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Devisha, read the last three part🤗, it was fabulous, i just loved it😍
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hi...dear.....

i'm really sorry..😕..
seriously i'm very busy wid my clg....
dying to read ur ff......kitne sare pm the ajj jake mujhe time mila....
abhi last part khatam karke.....comment kar rahi hoon.....
yaar yea geet ...kitni bolti hai....
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Tooo gudddd.
Maan playing cricket.
Can't wait for the next part.
Continue soon.
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Part 30- The " so-called" Date Sequence contd...

Geet takes maan to playa but maan is reluctant to play as he is highly embarassed...he tries to refrain himself from playing but he jus cudnt say no to geet.he himself dint understand...geet brings or rather pulls maan and introduces him to d kids...maan who stands beside geet...is actually nervous as to wat will geet do...Geet says...

Geet: bachcho inse milo...yeh he duniya ka sabse bada ajooba...Maan..maan singh khurana...!!!!!!

Kids laugh hearing dis..maan gets angry at dis and says...

Maan: geet..aur tumlog... isme hasne wali koi baat nahin he...samjhe?

Geet: sir...not fair...aapko mujhe jo kehna he kehsakte he par mere bachcho ko nahin.please... haan...

Maan: waah! Mother India...!

Geet: very funny...chaliye sir main aapko batati hoon yeh sab kaun kaun he...

geet introduces maan to d kids...maan reluctantly says hi to all as if he is embarassed coz he has nt dne all dis before...maan makes a weird face to which geet ridicules...

Geet: sir...aisi mari hui shakal kyun banakar rakkhi he...bachche he...ab yeh mat kahiyega ki aapko bachche pasand nahin he...agar nahin he toh aap insaan toh 100 % nahin he...!!!

Maan: geet...!

Geet: achcha...yeh sab chodiye...aur chaliye team banaiyye...aapko jo koi bhi chahiye aap choose karlijiye...

Maan: team?...kis liye?

Geet: ghar leke jane ke liye...sir obviously cricket khelne ke liye...ab cricket khelne ke liye team toh chahiye na...

Maan: wat?...geet mujhe laga tum mazak karrahi ho...main aur cricket?

Geet: kyun? ab cricket se aapko kya problem he?

Maan: cricket se nahin par khelna...woh bhi yahan...?

Geet: kyun?...aapko Eden Gardens me jaake khelna he...yahan pe kya kharabi he?

Maan: uff geet...please geet...main nahin...please...geet tumhare white kapde kharap hojayenge...

Geet...uff sir aap bhi na...har baat ka jawab aapka na hi hota hai... aur kapdo ka ky ahai...dhulne se dhul jayenge...par inke saath khelne ka mauka roz roz to hnahin milega na...waise aap khelna nahin chahte yah aap dargaye?

Maan: dargaya aur main...iss duniya me aisa koi ladka nahin he jisse cricket khelna nahin aata ho...maan singh khurana kisise nahin darta...samjhi tum...?

Geet: toh theek he...khelke dekhiye mere saath...toh maanoon...phir se shart lagakar dekh lijiye...

Maan: phir se?...tum phir se haar jaogi...

Geet: theek he.dekhte he...!

Man gets into spirit and chooses his team...while maan is getting ready to play...d kids tell geet...

Kids: didi yeh he kaun?...kitna sadu he...bilkul dukhi aatma ke jaisa...

Geet: (she laughs)..mujhe pata he...

Maan notices dem laughng and cums dere...

Maan: kya hua? tum log sab kyun hasrahe ho?

Geet: kuch nahin sir...kuch nahin...

Maan: geet ...tum na...!!!

Geet: uff ho aap jaake khelne ki taiyyari kariye na...dusro ki baaton me taang mat ladaiyye aap...!

Maan goes to d odr side...geet and maan's team get ready.geet wntd to bat and maan' s team has to bowl...maan cums to bowl...geet ties her dupatta on her side...ties her hair...into a knot and gears up to bat...maan cums running towards d crease to bowl over...he slowly raises his eyes once he reaches d crease but d moment he is abt to bowl...he sees geet who is looking straight to him...he sees her in a different look and gets lost in her...he stands still and gazes at her...geet is waiting for him to start but gets impatient...

