The First Time I Saw You (Sajan FF)

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THE FIRST TIME I SAW YOU (sajan FF)
Hey friends! 🤗
i am writing my first ff on non other than our januable Sajan!😳
n mayur will also be here
this is the first part...plzz do leave ur comments n
please forgive me for my mistakes!
SO HERE IT STARTS...
A Boy is shown sleeping in his bed...n his phone is ringing
he keeps his pillow over his ears to avoid the sound
"ohh god! itni subhah kon phone kar raha hain!!"😡 he said by getting irritated
he manages to get the phone somehow n gets up
n so his face is revealed n its non other then Samrat!!
"Hello" he said in a very sleepy voice
"tum abhi bhi so rahe the??" a girl said by getting surprised!
"haan, to?? tum kon ho??" he asked
"hmm..pata tha ki tum nehi pehchaano ge"
samrat got confused
"koi baat nehi, main bata deti hoon..main gunjan bolrahi hoon!"
"Gunjan!!!" samrat shouted out loud!
"ouch! itni zor se kyu chila rahe ho??
"omg! chashmish tum!! itne lambe time ke baad tumhara phone aaya isiliye bohot excited ho gaya"
"kaisi ho tum??" tumhe bohot miss kiya hain maine!
"maine bhi", "pata hain mere paas ek surprise hain tumhare liye"
"surprise!" samrat said getting excited!
"kaisa surprise?"
"surprise hain to main kyu batao?"
"okzz. mat batao" he said sadly
"acha main abhi phone rakhti hoon"..gunjan said
"kyu??" samrat asked
"itne saalo ke baad hum baat kar rahe hain aur tum phone rakh rehi hon!"
"main tumhe phirse phone karoongi samrat..lekin abhi ke liye rakh rehi hoon.ok??" gunji said
"teekh hain" he said sadly!
lekin ek min! ek baat to batao........tum dikhti kaisi ho?? vaise tumhaari voice to bohot meethi hain..he said by getting a bit shy
kya??? gunji asked
nehi vo..vo kya hain na, hum to BACHPAN ke dost they, to agar kabhi mil bhi gaye to pehchaanenge kaise ek doosre ko??
gunji blushed! ab phone mein main tumhe apna chehra to nehi dikha sakti hoon..jab milenge tab dekha jaiga!
teekh hain, aap jaisa kahe
Both of them kept the phone...
samrat POV
aaj meri sabse specail, meri bachpan ke dost ka phone aaya
god! i am soo happy! but, oh no! i forgot to ask her where she is!
i want to meet her, meri chashmish! anyways, bachpan mein hum bichre zaroor they lekin ab milke rahenge!
Gunjan's POV
samrat kitna khush hua mere phone se! uska surprise yehi hain ki main uske sheher... mumbai mein hoon aur use milne aa rahi hoon! i'm soo excited to meet him!
Both of them shown in one screen smiling coz of each other!
Precap : sajan meet each other when they were kids!
to kya sajan mil payenge?? kya thi unki bachpan ki kahani aur kaise alag hue the yeh dono? jaane ke liye keep reading "The First Time I Saw You"
hey friends! this was just a small part so u can know the concept..will be wating for ur comments n plzz tell me if i should continue this or not!
luv
debo😳
INDEX
Update- pg 1
Update- pg 7
Update- pg 16
Update- pg 24
Edited by Januable_Sajan - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Twinniee!!🤗Tune tho aaj kamaal kar diya yaar!! I absolutely lovvvveeeedddd it!!! What an awesome concept too! SaJan, bachpan ke dost.... awww....I love it yaar!!! plz continue!!! I wanna know how Sammy first met Gunji!!!

Oh man oh man oh man!! U have to promise me that u will continue asap! Ok?! I will b waiting for ur PM!!
Luv,
Ur twin,
Sanju!
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg! twinnie
ur the first! will wait until u edit!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing part dear,
tHanks for the PM
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Januable_Sajan


omg! twinnie
ur the first! will wait until u edit!

Aapki twinnie first reply dene ke liye haazir hai!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Debo!!
Tu to chupi rustam nikli yaar!!!....wat a ff!!!.....the first part was awesome jaan...
~congo on ur first ff!!!!~
love u always
thanks for the pm...pls add me in ur pm list...😆(i guess i didnt need to say that...did i??)
lots and lots of luv...😳
ur special friend forever....Yashu....😊😃😳
Edited by yashu_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyya debzzzzzzz
wwwooooww....
ssoo cutee.. sajan bachpan ke dost?? amazing concept sweettiiee..
luved itt.... cant waitt...
fab part... luking forward to ur next updatee...
all the best for dis rocking ff!


thnks a lot for da pm..soorry if i was late in replyingg...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey debo nice concept and loved first update do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyyyy!!!!!

I lovved the idea!!! 👍🏼👏 awesome debo!! lovved the 1st part!! Cant wait for sajan to meet!!! hahahaha.... gosh!! update soon.. N dont 4get to add me in ur pm list😊 love Manjari!!🤗
Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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deboshree,
nice start, plz do PM me the nxt part.

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