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Posted: 15 years ago
wow thats just awesome
Thats so hilarious
The Phone conversation is ...................sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
These lines os Maan are just so funny
gadha...ullu da pattha......kuch nahin hoga tujhse...kabhi kabhi geet tere bare me sahi kehti he..........ek ladki ko phone karke baat nahin karsakta..tu toh aise ghabrahahe jaise ki jung ladne jarrahahe...aur main geet se kyun darraha hoon.woh he kaun.....sherni.......huhh...agar woh sherni he toh main sava sher..........c'mon maan call her...aur baat kar...........
sach me geet se baat karna kisi jung se kum nahin he..........Bhagwan usse bachaye jo usse future main blank calls dega..........
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls sontinue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
maan got told by geet agen lol
great update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: revav

terrific sequence.........hilarious...........😆


you have got amazing writing skills and brilliant imagination..........

couldnt stop laughing........thoroughly enjoyed..........i simply loved the gajini line,mumbai samundar mein visarjan line...........😃

i must say u r a gifted writer..........fabulous dialogues😆😆😆

so in all spectacular, marvellous, awesome,stupendous,lovely,paisa vasool, entertaining, enjoyable, etc...........running out of words...............

hats off to u👏


waiting for the party scene😉😉😉

plzzzzzzzzzz update soon...........😊

love u and ur FF⭐️


reva😲



thanks.......a lotttttt...........love u too......... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
ROFL! Awesome update! Loved it! Love Geet and her gaaliyon ka bhandar....bechara Maan......lolz......do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update...waiting for the party plzzzzzzz do update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi bada maza aaya wow Maan aur Geet kitna ladte hai ek doosre ke sath wow cant wait for party pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 18-The Party Sequence...
Geet gets ready for the party and gets ready to go wid maan...she wears a nyc chiffon sari wid a beautiful pearl beaded sleeveless blouse...wears big diamond studded earrings..wid a diamond bracelet in her hand...ties her hair into a neat bun...looks absolutely gorgeous...
Geet is waiting for maan to cum...its already 8...maan arrives to geet's place at sharp 8 wearing a dashing black suit...maan calls geet...
Geet: hello...
Maan: haan geet...neeche aao...main tumhara neeche wait karraha hoon...
Geet: ji sir aarahi hoon...
Geet tkes lil tym to cum as she is choosing her stilletoes to wear...maan is waitng outside standing near d car door...waiting for geet...maan gets lil impatient...
Maan: kisine sahi kaha he...ladkiyan kabhi bhi tym pe taiyyar nahin hosakti he...aur yeh geet...yeh geet kahan rehgayi...
Maan starts walking to and fro...wen he hears footsteps of geet cumin..he stops walking...he hears d sound of her footsteps...d cold air of the night blowing is hair away...he feels slightly different at that moment...he turns towards d side where he cn hear d noise...he looks frm down...he sees d grl wearing beautiful white crystal studded stilletoes...he slowly makes his eyes look up...he sees a beautiful gorgeous looking girl walking settling her sari...maan keeps on looking at d grl until he realises dat it none odr dan geet who is looking so beautiful...so prettier than ever,,,,he keepson looking at her...geet who is walking down by the lane of her house,maan is jus adoring her beauty
(mahii plays in d bg)...maan cnt believe its actually geet...he just admires her...d sweet cold breeze flowing makes maan feel he is in a different world..he feels sumthng special in his heart...a feeling wich he has never experienced before...on seeing geet...he feels d feeling again...geet cums and stands in frnt of maan smiling tenderly...maan is still staring at her...for him d world has stopped dere and time does not will to move ahead.he jus admires geet under d reflection of d moon and twinkling stars...geet is looking at maan and talking to him...
Geet: sir...sir...
Maan is still looking at her...he accidently says...
Maan: beautiful...!!!...
Geet: ji sir...???
