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sweetwidheart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

awesome...... too gud...
maan on scooty..hmmmmmm........
wowwwwwwww
continue soon.......

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Trisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

oy hoy - DHANNO ZINDABAD!!!!!!

woooooo

lets see wat happens in this ride :P

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Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Loveeee the update.
Can't wait to read abt maneet's first day together.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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devisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Part 28.....The " so-called" Date Sequence contd............

Maan feels very awkward sitting on dhanno........geet from her rear view mirror sees maan's expression and laughs............she says in her mind....

Geet: arey yeh kya?...maan sir ko toh abhi se halat kharap horahi he........mujhe aaj bara mazaa aaraha he....mujhe toh yakeen nahin horaha he ki maan sir mere peeche bethe he aur meri har baat manrahe he..waah......!!!......ha.....!

Maan in his mind:

Maan: yeh main kaha phasgaya.........maine kyun geet ko haan kyun kaha...kyun?.......mera dimag kharap hogaya he..........aur main iss dhanno ke peeche.................sab log dekhrahe he...........uff.....!!

Geet: sir........(while riding)..........sir.........

Maan: kya hua geet?

Geet: sir aap theek toh he na?

Maan: matlab?

Geet.: matlab aapko dhanno pe bethke koi problem to hnahin horahi he na?

Maan: mujhe kya problem hogi............main theek hoon..........

Geet: toh phir aapke shakal pe bara kyun baje he......??...

Maan: kya??....dekho geet...phaltui baatein karna band karo aur saamne dekhkar chalao..............

Geet: dnt wry sir aap mere aur dhanno ki gurantee me he.........aapko kuch nahin hoga.........sir ek baat kahoon.............

Maan: agar na kahoon toh tu bolna band kardogi kya?.......

Geet: haan yeh toh sahi he........sir aapko pata hai ki main aapko dhanno pe bethkar kyun le aayi?

Maan: ofcourse tum dhanno ke bager reh nahin sakti..........

Geet: oho sir.........agar hum dono band gari me jaate toh asli mumbai dikhana mushkil hojata...........sir asli mumbai ka mazaa toh iss khuli hawaa me aata hai...arey bhir bhar..gari ki awaaze.......samundar ki lehron ki awaaz ....yehi toh asli mumbai he...............agar band gari me rahenge toh yeh sab enjoy hi nahin karpayenge...........sir koi gadha hi hoga jo mumbai jaise sheher ko gari ke band darwazo se dekhta he.............

Maan: kya?...u mean to sya main gadha hoon?

Geet: maine aisa kab kaha.....aapko samjhna he toh samajh lijiye...........ek minute....ek baat bataiyye......aapne kabhi bhi khuli hawaa ka mazaa nahin liya he?

Maan: nahin..........

Geet: isiliye toh ......dekhiye sir..........arey mumbai jaise sheher me khuli hawaa ka mazaa abhi tak nahin liya aapne?...kya sir.....isiliye toh aapko dhanno pe bithaya maine...........

Maan: toh tum chahti ho ki main gari main travel karna band karke scooty pe travel karna shuru kardoon khuli hawaa ka mazaa lene ke liye?

Geet: sir zaroori nahin ke ki khuli hawaa ka mazaa lene ke liye aapko scooty pe hi bethna parega..........arey kabhi thoda sa waqt nikalke aap walk karsakte he...chaat pe.garden me..........kahin pe bhi...........main bhi wahi karti hoon..............

Maan thnks how simple she is and open hearted she is.............maan loves her simplicity.............

jus then maan sees its quite dark and cloudy................it gng to rain heavily..........he says to geet

Maan: geet baarish hone wali he.......... humein vapas chale jana chahiye..........

Geet: kya? vapas?.......ab baarish ke mausam me baarish hi toh hogi na.........aur baarish hi toh hone wali he............koi aasman toh sar par girne nahin wala na?...aur vapas kyun jaaye..........ab yeh mat boliyega ki aapko baarish se bhi nafrat he.............

Maan: geet mujhe baarish se nahin baarish me bheegne se nafrat he.......samjhi?

Geet: kya?...baarish me bheegne se nafrat.........ab mujhe 100% confirm hogaya he ki aap insaan he hi nahin...........

Maan: watt?

Geet: haan.....arey baarish se nafrat.......sir baarish aisi cheez he jo Bhagwan ka sabse achcha tohfa hota hai.......haan sir........agar aap baarish me nahin bheege toh aapne kuch kiya hi nahin zindagi me...............arye baarish ka toh khul kamazaa lena chahiye........aur woh bhi mumbai ki baarish........sir bhego ge nahin toh pata kaise chalega............

Maan: geet mujhe bheegna nahin he..........

Geet: theek he......sir aap toh aisa karrahe he ki baarish aake pure jagah paani bhargaya he....jab aayega tab dekha jayega........ab please safar ka mazaa kharap mat kijiye.........

Maan: par geet... Achcha yeh batao ki hum jaa kahan rahe he?

Geet: sir woh toh surprise he!

Maan: par kahan.........

Geet: aisi jagah jahan se har achche kaam ki shuruvat hoti he.............

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan....uff ho sir aap sawaal bohot karte he!

Suddenly geet riding starts singing loudly............maan immediately puts his finger inti his ear.....

Maan: geet......gaana kyun garahi ho tum?.....

Geet: sir gaana gaakar hi to safar ka mazaa liya jaata hai............ab mujhse toh chup betha nahin jata toh jab baat nahin karti hoon toh gaana gaati hoon..

