RN FIC: UNCHAINED HEART--13UD pg 70 4/5/11

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Hey Pinka
How r u dear?

Raj is a rich businessman's son n his character is nyc n full of masti
Ishika n Drishti r sisters
Raj finds Ishika but where is Drishti? hope she will be fine n Raj find her....
after reading thoda confusion to kam hua but aisa kya hua ki woh nadi main jump kar gaye??????jaldi up[date karo next part
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Nice part

Raj is a rich businessman...and a very nice person

Drishti and Ishika are sisters and Ishika is Raj's friend

But how did they get caught in the river current

please continue soon

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hinal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

nice update hope dhrishti bhi jaldi hi mil jaye

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Purnima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

hi pinka 😃 😃..............
firstly congrats 4 starting a new FF on RN.......... & must say..its awesome.......... lovely......... 👏 👏👏 👏............specially love their names drishti & viraaj 😳 😳 ..............
read both parts in one go........... coz PM hi ab mila.......... 😆 😆 😆................. now will keep track of this FF...........😃 😃 😃...........

& yes plz second part se hi dono ko juda mat kar dena........... 😛 😛 😛..........
wud eagerly wait 4 next part........😃 😃 😃

continue soon ASAP.............

hope u got my FF's PM......... 😛 😛.......although its not RN ...........but its Rajeev's FF......no female lead in particular.... 😛 😛 😛
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1392225/kitni-ajeeb-hai-zindagi-rajeevff-link-pg-153

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Hiii Pinka....

How r u?

Fabulous part 👏👏👏👏👏......but tooo short...thoda long update dena yaar

So meri guess sahi nikla...wo viraj aur drishti hi hain..n the small girl is Ishika...lovey name..n thank God Raj n ishika r safe,lekin ye Drishti ko kya hua??? Hope she is safe

Kuch to pata chala Ishika n viraj ke bare main ....i mean un ke past ke bare main....lekin tune kuch nahin bataya Drishti ke bare main???wo kaun hain? aur indonon se wo kaise mili?hope next update main tum kuch kahogi

Plz jaldi se next part post karo..eagerly waiting

ye to maine kehna bhulgayi..tum mujhe princess kehkar bula sakthi ho..no problem for me 😃😃..n thank u soo much ki tumhe meri ID cute laga 😃😃

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yogitha

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Riti

@-Reeti-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hi...
U know babie....that m in a big problem....
I promise...whenever I'll get out of all these things...I'll surely read ur Update...and ..comment...for now...m really not able baby...M sorry....
I hope u understand...take care..and do well..in this fiction😊

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neha10.for.u

@neha10.for.u

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
wowww pinka !!
wonderful update !!

arey tune fic start kiya aur bataya bhi nahi !!

chal...par mujhe pata chal hi gaya !!

aur ab agli baar PM ka intezaar rahega 😛

hi Pinka....
just 10 min back...complimented u on ur vm on RN and then came across ur ff...wow tum to really genius ho...u have got great writing skills too....👏👏👏i wish to see many more of ur talents on IF...Just one request..pls ab ye ff start kiya hai to pls reularly update it and finish it...bcoz i have come across many incomplete ff which were left on really interesting points...and yes...the names chosen by u r really gud.. and both the updates were wonderful!!!

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Pinka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: preet09
Hi Pinka

Mein tumhare PM se pehle hi UD padh li; Thanx its shows that you aactually love this i am really honoured with that its an awesome UD.Thanx for liking this ud...
Those 3 people were Viraj, Drishti and Ishika. Yes you are right Raj is really having hard time as he is not able to fing Dridhti but he found Ishika. yeah he found her but drishti is missing Interesting character-sketch; yglad you like The CS very nice update But where is Drishti; Is she Ok? for that you need to read next update😉😉

Chalo, ab jaldi UD karo, aur raj ko Drishti se zaroor milwa dena...I am doing the same

Luv Preet

Thanx once again

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

hey pinka

thanks for the pm

ff was really good

but was a bit confusing

am sure it will be cleared once you cont it

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

ammu

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: rajeev fann
hey dear😊😊😊just read ur fic....it's really fresh and interesting....viraj and drishti...hmmm dekha jaaye to rajveer aur naina se bhut milte hain...really nice choice of names👏👏👏👏.....plzzzzz cont soon...m waiting😊😊😊

Thanx for liking the update

yeah i know kafi karib hai😆😆😆 i am updating it