Stuck in my Heart - an AR FF(Part 1 -pg46) - Page 28

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Fab solution PJ ...really loved it... and m sure it ll be helpful for her... 😃 ... no wonder u are a life saver yaar.......🤗

Originally posted by: lucario

Lolz mai Kya karu cc pe koi nahi tha...so yaha sab the...to yahi shuru ho gaya...Lolz....dont worry now going now bye

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Vinz,
Finally tune update kiya, I was really waiting for it :)
You are an awesome writer, pehli hi part mein rula diya mujhe[:'(].
Why did Armaan do that? I mean he loved her so much,; I think there must be something not right with him.
My sweet Dr ab jaldi continue karna warna tujhe to pata hai ke hamare CC kiya karega tere saath ;) 🤣
And do PM me :)

Luv u<333
Kashish

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Fab solution PJ ...really loved it... and m sure it ll be helpful for her... 😃 ... no wonder u are a life saver yaar.......🤗

Originally posted by: namita18

but i dont have time for that, mujhe sabke ff par to comments karne ka to time nai milta to ff kaise likhungi..
writing is not really my cup of tea

Originally posted by: hunder

my dear namz arey ek chota sa essay hi likh do.................what u write is not important, u motivate urself to write thats what matters

Originally posted by: hunder

wow partner nice intro but bohot chota tha

armaan and ridz separated in intro only, well i hope tumhare FF mein thora humor bhi ho.............sirf rona dhona mat bhar dena

kanjoos partner itna manaya fir bhi sirf 4-5 parts wala FF nahi chalega..........isey barao i want atleast 50 parts of this FF

oye list to update hi nahi ki tumne, abhi tak suspense bana huya hai ki no. 1 kaun hoga😉🤣

maine PM late para iska matlab yeh nahi ki PM list mein mujhe peeche kar do😆

lastly dumbo intro de diya update kahan hai ab??????????

Originally posted by: Desire_Ginny

~Well, ye mera first comment hy IF pe~

Finally 👍🏼 Posted 👏
Mene to pehle hi padh li thi 😆
Bhot mast hy..Excellent work
Waiting for the next
Itte natak kiye intro post krne me hi , nxt part pta ni kab likhoge ? 😵
Vese Title was suggested by me ☺️
Lol 😆 I just chose it ..
Chalo ab jaldi update kr dena mere xamz se pehle
Samjhe ?

Love
Ginny ❤️

Originally posted by: hunder

intro was great................loved it....................plzzzzzz add me to the non existing PM list🤣.....................sorry but i will acccept only no. 1 position😉..................so no compromise on that.....................wana kya pata chalta hai FF ko CC bante der thorna lagti hai😆

Originally posted by: janu1610

Vini u r here with ff .Happy to see u here with awesome shot.👏
tumhe ye idea subha 4 baje aaya ,not strange for me ,kyunki is heavenly made couple ne hum sab ka jeena haram kar rakha hai😉
part nd the way u pour emotions is something beyond explanations.⭐️
even i was waiting for his sudden appearance but all hopes died .Armaan ki jaghan kutta🤢.......
i m stuck to ur ff .Do i have need to say i want my name in ur pm list.nahi to......😡
part was too short yaar nd where is Armaan?Is some thing exists in this world which can stop him from coming back to his life.dunno
nd about precap well ye idea hum ko nahi aaya ,tumhe aaya b'coz u r more weird or i'd say intelligent😆
Any way thanks for pm.
one more thing plz don't turn it in ss.Acc. to u 'u r gud writer .mean elaborate very well'
to waisa hi yahan b ho.(wish so)😊

love
ritu

Originally posted by: princess52

ressss

yeahhh i m 1😆 ..bas bas jyada mat kud...earthquake aa jayega..😆😆

heyaaaa.....😆 ..hey ya ..i wanna get closer to you..hey ya ..lalala 🤣
welll...jub tune post kiya tub mein suprise nahi thi😆 lekin jub tune mujhe bataya tht ur gona post today tab toh mein defiently suprise thii😆😆😆 id idnt pich my self ..wo kya han na its hurts😆..mujhe pata tha shuru se ki tu aalsi hi hai... 😆😆...mujhe bol deti ..i wud pinch u softly......🤣
so i refresehd my comp just to see kcuh atuck wutak to nahi gaya.....but it was true n i was dan excited ..By god! itna sochne ka ksht kaise kar liya tune?? 😲 tu theek toh hai na ? ghutno me dard toh nae ho raha?🤣
by teh way tujhee gale mein kuch problem hain???? jub dekho throat clear karti rehti hain😆 ..haan problem hai ..ki me dheere boloongi toh tum logon ko sunai nae dega na......😉😆😆

