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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1



The scene starts with a boy who is very sad and is sitting in his room alone, a girl come to his room and sit beside him.

Girl: - "Sujal, tum yahan aisekyun bhethe ho, mujhe airport chodhne nahin aaoge kya?"

Sujal: - "Nahin…."

Girl: -"Kyun?"

Sujal: -"Kyun kya Kashish, tum kyun mujhe akela chood kar ja rahi ho?"

Kashish: - "Mera jana zarori hai Sujal…"

Sujal: - "Kyun, tum hamare saath bhi to reh sakti ho na?"

Kashish: - "Sujal tum samajhne ki koshish to karo, dekho hum dono best friends hain aur hamesha rahenge."

Sujal: - "Par….."

Kashish: - "Par kya Sujal, tumhe apne dost par bharosa hai na?" Sujal nodded and Kashish continued: - "Phir, tum chinta mat karo. Hum dost hain aur hamesha rhenge. Chalo ab smile karo." He smiled and then hugged her.

After sometime, they left for airport and bidding bye to his best friend Sujal returned home. Sujal directly ran to his room. Even, he didn't come for dinner, so his mom decided to visit him.

Ragini (Sujal's Mom) entered his room and found him sitting in a corner holding a frame in his hand. She moved towards him and placed her hand on his head. Sujal looked up at his mom with teary eyes. His mom signaled him no, but he lost his control and immediately hugged his mom and started crying loudly.

Ragini: - "Sujal……nahin beta, ro mat….varna tum bimaar ho jayega."

Sujal: - "Mom Kashish ka jana itna important tha kya?"

Ragini: - "Haan important to tha."

Sujal very innocently: - "Par kyun?"

Ragini: - "Tum mujhe batao, kya tum apni mom aur apne dad ke bina reh sakte no?"

Sujal: - "Nahin…"

Ragini: - "To phir Kashish kaise reh sakti hai, tum chahte ho ki Kashish apne mom dad se door ho jaye?"

Sujal: - "Nahin mom, isse Kashish ko rona aayega aur mein usse rota hua nahin dekh sakta."

Ragini: - "Bas, issi liye uska jana important tha; aur tumhe ek baat bataun?" Sujal nodded and then she continued: - "Humne aur Kashish ke mom dad ne yeh decide kiya hai ki jab tum aur Kashish badhe ho jaoge to tum dono ki shaadi karwa denge."

Sujal: - "Sach mom, par isse Kashish khush to hogi na?"

Ragini: - "Haan kyun nahin? Tum dono best friends ho na aur hamesha saath rehna chahte ho, to wo kaise khush nahin hogi?"

Sujal: - "phir theek hai mom, kyunki mein kabhi nahin chahta ki Kashish kisi bhi tarah se hurt ho."

Ragini: - "Mein janti hoon. Chalo, ab jaldi se dinner kar lo, phir hum Kashish ko phone karenge aur usse baat karenge."

Sujal excitedly hugged his mom.

The scene fades and we see him with teary eyes as all those memories came to his mind.

Sujal: - "Us din ke baad kuch der tak to Kashish ki calls aati rahi, par ab 4 saal se Kashish na na hi kabhi call ki, na koi message aur na hi koi email. Ab to lagta hai ki shayad wo mujhe bhool hi chuki hai."

Hearing this, a girl who is sitting with him spoke: - "Kya Bro, aap bhi pata nahin kya kya sochte rehte hain." And she is no one else than Riddhima.

Sujal: - "Kyun, ab kya hua?"

Riddhima: - "Aap kaise soch sakte hain ki bhabhi aapko bhool sakti hai?"

Sujal: - "Kya tum mujhe bataogi ki tum Kashish ko bhabhi kis haq se keh rahi ho?"

Riddhima: -"Are unki aapse shaadi hone wali hai to mein unhe bhabhi nahin kahungi to aur kya kahungi…"

Sujal: - "Shaadi hui nahin hai abhi; aur jab tak mein Kashish se ek baar baat nahin kar leta; yeh shaadi hogi bhi nahin."

Riddhima: - "Yeh kya Bro?"

Sujal: - "Tu abhi nahin samjhegi; tum abhi bachi ho."

Riddhima: - "Mein bacha nahin hoon; samjhe aap?"

Sujal: - "Hanji samajh gaya; ab yeh sab baatein choodo aur batao ki tumne sari packing kar li yan nahin?"

Riddhima making an innocent face: - "Wo mein aaj raat ko kar lungi na."

Sujal: - "Yeh tumhari aaj raat pichle 2 din se nahin aa rahi hai; packing kar lo; tumhari mumbai ki flight early morning ki hai."

Riddhima: - "Mein Mumbai nahin ja rahi; mein aapke saath Delhi jaungi."

Sujal: - "Tumhare mom dad wait kar rahe honge tumhara?"

Riddhima: - "kya baat kar rahe ho bro aap; unhe kabhi chinta hui hi nahin ki mein kahan hun aur kaise hun to ab kyun hogi?"

Sujal: - "Aise nahin kehte Ridsss."

Riddhima: - "Chodo Bro; Mene unhe mail kar di thi aur unka reply bhi aa gaya hai ki Do whatever U want!!! So, no tensions."

