You are my theme for a dream(SaJan FF) Updt on p64 - Page 40

Originally posted by: sonali.19281

ok amy...two things I loved about this part..

one of course is the way you showed gunjan dwelling in her feelings.. where she did a reference to context of each phrase she uses for her partner.. very poignant and in keeping with her simplicity.. well done👍🏼

secondly.. the thing that I completely live by..and feel..in fact me and DIya discuss this quite often coz of her FF.. is the mentality of the middle class morality that you reflected in Sam's vision of Adhiraj's parents...exactly my sentiments.. esp the part where he voices his concern that his parents were disappointed that their upbringing was being questioned.. that freedom doesn't amount to immorality..in fact I equate freedom with responsibility..I know now why I could connect with Sam's family..coz they represent mine in some ways.. I can see Sam's point..I would without a doubt give up on such love that somehow comes with a doubt on my upbringing or that dares to threaten my parents self respect or their parenting..awesome points upheld...keep up the reality..

more than eagerly waiting for the day when sam pulls off a bauji wid theme for a dream on the proposal😍did I just steal your thunder..😆 I do come with a caution tag..

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Beautiful update Amy...too gud....Gunjan's So called "kidnapping" was too cute😳😳Sammy finally able to bring smile back to Gunji's lips....n the realization part was the best realization I ever read....it was magical...the way u related Gunji's words with the situations was wonderful....finally Gunji realized her feelings for Sam!!!!!Hope Sam too realize soon!!!! Then Adhiraj-Suhaani part was too nice, which depicts the mentality of most of the Indian family, infact traditional Indian family....n Sam's words as a brother n a son were appropriate....

Amy I think words fall short to describe you as a writer....Gosh!!!!! you are superb...this is one of my fav ffs n I m kinda addicted to this....do continue soon honey!!!!

love ya dear🤗

urs'

Aditi

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

hey sorry for d late comment!!!

the update was awesome.........

I loved how Sammy manofyed gunji!

and what was tht? Gunjji realized tht she likes...oops I mean loves sammy!!! wow!

cont soon dear!:)

--Adya!

Originally posted by: DiyaS

Really enjoyed this part, amy 👏 Gunjan's realisation was beautifully done ... the way she related every word she herself had said to how she felt about samrat and what he had done for her ... 😃

And like Sona, i loved the part about the parenting and the middle class mentality ... and how hurt Samrat was about his parents upbringing being questioned ... that really was so true to life and well written!
Am looking forward to the next part!

Originally posted by: aashizin

OMG amy what a superb update yar 👏👏👏amazing i have no words how to praise this update 👏 the way u described gun's feelings her first realization outstanding 👏👏👏 i really just love this update specially for gun's realization and sam's hidden love for her now its really beautiful to read how sam 's reaction will break her heart and her heartbreak will make him to realize his love for her gosh can't wait yar 👏 u rock honey really i am so proud to be part of ur superb FF👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -Sayani-

OMG...what an awesome Mind blowing Fantastic Update...
Samrat is so sweet..He did so much for Gunjan only to apologize...
thats so sweet of him...And the sea beach..and I loved it when he said he is Kidnapping her..LOL
I m soo happy That Gunjan has realized that She Loves Samrat..
Hope Samrat realize it soon..
Cant wait for SaJan Romance....
Awesome Update
Update Soon..

Originally posted by: ardhana

k frst sorry pichle kuch parts pe miene comment nahi kya

meina pura ff nahi pada tha

i am a mayur fan i like sajan but i love mayur so i generally dont read any sajan ffs as it is tough for me to relate with them

but i must say ur style of writing compelled me to read the ff from the beginning and i must say i am completely in love with it

just love the way you write i can actually relate to the characters and love the story

its so apt and magical

actually no words to describe

now coming to the update

gr8 gunjan has fiannly realized her feelings for sam but i hope like the show she doesnt have to go through too much heartbreaks before she can actually unite

hope sam realises it too soon

love gunjans character here

and also love sam-suhaani scenes love their bonding

on the whole wonderful update

nd thanks for the pm

do continue soon