Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Hi dear,

Thanks for pm This was amazing...love the party scene pls update soon can't to imagine what will happen to next????????????????

pls update soon n do pm

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devisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

Part 20-The Party Sequence contd........

Geet runs away from dere and cums to the hotel lobby....she stands near the window of the lobby........she is extremely nervous and confused as to wat happend inside....maan follows her frantically........he finds dat geet is in the lobby.........standing.........he goes near to geet......he puts his hand on her shoulder...........geet who has slight tears in her eyes, looks back to see dat maan is dere...she sees him and immediately turns bk...removes her tears and feels scared to face maan...she says in her mind........

Geet: zaroor sir ko bura laga hoga kyunki main party se aise aagayi....meri galti he mujhe aise party me se aana nahin chahiye tha.......

Maan: geet.......tum theek toh ho na?

Geet: hhhhaaan sir...main theek hoon...mujhe kya hoga sir........

Maan: toh phir tum wahan se aise kyun chali aayi...??.......

Geet: woh toh sir.......woh mujhe bahar aana tha...mujhe thodi si ghutan mehsus horahi thi......

Maan: meri waje se?...

Geet: sir...kaisi baatein karrahe he aap?...aapke waje se kyun?

Maan: kyunki jo maine kia woh mujhe nahin karna chahiye tha...maine thodi si hadd paar kardi na?

Geet: nahin sir...aisi baat nahin he sir.....kyun aap aise sochrahe he....kya main sirf aapko lekar hi pareshan hoti hoon.......??...sach me koi baat nahin he sir......main theek hoon......

Maan: achcha..toh yehi baat tum mujhe dekhkar kehsakti ho...meri shakal itni bhi buri nahin he......

Geet: nahin sir main aapko nahin dekhsakti.......

Maan: kyun......??....kya meri shakal sach me buri he kya?

Geet: nahin sir aisi baat nahin he........galti meri he na toh me aapko kaise face karsakti hoon.....

Maan: galti...tumhari?....kis galti ki baat karrahi ho tum?....

(in his mind).....galti toh mujhse hui he..........mujhe uske saath dance karne se pehle ek baar usse poochlena chahiye tha....aur maine uske saath dance ke waqt kuch zyada hi kardiya...shayad mujhse kehne me usse problem horahi hogi........par mujhse galti hui he aur mujhe usse mafi mangni chahiye...

Dekho geet.......

Geet: sir please...mujhe bolne dijiye.........galti meri he...mujhe aise party chodke nahin aana chahiye tha...woh bhi sabke saamne......aapke clients kya sochrahe honge mere baare me.......ki main kaisi ladki hoon........

Maan: geet..aisi baat nahin he........tumse ko galti nahin hui he....galti toh mujhse hui he...aur please geet mere taraf dekhkar baat karo ...tumhari koi galti nahin he toh tumhe muh chupane ki koi zaroorat nahin he..........

Maan turns geet's face towards him....she is looking down......he turns her face up wid his fingers.....he notices remains of tears in geet's eyes........he realises dat he has done a mistake by dancing wid her widout her consent............he gets startled to see her tears trying to cum out from her eyes.he tkes out his handkercheif and gves it to geet........

Maan: yeh lo geet.......aapne aansoon pochlo.........tumhare chehre pe aansoon achche nahin lagte he........aur rone ki koi baat nahin he............

Geet takes d hanky and removes her tears.......she returns d hanky bk to him.........

Geet: thank u sir.......

Maan: aur geet please vapas rona shuru mat kardena........galti meri thi...maafi toh mujhe maangni chahiye....

Geet: sir aapne kya kiya?

Maan: mujhe tumse poochkar dance karvana chahiye tha.....dance ke waqt maine kuch zyada hi...u knw..shart ke liye maine tumse tumhari marzi bhi nahin poochi aur maine tumhe zabardasti dance karvaliya.....boss ka haq samajhke..tumhe kitna bura laga hoga........yeh bhi nahin samjha ki tum ek ladki ho aur ek ladki ke saath dance karne se pehle usse poocha jaata hai........aur toh aur maine tumhari hairstyle bhi kharap kardiya...

Geet: huh!...sir mujhe dance ka sach me bura nahin laga.......aapki koi galti nahin he sir...galti meri he sir.....mujhe aise sabke saamne party chodke nahin aana chahiye tha.toh galti meri he.aapki nahin......

