You are my theme for a dream(SaJan FF) Updt on p64 - Page 39

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok amy...two things I loved about this part..

one of course is the way you showed gunjan dwelling in her feelings.. where she did a reference to context of each phrase she uses for her partner.. very poignant and in keeping with her simplicity.. well done👍🏼

secondly.. the thing that I completely live by..and feel..in fact me and DIya discuss this quite often coz of her FF.. is the mentality of the middle class morality that you reflected in Sam's vision of Adhiraj's parents...exactly my sentiments.. esp the part where he voices his concern that his parents were disappointed that their upbringing was being questioned.. that freedom doesn't amount to immorality..in fact I equate freedom with responsibility..I know now why I could connect with Sam's family..coz they represent mine in some ways.. I can see Sam's point..I would without a doubt give up on such love that somehow comes with a doubt on my upbringing or that dares to threaten my parents self respect or their parenting..awesome points upheld...keep up the reality..

more than eagerly waiting for the day when sam pulls off a bauji wid theme for a dream on the proposal😍did I just steal your thunder..😆 I do come with a caution tag..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update Amy...too gud....Gunjan's So called "kidnapping" was too cute😳😳Sammy finally able to bring smile back to Gunji's lips....n the realization part was the best realization I ever read....it was magical...the way u related Gunji's words with the situations was wonderful....finally Gunji realized her feelings for Sam!!!!!Hope Sam too realize soon!!!! Then Adhiraj-Suhaani part was too nice, which depicts the mentality of most of the Indian family, infact traditional Indian family....n Sam's words as a brother n a son were appropriate....

Amy I think words fall short to describe you as a writer....Gosh!!!!! you are superb...this is one of my fav ffs n I m kinda addicted to this....do continue soon honey!!!!

love ya dear🤗

urs'
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr



heyyy its k....it happens yaar
n yes v r nt able 2 c any mre of sam n suhaani in d serial...bt u knw wat...i liked ur sam n suhaani's bonding mre dan d ones present on mjht...



Hehe.. actually there was no proper sibling bonding between Sam-suhu in MJHT. i always wanted to see that.. maybe my wish to see that bonding made me write it here...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

heyyyyyy..
welll 1stly i am vryyyyy happpy 2 read ur update..
n i was evn a bit surprised..
cz dis tym i u updated soooon...welll thaanks 4 dat..
cmng 2 ur update..
as usual rockngggg..
i am happy dat thngs were sorted out btw sajan....
n dat 2 in a vryyy nycccc manner..
n finalyyyyyyyyyy gnjn realised dat shz in luvvvvv wid sam..bt i am waitng 4 sam 2..n i realy wsh dat he olso realises his feelings sooooooooon
nwz thnks 4 d pm
n
cont sooooooooon


Thnaks fr ur lovely comment, richa!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SM_317

superb update thnxx a lot 4 d pm...


thnks n ur welcome😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sorry for d late comment!!!

the update was awesome.........
I loved how Sammy manofyed gunji!
and what was tht? Gunjji realized tht she likes...oops I mean loves sammy!!! wow!
cont soon dear!:)

--Adya!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

hey.....can u plz pm me from next update onwards........


sure , will pm u...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soooooooo awesome i love it


thnks shafoo dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really enjoyed this part, amy 👏 Gunjan's realisation was beautifully done ... the way she related every word she herself had said to how she felt about samrat and what he had done for her ... 😃

And like Sona, i loved the part about the parenting and the middle class mentality ... and how hurt Samrat was about his parents upbringing being questioned ... that really was so true to life and well written!
Am looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zzd110693

loved it can you pm me next time


ok will pm u dear!

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