MayUr OS....The magic in her voice...

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Hi guys!!!!! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Many of you wont be knowing me...I am Yashu...This is my first OS....so please dont throw things at me if you go to sleep while reading it...๐Ÿ˜†....
This is dedicated to all my friends...Eesha,Debo,Hinu,Dhanno,Samira di,Gunjan di,Rana,Rue,Debz di,Aysha,Lekha,Priti di,Swetha,Nikki di,Shivi,Sehr di,Sneh di,Vanshika,Rida,Dolly,Aastha,Hazra,Syiesha and Yash....long list ha...kya karu I dont want to leave out any one...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
so here it goes....
๐Ÿ˜ณ The Magic in her Voice ๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜Š....Mayank's POV....๐Ÿ˜Š
Today in class sir was giving L-O-N-G...unending lectures on God knows what topic...without thinking about hte poor students who had to almost stick tape on their eyelids in order to keep awake...or about the girls who were present in the class...but not present!!...not present as in they were busy texting each other on their mobiles...sir was looking exhausted...I felt as if he can fall on his desk any moment and doze off to sleep himself!!!....๐Ÿ˜†...But one person was paying attention...~SHE~...she penned down whatever sir said...I guess she understood what he said...(even sir was confused about what he said ๐Ÿ˜†)...she was looking gorgeous...the way she moved her hair to one side almost kills me...her looks...her animate way of talking...her smile...everything about her was sooooo unique...one in a million as they say...I loved her...She was mine....only mine...she was THE Nupur Bhushan...my love...(as I have mentioned many a times above ๐Ÿ˜†)...by now you might be thinking about a lovey-dovey love story...but there is a twist in this one...she did not LOVE me...she did not KNOW me even!!!....she was a exchange student from Calcutta....Ah!...I still remeber the day I saw her....sooo clearly...
*flashback*
Mayank walked into the college gate...it was a Sunday...he had come to college to meet his friends...then IT happened...he saw HER....she was reading something from the board and then she turned towards him and smiled!!!...she was looking beautiful in a white salwaar kameez...with her long...open hair flying in the air....
She started walking towards him...he closed his eyes...his heartbeat increased with her every gradual step...he waited and waited and waited...and...WAIT!!!!...she walked past him and went and hugged the girl standing behind mayank...mayank felt a different feeling...a one he had never felt before in his life...what was this feeling????....any guesses???...right...it was none other than love...mayank sharma ko 'LOVE' ho gaya tha....pehli nazar mein hi...uska pehla pehla pyaar!!!....๐Ÿ˜ณ....
*flashback ends*
Mayank was shaken out of his world of dreams by the bell...all the students ran out of the class...she was packing her books...and sir put his head on his desk and went to sleep!...(๐Ÿฅฑ)....๐Ÿ˜†.....
she went out...he too behind her...
๐Ÿ˜Š....Mayank's POV ends....๐Ÿ˜Š
Now it is evening and mayank is sitting at home...in his room...holding the pic of nupur which he had taken secretly while she was engrossed in reading a book in the library....
m-haiiii....bilkul pari lag rahi hai meri sweetu...๐Ÿ˜ณ...oops that's what I call her...pyaar se....๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ...
then suddenly his phone rang....
*khudaa janae kiii....mai fida hoon....*(his ringtone ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰)
(g=girl)
m-hello...
g-hello..can I talk to Samira??
mayank felt a known feeling shiver down his spine...he felt as if he was falling in love...once again...!!...he was sitting for a while.....speechless...
Meanwhile the girl checked the username of the number to which she was talking to to check if she was talking to her best friend samira or not...she got to know it was a wrong number...
g-oh!!...sorry sorry...wrong number...
m-he...
before he could clarify his doubts futher...she had hung up...mayank did not know why...but he started liking her...no...loving her!!!...he felt strange....
the rest of the night...mayank just tossed and turned in his bed and thought about that girl....it seemed as if he had forgotten that nupur even exists!!....
Next morning:
Mayank walked into the college...there was hardly anyone present on the campus as it was very early...he had come early as he was not being able to sleep...he was just loitering about the corridoors when he heard something...
he heard a voice coming from the staff room!!!...it was a girl...
g-KOI HAI????...pls mujhe yaha se nikalo...
mayank now seemed to understand that maybe that girl was trapped in there...and was asking for help....he went closer to the door...
m-KAUN HAI ANDAR?????
g-ye sab baad mein...abhi pls mujhe bachao...she seemed to be crying...
something suddenly clicked in his mind...
m-ye to...ye to kal wali ladki hai!!!!!!!!!!
he went and pushed open the door...and inside he saw a girl facing the other side and sob loudly...
m-tum...tum wohi ladki ho na jisse maine kal baat ki thi???
the girl just nodded yes...
m-suno...mujhe pata nahi tum is baat pe kaise react karo gi...tum gussa ho gi ya mujhe thappad marogi...but mai ek baat kehna chahta hoon...maine jab se tumhari awaaz suni hai...mai paagal ho gaya hoon... I LOVE YOU ....
the girl stopped crying...wiped her tears....and turned around....
Mayank was shocked!!!!!....it was none other than NUPUR!!!!
she was toooo happy to even be able to say anything...she could only say one thing...
n-I LOVE U TOO.....
she ran to mayank and then mayank caught her and they had their magical mayur air hug....
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Today Mayank and Nupur are the cutest and most romantic couple of the college...Mayank still loves her like he used to...but now nupur too loved her to the fullest also...they shared many memories together...
Till today mayank thinks about 1 thing...he could not figure out what had made him fall in love with nupur when he only heard her voice??...I guess the thing which made him fall in love instantly was...
....THE MAGIC IN HER VOICE.....๐Ÿ˜ณ
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So guys that was it...
pls hit the like tab and comment...
lots of love...
Yashu...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res!! me first!

