os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166

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Posted: 14 years ago

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amazing os dear luvd it...👏

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awsome update waiting for masti and dhamal

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

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very nice update annie plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

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sorry for late reply

very cute update annie

anjali was carrying books 🤣

it was so nice part loved ti

and thnx alot 4 pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome update plz cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Hey annie,

Wonderful update.

So its the fun time.

Waiting to join the fun.

Do continue soon.

Prachi

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ishiqa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#867

vah di kya khub hai👏🤗pleaseeeeeeeee cont jaldi kijiye love it!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼👍🏼⭐️

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Kiran..(Kikka)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

brilliant yaar!!👏 u r really good!!👍🏼 keep it up!! pls cont soon!!!!!!!!😊😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#869

hey guys here the update goes
so mujhe pata hai sab mujhse naraaz hoge haina....tabhi mere pms reieve karte hue bhi koi mere vms nahi dekhta....aur na hi updates parhne keh zehmat karte hain....aur agar parh bhi lein toh comment karte karte oon keh haath mein dard hota hai.....i am really sick and tired now...i will no more beg for comments...and i will never pm those whom i find recieving my pms and not rating and commenting updates...get that!!
so as u know
picnic and family tym
so now
everyone is playing
except anjali
she is siting and watching everyone play
mayank notices her
and comes and sits near her
mayank:kya hua anjali tum khel kyun nahi rahi beta?
anjali:dad....mujhse nahi hota yeh sab
mayank:kya matlab
anjali:dad....i dont know how to play this game...
mayank:lo...bas itni si baat...."nothing is impossible"....yeh suna hai na....just make it an aim of ur life.....aur pata hai kya
anjali:kya
mayank:anjali mayank sharma keh liye kuch bhi impossible nahi hai....pata hai kyun
anjali:kyun dad
mayank:kyunke mayank sharma neh apni beti koh sab kuch sikhaya hai....aur pata hai...usse apni beti par poora garv hai....aur vishwas bhi....she will never let me down...ri8
anjali:ri8 dad😊
mayank:toh aaj main apni pyari si beti koh bataoon ga keh volley ball kaise khelte hain....ok
anjali:ok
mayank:toh chalein
he moves his hand towards her
anjali puts her hand on mayank's hand
anjali:chalein
mayank:lets go!!!!
now cut to wen the game finishes and and the girls sitting on the beach
while boys and kids including anjali playing in the water
samrat sees girls
samrat:benji...mayank
mayank:kya hua
samrat:woh dekho....girls koh hamne kitni mushkilon se paani mein aane keh liye manaya tha...aur yeh...yahan bethi hain....
benji:toh is mein konsi baat hai....hamari plan yaad hai na
mayank:han
samrat:so lets go!!
now the boys go and sit near the girls
nupur:are tum log paani mein khel kyun nahi rahe....jao na...bache akele hon ge
benji:wahan par uday hai...leikin kya hai na...hamara mood nahi hai
gunjan:kyun kya hua...abhi kuch der pehle tak toh khel rahe the....ab kya hua
mayank:bas kaha na ....hamara mood nahi hai....
dia:magar kyun
samrat:tumhara mood kya tum logo koh bata kar change karta hai...aur waise bhi...tum log bhi toh panni mein nahi ho...
dia:sammy....come on...we r no more children ok....now we are sensible mothers
mayank:oh really.....so thats wat u call sensible...pata hai ....main bachpan mein jab bhi beach par maa keh saath jata tha na....tab tab maa mere saath pani mein khelti thi...
dia:really aunty....
shilpa:han beta....aur agar tumhe lagta hai keh log kya soche ge....toh woh sab bhool jao....joh dil kehta hai woh karo
nupur:ok ma.....chalein mayank😉
gunjan:samrat tum kyun bethe ho paani mein nahi chalna kya...😉
dia:benji....ab tumhe kya invitation deni hogi...chalo
three of them:sach
girls:much
mayank:toh boys.....plan par amal karna ka tym aa gaya
nupur:plan....kaisa plan
samrat:aisa plan
samrat picks gunjan😳
mayank picks nupur😳
and benji picks dia😳
and carry them to the water
now wen they reach near the water
nupur:mayank....kya kar rahe ho...ab chodo bhi
mayank opens his hands
as nupur falls down
mayank:chod dia😆
benji:kya kehti ho dia...tumhe bhi chod doon
dia:nahi....benji...dekho....mujhe khada karna han....chodna mat😆
benji:dar gayi...and starts laughing
and makes dia stand
and samrat too makes her stand
nupur meanwhile manages to stands😆
nupur:mayank tum na...
mayank:bohot handsome hoon...main janta hoon😆
nupur:nahi.....aik number keh sadu...akdu...aur ghatia jokes karne wale insaan ho
anjali:dad...that was really bad....apne mom koh neeche giraya....very bad
pranam:i agree...
mayank:acha....mere baap aage se nahi giraoon ga..i am sorry
nupur:its ok
mayank:nupur...maine tumhe nahi bacho koh sorry bola😆

ok guys that was enuf for today
precap: a big twist!!!
do rate and comment
and please share ur views/comments/suggestions
thanks for reading
with love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago