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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thatz amazing part...so geet feeling "J" gr8...she's really funny...without knowing who's she...geet started to think too much 😆...n maan's new look was awesome he'z not in formal dress 😉 pyaar me log kitna badal jaate hai...
waiting 4 nxt...
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update yeh geet bhi na kuch bhi soche bina bolthi rehthi hain...
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Posted: 14 years ago

4 being late dear..😭🤔😒...
but ur all updates r
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4 pming me dear.. keep pm me dear..😃
lots of 4 ur hard work dear.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it n loved the way geet didnt leave mihika complete her sentence n geet was jealous
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Posted: 14 years ago
fianlly i complted ur epsiodes
just ossum yaar
truly loved it
hey pls add some pics na it ll be more beatuiful
when u ll update next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update please continue soon ya...

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Posted: 14 years ago
please update soon, its been a while you havnt updated 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetluver

please update soon, its been a while you havnt updated 😔


hey yaar...will update soon as exams r on i dont get d tym to update...once exams finish i will update ...dnt wrry...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sweet dont woory ..
first concentrate on ur exmz..
and update it after ur exmaz r over or when u r free...
and we know if u r dere we dont need to worry...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 51...

Geet leaves with mihika to prepare for the evening...geet is highly confused about her feelings towards maan...maan on the other hand thinks abt geet abd him being in the party...enjoying themselves when maan cums bk to work...maan is not at all concentrating on his work...he is busy thinking what geet must be dng...

in maan's house geet and mihika reach and starts preparations for the party...geet thinks as to what to do for the party...

Mihika: geet hum party ki taiyyariyan shuru karte he...tum batao kya karna hai?

Geet: main?...kya kahoon?

Mihika: uff ho tumne koi toh theme socha hoga na?

Geet: theme?...ab kya theme boloon?

geet is not at all concentrating coz she is thinking only abt maan...

Mihika: geet theme kya hoga?

Geet: kyun na hum party ka theme pyar rakkhe...?...love...jahan sab jagah pyar ho...charo taraf laal rang...laal gulab se sajake...sab kuch ekdum pariyon ki kahani ki tarah...

while saying dis she feel sumthng very strong within herself...her hair flying...she suddenly gets flashes of maan...she gets bewildered...

Geet: main maan sir ke bare me...?...uff geet tu pakka pagal hogayi he...chal party pe dhyan de...

Mihika: wow geet...awesome...what an idea...lovely...lets get started then...aur dress code hoga white for boys ...red for girls...what say?

Geet: okay...!

geet and mihika engrossed in the party preps and the other hand maan cnt do any work at all...he thinks to himself...

Maan: arey yeh kya?...yeh pehli baar horaha hai ki main...maan singh khurana kaam nahin karparaha hoon...kya pyar main aisa hota hai?...agar yehi haal raha toh mere office ke bahar tala lagjaega...par geet ke bagair mann bhi toh nahin lagraha..uska chehra mere saamne nahin dikhta toh pata nahin kyun main usse bohot miss karta hoon...ek kaam karta hoon party ke taiyyariyon main madat karne jata hoon...nahin nahin jaunga toh geet ko shaq hojaega...waise bhi uska dimag 24 ghante detective ki tarah chalta hai...agar gaya toh hazar sawaal poochegi...!

kya karoon...kya karoon...kuch toh karna parega...ek kaam karta hoon kaam khatam karke jata hoon...phir toh ghar jaane ka reason bhi miljayega...!!!

Maan gets back to work...!!!

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geet on the other hand has finished with her decor...mihika has msgd some guests abt the dress code and tells to pass the msg to the rest, keepin the theme a secret...geet has decorated i beautifully...with balloons all arnd especially red ones...red roses...tulips add to the beauty with candles shining alla round...white curtains and the entire rooms filled with bubbles...a beautiful dance floor made on the centre above which a beautiful heart shaped balloon hangs which is filled with red rose petals...geet finishes with he decorations and mihika praises her for it...she is in awe of it...geet gets lost in her beautifully created small world of love...

