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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#841

Wow annie wonderful, heart touching emotional and beautiful part completely loved it Sam pranam and pranam Mayank scenes were too good
Annie twist kyun cancel kiya jaan sirf happy-2 nahi twists and turn bhi hone chahiye tabhi story mein new spice aayega na Happy ke saath-2 thora interesting touch bhi hona chahiye Main to yahi suggest karungi ki Naya twist daal I will love to see it jo unki life mein khalbali maccha de kuch parts ke liye Jo sab ko equally effect kare

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#842

wowow awesome part i wish to your sis get well soon

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Mystery

@desiresoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#843

awesomeeee updt loved it contine soon

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nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#844

so sweet...........pranam and mayank part was beautiful..........waiting for next part

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manjeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#845

mindblowing update

luved father son bonding

wow picnic!!!!!!!

cont soon

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#846

edited my rp on pg 144

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#847

awesome part dear loved it

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Jessie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#848

Wonderful update!!!!!!!
The Mayank-Pranam scene was truly emotional.....
Mauy's fav game scrabble...😆😆
Cont soon..😊

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katherine123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#849

replyng fr d first tym.....but seriously very well writtn!

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503046

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Posted: 14 years ago

#850

hey guys here the update goes
so as u know
picnic time!!!!!!!
now everyone in the morning
mayank samrat benji uday and kids putting the stuff in the cars
mayank:pranam balls kahan hain
pranam:yeh rahe papa
samrat:are anjali tumhare haath mein kya hai
anjali:books
mayank:anjali.....please......apni in books ki duniya se bahar ao beta.....please....dekho.....aise tum kabhi kuch bhi enjoy nahi kar pao gi......chalo.....aaj tum yeh books waghaira nahi parho gi......aur hamare saath enjoy karo gi..ok
anjali:ok papa......main abhi rakh kar aati hoon
mayank:ok
now cut to the girls
nupur:dia...waise aj kitna maza ayega na.ham sab kitni der baad.....
shilpa:maza toh ayega....aj finally sab kuch theek hai
gunjan:aj jiju keh dimagh ka taakmaan bhi sahi hai
dia:han......warna toh aj phir class lag jaati
now cut to the boys
mayank:guys......aaj agar larkian beech par paani mein na ayi na........toh phir pata hai na kya karna hai
samrat:dude.......tum fiker hi na karo......iss dafa toh ham woh karke hi rahe ge
benji:han
mayank:deal
both:deal!!!!!
now cut to the cars
all families seated accordingly
anjali pranam nupur and shilpa in mayu's car
neha and gunjan in sam's car
and preeti and uday in benji's car
now in the cars
mayank:dekho nupur.....aaj tumhe paani mein aana hoga
nupur:are nahi mayank....main nahi
anjali and pranam:please mom
nupur:dekho bacho....tum log mayank waghaira keh saath khelna......main paani mein nahi aoon gi please
mayank:nupur.....yaad hai.....tum mujhe kehti thi keh main bachpan mein budha ho gaya hoon......leikin ab dikh raha hai kon bachpan mein budha hua haiLOL
shilpa:nupur beta.....kya ho gaya hai....tum itna alag behave kyun kar rahi ho...main toh jiss nupur koh janti thi woh toh beech par pagal ho jaati thi.......leikin yeh nupur kitni badal gayi hai
mayank:exactly
nupur:magar maa
shilpa:agar magar kuch nahi.......aaj .......aaj tum sab karo gi.....games bhi khelo gi......paani mein bhi jao gi.......aur woh sab karo gi joh yeh sab kare ge......and thats an order........samjhi
nupur:samajh gayi
mayank:thank u maa
now cut to sajan car
samrat:chashmish......please mere liye
gunjan:nahi samrat....main paani mein nahi aoon gi......samjhe
neha:please mama
gunjan:nahi beta.....please
samrat:bas chashmish.......dekho........neha ki shakal dekho..........kitni massoom hai bechari(starts acting)...kya iska dil nahi chahta keh iski mom iske saath pani mein aye......kya yeh nahi chahti keh iski mama iske saath games khele....
neha starts acting as she is crying
gunjan:dekho neha.....beta ro nahi.......acha theek hai.....main paani mein aaoon gi........aur games bhi kheloon gi
neha smiles
now cut benia car
benji:kya ho gaya hai dia.......woh dia kahan hai
dia:konsi wali dia.......benji......tum mere ilawa aur bhi kisi dia ko jante ho......kon hai woh.......i am gonna kil her
benji:dia........shak mat karo......samjhi..aisa kuch nahi hai.....main toh 7 saal pehle wali dia ki baat kar raha hoon.......joh bilkul seedhi saadhi nahi thi..joh naughty thi.....joh dil se young thi......kahan hai woh dia.....
dia:woh dia ab badi ho gayi hai benji.......she has stepped into practical life
benji:par benji koh toh ussi seh pyar hua tha.......aur usse apni dia wapas chahiye.....
dia:please benji......
benji:wahi toh main keh raha hoon........please dia......bahar niklo iss sab se....please.....practical world se bahar niklo......duniya bohot khubsurat hai dia........please...dekho......yeh sab bohot acha hai
dia:benji....
benji:meri aik baat suno........tum bohot funloving ho dia.....aur iss kaid se bahar niklo ab......time a gaya hai.....break the shell......
dia:ok.....
benji:promise karo
dia:kaisa promise
benji:keh aaj tum mujhe aik gift do gi......
dia:kaisa gift
benji:mujhe aj meri purani dia wapas chahiye
dia:ok..i promise

ok guys that was it for today
hope u liked it
do rate and comment
precap:fun!!!!!!!!.......and some heart to heart scenes between fathers and kids(on request)
thanks for reading
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago

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