Geet(shouts frm d odr side)...:arey sir...maan sir...!...kya hua?...ball daliye na...kya hua...?...statue kyun bangaye aap?...ball kijiye!

Maan dsnt respond to geet and still lokks at her...suddenly a kid notices dat and says...he cums near and pulls maan's jeans slightly...

Kid: bhaiya...

Maan cums bk to reality and looks towards d kid and says...

Kid: bhaiya...didi ko baad me ghoorlena.abhi ball toh karo...!!

Maan: ... upp...haan!

Maan balls and geet hits beyond d boundary...way beyond...geet runs to tke anodr run...maan runs to defend geet from running in order to make her out...d moment he starts running...geet cums from forward becoz she is running to tke a run...they both dash against each odr...geet and maan share an eyelock for quite sumtym wen a kid shouts...

Kid: GEET DIDI...BHAGO.OUT HOJAYENGE...!

Geet widens her eyes and moves to run but as she moves to run maan blocks her way as she he is also gng frm d same diirection as her..both geet and maan cnt move out as both r mvng in d same dirction and r constantly dashng against each odr...finally maan moves to d odr side and in a royal style lets geet go ...he move to d side...geet smiles and moves to walk...a kid notices dis...cums near to maan and says...!

Kid:bhaiyya.aapne unhe bhaagne kyun diya...aap rok ke rakhte toh hum unhe out kardete na...aap bas khelo ...charity mat karo...varna haar jayenge...!

Maan: ...upp haan...(in his mind)...par main geet ko haarte huye nahin dekhsakta...kyunki geet bakshi hamesha jeetna chahti he...woh khush nahin hogi...

d game is gng on and maan is still bowling...geet is still batting...and scores a 94...she is batting very well ...maan cudnt make her out all dis while as he felt he cant let her loose sumhow...he cnt see geet loosing...maan tries but fails to make her out...its d last ball of the over and d frst innings...geet gears up to score a century...maan bowls...geet pulls out a sixer...she hits dat and is extremely happy...she smiles away..and gves a hi-five to her fellow batsman...d kid says...

Kid: wow..didi...aaj toh century pakki...!

Geet: pata he...maan sir toh haarjayenge...!

Maan is happy to see geet happy and turns arnd to see whether d ball is being catched...in hid heart he hopes she is nt out but then he sees d ball being caught by a kid...he thnks for sumtym he shud support his team but looks at geet's face who is tensed and is biting her nails in tension and worry fearing dat she will be out...maan approches to stop d boy frm catchng but thnks dat he will be ridiculed by his team and remembers he needs to win d shart too...plus wat will he tell to geet as to why did he defend her...but d boy catches d catch.d kid shouts...

Kid: OUT...!!!!

Geet sees dat and makes a cryinf face...and say...walks very fast and says...

Geet: nahin.out nahin he...!!!...geet out nahin hosakti...nahin bilkul nahin!!!

Maan sees dat and decides to irritate her for sumtym...

Maan: geet.tum out ho..woh ek catch tha...!

Geet: achcha...aapko bada pata hai?...main out nahin hoon...

Maan: geet...ur out..tum out ho!

Geet: no...main out nahin hoon...

Maan: geet tum out ho.have sum sportsmanship spirit ...please geet...

Geet:ahahah...sportsmanship spirit jaaye bhaad me...main out nahin hoon...maine khud dekha he...arey uska pao boundary se bahar tha...toh out nahin sixer he na...yeh out nahin he...

Maan: geet pair andar tha aur woh out he...

Geet: aandhe he aap...aapko dikhayi nahin deta...!...woh out nahin tha!!!

Maan: woh out tha geet...

Geet: nahin tha...

Maan: tha...

Geet: maine kaha na...ki nahin he...aur waise bhi aap toh chahte he ki main haarjaun isiliye cheating karrahe he!!!

Maan: geet...tumhe kaise samjhoon.arey game he...aisa hi hota hai...!!!

Geet and maan cntnue to bicker wen geet and maan point out theire fingers to each odr...both r widening their eyes out and looking at each odr...finally a consensus reaches dat geet is out and needs to gve d bat...

its maan's turn to bat...maan gets ready to bat...geet is incharge of fielding...while geet is positioned to field...looks at maan angrily...and says...

