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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooooooooooooooow thats lovely
OMG I laughed so much reading this part
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The way Maan and Geet talk to themselves is so hilarious
OMG Maan complimented Geet
OMG how much he struggled to compliment her
Thats so funny when Maan said that he dose'nt know how to compliment
OMG ur amazing.The way u write is superb
Love U dear for ur lovely FF
waiting for the coming part
pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love this so much! Love how he's practicing to tell her she looks beautiful...so chweet!! And the bracelet scene!!! Both are too funny...can't wait for the party scene!! Well done...you're a superb writer!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 16


Geet cums out of maan's cabin...she is highly tensed as she is gng out wid maan alone to the party...........enters her cabin.......



Geet: uff kya kismat payi he maine....???..aajkal mujhe gadho ke saath party me jana parrahahe...



Neha cums in to geet's cabin..........



Neha: kya hua geet...??...itni tensed kyun he tu....??



Geet: kuch nahin yaar....



Neha: kuch toh hua he yaar.........tera chehre pe likha hai.....



Geet: achcha....uff yeh sab uss khadus khurana ke waje se hua he....



Neha: kyun...??...ab kya hua...??



Geet: arey yaar mujhe party me jana he......



Neha: haan toh isme kya problem he...??



Geet: problem yeh he ki mujhe uss khadus karele ke saath jana he..............



Neha: kyaaa.???unhone tujhe party ke liye invite kiya aur tu jaane se ghabrarahihe......iss mauke ke liye toh im sure kitni ladkiyan taarasti hongi...kyunki kitne cute aue handsome he woh...i dnt thnk so he wil be bad for cmpany....arey mujhe koi unke saath jane ke liye kehta to me unke piche piche chalijati....



Geet: toh jaa na...kisne roka he.......



Neha: afsos aisa ho nahin sakta kyunki meri aisi kismat kahan...uss handsome khurana ke saath jaane ka mauka tujhe mila he aur tu ...tu bhi na geet...sach me pagal he..........



Geet: uff...tu nahin janti unhe.........shakal se jitne bhole lagte he utne he nahin..........



Neha: plz geet woh bohot hi cute aur handsome lagte he.kaash teri jagah main hoti toh main unki galiyan bhi haske sunleti..........


Geet: aahahaha...bari aayi unki galiyan sunne wali............dekh tu mere side me he.unki side lene ki bilkul koshish mat karna varna main tujhe..........

Neha: dekh geet tu jitna isko ek issue banrahi he utni bari baat yeh he nahin...kya problem unke saath jane me yaar..boss he tere..sher nahin jo tujhe khajayenge..........


Geet: haan tu bari aayi unki vakalati karne...........sher nahin he woh...arey woh toh rakshas he rakshas........duniya me unke jaisa koi paida nahin hua hoga im sure..............iss duniya me woh ek hi he....maan singh khurana.............


Maan all dis while who has cum to speak to geet listens to wat geet said abt him.....he gets slightly angry and makes a graony face......


Geet: aur main tujhe kya bataun meri life ki kitni bari tragedy he yeh maan khadus khurana


Maan interrupts........


Maan: agar meri bare me gossiping session khatam hogayi ho toh kya main tumse do mintue ke liye baat karsakta hoon ms geet bakshi.........

While maan is talking neha is constantly staring at him.....maan talks to neha after noticing dis.........


Maan: ms.neha....ms..neha...hello....???


Neha: haan..haan.....ji sir................


Maan: agar aapka mujhe ghoorke dekhna band hogaya ho toh aap aapne kaam me lautne ka kasht kijiye plz..........

Neha: Upp ...ji sir.........main jarahi hoon.........


Neha leaves from dere..and geet luks at maan and makes a groany face and says in her mind..........


Geet: ajeeb aadmi...chain se do saheliyon ko do baatein bhi nahin karne dete he......besharm insaan kahinke..chup chup ke ladkiyon ki baatein sunrahe the..........mujhe lagta hai zaroor party ko lekar kuch sunane aaye he..........


Maan: geet........geet.........


Geet: ji sir............boliye.....boliye na aaphi ka toh office he.aap bethne ke liye bolenge toh main bethjaungi.........khade hone ke liye kahenge toh khadi hojaungi.........mujhe pata hai aap yahan aapna woh compliment jo aapne mujhe subha diya tha woh vapas lene aaye he na....mujhe paat hai.......aap toh aise hi he......aapko laga hoga ki aapne galat ladki ko compliment dediya hoga...........aur woh..........


Maan interrupts........


Maan: geet......shut up..............freeze ok.......chup raho aur meri baat suno...............woh main poochne aaya tha ki aaj tumhara mood baki dino se itna kharap kyun he..........ghar pe kuch hua he kya yah phir office me kisine kuch kaha yah phir pair me vapas dard horaha he........??...haan geet........??


Geet does not answer.....


Maan: geet......statue bankar kya khadi ho.........woh karo na jo tum sabse achcha karti ho........bolne ka....muh kholo aur bolo.....kya hua geet........???


Geet: arey aapne hi toh kaha tha chup rehne ke liye toh me chup hoon............ek employee ka farz hota hai na ki woh apni boss ki har baat maane..toh main wahi karrahi hoon sir...varna aap phir se bhadakjayenge aur mujhe aur char baatein sunane lagjayenge.........


Maan: uff ho geet...........logo ko bolne ka mauka toh diya karo....khud hi aapna bolejarahi ho.........maine isiliye poocha he kyunki agar tum aise mood ko lekar kaam karogi toh saare kaam galat karogi.........isilye mujhelaga ki ...............main...u know.....aise mood me party bhi kaise jaogi.......


Geet: sir...subha se mere saath sab galat horahahe........dhanno bimar..........pair me chot aur woh meri fav bracelet jisme bare bare aksharo me likha he geet.......woh bhi khogaya he sir.poora office dhunda toh kahin nahin mila..........meri toh kismat hi kharap he..........pata hai woh bracelet mere dil ke bohot hi kareeb hai.....bohot shauq se banvaya tha dm ne mere liye meri 18th bday par.........par ab woh pata nahin kahan he....sir aapne kahin dekha kya..........


lil drops of tear appears in geet's eyes while talkng........maan jus gets lost in her words of innocence......


Geet: sir aapne kahin dekha he kya.........?


Maan: nahin maine nahin dekha he.........


Geet: haan aap kaise dekhenge...aapka aapke kaam se dhyan hate toh aap kuch aur dekhe na.........


Maan: nahin geet.aisi baat nahin he..........


Maan feels slightly guilty of having d bracelet wid him...he says in his mind.....


Maan: oh...toh geet uss bracelet ko lekar pareshan he..........mujhe nahin pata thi ko woh bracelet geet ke liye itna mayne lagta he ki uske aankhon me aansoon aajayenge........par geet pata nahin kyun uss bracelet ko dekhkar mujhe aisa laga ki woh koi kadi he jo hum dono ko jodti he........kisi na kisi tarah kisi bandhan me............main yeh dekhna chahta hoon ki jab tak woh bracelet mere saath he tab tak kya hum aise hi jude rahenge.......yah phir yeh sirf mera bhram he.......man tumhe woh bracelet vapas zaroor karunga jab sahi waqt aayega.........lekin tab tak tumhare aansoon rokne ke liye main kuch karta hoon...............

Geet....aapne uss chote se bracelet ko bhooljao.dekho already paanch bajgaye he.ghar jao aur party ke liye taiyya hojao.main 8.00 baje aajaunga sharp..agar late hui toh me tumhe bilkul nahin bakshunga...........kyunki tum ladkiyan ktini jaldi taoyyar hojati ho yeh poori duniya janti he..........


Geet: huuuuhhhhh..kaise nirdayi insaan he aap............aap me dil naam ki koi cheezhe ki nahin.......???..dusro ke aansoon ki koi parwa he ki nahin..........khed me bhi kise umeed lagrahi hoon...aapse.....???..huhh...............


Maan in his mind......


Maan: yeh hui na geet bakshi wali baat...........mujhse jhagda karne ke bahane hi sahi tumne rona toh band kiya..........kyunki agar main tumhare aansoon pochne ke liye agey barta toh tumhe shayad achca nahin lagta.............


Maan while leaving says........


Maan: geet...tym pe taiyyar hojana..........late bilkul mat hona........


Geet: ji sir.............jaise aapka hukum mere aaka..........khadus...........


Maan hears dat and smiles and goes away rom the cabin............

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow nice update😊

so this bracelet decides the destiny of maneet wow😃
and loved the cov of the neha and geet😆
and geets nickname to maan😆😆
loved dear😳
waiting for the party 😆
its really nice👏👏👏
jappiz
sravs
Edited by sravani899 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyyyy nice update.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT👏👏👏👏 waiting to see what magic does bracelet does..😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...
chalo lets see where this bracelet leads maan and geet!....
waiting 4 the party!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol....jo hukum mere aaka...lolz...thanks for this wonderful wonderful wonderful update...please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Awesome dear
Loved it
Loved it when Geet said:
"aur main tujhe kya bataun meri life ki kitni bari tragedy he yeh maan khadus khurana".
and
"ji sir.............jaise aapka hukum mere aaka..........khadus..........."
Loved it when Maan said:
"agar meri bare me gossiping session khatam hogayi ho toh kya main tumse do mintue ke liye baat karsakta hoon ms geet bakshi.........."
and
"agar aapka mujhe ghoorke dekhna band hogaya ho toh aap aapne kaam me lautne ka kasht kijiye plz.........."
waiting for the next part
pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
LMAO! That was superb! Do continue soon.

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