os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166

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@desiresoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#881

awesomeee updt annie loved it loved the 3 of them picked their wives up continue soon waiting to see wat is the big twist

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#882

fattafati update........angali nd mayank part was awesome...........another twist..........iss bar twist cancell mat karna plz nd don't b upset i love ur update nd always wait for that

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#883

awesome update

luved mayank n anjali convo...........

n den mayank ne nupur ko paani main gira diya.....dats funny🤣

cont soon n tnx fr pm

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#884

Lovely update..Annie...👏
Loved Mayank-Anjali convo....
& i knew that boys were planning to drop girls in water...😆
Precap seems interesting....twist...😕
Cont soon...😊

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Kiran..(Kikka)

@SaJanAbhIya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#885

sorry 4 late commnet!! lovelly update!!

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#886

Hey Annie,

Nice update.

Had fun reading it.

Continue soon.

Prachi

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503046

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Posted: 14 years ago

#887

hey guys here the update goes
& now
as u know
picnic is still on
but
now
everyone is playing
but now
samrat:mayank....anjali koh pyas lagi hai....main usse paani laa kar deta hoon...han
mayank:leikin samrat....paani ka toh yahan beech par koi stall nahi hai na
samrat:mayank....woh road keh uss side par hai.....main abhi aya han
mayank:ok......dheyan se jana....trafic bohot zyada hai
samrat:relax mayank.....main koi bacha nahi hoon....anjali....tum saath chal rahi hoon
anjali:han
now samrat holds anjali's hand and leaves
now cut to nupur and neha
neha:massi....mujhe bhi pyas lagi hai
nupur:BY GOD.....dimagh hai ya down battery.....aik kam karo....samrat zyada door nahi gaya hoga.....jao.....woh wahan hoga
neha:ok...
she leaves
nupur:dheyan se jana
now neha is running behind sam and anjali
but due to traffic its so hard to listen for sam
neha runs behind him
as he cant listen
neha:papa.....
(she runs into the road full of trafic)
samrat notices her
samrat:neha....tum yahan kya kar rahi ho....beta peeche jao....jaldi
as he sees a car is comming but is away
neha cant listen as sam is away on the end of the road
and neha is on the road
samrat:neha.....peeche jao.....gaadi aa rahi hai....
(he shouts)
but as neha cant listen
sam rushes towards her
he runs near neha
as he sees the car is close
he pushes her towards the end of the road
but
unfortunately sam was unable to move
because everything was so rushed
and now....
the car crashes sam
sam is badly injured
anjali:samrat uncle(she screams)
neha:papa!!!!!!!!!!!
now sam has fainted
and.....
as the traffic stops now
neha and anjali rushes towards him
neha:papa....ankhein kholo papa....kholo na....papa....
anjali:samrat uncle....ankhein kholo...
neha:anjali di...jao jaldi se mayank uncle ya kisi aur koh bulao.....jaldi
anjali:han....tu ghabrana mat han...main abhi ayi
neha:ok...jaldi jao...
neha:dad....utho dad....look ur angel is here dad....open ur eyes dad....dad!!!!
and now mayank and everyone arrives
as they see sam in such a bad condition
mayank:samrat!!!!
gunjan:yeh sab....yeh sa..sab....yeh sab....kaise.....neha....samrat tumhare saath,.......tha na.....ab kya....samrat...ankhein kholo
benji:samrat ki haaalat kaafi kharab hai....hamein isse isi waqt hospital mein le kar jana hoga...
nupur:chalo
now cut to the hospital
evryone running with sam's stretcher
mayank:nurse....jaldi doctor koh bulao....khoon bohot zyada beh gaya hai
nurse:doctor bas aate hi hon ge
as the doctor arrives
doctor:nurse....foren ICU ready karo.....leikin yeh sab
benji explains wat happened
doctor:OMG.....hamein sab se pehle dekhna hoga koi bone injury na ho....chalo....foren ICU mein le chalo
now they take sam into the ICU
as everyone is worried
mayank:neha....neha kahan hai guys....
shilpa:abhi toh yahi thi...pata nahi kahan
gunjan:neha....kahan gayi.....neha!!!!
nupur:gunjan relax....neha mil jayegi....benji mayank....tum log ja kar dhoondo
mayank:han....main jata hoon
benji:main bhi
pranam:main bhi jata hoon
uday:main bhi
now cut to neha
she is in mandir
neha crying badly while she is praying
neha:please....please...mere dad koh theek kar do....please....main unke baghair nahi reh sakti....please....mujhe chocolates kon dega....apko pata hai...agar apne mere papa koh theek na kia na....toh main apse naraaz ho jaoon gi.....aur phir nahi manoo gi....dekh lena han....kabhi bhi nahi....please mere papa koh theek kar doh...please....please
as she is cring aloud
mayank sees her
mayank:neha....neha beta
now neha comes and hugs him tightly
neha:papa theek ho jayege na mayank uncle....
mayank:han...bilkul theek ho jayega samrat....mujhe poora yakeen hai....
neha breaks the hug
neha:aisa kyun
mayank:kyunke meri barbie doll(neha) hai hi itni achi....keh bhagwan bhi uske saath bura karne se pehle soche ga
neha:apko aisa kyun lagta hai...
mayank picks her up
mayank:kyunke...pata hai....jab bhi main apni barbie doll ki aankhon mein ansoo dekhta hoon na....toh mera yeh joh dil hai na...yeh bohot zor se dhadakta hai....aur pata hai...agar mera dil itna tez dhadakta hai toh zara socho....keh woh toh GOD hain na....unho neh toh sab koh peda kia....aur unho neh hi tumhe bhi peda kia...aur tumhare ansoo dekh kar wo bhi toh bura manate hoge na....aur waise bhi...itni pyari aankhon mein itni bade bade ansoo ache nahi lagte....samjhi
neha:samajh gayi...toh kya mere na rone se papa theek ho jayege
mayank:bilkul...woh bilkul theek ho jayega....
neha:paka...
mayank:paka
neha:poora wala promise
mayank:han baba....poora wala promise....aur ab chale....sab pareshan hoge na
neha:han chalo....
mayank:leikin promise me...
neha:kaisa promise
mayank:yehi keh tum wahan par bilkul bhi nahi ro gi....dekho beta....gunjan koh iss waqt ham sab ki zarurat hai....aur sab se zyada usse apni neha ki zarurat hai....samjhi...issi liye tum mujhse na rone ka promise karo gi....
neha:han ....promise
mayank:poora wala
neha:han
now mayank smiles and takes her
and now cut to gunjan and everyone
gunjan is crying
nupur:itna mat ro gunjan....sab theek ho jayega
gunjan:kaise theek ho jayega di....aik taraf samrat ki yeh halat....aur doosri taraf....neha...pata nahi kahan.....di...mera dil bohot ghabra raha hai
mayank:ab ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai...neha mil gayi hai
gunjan:neha...
neha runs and hugs gunjan
gunjan:kidher thi.....main kitna dar gayi thi
neha:main toh bas.....chodo na....mama....ap itna roh kyun rahi ho
gunjan:woh main...
neha wipes gunjan's eyes
neha:mom....ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai....maine GOD se pray kiya hai....dad aik dam theek ho jayege....
gunjan:han....
she hugs her back
now cut to THE ICU
doctor:OMG....nurse....jaldi seh injection doh....patient ki halat out of control ho rahi hai

ok guys that was enuf for today
sorry for the delay
actually there was a net problem
sorry again
but i hope u liked the twist
now u will see some more cute bondings + some more twists
precap:neha starts feeling guilty that maybe she is the reason behind sam's condition
thanks for reading
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago