RN FIC: UNCHAINED HEART--13UD pg 70 4/5/11 - Page 9

Hi Pinka...

Very nice update dear... some confusions are cleared now...like the identities of Raj, Ishika and Drishti... You have really portrayed them well...but confusions are still there...like what made Raj and co leave their respective houses... and how did they end up like this... u have to update really soon to satisfy my curiosity... so cont soon...

Here are the links of two fics on RN:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1232210/tera-mera-saath-rn-fic-prt11-pg44

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1252724/tujhpe-dil-qurbaan-rn-fic-pt7-pg25

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Pinka...

Very nice update dear... some confusions are cleared now...like the identities of Raj, Ishika and Drishti... You have really portrayed them well...but confusions are still there...like what made Raj and co leave their respective houses... and how did they end up like this... u have to update really soon to satisfy my curiosity... so cont soon...

Here are the links of two fics on RN:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1232210/tera-mera-saath-rn-fic-prt11-pg44

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1252724/tujhpe-dil-qurbaan-rn-fic-pt7-pg25

ohk after 100 of time i am finally able to put long update

He call her again

"DRISHTIIIIIIIII"

He saw her ...... vo vahan thi.......... Nadi ke bhav se ladti hui........ pani mein puri tarf se dubi hui .. use koi andaja nahi tha vo khan ja rahi hai.......... vo kuch dekh hi naahi pa rahi thi...... sirf hatho ko upper kiye hue nadi k sath bahe chali aa rahi thi.........

vo tair hi nahi paa rahi thi......... ya shayd use tairna hi nahi ata tha..........

And the realization of this thing ......that she can't swim ...that he can lose her .... shook him deep inside

Per shayd ye nadi itni bhi bedard nahi thi .......... shayd abhi drishti ki jindagi mein bhut kuch baki tha............ tabhi to nadi ka bhav use use pather k pass le aya ...........

and on right moment he caught her.......... her only visible body part.......... usne uska haath pakd liya....... vahi haath jo usne sabse pahli baar pakada tha..............

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Drishti Rai, ........Ishika ki di............aur Raj ki Dost.........

Raj ager kuch janta hai to ye ki drishti ke liye ishika se bad ker ise duniya mein kuch nahi...............aur bas vo itna hi chata hai ki vo kisi trah bhi apni ise dost ki jindagi ki problem solve ker de taki vo uske chahre pe vo muskurahat vapis la sake jo vo ab se 2 mahine pahle dekhta tha...........

jindagi kabhi Drishti ke saath vafadar nahi rahi............ Jab bhi khushiya iske pass ayi hai vo chin gayi hai........ family ke kahne ke liye sirf ishika hai........... uske liye mar bhi sakti hai......... aur DOST ke naaam pe to bas RAJ hai.............

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Drishti ne bhi uske hath ko kas pakad liya .........jaise koi apni jindagi ko pakdta hai........ He pulled her up by hand and for the support, she immediately caught his neck by her other hand. ....And for supporting her to climb on rock, he holds her waist by his other hand.

They almost hugged each other.

Ek pal k liye to use laga tha ki vo bachegi hi nahin, shayad usk liye ye sahi hota per abhi uska ek farj baki tha......vo use pura ker na tha......... aur shayd kuch aur bhi tha jo samjhti nahi thi ya samjhna hi nahi chahti thi..................

par jab use pal usne VIRAJ ka hath thama use laga use jindagi mil gayi ............. aur unhe pata hi nahi chala kab undono ne ek dusre ko udhure se puri trah hug ker liya ...........

Drishti ne Viraj ko itnti tightly hug ker rakha tha jaise ki khud ko ahsaaas dilana chahti ho ki vo jinda hai...........ek pal pahle shayd vo jindagi se dur ho sakti thi ......... shayd viraj se .......shayd ishika se....... apni jindagi ko khone se bada dar apno ko khone ka hota hai..................

aur Viraj ko to shayad pata hi nahi tha ki is ahsas ka naam kya hai jo vo feel ker raha hai.............use to shayd ab tasalli hui thi ki jo vo khone vala tha vo use ke pass hai........

'per kya..........''

But before they could have find answers.... for all those questions... they had realized something else...they realize their proximity........their closeness... they became embarrass ....not because ishika was there... no, but Because they never had been this close....they never felt like this before what they felt just a moment ago.....

aisa nahi tha ki vo ek dusre se payar kerte the.......... nahi unhe to pata bhi nahin tha pyar ka shabd unke rishte main kahin hai bhi............ vo to bas jante the aur mante the ki agar pyar kahin hai to vo hai ishika...........

kam se kam drishti ko to ye hi lagta tha,............vo to bas dost the ......vishwash kerte the ek dusre pe.............per kuch to aur tha per vo kya tha pata nahi..............

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They became conscious so they parted away .... they didn't look at each other..............

-------------- 2 years back ----------------

ishika running with trophy in her hand 'came inside a room ' a girl standing at the window ' ishika hugged her from behind'

That girl;- congratulation

Ishika hide that trophy behind her back :-

'kis liye di '

'for wining the competetion '

'how can you be so sure ' may be I didn't win this time.. see I don't have any trophy'..

showing her other hand

'ye to ho hi nahi sakta ' kyonki meri isshika kabhi har hi nahi sakti'

aur drishti uske piche se uska hath age liyaa jisme usne trophy pakad rakhi thi

'kya di aap sara suprise khrab ker deti ho..apko humesha kaise pahle se pata chal jata hai ki main hi jitungi''

Drishti:-

'because I am your di.. and also you are best in swimming' aaj tak koi swimming competition haara hai tumne'

' hmm .. that's true'.to is jit ke badle mujhe kya milega''

' tum btao kya chahiye'

'aaj aap mere sath dinner pe chalegi..'

'aaj nahi ishi aaj' hum kal challenge' pakka' aj mujhe jana hai..'

'party mein na ' jab apko parties mein jana pasand nahi to aap jati hi kyon ho show piece banne..'

'ishi aisa nahi hai'

'aisa hi hai' app mujhe 'tu choti hai kah ker' chup kera deti hai'per main choti nahi hun di ' main apko sad nahi dekh sakti ''

'kisne khan main dukhi hun' main to kush hun '.mere pass ishi hai''

'per aap mere pass kabhi nahin hoti..'

She cupped her face '

'aisa nahi hai ishi'. main hoti hun'

'Nahi ' nahi hoti' '''.

she was almost crying''''aap humehsa busy hoti hai'aap ya to ab office ka kaam kerti hai'.ya uski baat manti hai'. uske sath jabardasati parties mein jati hai'.pahle aap kitna samya sath bitati thi'uski vjah se sab badal gaya''

'i can't tell you truth... i know, Anger and hatred can change anyone life and i can't ruin your life ....'in herself ...

'nahi vo kisi se payar nahi kerta ' usne apko bhi mujhse chin liya' kyon di 'kyon...'

'WHY DID YOU MERRIED TO HIM??'

'WHY??'

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End of update

Hope you all like this Update

bas marna mat mujhe😆😆😆

loved the update dear....gr8 suspense building up..drishti is already married,but to whom??and why does ishika hates him????why are they hiding and frm whom???what is Raj's relation with them??😲😲😲
with these many questions lingering around in every reader's mind, really u have made sure that the readers are glued to the story till the next update.
Great plot and a wonderful update...congrats for having such gifted writing skills. 👏👏

But remember, don't keep the readers in suspense for too long and keep updating on regular intervals...😆😆
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naina is married. its a shock

Glad that all three of them finally cross the river safely and have found a place to rest.

Hi Dear

hi, 😊