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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part.
Geet is soo funny.
Both of them r started to fall in love.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks for pm but it's so short pls update soon hope u will

n always nice part pls update it's weekend now so
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
dats so sweet...
luved it...
simple n sober....hmmmm
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was too cool plz update soon the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW...I'm so happy that they went to the mandir...now i wonder if u're going to elaborate on scenes in the mandir or not..hope you do...really excited...thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON COZ ITS SUNDAY AND IAM TOO BORED TO WAIT FOR MONDAY
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey devisha dear
wow nice and wonderful update😃👏👏👏
geet taking revenge on maan that too on date only geet can do that😆😆
and yes the rain, is it going to rain???? hope it rains it will be romantic dear😳😳😳
and yes loved whole maneet sceens😃
maan sitting back of the scooty and holding geet omg omg omg girl u r too funny
loved it and enjoyed it alot dear👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
with hugs
sravs



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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! haah! amazing! :) updt sooon.
add me to ur pm list! :) thankyou.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 29- The " so-called" Date Sequence contd...........

Geet and Maan go inside the temple..........geet puts her dupatta on her head.......maan and geet are waiting in d queue wen geet starts talking to maan......

Geet: sir.....aap pehli baar yahan aaye he........aap yahan kabhi nahin aaye he?

Maan: nahin.....kabhi nahin....mumbai pehli baar aaya hoon........

Geet: sach me sir.......aap toronto me hamesha se rehte the?

Maan: upp...nahin.....!.....

Geet: toh phir sir aap kahan rehte the?

Maan: geet line aage jarahi he...aage dekho aur chalo........

Geet murmurs........

Geet: kuch batate hi nahin he........

Geet and maan move forward........geet talks again.......

Geet: sir aapko pata he...yahan jo bhi aata he khaali haath lautke nahin jaata he.......aap yahan jo bhi mangege aapko kabhi na kabhi woh zindagi me milega zaroor........sach me....yeh sabki sunte he........!

Maan looks at geet and says.............

Maan: sach...jo mangua woh sach me milega.....?

Geet: haan sir..mere saath toh hamesha hua he..........meri aur inki kuch alag hi partnership he........aap bhi try karke dekh lijiye....aap ki mann ki har baat sunenge yeh....

Maan: achcha......toh theek he......!

Maan and geet are waiting in d queue wen d crowd behind in a rush pushes geet.geet falls down towards maan......maan holds geet thru her shoulders...they share a small eyelock for sumtym.......

Maan: geet....tum theek toh ho na....

Geet: ji sir......!

Geet and maan move forward and they reach to worship.......geet offers her offerings to the Deity and folds her hands and closes her eyes to pray.......maan before folding his hands looks at geet...she is lookins absolutely innocent and simple......maan looks at her for sumtym and says.........

Maan: geet ....pata nahin kyuntumme aisa kya hai.....lekin main itna zaroor bata sakta hoon ki itni masoomiyat maine aaj tak nahin dekhi.......tumme kuch toh baat hai......

Maan folds his hands and closes his eyes to pray....he says in his mind....

Maan: Bhagwan.....aaj tak aapne mujhe jo kuch bhi diya hai uske liye main aapka shukriya karna chahta hoon.......kehte he ki aapse kuch mangkar koi yahan se khaali haath nahin laut ta he.....mere paas aapse mangne ke liye aur kuch nahin he....lekin aaj aapse kuch mangna zaroor chahunga.......jabse geet meri zindagi me aayi he tabse meri zindagi poori tarike se badalgayi he..........pata nahin kyun mujhe aajkal aisa lagta he ki main kahin na kahin usse juda hoon.....par kyun......aaj main aapse iss sawwal ka jawaab mangna chahta hoon....mujhe pata he ki aapke paas har sawaal ka jawaab he.aajtak mere paas geet se judi har cheez kyun aati he....kyun mujhe har mod par yeh miljati he......kyun iski baatein mujhe achchi lagti he.....kyun......aap toh jante he na ki mere zindagi me pyar , dosti aur pasand jaise jazbaato ke liye koi jagah nahin thi toh phir abhi zindagi jeena achcha lagat hai....kya yeh geet ke liye he?.........aapko aaj mujhe jawaab kisi bhi ishaare se dena hoga........aaj agar mujhe woh ehsaas hua toh main samjhunga ki kuch toh hai humare beech me............