Geet: maan sir...sabka din hota hai...ab meri baari...aapko catch out nahin kiya toh mera naam geet nahin...!!!

jus then maan hits a sixer and geet dsnt leave d oppurtunity to catch it...geet i sabt to catch it and looks up and follow d ball high up in d sky...geet is looking up wen maan notices dat she will fall on her back badly and hurt herself...he leaves d bat and runs to save geet...geet who is abt to fall is engrossed to catch d ball ...geet is just gng to fall..maan jumps to save geet and falls on her...he holds her frm behind...and then both fall on d grnd...geet is still holding d ball in her hand and dsnt let it drop...heavy winds flowing...geet is looking into maan and maan too is looking at geet...(mahii plays...)...they both are very close to each odr and r lost into each odr...they share a romantic eyelock...suddenly d kids tease them...

Kids: arey woh dekho...geet didi aur maan bhaiyya aankho aonkho me dekhrahe he...

Geet and maan realise the awkwardness of the situation and get up...maan asks geet...

Maan: geet...tum theek toh ho na?

Geet: hmmm...haan...!!!

D kids mock geet and maan...
Kids: aha!...geet did iaur maan bhaiyya...dono...hmmm...
Geet: oye bachcho...!...muh pe lagaam do varna tumlogo ki na main...!
Kids: ok...par yeh kya maan bhaiyya...aapke waje se hum haar gaye na...agar aap sixer maardete toh hum jeet jaate na...ab geet didi jeetgayi na...
Geet: kya main jeetgayi...maan sir out?...yeah!
Geet jumps lyk a kid and is happy to make maan loose...maan again gets lost in her innocence again...wen geet talks to him...he just simply looks at her...
Geet: dekha sir...punjabi kudi ka kamaal...akhir geet ne aapko hara hi diya...aap haar hi gaye...!
Maan: haan...waqai main sab kuch haargaya...!!!
Geet: kya?
dis question brings maan back to reality...
Maan: upp...kuch nahin...
Maan and geet have an exciting cricket match...geet cums to maan and says...
Geet: sir ab aapke liye mere taraf se kuch hai!
Maan:kya?
Geet: yaad hai?...aapka surprise...!
Maan: surprise...!
Geet: ...haan...just wait and watch...aur ab aap apne aakhen band kijiye!
Maan waits for geet...closes his eyes...says...
Maan: yeh geet bhi na...pata nahin yeh kya karrahi he?
geet arranges d surprise wid d help of the kids...geet cums to maan and says...
Geet : sir ..ab aap apne aankhen kholsakte he!!!
saying dis geet hides away...maan opens hi seyes and sees a massive surprise...he sess dat in frnt of him on d sand is written " I AM SORRY ...MAAN SIR...".wid d red roses stalk buried under d grnd wid beautiful red rose flowers on top...den maan again to his surprise sees d kids cumin and standing in frnt of him wid faces showing sorry faces...maan who cudnt believe wat was hapng but smiles...d kids tell him to turn back...he turns and sees on d odr side wid red roses geet has written..." THANK YOU...MAAN SIR..."...again d kids cum and carry smily faces...maan sees dat and smiles...he turns all arnd and tries to find geet but she is nowhere...maan suddenly hears a voice...saying...
kabhi kabhi humein zindagi me kuch aise log miljaate he jo humare zindagi me koi mayne nahin rakhte...aise log jinse hum jab pehli baar milte he toh aisa lagta hai ki hum unse dobara kabhi nahin milenge...aisa hi hua ek ladki ke saath jiska naam geet he...uski zindagi me ek toofan bankar aaya ek aisa shaks jiske aane se geet ki zindagi ne ek naya mod liya...kabhi socha nahin tha ki woh phir se kabhi takrayenge kyunki uss insaan ko geet pasand nahin karti thi.par woh uss insaan se dobara mili...jhagde huye...takraar hua aur yahan tak ki usne uski jooti se pitaai bhi kardi...par ek raat unhone isi geet ko sambhala aur sahi salamat uske ghar pohochaya...aur aisa bohot kuch kiya jiske bare me shayad mujhe pata nahin he...geet hamesha uss insaan se ladti rahi...jhagadti rahi...kabhi usse sahi nahin samjha par dekha jaaye toh har mod par