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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 19- The Party Sequence contd.............

Geet and Maan enter the party........geet gets highly irritated as to wat hapnd outside..........she says to maan softly near his ears.......
Geet: yeh aadmi bahar ky akehraha tha?
Maan: kya?
Geet: yehi ki main aapki biwi......
Maan: uff ho geet...tum abhi bhi uss baat ko lekar bethi ho........dekho hum party me aaye he...behave urself please........
Geet: haan...haan...mujhe sab pata hai.........kya hai...haan...??
Maan:Kya pata hai tumhe geet?
Geet: wahi ki aaj mujhe aapki neeyat ke bare me yakeen hogaya.........
Maan: wat neeyat?.....kya?
Geet: aapne inn sabko mere bare me kya impression diya hai...ki main aapki woh...hoon??
Maan: wat woh?
Geet: arey woh....woh.........aap samajh nahin rahe he...........
Maan: ab tumhari baat kabhi mujhe samajh me aati he kya?........ab tumne kaha he toh zaroor kuch toh he.ab tum hi samjhao.....
Geet: ab sir aisi baat me aapne muhse kaise boloon.......
Maan: arey tumhe bolne me kabse taqleif hone lagi....woh toh tumhara inborn talent he na geet......
Geet: aap ek bhi mauka nahin chodte na mujhe taane dene ka......woh aadmi kyun kehraha tha ki main aapki fiancee...biwi.........
Maan: wattt??...tum abhi uss baat ke bare me sochrahi o..aur jo woh tum yeh samjha rahi ho...woh yeh tha.........??....aur tumhe lagta hai maine yeh sab kuch kiya hai?....maine uss aadmi ko kaha tha yeh sab kehne ke liye....uff ho geet......ab mujhe kaise pata hoga ki usne aisa kyun kaha..........
Geet: mujhe kaise pata.....ab toh mujhe pata chalgaya he ki aapke dimag me kuch aur he aur dil me kuch aur.........
these words of geet echoe on maan's ears as he really special for geet....he tells geet.......
Maan: geet...apni bakwaas band karo please...party me aaye he humlog....yahan tamasha khada mat karo........
Geet: theek he..lekin iska matlab yeh nahin ki main iss baat ko bhooljaungi........
Maan: ofcourse.......tum kabhi koi baat bhoolti ho geet...yah phir dusro ko bhoolne deti ho kya?
Geet and maan proceed towards the party.....the clients are introduced to sum ppl......mr.kapoor , the client wrkng wid maan introduce geet and maan to a new member of the project........mr.siddharth khanna, a lil flirtatious by character......he sees geet and get smesmerised and looks at her intricately..........maan noticing dat dsnt lyk it at all..........
Siddharth: oh hello...ms geet bakshi...i must say u look very pretty........
he stretches his hand for a handshake...geet gves him a handshake but he presses her hand a lil too hard......Geet also feels a lil awkward.....maan notices dat....
Geet: thank you.........
Siddharth: mr.khurana...its a pleasure meeting u....uss conference ke baad toh aap dikhe hi nahin........
Maan: hmmmmm...hello......now if u please excuse both of us.....
Siddharth: oh sure.......
Maan takes geet to a corner.......
Geet: kya hua sir?....aap mujhe wahan se aise kyun leke aagaye?
Maan: kuch nahin...dekho geet.......tum mere saath hi rehna.....koi zaroorat nahin he dusre logo se baat karne ki...
Geet: kyun?...baat karne me kya kharabi he........
Maan: main kehraha hoon na.yeh ek business party he jahan bohot saare ajeeb log aate he.......
Geet: haan...jaise ki aap.......
Maan: watt??
Geet: dekhiye sir main koi dood peeti bachchi nahin hoon jise aap ungli pakarkar chalna sikharahe....please sir.......party me aayi hoon.aise kone me aapke jaise bhoot banke toh khadi nahin rehsakti na.mujhe bhi enjoy karna hai.........
Just that tym avantika and her fiancee aditya cum to the party.......geet notices them and runs to say them hi
Geet:hi...maam....arey aditya sir aap bhi aaye he........
Avantika: hi geet...tum bohot achchi lagrahi ho.........
Geet: thank u maam
Aditya: hi geet..........kaisi ho tum?
Geet: main abhi tak toh theek hoon........
Aditya: kyun?...
Geet: kyunki abhi peeche se woh he na rakshas khurana mujhe attack karenge.....peecha hi nahin chodte he.......
Aditya: kaun geet?
Geet: mere boss .......mr.maan singh khurana.........
Aditya gves a slight laugh.......
Avantika: uff ho adi tum bhi.hamesha geet ke saath milke haste rehte ho....please
Maan sees geet wid them and cums to meet them........
Maan: hi avantika
Avantika: hi maan...hw r u? btw thats my fiancee aditya...aditya suri......
Maan: hi.....hw u dng?
Aditya: fine.........
Maan: really tum dono ki jodi bohot achchi he....
Avantika: aap believe nahin karenge...humein geet ne hi milvaya tha.......bohot lambi kahani he