Geet: Ganpati Bappa.......kaise ho aap?.....aapko toh pata hai ki main aapni zindagi se bohot khush hoon.........mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye........bas meri dm aur antara ko khush rakhiye.......aapko mere do sapne poore karne he..........ek toh mujhe duniya ka sabse bara architect banna he aur duniya ka sabse bara building taiyyar karna hai aur meri zindagi me mere sapno ke rajkumar ko jaldi se lana hai...aapko toh pata hai na ki mujhse aur wait nahin hota ki mujhe pyar kab ho aur aaj aapko mujhe uska ek ishaara toh dena hi parega.......pata hai aaj mujhe kuch alag ehsaas hua jo pehle kabhi nahin hua aur woh bhi maan sir ke waje se....pata nahin kyun par kuch ajeeb sa laga mujhe......ek aur baat.....maan sir ko na thoda sa satbuddhi de dena........hosake toh inke zindagi me ek ladki ko bhejdijiye........bas aapse aur kuch nahin mangna he geet ko....thank u.......!
Jus then wen geet and maan r engaged in praying geet's dupatta flies onto maan's face....maan realises that it geet's..he removes it from his hands and looks at geet romantically.......geet is busy smiling and prayin....maan takes d initiative of making it wear to geet.he slowly moves towards her and takes d white dupatta in his hand and goes behind her to make it wear arnd her head..he makes her wear it arnd her head, she being unaware of it.......he makes her wear it jus like a groom dressing up his bride...he looks at geet who is engrossed in her prayers smiling and content wen maan aftr making her wear it looks at her....(mahii playing).........aftr sumtym maan realises and move to d side of geet........
Geet opens her eyes........looks at maan smiles at him and maan gves a slight smile...geet asks.......
Geet: chalein sir......?
Maan: haan!
they take their prasad and leave from d Mandir......geet and maan cum out....geet says while walking towards d scooty........
Geet: yahan pe aake hamesha sukoon milta he.....dil ko bohot shanti milti he..........
Maan: haan!....achcha geet tumne kuch manga?
Geet: haan...manga na par jo magna he woh kisi ko batate nahin he.......varna poora nahin hota hai...
Maan: achcha....
Geet: sir aapne kuch manga?
Maan: haan........
Geet: sir aapke paas mangne ke liye aur he hi kya?.....aapke paas to sab he..........
Maan: nahin.....sab nahin he........
Geet: aisa kya hai jo maan singh khurana ke paas nahin he?
Maan: he kuch..tumhe pata nahin he
Geet: achcha!!!
Maan: achcha woh sab chodo aur batao ki tum ab mujhe kahan leke jarahi ho?
Geet; sir ab na main aapko ek lambe raaste se leke jaane wali hoon........ek kachchi sadak se jiske dono taraf bohot ghane ghane per he....ek aisi sadak jisme dhanno chalane ka alag hi mazaa he........aur uske baad ka aapke iye surprise he.........
Maan: achcha!!!......
Geet and maan sit on d scooty and leave.................geet si taking maan on a long drive....maan is a lil aaprehensive abt it but later takes up the challenge of gng on a ride wid geet........geet rides her scooty and rides it on a super fast speed.....maan who hates speed.......says to geet..........
Maan: geet dheere.....dheere.........dekho geet mujhe abhi marna nahin he............
Geet: oho sir....yeh speed toh kuch bhi nahin he.....main toh isse bhi fast chalasakti hoon........arey fast nahin chalaungi toh drive ka mazaa kaise aayega......aap chalate honge apni gari bel gari ke speed se par main........geet ko fast cheezein bohot achchi lagte he.........achcha sir ek baat bataiyye, aapne kabhi bhi fast gari nahin chalayi..kahin jaldi pohochne ke liye yah phir aise hi?
Maan: haan chalaiyi he par sirf gusse me......jab main bohot gusse me hota hoon tab main tez gari chalata hoon...........
Geet: oho....tab toh hamesha tez chalate honge?
Maan: kyun?
Geet; kyunki aap hamesha gusse me rehte he?
Maan: very funny.........!
Geet is singing,laughng, and having a joy ride.............maan jus looks at her strangely..........she was d one and nly of all kind..........!...geet and maan are going thru a lane wich ws slowly different from the hustle bustle of d roads..it ws a lil away from d nrmal roads......surrounded by trees from both d sides.......cold winds is blowing from both the sides.........geet is wy too excited..........
