Stuck in my Heart - an AR FF(Part 1 -pg46) - Page 37

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

vini mini kamini itna acha update parkar meri aankho mein aansu aa gaye. KAMINE ARMAAN KI HIMMAT KAISE HUI MERI NAAZUK PHOOL JAISI RIDDHIMA KO CHORNE KI😡

i hate that khota 9 (even thou i know i why he left him)🤣

yaar vini i utterly and absoulutely loved the way, you described riddhima's feeling. it seriosuly touched my heart. very few writings touch my heart like that and urs is one of them. man it was so emotional (gosh so unlikely you🤣 )

and ab jaldi se part 1 update kar and VINI WHY I AM NOT IN THE PM LIST? 😆 before tere ff par meri ganga jamuna behne lage, shove my name somewhere in the pm list (top par bhi chalega)🤣 and update part 1. and u know na mein bhi morcha gang ki official member hu😆

sorry for the late comment 🤣

muahz for writing such a master piece

love

sani jiska offer you rejected🤣

🤣

Originally posted by: hunder

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i am 1st😉

Originally posted by: namita18

hey viniiiiiii

i know,this is time u r surely planning ti kill me for late comments..

but i m really sorryyyyyy, but main aajkal bahut lazy ho gai hun..and u know, thanks to my bad health, i m able to comment becoz i have taken an off from the office..so ab meri bakwaas khatam..

now let me tell u about the part..

👏

it was fabulous, amazing, wonderful etc.. i loved every bit of it..

lets start from the begining..

i like the way u have described armaan's character,, he is a darling..hard from outside and totally pure and soft from inside like a cocconut.. and totally dedicated to his family and loved ones..and that makes him lovable..

and the way ridhima is thinking abt him,its shows that, she love him to the core, but the cruel fate has seperated them, and now i m dying to know the reason of his departure..

and their love has given her the power to fight wid fears and thats y she was waiting for him for so long becoz her heart know that he will surely come to meet his love..

i like nikki also, she is sweet and caring friend, hope she can help her in getting back her love...

and the most special thing abt this part was flashback part..

i like everything abt that, from her anger to her tears wen she call him, i love armaan who is jealous and that leadt o confession.. thankgod u have make him confess so early, actually i m getting tired of waiting for confession in other ff's hehe

and the way, he confess was truly was so simple and lovable, wid so much purety and truth and without expecting a postive answer from her..

and i like their conversation in the restuarant becoz it is so realistic..

and hope ridzi will soon realize his love now in the flashback...

and u always increase my curiousty by precap..

i m eagerly waiting of their meeting in garden and wanted to know story by armaan;s oint of view...

so u better update soonn

hope my this biggg comment has compensated for its delay...

update soon

luv u

tk

Originally posted by: anjie22

Hey Vini,


Super part luved armaan's confession a lot...Waiting for the next part eagerly...Continue soon and thanx for the PM....

Originally posted by: ffkhan

Loved the part! Liking the concept. U r an awsum writer! Keep it up. Looking for the next chap.

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

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dii will edit soon!😳

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

*EDITED*

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy My Ginie 😃

Its a Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab Part.
I really loved it .
Especially Ridz talking to herself 😆
And i loved that Convo b/w AR .
It was sooooooooooooooooooo cute .
And My my Ridz is one hell of a Curious gurl .😆

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss

Originally posted by: kashrocks

heyy...vini..🤗🤗

awesome update.....!!

cont soon.....!!😛

Originally posted by: AR_LOVER

gr8 part

loved it

Originally posted by: sheel_dmgdiva

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Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

awwwwwwwwwww..... vini it was so good!

ridz feeling were so understandable.... u just took my heart away!!


i loved ur writing style yaar....please continue soon.... and sorry for late and short comment

Originally posted by: Prinnia

Edited*😛

heyyyyyy MASI🤗🤗 Hey Prinzyyyyyyy🤗🤗🤗

First let me give u some picec of mind😉.....ok??😆

WHY DIDN'T U START A FF BEFORE WHEN U WRITE AWESOME????😆 Hehe...thanks soo much for it..it really means loads... par yaar u know na i was nervous to post here ...m glad u loved it

Now about the part😳
It was (count count-how many words i said😆😆) i forgot counting..(Vini-d lazy soul said 🤣)...😆😆😆
AMAZING⭐️.....FAVOULAS⭐️....AWESOME⭐️..MINDBLOWING⭐️..SUPURB⭐️..FANTABULAS⭐️....DHASU⭐️...RAPCHIK⭐️....(aur yaad nahi aa raha😆) OMG!! That's soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet... m lyk speechless ... 😃 and koi baat nae yaad nae aaye..baad ke liye bhi toh bachana chahiye na 😉😆😆😆

I am dancing after knowing that ARMAAN is from BENGALu know wat while writing i was thinking the same thing that prinzy would be on cloud 11 after it ...😆😆😆
I loved the description u gave about him...😃 woh toh tralier hai..aage aage dekho hota hai kya?😉😆😆
Riddhima's feeling was so pure as if i was feeling them....😳
Armaan confession was OUT OF THE WORLD😃
so neat & clean...
Loved every bit of the Part😃 thank u sooo much for such a lovely comment ...u made my day 😃

and u made my day as u bring him back at the end
LOVE U MORE for that🤗 only for that.?😡😭😆😆...but remember, i love you MORE 😉🤣...muaahh..!!
Keep continue soon😃
thanks for the PM😳

Love u❤️ Love Vini ❤️
prinz😳

Originally posted by: ryka_27

hey vini...

its awesum, amazing, mind blowing part...👏

luved the way u describe ridhima's emotion n armaan's confession..

what happenes to armaan so he left ridhima...

nxt part jaldi se update karna...

thnx for the pm..

luv

ryka

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

awesome start

loved it

mindblowing

loved the flashback

loved armaans confession

so sweet

glad armaans back

cant wait 2 read armaans pov

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: armaanrox

awsum blossom part vinz....

really awsum.....i mean the way u described riddhima's feelings vwere awsum......and even armaan's confession...

luking forward 4 d next part desperately.....

--fiza

P.S - thnx 4 d pm!!

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Hey Ryka 🤗

bbz, thanks a lot .. m really gald u loved the confession 😃

hmm .. wat happened?? 😕 ye toh mujhe bhi nae pata.......😆😆😆..

have patience for that 😉😆😆 ... sabr ka fal meetha hota hai na?.....🤣

love
Vini 😳

hey...

ur welcome....

wat happened??? tumhe nahi pta to bhagwan ko pta hoga....🤣

waise sabr naam ki thing kya hoti hai mujhe pta hi nahi..🤣

luv

ryka