**EDITED**

hey yashu!!! ๐Ÿค—
howz ya???
srry m commenting late but I cant help it.........I am becoming too aalsi these days! ๐Ÿคฃ
so wat a LOVELY OS!!!! โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ
All d pics got me emotional!!! I'm missing MayUr nd Nupsi!!!
๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
nyways srry for d chota comment but g2g right now!!!

Luv dhanno! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww yashu sab se pehle a bigggg jhapi to u๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— for writing such a lovely OS. It was truly brilliant i could imagine it all the while i was reading. The story line was so amazing and the dialouges soo cute. Loved how u described both characters and that part about the magic in her voice was just toooo adorable. I am sooo glad u wrote this ff dear brought a huge smile on my face. Thank u sooo much for the dedication yashu luv ya. U should continue writing ff/os ur so good at it hun. Brilliant work enjoyed it throughly and itnay achay os keh liye here's a gift for u:-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooyyyeee hooyyeee
wow yashu it was so sweet
and rocking.....
mindblowing......
fantastic....
awesome......
fabulous....
excellent.....
fantabulous.....
too goooddd
do write more
with lots and lots and lots of love



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mysterygirl_me

Aww yashu sab se pehle a bigggg jhapi to u๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— for writing such a lovely OS. It was truly brilliant i could imagine it all the while i was reading. The story line was so amazing and the dialouges soo cute. Loved how u described both characters and that part about the magic in her voice was just toooo adorable. I am sooo glad u wrote this ff dear brought a huge smile on my face. Thank u sooo much for the dedication yashu luv ya. U should continue writing ff/os ur so good at it hun. Brilliant work enjoyed it throughly and itnay achay os keh liye here's a gift for u:-

Rida!!!!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—....
thank u soooo much rida...ur comment...it really means a lot to me....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashu_mjht

Rida!!!!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—....

thank u soooo much rida...ur comment...it really means a lot to me....

Aww ur most welcome yashu it's my pleasure๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜› and aww that is such a cute picture thank you so adorable like u๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINKI

ooyyyeee hooyyeee

wow yashu it was so sweet
and rocking.....
mindblowing......
fantastic....
awesome......
fabulous....
excellent.....
fantabulous.....
too goooddd
do write more
with lots and lots and lots of love



Shivi!!!!!!
I was waiting for you....i am so happy u liked it....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashu_mjht

Shivi!!!!!!
I was waiting for you....i am so happy u liked it....

it was so nice
how can i dislike it
i toh love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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YASHUUUUUUUUUU.........๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—.............tht ws such a sweeeeeeeeeeeeet os lik u my sweetipie...really likd it....thnxx for d dedication n do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki028

YASHUUUUUUUUUU.........๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—.............tht ws such a sweeeeeeeeeeeeet os lik u my sweetipie...really likd it....thnxx for d dedication n do write more

nikki di!!!๐Ÿค— thank you soooo much for the comment...

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