Stuck in my Heart - an AR FF(Part 1 -pg46)

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Hello everyone 🤗,



Well, most of you must be surprised with it ......as I ,myself, cant believe I am finally opening this.. 😆...m sure the people who compelled me for this must have even lost the hope of seeing this ..at least in this life time .. (Should I pinch you guys..? 😉🤣..)

*Ahem Ahem*.. *clearing throat*

So, yeah for those who don't know me ,(which m sure must be many) , m VINI ... an avid reader of AR FFs over here.. Recently, i had this idea at around 4am(i knw WEIRD like me😆) and it didn't let me sleep till i wrote it ... Anyways, i hope it doesnt happen to you too after reading it ... 🤣

Without any further delay m posting the intro of my concept !! *nervous*

P.S : Dedicated to Habz, PJ and Sani .. the three people who were after my life with their EBs..😆 and ..

And...nothing more ..*phew*

My First Creation Publicly.....🤣

Stuck In My Heart! ❤️


INTRODUCTION


As the darkness was increasing by every passing second , my heartbeats too were trying to find their way out of my body .. their thumping increased with every strange sound around and was causing more havoc to my current state..the prying eyes of monsters, so called perverts roaming uselessly in this park at 9pm , shattering me into small-small pieces BUT still my stubborn heart has made me glued here with the hope .. the hope of getting him back....HE?? The love of my life.. my soul's desire .. who took away my breath the moment I started loving him .....Some one who became my ultimate Weakness ..... Cant believe it all started in a swift and ENDED swifter .. some times I wonder if its teenage love or an eternal one! ... like the ones we hear in stories.. Hmmm.. so many questions..so many confusions.. .but no one to answer .. and that's why after a wait of 3 months, which were nothing less than waiting till eternity, m here finally waiting for him in this park where ONCE we used to spend blissful days in serene surroundings.....these trees, leaves, fountains, pets, and even the MOON is the witness of our love..... But NOW??

Every moment, every second that I died a million deaths...... I craved to talk to him, to see his lovely-dovey texts, to just see him wiping my tears, to get a hug, to look in his eyes which were full of love , to feel him, his love, his care , to just ......just hear from him that 3 letter word AGAIN .... I still don't know why I am alive after all this... But I guess I know the reason..

Once, almost few months back, when we were together and he confessed "Ridz, I'll die if we ever get separated .. I cant imagine living without you ... " .. It wasn't so usual when he used to share his insecurities and as obvious his eyes could speak more than he did .. I could clearly see the fear which was mutual .. I couldn't say anything to comfort him except holding his hand firmly.... We both were lost in our thoughts when suddenly I broke the silence and told him seriously, " You know what ! Whenever this happens na, I wont say ki I ll die at that moment as I know I have to live for my so-called family but the day I get to live my life , I m sure I won't survive one more breath " .... And that's the reason m living lifeless now ...God knows, how , when , why it all happened ..

Lost in my thoughts, I looked at my cell for umpteenth time to check any message and to check the time which perhaps was also acting like my enemy by moving with an exceptional slow speed... Suddenly I heard rustling and crunching of leaves from behind, my heartbeat intensified and emotions bulged up again thinking of the possibility of the wishful happiness. The sound kept on increasing behind me as if approaching me . With boundless thoughts and hopes rising again I closed my eyes and turned back only to hear a cooing sound beneath me. Startled, I shifted my gaze to a small puppy who perhaps was searching for pleasure in the dark happiness unlike me who was trying to find happiness in my dark life. I wonder if he will come here or no .. m still dubious about it..... yesterday, finally after thinking loads , I sent him a text saying that I will wait for him in this park ..i cant hold it any more ... and I won't leave till the time he comes here....no matter how much ever he made excuses I was adamant... I smiled thinking about my stubborn attitude.... Love makes u crazy , isn't it? Suddenly, my smile left me as I realized that awful day 3 months back when he said : " Ridz, m sorry..i cant hold on the relation any longer ... We cant be together any longer..perhaps, it wasn't meant to be! "..I was shocked, shattered ...my world came crashing down as I realized that he's serious this time ..its not any mere stupid fight !!

And with that he took my life with him... my desire ... my ARMAAN...

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Precap : Keep guessing..😉..thoda sa kaam toh khud bhi kar lo na... 🤣




Useless Snippet :


I hope it was bearable..😆 The intro actually turned out to be longer than I expected......I wrote this with a motive of writing an OS but it will turn out to be SS now..*pouting* Hmm.. all thanks to my habit of exceeding the word limit.. i guess, bachpan ki aadat der se choot ti hai *Sigh* .. It will hopefully have max 4-5 parts

Do let me know if I should continue it or not.. ? Comments and criticism both are welcomed .. (at least tum logon thodi mehnat toh karoge na )

Don't FORGET to press LIKE .. (you will get your dream guy/ girl sooner.. 😉🤣.. sachi me..😆 )

P.S : Please let me know if you want me to add you to my pm list . I don't wanna pester all with my update PMz .. !! 😃


Love ya all

Vinz...😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Intro : Page 1(See above😆)

