="#cc66ff">*anisha</font>
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hey anisha!
thanks alot dear! loved reading ur comment :D

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Hey friends!! here is the next update

n this part is dedicated to my sweetie Hina (samratrocks)

hope u all will like it...

Samrat and Benji r still looking at those new girls

when one of them turn...her hair is open n beocoz of the wind its flying

a very beautiful girl wearing chashma😳😉

n samrat is mezmerized by her beauty which benji notices

benji:samrat

no response from samrat

SAMRAT! benji shouts

sam - k..kya hua!??? itni zor se kyu chilla raha hain

benji - ab tu to kehi khoya hua tha (looking at that girl) to isiliye chillah na para

sam - kya bakwaas kar raha hain?? acha sun, yeh dono kya dia ki couzins hain??

benji - aree, vo kya mujhe bata ke yaha aayi hain??

sam - yeh baat to sahi hain, vaise bhi yeh dono mujhe itni pagal nehi lagti hain

benji - acha teekh hain, dia se poochlenge na

when suddenly dia went to those new girls n hugged them!

Dia - tum dono aagayi..gr8! i am so happy to see u both here

Yes guys! it was non other than our sweet GuNuR

Nupur - haan dia! hum bhi bohot khush hain yaha aakar..tumhaari bohot yaad aa rahi thi

gunjan - sach mein dia, itne saalo ke baad tumse milke bohot acha laga

Three of the smiled!

Samrat n benji went to the three girls!
Sam - Hey candy, tum apni couzins se mujhe nehi milaogi?(looking at gunjan)

dia - oh really sorry sammy, yeh hain.....

she was going to say the names when shukla sir interrupted

dia aur samrat mohodeya...

sam - ji sir?

shukla sir - aap yaha aane ka thora kasht karenge

sam - oh no!

dia - ok sir...benji tum in dono ko class tak guide kar sakte ho please

benji - of course dia! tum kaho gi aur main nahi karoonga, aisa kabhi hua hain kya??😳

dia - awww how sweet of u benji

samrat and dia went with shuka sir for some work n sam escaped from there after a while giving an excuse to shukla sir

benji is taking gunur to their classroom

benji - to aap dono kaha se aayi hain

nupur - vo kya hain nahum to delhi se aaye hain, dilwaalo ki sheher

benji - waise aap mumbai achanak aane ki koi khaas vaja hain

nupur - haina na! main to bas yaha sharukh se milna chahti hoon (dreamy tone) aur use dher saari baate karna chahti hoon

benji - sharukh???? kyu??

nupur - kyunki vo mera sabse fav hero hain

nupur had started talking n now the topic was of fav hero sharukh so she couldn't stop but benji was getting tired n irritated by her sharukh talks..gunjan was watching it n was feeling pity on benji

Benji - yeh raha aapka class

nupur - mera class??

benji - nahin..aapka (pointing at gunjan)

gunjan - oh ok..thank u

nupur - chal gunjan, mein tujhse class ke baad milti hoon

gunjan - teekh hain di

Benji - chaliye (to nupur)

nupur - haan chalo..to main kya keh rehi thi ko sharukh ki film om...

Benji interruped

Benji - mere pair mein bohot dard ho raha hain..vo aage jaake left turn lena aapko apni class mil jaayegi

n he ranaway

nupur - areee meri poori baat to sunke jao!

Gunji was in her class when a girl came inside n told her to go to the library

Samrat saw nups in the classroom alone

he went inside n

sam - hii

nupur - hiii...tum vahi hon na jo dia ke saath the

sam - haan aur tum vahi jo apni behen ke saath is college mein aayi ho

nupur - hehe haan

sam - excel college mein pehela din hain na??

nup - haan, lekin bohot acha lag raha hain

sam - vaise tumhaara naam kya hain?

nupur -mera naam nupur hain

sam got shocked

sam - kya?? nupur? aur tumhaari behen ka naam

nup - gunjan.. kyu?? tum itne shocked kyu lag rahe ho?? aur vaise tumhaara naam kya hain??

samrat was so shocked..he felt like as if he was dreaming

his chashmish in his collenge n he didn't even know about

sam- nupur...tum sach keh rehi ho? kya tum delhi se aayi ho??

nupur - haan..ttumhe kaise pata??

sam - please mujhe batao gunjan kaha hain..

nups - vo to apni class mein hain

he gave smiled n rushed to the class room but he didn't find her their

cut to gunjan :

dia came to gunjan..hey gunjan!

gunjan - hi dia..tum yaha?

dia - actually main bas dekh rehi thi ki tumhe koi problem to nehi hain

suno doll, agar koi bhi problem ho to tum mujhe, benji ya phir samrat ko bata sakti ho

gunji was shocked to hear the name samrat

gunji - samrat???

dia - haan samrat.. hamaare college ka sabse cool dude..u know what gunjan..pata nehi kitni saari larkiyan uspe fida hain

gunjan - samrat shergill???

dia - haan..tum uska pura naam aise jaanti ho??

gunjan - kya tum mujhe bata sakti ho ki vo kaha milega?

dia - vo normally to basket ball court pe hi milta hain..kya hua?

is everything all right doll??

gunjan- thank u dia!

she ran from the library but couldn't find sam in the bb court but when suddenly she hears a familiar voice calling her but a different name...not gunjan but ....... chashmish

when she heard that, she turned

n saw a boy standing front of her..which was samrat

they both were feeling on the top of the world

gunjan ran to him

sam - chashmish

gunjan - samrat

both of them hugged😳

n nupur, dia n benji saw that...they were shocked but happy too!

Hey friends thats it for today! hope u all liked

Do comment n press the like button :D

luv

Debo😳

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Edited!

Omg!! Twinnie!! 🤗 I absolutely loved it yaar. Poor Benji though!! I felt sorry for him!😆 And of course Nups ki Shah rukh! hee hee!! she will never change! And I could imagine the whole thing! Especially the last part!! gunjan and Shamrat...ahem ahem...hug!!! Oh goddd!!! U make even the most simple scenes beautiful yaar! U seriously have a talent for writing!! Loved the whole thing to the core!! Puhleezzz isse jaldi continue karna! Can't wait anymore for it!! Aur late reply ke liye no sorry!😳 Luv ya yaar!!! Urs, Sanju P.S, I hope this Samrat budhoo understands soon that Gunjan is more than a friend to him!!

Love ur whole concept! Aur isse jitna tareef karoon, utna kam parega!😳

muaaaahhhhh!!! U better continue asap! Warna...😡...lolz!

Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago

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Hina

@samratrocks

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww wat a sweet, lovely, aweosem, mindblwoing update debzz... grr8888 jobb....

really interestingg...

aur kitna accha lekhegi ????? lolzz...

thnks for da pmm...

n thnks for da dedication....!

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

mindblowing update debo

just want to read more

continue it soon

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305
res!

omg! twinnie ur once again first!

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deboshree

@-Debo-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: samratrocks
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww wat a sweet, lovely, aweosem, mindblwoing update debzz... grr8888 jobb....
really interestingg...

aur kitna accha lekhegi ????? lolzz...

thnks for da pmm...

n thnks for da dedication....!

awww hinu!!! thank u sooo much for ur comment
loved reading it
ur most welcome too lolz
luv u!

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