Geet: waah!...kya hawa hai!........mazaa aagaya!
Maan: geet yeh tum kaunse raaste pe leke aayi ho mujhe?
Geet: Sir yeh geet ka dicover kiya hua shortcut he........apko pata nahin hoga!
Maan: haan aise cheezein toh sirf tum hi karsakti ho!
Geet: arey sir......!.........aap bas iss din ka mazaa lijiye.........!
Maan: hmmm.!!
Geet: sir aapko mazaa toh aaraha he na......?
Maan: haan...bilkul........
Geet and maan r on a ride......wen geet says........
Geet: sir ab hum jarahe he na...waha humein bohot mazaa aayega.......!
Maan: kahan?
Geet: arey sir......aap bas dekhte jaiyye........aapko aapke zindagi ka sabse bara surprise milega aaj.........
Maan: hmmmmmm!!!!
Geet and maan r riding wen they finally reach their destination.........they reach a place near d beach........heavy cold winds blowing.........cool weather.....its a beautiful bridge........absolutely wonderful.......geet sees it and smles and says........
Geet: sir......yeh dekhiye......!.......kitna sundar he na?
Maan: geet!...yeh kahan layi ho tum mujhe?
Geet: sir aapki aankhein nahin he kya?.....dekh nahin sakte?.......samundar he....arey aap Mumbai aaye he aur samundar nahin dekha toh kya dekha..........samundar iss sheher ki jaan he......!......sir main samundar ke iss hisse me aati hoon.....yahan pe mere bohot saare dost he............bohot mazaa aayega......
Maan: geet.bohot baarish aane wali he.....samundar me jaana theek nahin he.......
Geet: uff ho sir!........aap bhi na.....kuch nahin hoga.......Mumbai ki baarish aur samundar world ki best do cheezein he!
Maan: achcha?
Geet: haan!...chaliye na.........
Geet pulls maan to d beach..............geet tells maan to cum with her and follow her........
Geet: dekhiye sir.....yeh he asli mumbai.....mere liye toh yeh sabse achchi jagah he.......aur mujhe laga ki aapko yahan pe surprise dene se aur koi achchi jagah nahin he....hum ekdum beach ke beech me he.......
Maan: geet......kya surprise he......
Geet: rukiye na....follow me........
Maan follws geet bhind.........geet sees a bundle of children playing cricket.............she gets elatd and tells maan to cum with her........
Geet: sir woh dekhiye.....mere sabse achche dost.........bachche......main inhe achche se jaanti hoon.........dekhiye na yeh aaj phir se cricket khelrahe he........main inke saath hamesha khelti hoon...........aaiyye na....inke saath khelte he..........
Maan: geet....are u mad?...cricket inke saath?...inhe khelne do......hum chalte he........tumhari umr kya hai geet ki inke sath tum khelogi........
Geet: sir khel kood ki koi umr nahin hoti.......aur yeh bachche sabse sweet he..ab yeh mat boliyega ki aapko bachhce pasand nahin he.......
Maan: geet......main aur cricket...sabke saamne?
Geet: aap insaan he ya robot?.........chaliye...varna aapko aapka surprise nahin milega..........
Maan: par geet.........
Geet pulls maan to play cricket...she is xtremely happy to meet d kids...she goes and hugs them...........maan smiles at her dis gesture.......!
Geet: hi kiddos!!!!...kaise ho bachho??
Kids: hello geet didi.......!
Geet: aaj ek cricket match hojaye..........!.dekhna aaj geet hi jeetegi.....aur aaj meri batting.......
Geet is extremely playful wid d kids........maan sees geet and smiles.he says.....
Maan: itni chulbuli..itni masoomiyat.........itna bholapan ...tum kahan se laati ho geet..........?
Geet looks back and sees maan is still standing.......she goes to maan and says.....
Geet: sir kya aap bhoot ke jaise aise khade he?..........chaliye na.......aap balling kijiye.....aur main batting.....!
Maan: chalo.......
Geet and maan go for a cricket a match filled with excitement.........maan awaits his surprise.........!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry!!!!

phele comment nhi kr ski.....no net for past 2 weeks....:(:(:(

just read all da parts!!!!

superb.....amazing!!!!

update sooN!!!

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