Part 1: Page 46








Kam akal bhai aka PJ -the EBer 😆 Habz aka Nattu -the Morcha Gang Leader
CG n Sani -the twinz 😆
Ginny aka My swtheart ☺️
Prinzy me_lovelygul
Mallu blessed4
peachgirl Tia_0810
Ashu Hima
Kashish (Faz) samratrocks
dipu Rosh
jenny Avi Bhai
ryka_27 diyaa1pk
KaSh_Deewaanie(Jinsz) Ruba
Namita Karan
parit.mansi Riddss
komal119 Sammy Mommy 😆
Linu Angel-Pebby
navtinder karankideewanix aka Alisha
KaSh_Luver1997 Shradha Di (ssh57)
anjie22 scorpio95
sweety_ursh princess_52
Ankita(GoDsLoVe) shristi sarda
cutiepreet anumeha_rajat
armaanrox dmg_roks_antara
barbie19 moonlight2630
kuhu amruta04
Iqbal Neha1 ambryn
JaviKaJen cute.arsh
Suvarna.... choco_pie9
disco_diva jiyaa
AR_LOVER ffkhan
Kanuk janu1610
prettyasjen kashfull
nidha1983 niki4life
kasufan4ever ishuKSGKAJEN

RedSoul AttractiveAdya
teenorchid hnisha
richa_b amyridzy20


ll be updated timely......😃


REQUEST: Everyone mentioned above..please ADD me as ur BUDDY..its easier to send PMs to all...
Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ressss

yeahhh i m 1😆

heyaaaa.....😆
welll...jub tune post kiya tub mein suprise nahi thi😆 lekin jub tune mujhe bataya tht ur gona post today tab toh mein defiently suprise thii😆😆😆 id idnt pich my self ..wo kya han na its hurts😆😆😆😆😆😆
so i refresehd my comp just to see kcuh atuck wutak to nahi gaya.....but it was true n i was dan excited
by teh way tujhee gale mein kuch problem hain???? jub dekho throat clear karti rehti hain😆

ohhh i knw u too well soo apnaa naam batane ki zarurat nahi hain😆 wese tu bhi wierd hi hain ..raat ke 4 baaje kisi ko idea ata hain.....lolzzz..wese ....mujhe to bohat achi si neend gayai coz after reading thisss i talked ot moiz😳😳😳😳😳

n awww babess🤗 thanks for dedicating thsi to us😳 u made us specila😳 by the way ye EBs yaha khutam nahi hota jub jub tu hum sab ko update nahi tab tab humara EBs aate rahege SARU ne to abhi se shuru kar liya😆😆😆😆😆

ok ok...ab chilana bund kar mein part per ati hun....but tune hi part ke uper itna chappar chappar likha hain to mein karu😆 wese ek baaat batana to bhul gayi
i loved ur publicly creation😆 its awesome😃.....

ok ab part per.....

babes....kya bolu???? tujhej toh pata hain na i m alwzy out of words😆
the part was full of emotionss...strt se lekar ending tuk....i kinda felt a knot in my throat n heart n i didnt like the feeling 😆
n and the way u have wrote n the words u have used....makes me want to keep on reading it
as ridhima was sitting there waiting for her love n the way u decribed the feelings n wht wa going around her n with the puppy part it was brilliant
i wonder wht happend btwn these two lovely couples wht miunderstnding came....
coz armaan loved her more thn his life but now his not ready for this relationship???how is tht possiblewht actly happend?
koi minunderstnding hain dono ke beech created by some1 else or its armaan fault just not ready for teh relationship???
jaldi batate so i knwo whu to curse😆
n wow it has been 3 months?did ridhima came back here after 3 months?wht was she doing all these months?
babes.....the part was flawless ...plzzzzzz update sooon i knwo ur quite busy ...but plzzz...i m so hooked up to ur ff ....i LOVED it belive me
i m just not saying thsi or flattering u around BUT SERIOSSLY I APRRECIATED THSI DIL SE I LOVED IT
soo plz update sooon 😃
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precap: kamina sab kaam hum karege to tu kya karenge....
chal my guess is ARMAAAN WILL SHOW UP😆😆😆

useful snippet😆

tujhe ye konse angle se long intro laga????? itna chota tha kamini ..mene kuch bola nahi as it was ur first time here...but ab tu ye keh rahi hain ke its long so mein tujhe bata du ..IT WAS REALLY SHORT
next time i want long parts like mansi di😃
n thsnk god tune ye OS nahi bana diya nai to tera kya hota😆 n i msure thsi SS is going to turn into FF coz ur actly a gud writer n teri vocabluray bhi kaafi achi hain ...i knwo tune top ese to kiya nahi hoga😆 so i m sure ye FF mein turn hoga i just hope it does..coz me tumhe ye 3 to 4 part smein khtam nahi hone dungi😆

an obs add me to pru pm list agar nahi bhi karogi to mein tapak jawugi yaha😆
bbbye vinzzzz
muaahzzz
love ya
ur habzi😆
so i refresehd my comp just to see kcuh atuck wutak to nahi gaya.....but it was true n i was dan excited
Edited by princess52 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesome concept. but dont u think it should be other way around? bcoz in serial, it is riddhima who has got married to sid and armaan is like crying bucket's now.

anyways plz jaldi continue karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start
pm me wen u continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
Ye maine kya dekha? *rubs eyes*
Vinchi starting a FF? *pinches self* [oww that hurts] 😆
Par, bohot khoob Vinchi!
Better late than never 😃
Mast starting hai
Kya baat!
Kya baat!
Kya baat! 😆
Jaldi update karo
Take care
Love,
Sabki Ashu 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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42 views and only 5 replies!! is it that bad??.....😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!

really liked it..

plz add me in pm list

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Vinz , i would love to get PM for updates

Oh and I m looking forward to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part
thanxs 4 the pm

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