Maan still lost says...
Maan: kya yeh tum sach me ho geet...??
Geet: haan sir aur kaun ho sakti hoon...
Maan: wow...!!
Geet: sir...aap theek toh hai na?
Maan: nahin...
Geet: haannn???
Maan soon realises dat its actually geet who is standing in frnt of him...he cums bk to reality...
Geet:(murmurs)...mujhe toh lagta tha ki inka dimag me kuch problem he...aaj yakeen hogaya...
Maan: uuppp...haan geet...chalo...chaltein he...
Maan opens d door for geet...she sits in d car...maan too sits and gves geet a slight look...geet is busy looking into d mirror and settling her look...she realises dat maan has nt yet started driving...she says...
Geet: sir...dekh kya rahe he?...jaana nahin he kya?...yah phir party yehi pe manane ka iraada hai...??
Maan:upp...hmm...chalo...
Maan starts driving d car...Geet on d odr hand feels bored again in maan's car...she humms...
Geet: hmmm...hmmm..hmmm
Maan: geet...gaana gaana band karo...
Geet: sir main gaana nahin garahi hoon...main sirf gungunarahi hoon...aur waise bhi aapke gari gaana kaun ga sakta hai kyunki aapko toh gaana pasand nahin he...he na sir...??
Maan: toh gungunana band karo..
Geet again starts singin...to actually irritate maan...
Maan: geet...geet...
Geet: kya hua sir?
Maan: gaana gaana band karo...plz...main drive nahin karsakta...
Geet: uff ho sir...isse driving ka kya lena dena...iska matlab aapka driving pe dhyan nahin he...very bad sir...
Maan: shut up geet...dimag kharap mat karo...
Geet(murmurs)...: karne ki zaroorat he kya...??
Maan: kya...?...kya kaha tumne...
Geet: uppp..kuch nahin sir...aap gari chalaiyye na...
Maan stops d car in a traffic signal...geet i squietly sitting...wen d dupatta of her sari falls over car's gear...maan who is waiting for the traffic signal to open notices dat geet's pallu has fallen over his gear...maan sees dat geet is looking on d odr side of the window...he slowly picks up geet's pallu and takes it in his hand...he gves a slight smile...wen he does dat the signal turns green...he takes d dupatta in his hand only, puts it on d gear and starts driving...smiling slightly...they finally reach d party...geet and maan get down frm d car...they walk together to enter d party...
they walk down wen d person who is welcoming d guest tells them...
Person: oh hello mr.khurana..and hello maam...i must say mr.maan aapki fiancee toh sach me bohot hi pretty he...
They both look at each odr in shock...
Maan gets angry...
Maan: kyaa.??...kya kaha aapne?
Person...: sir kuch galat kaha kya?
Maan: yeh meri fiancee nahin he...
Person: oh toh biwi he...?
geet unable to take all dis nonsense intervenes...
Geet: oye khote da puttar...chup hoja varna main na tujhe abhi poori Punjab ki ser karadungi haan...
Maan feels embarassed...
Maan:geet...chup raho...main baat karraha hoon na...tumhe beech me bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin he...
Geet: haan..haan dekhrahi hoon me...kitni kamaal baat karrahe he aap...dekhiye main aise situation ko handle karsakti hoon...
Maan: situation ko handle nahin...tum situation ko aur bigad dogi...
Geet: huhh...
Maan: dekhiye yeh meri personal assisstant he...ms..geet bakshi...aur kuch nahin please...
Person..: oh...!!!...im extremely sorry...mujhe maaf kardijiye sir sir...maam...
Geet : dekha...aisa kuch nahin he..bolne s epehle zara soch liya karna agli baar samjha...??
Maan: geet...tum bolne se pehle jab sochti nahin ho toh yeh bechara toh insaan he..galti hogayi usse...
Geet: aapke kehne ka matlab he ki main insaan nahin hoon...???
Maan; agar tumhe yehi samajhna he toh samajhlo...
Geet: huhh...aap...na...
Maan: shut up geet...ab andar chalo...chalo...
They both proceed towards the party...
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
geet make me laugh so much
cant wait to read da nxt part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update👏👏👏 but i was little disappointed because i was waiting for the party romance from past 2-3 updates😭😭😭...can you plzzzzz update soon.

Love you,
Vinithaa


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

nice update👏👏👏 but i was little disappointed because i was waiting for the party romance from past 2-3 updates😭😭😭...can you plzzzzz update soon.

Love you,
Vinithaa




working on dat dear.updating soon............

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