Mihika: arey waah geet...yeh toh kamaal ka hogaya...im sure jo log pyar main nahin bhi honge unko bhi aise atmosphere me pyar hojaega...well done geet...tum waqai main bohot romantic ho...

Geet: par mihika ek baat poochoon?...

Mihika: haan poocho

Geet: ek problem he...

Mihika: kya?

Geet: main party ke liye kya pehnoon...main toh apne kapde bhi leke nahin aayi..pata kahan tha ki party honewali he aur taiyyariyon ke chakkar me main toh bhool hi gayi apne bare me...

Mihika: uff ho dnt wrry...main hoon na...tum mera kuch pehenlo..chalo man tumhe dikhati hoon...mere warddrobe se kuch bhi choose karlo..simple...!!!

Geet: par main?

Mihika: oho geet...maine kaha na ...no formality...!!!

Geet: ok...chalo...

both go to get ready...since mihika wants to gve maan a surprise sends maan's clothes to the office...and tells him to change there.maan agrees to do so but cnt figure out what is haapening...he desperately wants to meet geet but understands that he cnt meeet geet b4 the party...he finishes work and leaves for the party...rest of the staaf also finish work and leave for their homes to get ready...arjun decides to make the party special for mihika as he really has started liking her...

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THE PARTY OF LOVE BEGINS...

Guests start arriving one after the other ...romantic music starts playing...the party kick starts...one by one guests arrive...arjun arrives with neha and ankita...arjun looks dashing in a white suit paired with a crisp white shirt...arjun 's eyes look for mihika...neha finds his behaviour very very strange...neha looks beautiful in a red short dress paired with stone earrings and keeping her hair straight open...wears black stilletoes...

Arjun: yaar meri dream girl kahan hai?...dikhai nahin derahi...

Neha: dream girl agar dream main rahe hi toh achcha hai!

Arjun: neha...tu usse itna jalti kyun hai...?

Neha: main aur usse?...never...aur tu zyada mihika mihika mat kar...kahin maan sir ne dekhliya na toh subah ko aankh hospital main khulegi...

Arjun: very funny...

Neha: btw geet kahan he?

Arjun: mujhe kya pata...mujhe toh sirf mihika se matlab he...

Neha: uff...!!!

neha and ankita go to search for geet...on the odr hand mihika gets ready and cums down through the flight of stairs...beautiful like a princess she descends down the stairs wearing a red flowing dress with hair tied in a bun...paired with small red stone earrings with high black stilletoes...mihika looks truly outstanding...arjun just keeps looking at her and his mouth stands wide open after looking at her...mihikacums down...neha who is standing near arjun makes a weird face but she too is awestruck with her look as she looks absolutely stunning...neha eyes arjun and says to him...

Neha: muh ko band kar...varna makkhi ghusjaegi...!

Arjun shuts his mouth..since he is standing right in front of the stairs mihika comes and stands right in front of him...

Arjun: beautiful...

Mihika: excuse me??

Arjun: ur always excused...(amazed at her beauty and gazing at her)...

Mihika: what?...

Arjun: u seriously look very pretty...!!!

Mihika: what?

Arjun: kyun?...beautiful ladki ko beautiful kehna manaa hai...jo khoobsoorat he usse toh compliment milna hi chahiye...

Mihika: thanks ...

neha intervenes...

Neha: phir toh compliment mujhe bhi milna chahiye...

Arjun: tune shayad theek se suna nahin...main khoobsoorat ladkiyon ki baat karraha tha!

Neha: kya?...how mean...!!!...

mihika laughs at dis...arjun admires her laugh...

Mihika: excuse me...aap kya hamesha hi aise tedhi nazar se hi logo ko dekhte he?

Arjun: ji?...

neha laughs in the middle...

Mihika: mera matlab he ki aap hamesha apne gardan ko ek side pe karke ghoorte rehte he...mat kijiye aapko spondilytis hojaega...

Arjun: kitni fiqar he isse meri...