ohhh i knw u too well soo apnaa naam batane ki zarurat nahi hain😆 ..oh really? thanks for the info..😡😆wese tu bhi wierd hi hain ..raat ke 4 baaje kisi ko idea ata hain.....lolzzz..wese ....mujhe to bohat achi si neend gayai coz after reading thisss i talked ot moiz😳..yaar sabki kismat teri jaise thodi hi hoti hai.. 😆... mujhe toh raat me sapne dekhne padte hai na..ache wale!..😉😆😆 ..tu idea ki toh baat hi mat kar tubelight !! tere liye woh bahut bada word hai , nae?😉🤣

n awww babess🤗 thanks for dedicating thsi to us😳 u made us specila😳..u guys are really special yaar ... 😳 by the way ye EBs yaha khutam nahi hota jub jub tu hum sab ko update nahi tab tab humara EBs aate rahege SARU ne to abhi se shuru kar liya😆..dikh raha hai......😡

ok ok...ab chilana bund kar mein part per ati hun....but tune hi part ke uper itna chappar chappar likha hain to mein karu😆 wese ek baaat batana to bhul gayi
i loved ur publicly creation😆 its awesome😃.......aww..thanks yaar...luv you..🤗

ok ab part per.....

babes....kya bolu???? tujhej toh pata hain na i m alwzy out of words😆..yeah, but still words matter...😆
the part was full of emotionss...strt se lekar ending tuk....i kinda felt a knot in my throat n heart n i didnt like the feeling 😆
n and the way u have wrote n the words u have used....makes me want to keep on reading it .. thats really soo sweet yaar.. i didnt knw if the feelings and emotions were explained strongly .....😕😃
as ridhima was sitting there waiting for her love n the way u decribed the feelings n wht wa going around her n with the puppy part it was brilliant
i wonder wht happend btwn these two lovely couples wht miunderstnding came...... hmm.. even i dnt knw till now 😆
coz armaan loved her more thn his life but now his not ready for this relationship???how is tht possiblewht actly happend?
koi minunderstnding hain dono ke beech created by some1 else or its armaan fault just not ready for teh relationship???..yeah, thats true that ridz feels Armaan loved her truly but as for his side of story that ll be revealed soon...😃
jaldi batate so i knwo whu to curse😆.. u decide later 😆
n wow it has been 3 months?did ridhima came back here after 3 months?wht was she doing all these months?..well, sudden changes often devastate you ..and then it wasnt a mere incident ..it was about her life ..toh all of a sudden aisa step lene se she was bound to be shattered... and as explained, the girl tried contacting loads n loads but ... moreover, there are other bits which u'll come to know later in the story.. 😃
babes.....the part was flawless ...plzzzzzz update sooon i knwo ur quite busy ...but plzzz...i m so hooked up to ur ff ....i LOVED it belive me..yeah bbz, i believe you.. .m glad u loved it... n i ll surely try updating it soon...
i m just not saying thsi or flattering u around BUT SERIOSSLY I APRRECIATED THSI DIL SE I LOVED IT
soo plz update sooon 😃..you dnt need to give explanation yaar..i trust you...
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precap: kamina sab kaam hum karege to tu kya karenge....
chal my guess is ARMAAAN WILL SHOW UP😆😆😆..kyun tune kaunsa kaam kiya?.......😲😕😆😆... lets see if u loose again...😆😆

useful snippet😆..thanku thanku 😆😆

tujhe ye konse angle se long intro laga????? itna chota tha kamini ..mene kuch bola nahi as it was ur first time here...but ab tu ye keh rahi hain ke its long so mein tujhe bata du ..IT WAS REALLY SHORT.. yeah yeah.. as if part ke barabar intro likhna chahiye tha ..hai na?....😡😆😆
next time i want long parts like mansi di😃..hmm...ll try too .. 😃
n thsnk god tune ye OS nahi bana diya nai to tera kya hota😆 n i msure thsi SS is going to turn into FF coz ur actly a gud writer n teri vocabluray bhi kaafi achi hain ...i knwo tune top ese to kiya nahi hoga😆 so i m sure ye FF mein turn hoga i just hope it does..coz me tumhe ye 3 to 4 part smein khtam nahi hone dungi😆
..lets see yaar .. m not sure about FF thing .. but yeah may be 1-2 parts increase ho sakte hain......😃
an obs add me to pru pm list agar nahi bhi karogi to mein tapak jawugi yaha😆..theek hai toh nae karti....😉🤣
bbbye vinzzzz ..bye?? kahan ja rahi hai? 😲🤣
muaahzzz ..muaahz .. luv ya too
love ya
ur habzi😆 ..ur Vinz ☺️

Originally posted by: hunder

bhai jhoot mat bolo, mein, rosh and nisha wahi hai......sazi bhi abhi abhi hi gayi hai😆