Maan: Main kehraha hoon na geet...galti meri he..tumhari nahin........

Geet: nahin sir galti meri he...aapki nahin............

Maan: geet galti meri.......... meri he....

Geet: arey aap kabhi meri koi hi baat nahin mante....maine kahan na galti meri he....

Maan: geet main tumhara boss hoon...zindagi me pehli baar main maafi mangraha hoon.....aur tum ho ki.......

Geet: arey sir main bhi toh aapse pehli baar maafi mangrahi hoon na......sir meri galti he...

Maan: geet main janta hoon ki tumhe apni manmani karne ka shauk he par iss baar main apni manvaunga.....galti meri hai geet..........

Geet: arey ajeeb aadmi he aap..........meri baat hi nahin sunrahe he...........main kehrahi hoon na......galti meri he.........

Maan: galti meri he........geet

Geet: haha....achcha joke tha........par issbar meri......

Maan: meri he...

Geet: meri he....

Maan: meri galti he..........

Geet: meri galti he.........

Maan: meri he...

Geet: meri he....

While bickering they realise that their faces are quite near and they both raise their fingers at each odr........

looking at each odrs eyes....aftr their bickering is over a silence prevails..........suddenly geet starts laughing at dis situation........maan seeing dat too start laughing.........maan for the frst tym laughs his heart out.......they both keep on laughng until they calm down a bit...........maan for sumtym looks at geet laughng........aftr calming down.......

Maan: ufff......hum kitne stupid he....dono apni galtiyan manvane ke liye ladrahe he.pehle ek dusre ki galti par ladte the..

Geet: sir sach me.....mujhe toh laga tha ki main sapna dekhrahi hoon..........

Maan: kyun?

Geet: kyunki sir ...aap...the maan singh khurana pehli baar maafi mangrahe he..........hahahaa.......

Maan: geet....tum kabhi nahin sudhrogi...

Geet: sir ek baat na aap jaan lijiye ki agar me sudhargayi na toh aap na purani geet ko bohot miss karenge........

Maan: oh please...main kyun miss karunga tumhe.........

Geet: yakeen maniye sir.........aisa din toh zaroora ayega jab aap sach me thoda sa miss karenge.......

These words echoe into maan's ears.......he feels lil awkward as to thinking dat one day he might miss geet..........he switches d topic....

Maan: geet...hum kafi der se yahan pe khade he....andar chalte he....abhi tak party khatam nahin hui he....

Geet: achcha theek he...par sir ek baat kahoon...

Maan: ab kya?

Geet: aap dance bohot achcha karte he.....

Maan: thank u geet.......ab chalein.......

Geet: ur welcome sir............chaliye...........

geet and maan proceed towards the party..............go inside the party hall......!

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 14 years ago

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Soni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Hi dear, I read ur ff's from begining 😳 and I just love it 😍 keep continue 😊

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

great update

geet and maan

are to funny

both blaming them selfs

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

such a cute scene...i hope there's more party sequence!!!!! Loved it...thanks!!!

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Anjum

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

hey nice one keep it up good going update soon

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Jennifer

@jennifer1993

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

awsomeee please upload next part loved it

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lovelycutietedy

@lovelycutietedy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

wow that was a cute fight...............
plz pm me your next parts

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devisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

Part 21-The Party Sequence contd.......

Geet and maan enter the party......maan and geet go and stand in the corner........maan tries to engage into a conversation with geet........

Maan: achcha geet.......

Geet is busy seeing aditya and avantika dancing...she is enjoying them dancing....with so much in love..........she dsnt listen to maan...maan says again...

Maan: achcha geet suno........

Geet: ek minute sir.........dekhne dijiye na mujhko........

Maan: ab kya dekhrahi ho tum?

Geet: sir woh dekhiye........aditya sir aur avantika maam...kitne achche lagte he na saath me.........?.....

Maan: haan....

Geet: sir...actually jin logo me pyar hota he na woh log hamesha saath me achche lagte he...........

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan sir.........jab pehli baar maine aditya sir ko dekha tha na...tab hi mujhe samjh me aagaya tha ki yeh avantika maam ko like karte he aur unke liye perfect...bas geet laggayi mission aditya-avantika milaap me............sir kitne cute lagte he na dono........sir pyar cheez he hi aisi...