Maan: hmmm ofcourse.....par itna zor se.........sab log dekhrahe he.........

Geet: arey log jaye bhar me......arey meri scooty ...meri awaaz...........main kuch bhi karoon...meri marzi...........main gala pharke chillaun yah gaana gaun....kisika ky ajaata hai?

Maan: par geet log pareshan hote honge..............

Geet: sir kisike paas khade rehkar mera gaana sunne ka tym nahin he..........sab apne kaam me busy he.........kaun kuch kahega aur woh bhi mujhe?

Maan: haan ofcourse woh bhi baat he...koi tumhe kuch kehne ki himmat karsakta he.........

Geet: hmmm ryt..........

Jus aftr dat geet starts singing again..........maan gets irritated and says..........

Maan: geet.......thoda dheere se........please........

Geet: (in her mind).........ab aaya na kuch mazaa........uss din aapne gari me gaana chalane nahin diya......aur ab......haha..badla poora hogaya........sir ki shakal toh dekho.........ha ha....ab geet ka raaj chalega......aage aage dekhiye sir main aapko kaise ser karvati hoon...yeh toh bas shuruvat he.......

dekhiye sir ...yeh toh unfair he...uss din jab main aapke gari me bethi thi tab aapne kaha aapke gari me music aalowed nahin he toh ab...ab meri baari.....aap meri dhanno par bethe he aur meri dhanno ko aur mujhe music bohot pasand he........aur aaj geet ki marzi chalegi.......aur ab main gaana garahi hoon toh aapne aisi shakal kyun banake rakhi he?

Maan: (in his mind).....oh...toh yeh baat he......toh yeh ussi din ka badla lerahi he.............isiliye dhanno ko lekar aayi he.......ab mujhe samjh me aaya.......bohot smart he..........

Jus then while geet is riding d scooty,,,geet gves a break to her scooty to stop in d traffic............maan dashes against geet....his face cums near to geet's face....maan sees her gng on talking........her beautiful earrings mvnng away.........he is near to her hair..........wich is kept open.......he feels d smell of geet's hair.........he gets lost into geet who is smiling away...(mahii ps played ofcourse)......he sees geet's earrings...he lifts up his finger and touches geet's earrings and moves it........jus then geet realises dat maan is too close to him...she turns bk and sees dat maan's face is quite near to hers...........she looks into his eyes deeply and for a moment gets lost in them.........suddenly d honk of the car makes both of them realise and they cum bk from their trance..........geet feels awkward and says in her mind......

Geet: yeh kya?...main maan sir ko aise ghurke kyun dekhrahi thi........pagal geet........aage dekh aur scooty chala..........

Maan: (in his mind).....yeh main kya karraha tha........mera dimag na sach me kharap se bhi kharap hogaya he..........maan......please......aisa phir mat karna.........

Geet starts riding d scooty.........she realises dat maan is uncomfortable holding d back of d scooty in order to prevent himself from falling....she says to maan......

Geet: sir......aapko aise bethne se taqleif hogi.......aap ek kaam kijiye aap mujhe pakarke bethiye.......aaram se..........

Maan: kya main tumhe pakroon?

Geet: sir....isme problem kya hai?.....pakrenge nahin toh girjayenge............

Maan: par geet..........

Geet: par var kuch nahin........arey pehli baar scooty pe bethe he..............aaram se bethiye......na!

Maan:(in his mind)........peeche se.geet ko.......main.......

Geet: sir signal green hone wali he......jaldi pakriye..varna girjayenge....

Maan on geet's insistence holds her waist from two sides........he feels awkward........to hold geet he blushes......his face turns red slightly........his eyes look down....he touches her......so he feels slightly different.......wen maan holds her from behind.....geet also feels slightly different for the first tym.........she closes her eyes and feels d feeling...it ws sumthng special she was feeling ...never felt before.....she in a low tone tells maan......

Geet: sir aap theek he.signal green hogaya.......

Maan: haan....chalo.......

Geet goes onto ride d scooty.......maan is constantly looking at her.....maan looks at her and smiles on the odr side.......geet thnks dat y she felt dat.........

Geet: (in her mind)....yeh kya....mujhe aisa kyun laga jaise kabhi nahin laga ho....maan sir ne jab mujhe chuya tab aisa kyun laga ki kuch alag he.........different...........

Maan: (in her mind)...geet...pata nahin tumhe dekhte hi mujhe aajkal ho kya jaata he........pata nahin kyun..........

Maan changes d topic................

Maan: geet...tum bataogi ki hum kahan jarahe hewoh bhi subha ke 7.30 baje........

Geet: bas aagaye sir.........

she stops d scooty........

Maan looks arnd nd says........

Maan: kahan?

Geet: sir woh dekhiye........Siddhivinayak Mandir.......meri dm kehti he ki har achche kaam ki shuruvat inhike darshan se ki jaati he........main hamesha aati hoon koi achcha kaam karne se pehle........toh humare safar ki shuruvat karne se pehle humein inke darshan karne chahiye.........iss sheher me har koi inko bohot mante he...........inke darshan bare shubh he.......

Maan gets lost on how simple and sweet she is.........

Geet: kya hua sir?.......ab yeh mat biliyega ki aapko andar jaane se problem he..........

Maan: nahin nahin chalo............!

Geet and maan go inside the temple..............!

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 14 years ago