Mihika: aur haan ek aur baat itna mat ghooriye ki bhaiiya aapki aankhen nikal de...!

neha laughs and arjun cums out of trance..!!!

mihika entertains the guest when the man of the party arrives...MAAN...wearing a dashing white half sleeved transparent shirt paired with jeans and black shoes...maan looks immensely handsome ...maan enters the party and gets awestruck seeing the party decors...mihika cums running to him...maan's eyes searching for geet...

Mihika: hey bro...finally u r here...kitna tym lagate ho...party ke decorations kaise lage?

Maan: the party decorations are awesome mihu...par yeh tune akele kiya?

Mihika:nahin...yeh sab geet ka idea hai...sab geet ne akele kiya hai ...maine toh bas uski thodi si madat ki hai...achcha hai na?

Maan: janta tha ki yeh sab geet hi karsakti hai...itna pyara decoration sirf geet hi apne haathon se karsakti hai...mujhe pata hai ki usse pyar se kitna pyar hai...tab hi toh...

Mihika: tab hi toh kya?

Maan: oho kuch nahin...(he changes the topic)...tu bohot achchi lagrahi he...!

Mihika: thank you!

mihika and maan proceed towards the party...everyone is enjoying their time except maan who is finding his geet...suddenly lights turn off and a spotlight falls on he stairs from where the world's most beautiful girl cums down...dressed in a red sleeveless well cut gown with small red stone earrings which are dangling ...hair straight open...smoky eyes...paired with black stilletoes...geet looks gorgeous...maan's eyes are fixed at her and cant take his eyes off her...he hadnt seen a beautiful grl than her...he is totally lost in her..geet too looks at maan while getting down and smiles...mahii plays ...

Maan: geet tumhare jitni khoobsoorat ladki maine aajtak kabhi dekhi nahin...!

Geet walks towards maan and maan walks towards geet...geet and maan share an eyelock for a long time...geet and maan talk in their mind...

Geet: yeh kya horaha hai mujhe?...main maan sir ke taraf aise kyun khiche chali jarahi hoon...aisa kya hai unme ki woh mere khayalon se nikal nahin rahe he!

Maan: geet...ur d perfect girl for me...aaj main tumhe apni dil ki baat ishaare me kahunga...dekhta hoon tum samjhti ho ya nahin...!

Geet: yeh mujhe compliment kyun nahin karrahe he?

Maan: zaroor compliment expect karrahi hogi...par geet ko satane ka isse achcha mauka kaise chodsakta hoon...!!!...isse compliment dunga hi nahin!

Geet sees dat maan is not gvng her a compliment...maan says...

Maan: hi geet...

Geet: kya?...hi?

Maan: haan...hi!...aur kya kahoon?...bye?

Geet: nahin...aapko nahin lagta ki aapko mujhe kuch aur kehna chahiye?

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapko sach me nahin pata?

Maan: nahin geet...jab tum saamne ho toh kisiki majal ko koi tumse bina pooche kuch bhi kahe...

Geet: aapko lagraha hai ki main mazak karrahi hoon ?

Maan: nahin geet tum toh bohot serious ladki ho...hamesha serious baatein karti ho...achcha batao kya kehna he mujhe jo maine kaha nahin?

Geet: dekhiye aap na mujhe aise tang mat kijiye...jo kehna he seedha seedha kahiye na...

Maan: arey ajeeb zabardasti he ...jab tak tum mujhe kahogi nahin toh mujhe pata kaise chalega ...kya main mind reader hoon?...aur mujhe jo kehna tha main keh chuka...hi toh kehdiya...aur kehna kya hai woh toh batao...

Geet: arey main ladki hoon..yeh sab main kaise kehsakti hoon...yeh toh ladko ki tameez hoti he...

Maan: main janta hoon ki tum ladki ho geet...par aisa kya hai jo mujhe ladka hoke kehna chahiye ?

Geet: woh toh tameez tameez ki baat hoti hai na...main toh bhool hi gayi aapse zyada batameez aur toh koi he hi nahin...!

Maan: geet hum jhagda kis baat pe karrahe he...?

Geet: yehi ki aapne mujhe compliment nahin diya...

maan smirks at dis...