usne geet ki kisina kisi tarah se madat ki ...geet ne sirf yehi dekha ki woh bahar se kitna saqt he lekin andar se shayad naram hai...geet ne unki madat ke peeche unki achchi neeyat ko nahin dekha...unki insaaniyat nahin dekhi...unka saaf aur achcha dil nahin dekha...galati geet ki hai jisne ek sahi insaan ko galat samjha...isilye aaj geet uss insaan se uski har madat ke liye thank u kehna chahti he aur apni har galti mankar sorry kehna chahti he...aap..uss insaan ka naam janna chahenge...??...uss insaan ka naam he Maan...maan singh khurana...ek aisa insaan jiske saath geet kabhi bhi dosti nahin karna chahti thi par aaj dosti ki ek neev rakhna chahti he...ek nayi shuruvat karna chahti he...
haan sir...aaj geet bakshi maan singh khurana ke taraf dosti ka haath badha rahi he...kya aap iss sarphiri ladki ke saath dosti yah phir dosti ki shuruvat karenge...???
dese words echoe into maan's ears...he cudnt believe wat geet said...he just gets lost into her ocean of words...on d odr hand geet while saying dis was walking towards maan and circling arnd im while maan was listening to her patiently...geet had sumthng behind her to give to maan...geet cums in forward of maan...mahii is palying in d bg...geet cums and smiles towards maan to wich he gves a slight smile...maan is looking at her...
geet says...
Geet: sir...main aapko kuch dena chahti hoon...
Maan: kya??
Geet: ek minute...
geet from nehind takes out a bunch of white roses and yellow roses...offers it to maan...
Geet: sir yeh aapke liye...!...white aapse peace karne ke liye aur yellow humari dosti ki shuruvat ke liye...yellow...colour of frndship...!
Maan: dosti?...
Geet: haan sir.maine socha ki kyun na isi style se aaps esorry kahoon aur thank u bhi...kyun sir aapko yeh sab pasand nahin aaya?...aapko phool pasand nahin he...?...aap mujhse dosti nahin karna chahte?
Maan: geet...dosti.itni jaldi...hum ek dusre ko achche se jaante nahin geet...
Geet; sir...dosti ki shuruvat ke liye jitna janna zaroori he utna hum ek dusre ko jaante he...aur dosti toh ek aisa safar he jahan dosti karne ke baad dost ko jaana aur samjha jaata he...toh boliye mr.maan singh khurana..geet bakshi se dosti karne ka risk lena chahenge?...
geet brings her hand forward for handshake while Maan thinks and looks up ...talks in his mind...
Maan: Bhagwan aapne ishaara dediya...mujhe apne har sawaal ka jawaab milgaya...
maan looks towards geet and smiles...he says...
Maan: geet...sab bohot achcha he...mujhe bohot achcha laga...aur maine tumhe maaf kiya aut tumhara thank u accept kiya...
Geet feels happy...
Maan and geet shake hands...and both smile...
Geet:ab aap bure phase...mujhse dosti nibhana asaan nahin he... achcha sir main toh mission me kamyaab hogayi...ab aapki bari...ab aap mujhe batayenge...kal raat kya hua...woh kya he na doston se kuch chupana nahin chahiye...
Maan: bataunga...lekin thode der baad...thoda sabr karo...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...aur jahan tak tumse dosti nibhana ki baat hai...toh tumhe pata chalega ki mujhse dosti nibhana bhi asaan nahin he...toh geet...ab tum apne iss naye dost ko apne style me aage aur kya dikhaogi...mumbai me...??
Geet: aap bhi thoda intezaar kijiye...woh kya he na sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
they both gve a slight laugh...and then proceed further...geet take maan to d odr side of the beach...!
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago
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yay

finally they became frends!!!!
hmmmm n soon luv
hehehe
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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That was such a cute and funny update! That fall was romantic.....lolz.....Oooo.....they became friends.....great! Maan got his signal......nice! Do continue soon.

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