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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good!!!! Superb!!! I <3 Mayank, Nupur and your style of writing!!!!


PS Need your FF... Enmeshed in Love ka thing... I'm not able to read it.. :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Journey from unknown to room mates [married room mates preciousely] friends and then Lover and at the end Husband Wife
Loved it Kanky
So sorry for commenting too late
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first of all- Congratulations on ur Os Gallery. The start was wonderful;)
I lovedd the Os- it was cute....
the way they agreed to the marriage, and then became friends and after....LOVERS!!!

I simply loved it, and I am sorry for replying so late, but my inbox was litereally overloaded, and I couldnt open and read all at once lol

but dunt forget to update Enmeshed i love...aite?

update this and that sooon...
Love, Meeno<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwwww Kanky that was sooooooo sweet honey! I really loved it, it was magical sigh!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww huny!! d 1st os jst left me so so mushy....😍...jst 2 gud!! 🤗muaaaaaah!!
do write some more gems soon.. i mean d os' of urs.. dey r nothing short of precious gems!!⭐️

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome os..!!!
really amaizng..!!!
just loved it..
superb..!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Sorry i'm late

Awesome Kanks, that was written beautifully, a cute one indeed!!
~Shweta
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Alright, guys. . I am a cynic, I don't believe in the ideas of love and marriage much however, you have no idea how much I love writing such stuff!! Cause, for a fact, I know that all this happens only in stories and umm.. here's one. On MayUr, obviously! 😆


Please leave your comments and hit the like tab. 😳



A MayUr One Shot ' Movielicious!

With the flick of her head, she tossed her long and brown hair back. The brunette looked at her reflection in the mirror and tucked a strand of hair behind here ear. She was getting ready for the prom night of her school.

The name was not NB, her elder sister, Gunjan had named her Nupur however, in her school at California, everybody knew her as NB. This abbreviation had a nice ring to it.

She smudged a lot of eyeliner on her extra small eyes and finally made way out after looking at herself in the mirror innumerable times.

She waited impatiently for her crush and technical best friend's car horn's honk. She climbed up and down the stairs five times, waiting. At last, the lad came. His name was Mayank Sharma, the hot property of South High, Canada.

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She ran down the staircase, looking extremely happy. She picked up her cell phone and made way out. She sat inside the car.

Mayank: Sorry, I'm late!

Nupur: You always are!

Mayank: Sorry! (Pouting)

Nupur: Move!

On the way, Nupur repeatedly looked at the fellow from the corner of her eye. He was clad in an Armani suit and his perfume was perfect, she dint know what brand it was though. "Can he look any better? I am never able to get enough of him!" she thought to herself and corrected the same, "The permanent cute dimples planted in his cheeks add up some more charm! So yes, he can look better! Ha!" she corrected her own conscience.

After fifteen minutes, they were in the school parking lot. They got out of the car. Mayank and Nupur complimented each other. They were each other's official prom partners after all.

Mayank offered her his hand and without any conscious thought, he held it firmly. She was to make a confession that day, confess to him the feelings she had had ever since second grade.

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The moment they entered the auditorium, they had a thousand eyes on them. Everybody looking at them in awe, they were THE couple around there however; nobody really knew they were not a couple in reality. When two popular students come together, they are always in news and that was exactly what they wanted.

Mayank called a spade a spade. He was blunt and truthful, he never lied about anything he felt and was always very open about his feelings. Nupur feared to lose him but had to confess that night, anyhow. She feared to be left heartbroken.

Nupur sat on a chair, sipping her cola when she saw Mayank kneeling down in front of her and offering her his hand, "Madame?" he asked in an utmost gentleman-like manner. She nodded and moved to the dance floor with him.

The song being played was "Beautiful Eyes" by Taylor Swift.

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Ten Years Later -

Nupur sat on her bed, with a pillow on her lap; biting an apple. She flicked through the channels on TV and found one to watch, a romantic comedy. She had tears in her eyes, she felt disturbed, and she felt like somebody punched a whole through her heart yet again.

You might have realized by now what must have happened that day after Nupur confessed. The guy plainly rejected as he did not want to her to misunderstand any further. Nonetheless, he did not part ways with her but her herself distant herself from him. So much that, he hadn't seen him since six years as he continued to live in Canada while she shifted to India post her father's death.

She heard a knock at the door. "Di, is it you?" she screamed. No one replied, she stood and went to open the door. As soon as she saw who it was, her mouth hung open and the apple dropped from her hand. It was Mayank. She pinched herself so as to make sure and freak, he actually was there!

Mayank: This is me!! You aren't dreaming. (Smirking)

Nupur: Uh oh, hi. (Picking the apple up)

Mayank: How's it going?

Nupur: Good! (Moving away)

Mayank: Yeah?

Nupur: Yes!

Mayank: Still single?

Nupur: Yeah, you? (Wiping a tear lurking out of her eye)

Mayank: Absolutely!

Nupur: Now that's weird!

Mayank: I found nobody in Canada, thought of finding one in India. Aakhir apna dekh toh apna hota hai. (Winking)

The girl looked at him in disbelief. Why was he there? Where was he all this while? What did he want and more such questions bombarded her head.

Nupur: I'm getting old now, like 28! No wonder, within a year or two. . I would get as old as the dust on my old textbooks! Let me know what exactly are you here for, or the grumpy old woman in me would come into being!

Mayank laughed and Nupur simply started at him. Mayank inched closer towards her and snaked his arms around his neck, he turned her around and planted a kiss on her neckline. She shivered.

Nupur: Have you lost it? (Whispering, unable to utter anything, any louder)

Mayank: Not exactly. (Plating another kiss on her earlobe)

He removed her rubber band, allowing her long brown hair to fly. He rested his head on her shoulder and a lone tear escaped his eye.

Nupur: What is it?

Mayank: I'm sorry and I love you!

Nupur: Is that all?

Mayank: Yes, since six years . . this is what I urged to tell you.

Nupur: I love you too.

Mayank: I know, got ya! (Winking)

Nupur: Jerk! I thought you were serious! (Sobbing)

Mayank: Of course, I was. (Pulling the strap of her tee down, leaving her shoulders bare.)

Nupur: You actually have lost it!

Mayank: Hmmm! (Kissing her bare shoulders)

Nupur: Out of nowhere, you come after six bloody years and . .

Mayank: Quiet! You haven't changed! Don't you dare utter a single word!

He made the girl shut up. He pulled her close, extremely close and placed his lips on hers.

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Nupur:

Whoa! What was THAT? I so desperately wanted this to happen. Every minute, every second of my life since past ten years! But don't you think it was a bit too weird? Anyway, I love surprises. Things that leave me astonished!

On a sunny afternoon, in front of my elder sister and her children, I was proposed by the hunk in the supermarket. I couldn't have imagined that in my wildest dreams.

Everything was absolutely movielicious! Like the ones that happen in movies!

Anyway, I married him. After one point five years, I gave birth to two angelic baby girls and we are living happily ever after!

PS: Yes, I got married before turning into a grumpy old woman!


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Love,

Kanky 😳

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Hey Kanky,

Loved the update again
I am actually tired of saying the same but can't help na
It was again diff in ur style
Mayank rejected her and after 10 years
wow ,i was sad when he rejected nupsi but next moment only i was so happy
he realised "Apna desh to apna hi hota hai" and with that he too loves her
Hurray 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
Write more
Luv,
Aruna
p.s.- Me first
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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