Maan: oh really...geet ne?
Geet feels extremely proud of wat she did...
Geet: ji sir...maine.....
Maan: oh wow...toh tumhe match making karna bhi aata hai wow..........
Geet: huhhhhhhh...aap kabhi mere baare me kuch achcha nahin kehte he.....kumse kum jab log meri tareef karte he toh sunliya kiljiye...main janti hoon aapko taqleif hoti he.......
Avantika: oh God......yeh phir se shuru hogaye.........inhe agar nahin roka toh yehi pe 3rd world war shuru hojayega.
Aditya: kyaa??
Avantika: hmmm...baad me batati hoon...lambi kahani he.......
uppp...geet ...chalo na hum chaltein he wahan pe.........
Maan engages himself in convo wid aditya...nd constantly notices geet so dat siddharth cnt cum close to her and trouble is out of her way.......he sees geet engaging in talks wid avantika.smiling away...he gets lost in geet's smile...........(mahii plays)......he keeps a watch on geet constantly..........geet gves a slight look to maan.......maan looks on d odr side..........maan is standing alone.........wen dere is a tap on his shoulder..........he turns arnd...its geet..........
Geet: sir...aap mere bager bore horahe the na?
Maan: haan haan...tum toh meri lie ki entertainment packcage ho na.jahan tum nahin hoti ho wahan toh sab boring he.....kyunki jab tum mere saath hoti ho na toh vishwas karo main kabhi bhi bore nahin hota.........
Geet: aap taana marrahe he na?
Maan: nahin nahin main toh tumhari taareef karraha hoon
Geet: huh!...aap aur meri taareef.......??...kabhi nahin..........
Maan: kyun? tumhe kya lagta hai ki main tumhari tareef nahin karsakta........??
Geet: huh..!...aap meri toh kya...aap kisi ki bhi taareef nahin karsakte he...aap ek compliment dene ke liye saat janam laga sakte he........toh poori ki poori taareefo ka bhandar.nahin.........
Maan: achcha.....toh theek he...agar yeh baat he..toh me abhi agar tumhari taareef karoon toh.......
Geet: toh...main......phir se shart?
Maan: haan pichle baar ka hi condition rakhte he...jo main kahunga wahi karna parega........
Geet: theek he.......(in her mind)........yeh wali shart toh main hi jeetungi........kyunki maan sir ki bas ki baat nahin he..........
Maan: toh theek he...........(goes near geet's ears and says)
tumhari aankhen samundar ke gehraayion se bhi gehri he..inme doob jaane ko dil karta he.....tumhara yeh chehra ek aisa phool he jo kabhi bhi murjhata nahin he...tumhare baal aise ki kholo toh raat hojaye.........bhagwan ne agar kisi ko bohot phursat se banaya he toh woh tum ho.....kyunki tumhari inn aaddayon ne aaj mehfil me qayamat laya hai........tumhari masoomiyat me ek aisi kashish he ki koi bhi usme kheechne ko majboor hojaata hai.....tumhari baaton me aisi mithaas hai ki usme khojaane ko dil karta hai.......tum jab chalti ho toh duniya ruk jaati he....tum jab hasti ho toh apne aap labon pe muskaan aajati he.....ab main aur tumharebare me kya kahoon... tumhe jisne banaya hai kya khoob banaya hai....bas itna nahin pata kiske liye banaya hai..............(these words directly echoe into geet's ears....)
her mouth open wide...........she cudnt believe wat he said...........she cnt move...she is standing stilllllll......
Maan goes near her and says............near her ears and whispers softly..........
Maan: kyun.......??...ab kya kehti ho geet.....karsakta hoon na main taareef woh bhi tumhari.......jeetgaya main geet.....jeetgaya....ab tumhe wahi karna hoga jo me kahoonga geet......
Geet is unable to speak..she feels a different maan speaking............
Geet:huuh...!
Maan: toh geet ab shart ko istemaal karne ka sahi waqt aagaya hai geet.........tumhe mer saath..mere saath aaj dance karna hai ..............sabke saamne..........
Geet: huhh..mmain...
Maan: haan geet..(drawing her more closer to him)..........tum apni baat se mukar nahin sakti geet..aaj toh tum saabit kar hi do ki tum geet bakshi ho..........
Geet: ji...(geet feels scared)........
Maan: ghabraane ki koi baat nahin he geet..main hoon na.......tumhe kuch nahin hoga......aur haan ek aur baat...(he moves towards her hair)........tum khule baalo me zyada achchi lagti ho....(saying dat he opens geets's hair...)
Maan moves to the dance floor taking geet's hand wid him...........geet is shocked by dis gesture of maan.........maan pulls geet to d dance floor.........he holds geet by the waist and pulls her towards him..geet and maan look into each odr.....too deep........into each odr's eyes........for maan as if the entire world has stopped......d music begins....
d song played in d bg is..........
Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai

Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saa Se
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai
Aai Aise Raat Hai Jo
Bohot Khushnaseeb Hai
Chahe Jise Door Se Duniya
Woh Mere Kareeb Hai
Kitna Kuch Kehna Hai
Phir Bhi Hai Dil Mein
Saawal Hai Kahin
Sapno Mein Jo Roz Kaha Hai
Woh Phir Se Kahun Ya Nahi


Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai

Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saa Se
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai

Tere Saath Saath aisa
Koi Noor Aaya Hai
Chand Teri Roshni Ka
Halka Sa Ek Saaya Hai
Teri Nazaron Ne Dil Ka Kiya Jo Hasar
Asar Yeh Hua

Abb Inmein Hi Doob Ke Ho Jau Paar
Yehi Hai Dua

Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai

Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saan Se
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai
Geet and maan have a dance of their lifetime............maan wid a big smile on his face gets lost into the pretty eyes of geet........geet is cimfused at maan's behaviour....she dsnt knw y is he behaving lyk dis.........aftr d dance is over a strange kind of silence prevails between the two.......they look at each odr as if no one else is arnd........maan still keeps geet very near to him.....he raises his hand to setle the strands of hair wich r falling over geet's face........geet is still looking wid confused expressions st maan........maan tkes his hand and removes the hair from her face ..............geet realises dat wat is hapng is wrng...romeves maan's hand from arnd her waist and moves apart from him...maan alone on the dance floor is confused at geet's behaviour.........he looks at geet............geet cnt look up.....she turns on d odr side to avoid maan..she feels extremely nervous..........as to wat hapnd shus nt have hpnd.............everyone claps and dat brings back maan back to reality.......
Geet leaves frome dere....seeing geet worried maan goes behind geet to explain her......to talk to her.........
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

a super duper update,

now whats in store for us in the second part of the party........
will be eagerly waiting for it...........
plzzz update soon....
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic!!!!

cant wait to read morE!!!!

update soON!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mindblowingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg update.
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee maneet scenes.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey reading ur fan fic i must say it is very good. keep it up buddy....
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update...lolz he was mesmerized...thanks for the update
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Posted: 15 years ago

indeed a lovely and romantic update tht needs special appreciation..............

simply adorable and fascinating......
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow yaar,, amazin...
maan to chhaa gya.... hehee
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE👏👏👏👏 I AM HAPPY ABOUT THE PARTY I WAS WAITING FOR THIS PART FROM PAST 2 UPDATES AND IT ACTUALLY REACHED BY EXPECTATIONS😊 I LIKED THE WAY MAAN PRAISED ABT GEET IN HER EARS👏...

HOPE GEET SOON FALLS FOR MAAN....

LOVE YOU,
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow...the party scenes were magical!

The first was hilarious...Geet will never change! 😉 😆
But then, that's what made Maan fall so deep in the first place!

Maan's tareef *swoon* 😍
The dance was beautiful...love the song 😃

So is Geet finally beginning to develop feelings yet?

Please continue asap...BTW will there be an after-party or not? Or will you just skip to the next morning?

Thanks for the great updates and P.M. ⭐️



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