Maan: kya?..tumne itna bara drama ek compliment ke liye kiya?

Geet: drama?...aapko yeh drama lagta hai...?aapko ladkiyon ko compliment dena nahin aata kya?

Maan: haan aata hai!

Geet: toh chaliye bataiyye...kaisi lagrahi hoon main?(geet widens her eyes)...

Maan:theek lagrahi ho!

Geet: theek?...bas?

Maan: achchi lagrahi ho..

Geet: bas...achchi?

Maan: uff ho tum compliment ki kitni bhooki ho geet...bas mujhe aur nahin aata...ab party enjoy karein...

maan smirks and leaves from dre...leaving geet fuming ...

Geet: huh...

just then maan turns back and looks at geet who is not looking at maan because she is slightly angry on him...maan's eyes are fixed on her...then mihika announces that they r gng to play a game of love...

Mihika: ok guys...attention please...ab hum ek game khelenge jiska naam spotlight of love hai...hum do baar spotlight ghumayenge left side ladko ke taraf ...aftr d light are off..hum phir spotlight ghumayenge right side ladkiyon ki taraf...jis ladka aur ladki ke upar spotlight parega unn dono ko centre ke taraf walk karna parega ...uss red balloon ke neeche ...phir spotlight unn dono par parega aur uss couple ko dance eksaath dance karna parega...!!!

everyone gear up for the game...!

the spotlight is on when it first falls on maan...maan gets surprised and then the next spotlight is on ...none other than geet...even geet gets surprised ...geet who is a lil angry on maan feels awkward as they have to dance...they walked towards the centre...the spotlight falls on them..they look at each other...geet with fuming eyes and maan with loving eyes ...smiling away...

Geet: mujhe aapke saath dance nahin karna...

she is abt to walk away when maan holds her from her hand...and pulls her towards himself...maan draws her towards him closely...

Maan: par mujhe toh dance karna hai...woh bhi tumhare saath...

the song starts playing and maan and geet starts dancing magically...

Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Isko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Isko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na
Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Isko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na

DUUR Ho Kar Bhi DUUR Tum Nahin Ho
Paas Ho Lekin Paas Kyon Nahin Ho
DUUR Ho Kar Bhi DUUR Tum Nahin Ho
Paas Ho Lekin Paas Kyon Nahin Ho
Tanha Tanha Sama, Mehki Mehki Hawa

Keh Raha Hai Jahan Jo Suno Na
Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Isko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na

Dekhlo Mausam Kitna Suhana Hai
Pyaar Karne Ka Yeh KOI Bahana Hai
Dekhlo Mausam Kitna Suhana Hai
Pyaar Karne Ka Yeh KOI Bahana Hai
Muskurati Fiza Gungunati Hawa
Kehraha Hai Jahan Jo Suno Na
Dil Ne Tum Ko Chun Liya Hai
Tum Bhi Isko Chuno Na
Khwaab Koi Dekhta Hai
Tum Bhi Sapne Buno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na
Dil Yeh Mera Tumse Kuch Keh Raha Hai
Suno Na Suno Na

after d dance finishes...geet and maan look at each other for a long time...hair flying and winds flowing...then maan says the magical words wich geet wanted to hear...

Maan: geet...U LOOK BEAUTIFUL...TUM BOHOT KHOOBSOORAT LAGRAHI HO...ITNI KHOOBSOORAT KI SHAYAD HI ISS DUNIYA MAIN TUMSE KOI ZYADA KHOOBSOORAT HOGA...

geet is startled...she cudnt believe what he said...

Geet: kya?...kya kaha aapne?

Maan: wahi jo tumne suna...

geet smiles and blushes...the lights are switched on but maan and geet still keep on lookng at each other...mihika bring them back to reality and compliment them...

Mihika: wow bro...awesome and geet ur too good...!

Maan: really geet is too good...(looking at her)...

Geet looks and smiles...maan and geet and mihika proceed towards the est of the party for more fun...!!!


Edited by swthrtdevisha - 14 years ago

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