Maan: tum pyar me yakeen karti ho?

Geet: ofcourse sir.pyar me hi nahin....pyar se judi har cheez se mujhe pyar he...........pehla confession...pehli baarish..pehli date..........pehla dance....pehla gift....sab kuch........ab koi bevaquf hi hoga jisse pyar jaise unique feeling se pyaar na ho...

Maan: hmmmmmmm......

Geet: (looks at maan)....ek minute....ek minute.....mujhe pata hai........let me guess......aapko pyar me yakeen nahin he............???.....pyar se pyar nahin he........?

Maan: kisne kaha?

Geet: aapki shakal ne.....saaf likha he usspar.....koi bhi padhke bata dega.......

Maan: wat rubbish?...aisi koi baat nahin he...

Geet: achcha.......aap na duniya bhar ko bevaquf bana sakte he iss baat se.........lekin mujhe nahin........sir aap jaisa khadus, rukha, gusse se bhar hua insaan kaise pyar se pyar karsakta hai......its impossible..........

Maan gets slightly angry on hearing dis...makes a groany face.....

Maan: Yeh kya bakwaas karrahi ho tum geet.....?...yeh kya bakwaas lekar bethgayi tum?

Geet: haan haan...aapke liye toh pyar bakwaas hoga hi na.........

Maan (looks at geet closely): haan..ur ryt.....mujhe nafrat he pyar jaise cheez se.......mere dil me pyar jaise bakwaas cheez ke liye koi jagah nahin he........

Geet: toh phir tab aap kya karenge jab aapko pyar hoga....

Dese words echoe into maan's ears........he felt sumthng special.......

Maan: please geet....... mujhe pyar kabhi nahin hoga..............

Geet: achcha...itna confidence............??...dekhiyega sir..........aapko na sabse pehle pyar hoga..........(echoes again to his ears)............kyunki jo log pyar se nafrat karte he...wahi sabse pehle pyar me padte he........mujhe pata he....filmo me dekha he maine.............

Maan: uff ho filmy geet...........dekho agar tumhari philosophy class khatam hogayi ho toh dinner karle........?

Geet:haan karlenge sir..........par ek akhri baat..........shayad aap pyar me thoda sa vishwas karne lage........ek baat bataiyye sir..........kya aap Bhagwan me yakeen karte he?

Maan: yeh kaisa sawaal he...?ofcourse karta hoon geet.......

Geet: toh sir agar aap Bhagwan me yakeen karte he toh aap pyar pe bhi karne lagenge........Bhagwan ko hum me se kisine nahin dekha he.......lekin phir bhi hum yeh yakeen rakhte he na ki woh he...toh waise hi hum pyar ko bhi nahin dekhsakte toh hum pyar me yakeen kyun nahin karsakte..........?

Maan: pyar aur Bhagwan me kya connection hai?

Geet: sir pyar aur Bhagwan me hi toh gehra connection he......sir Bhagwan ne humein iss duniya me bheja he pyar karne ke liye.........isiliye toh seene me ek pyara sa dil bhi diya hai....ab dil toh dediya lekin uska sahi waqt me dhadakna hum pe choddiya hai.......aur yeh dhadakna tab hi shuru hoga jab aapko woh khaas insaan miljaega.......woh kehte he na....love is God.........bas.........main toh isiko maankar chalti hoon.................

Geet smiles.........Maan gves a slight smile..............

Maan: Geet..aapni yeh mills and boons wali kahani band karo ...aur chal dinner karlete he.........

Geet: sir rukiye na.......dinner to hota rahega..........unka dance khatam hogaya hai.....main unse baat karke aati hoon.....

Mana: arey geet.....geet.......suno.......

Geet walks away.............he sees geet talking to avantika and aditya............he sees her and talks wid himself...........

Maan: geet tum pyar me itna yakeen karti ho......tumhari baaton se toh lagta he ki tumhe pyar me yakeen he..itna ki tum usse Bhagwan maanti ho.........mujhe pyar me yakeen nahin he.......aur pata nahin aage hoga ki nahin..........par pata nahin kyun tumhari baatein sunkar tumpar yakeen karne ko dil karta he...........

Geet, Aditya and Avantika cum to Maan laughing.......

Avantika: arey maan...aap yahan par akele kyun khade he.........dinner nahin karna he kya..............chaliye...........

They all proceed for dinner..........

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While maan and geet are having dinner.........siddharth is looking at geet constantly.........while geet is having food.........she finds d food a lil spicy....maan rushes to help her...gves her water.................

Maan: tum theek toh ho na geet?

Geet: haan sir...main theek hoon...........kaisa khana hai yeh.....kisime namak zyada toh mirchi kum...kisime porri ki poori chini ki bori daal di ho aur kisime karele jaisa swaad.......

Maan: geet yeh continental food he........yeh khana aisa hi hota hai...

Geet: aap khaiyye aisa jungle wala khana...........asli khana toh punjab ka hota hai......wah wah...!

Maan: toh agli baar me inse kahunga ki party ek dhabe me rakhe...........

Geet: huh!...

On d odr side siddharth who is keeping a close watch on geet instructs d waiter to intoxicate geet's drink wid alcohol..........d waiter goes to geet and offers her d soft drink........geet takes it and drinks it................maan who has gne to freshen up cums bk and says......

Maan: chalo geet...chalte he.........

by the tym he cums its too late.....geet is highly drunk and sees her dancing on d dance floor intoxicated........he sees siddharth taking advantage of the oppurtunity and moving towards her...he is abt to reach wen maan who is shocked to see geet's such behaviour moves to save geet at d nick of tym..............

Maan: ji....kya hua?....aap geet ke paas kya krrahe he?

Siddharth:upp...nthng............

Maan: gud........achcha hoga ki aap usse door rahein...........

Siddharth:im sorry.......

Maan: better be.........!!

Maan turns toward geet.........he gets extremely angry and pulss geet towards him on his side so dat she cn face him closely.............geet on seeing maan gves a big smile.........

Geet (drunk)...:arey sir..........aap??........chaliye sir hum dance karte he.........

Maan notices dat geet is drunk............he is shocked........

Maan: yeh kya geet ..........tumne pi rakhi he.......?....

Geet: nahin sir....arey sir yeh sab chodiye na...........chaliye na humlog dance karte he.......aap toh kitna achcha dance karte he...........toh chaliye naaa...... plzzzzzzzzz..............

Maan(in his mind)...:isse pehle ki yeh yahan pe tamasha khada kare mujhe usse yahan se lejaana chahiye.........

chalo geet...yahan tamasha khada mat karo...........chalo ghar chalte he..........

Geet: nahin.....main nahin jaungi......main enjoy karrahi hoon....khush hoon........aapko meri khushi se kya problem he khadus khurana?............

Maan: khadus......??...yeh sab chod maan...isse le chal yahan se..........geet jitni gaali deni he de dena....abhi yahan se chalo..........

Geet: par kyuuuuuuuunnn??

Maan: kyunki ur drunk geet...tumne pi rakhi he............

Geet: nahin sir...maine toh sirf soft drink pi thi ...aur kuch nahin...kasam se sir..............

Maan: geet....ab yahan se chalo ...varna.......

Geet: varna kya?...varna kya haan??.....suli par ulta latkadenge..........??

Maan: nahin varna main tumhe yahan se uthake leke jaunga......please geet chalo.............

Geet: theek he sir .....theek he........aap toh mere boss he...aur main aapki employee........toh mera farz hai ki main aapki baat maanoon........yes sir...!!!...

Geet feels drowsy..........a lil unwell....

Maan: dekho geet...tumhari tabiat theek nahin lagrahi he.....chalo yahan se.......

At dat moment avantika and aditya cum dere.........Maan tells them dat she is drunk.....they offer him to help her..............they somehow togedr bring geet near d car............maan makes geet sit in d car...........geet is constantly talking nonsense and singing songs......maan sits in the car and tells avantika dat he will inform them 1nce both of them r home..........maan leaves frm dere.................

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

Wow...this is fabulous....Siddharth is such an ass yaar....
Luckily our Munda Maan saved our Hoshiarpur Express in time...
I hope he brings her to her house but finds it locked and then just brings her to his own house...That'll be cool...Anyways,thanks a lot for the update....am really excited to read the next update..

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