Sujal just nodded because he knows how much this effect her; then he say: - "Phir to tumhara ticket bhi arrange karwani hogi na?"

Riddhima: - "Wo mene karwa li hai; aura b mein aapke saath Delhi jaungi."

Sujal: - "jaogi to tab na jab packing karogi."

Riddhima: - "Abhi kar lungi na; pehle dinner kar le."

Sujal: - "Theek hai Chalo…."

They left for taking dinner and then, retired to their rooms.

The scene now shifts to Mayank who was sitting silently in his room. Mayank in his thoughts: - "Ab Bhaiya vaapis aa rahe hain, m so happy par jab wo Kashish ke bare me puchenge to mein unhe kya kahunga; par mein unse jhooth bhi to nahin bol sakta na, wo samajh jayenge ki mein jhooth bol raha hoon. Ab mein karun bhi to kya karun?" He was lost in his thoughts when his phone rang and he came back to the real world. He smiled by seeing the number but then as usual hiding all his feeling; he picked it up and say: - "Haan bolo Nupur."

Nupur: - "Kya baat hai Mayank, tumhe kaise pata chala ki meri call hai; kahiin tumhe telepathy to nahin aati na." She said and bit her tongue on her unusual comment.

Mayank: - "Kya baat kar rahi ho? Shayad tumhe pata nahin ki mobile par number ke saath saath naam bhi flash ho jata hai."

Nupur: - "Wo to mein janti hoon; par baat hai ki mujhe tumhe tang karne me bahut mazza aata hai."

Mayank: - "To ab tumne mujhe tang kar liya na to mein phone rakhun?"

Nupur: - "Kya yaar, tum hamesha itni jaldi me kyun rehte ho?"

Mayank: - "Kyunki Bhaiya vaapis aa rahe hain; aur mujhe unke aane ki preparation karni hain."

Nupur: - "Are mene bhi yehi pochne ke liye call ki thi; Bhaiya kab aayenge?"

Mayank: - "Parso aa rahe hain."

Nupur: - "Aur tum yahan vaapis ka baa rahe ho?"

Mayank: - "Mein next week aa jaunga; abhi Bhaiya ke saath todha time spent karna chahta hoon."

Nupur: - "Mein samajh sakti hoon."

Mayank: - "Ab kuch aur puchna hai?"

Nupur: - "Nahin kyun?"

Mayank: - "Tanki mein phone rakh sakun; Bye…." He said and before her reply; he cut the phone.

On the other side; Nupur too cut the phone and says: - "Tum kab samjhoge Mayank ki yeh masti mazak jo mein tumse karti hoon; yeh koi time pass nahin hai balki mera pyaar hai."

On the other side Mayank talking with himself: - "Mein janta hoon Nupur; tum mujhse bahut pyaar karti ho. Mein bhi shayad tumse pyaar karta hoon; par jab tak mein apni feelings ko le kar sure nahin ho jata; mein tumhe kuch nahin bataunga; kyun ki isse tumhe bhi dukh hoga aur mujhe bhi."

Mayank came out of his thoughts by his Mom's voice. He shake his head in order to say yeh kabhi nahin sudhrega and then he left his room.

In the other side of this house, Ragini was continuously shouting at Samrat.

Ragini: - "Tujhe mene kale k kaam kaha tha na; tunhe wo kyun nahin kiya?"

Samrat: - "Chill Mom; mein aapke sab kaam akr dunga; don't worry."

Ragini: - "Parso Sujal vaapis aa raha hai; aur tum ho ki taiyari mein koi help nahin kar rahe ho?"

Mayank came there and say: - "Kya hua maa?"

Ragini: - "Dekho na Mayank; Mene Samrat ko ek kaam bola tha par isse koi kaam nahin hota."

Mayank: - "Kaun sa kaam?"

Ragini: - "Mene Sujal ke room ke liye new curtains ka order diya tha; isse bola tha shop se le aaye, par isse itna chota sa kaam nahin hua."

Mayank: - "To kya hua Maa, mein kar deta hoon."

Ragini: - "Tu to kar hi dega par pata nahin isse kab akal aayegi." She said pointing towards Samrat and then continued: - "Mujhe laga tha yeh Sujal se pyaar karta hai isliye uske liye yeh meri baat zaroor manega; par nahin aaj yeh sabit ho gaya ki yeh Sujal se bilkul pyaar nahin karta."

Samrat: - "Stop ur emotional atyachar Mom. Me Bhaiya se bahut pyaar karta hoon aur isse sabit karne ke liye mujhe kuch karne ki zarorat nahin hai, aur phir bhi aapko yakeen nahin aata toh unke room me ja kar dekh lena." Saying this, he left the house.

Ragini and Mayank moved towards Sujal's room and found it fully decorated with new curtains and all the important stuff. They were shocked to see; but then Ragini felt bad as she knew that she has spoken more than limit. She sat on bed holding her head

Mayank: - "Kya hua Maa?"

Ragini: - "Kuch nahin Mayank; mujhe lagta hai mene Samrat ko kuch zyada hi bol diya."

Mayank: - "Mein yeh nahin kahunga ki aapne kuch zyada bol diya; par yeh kahunga ki aapne aaj Samrat ko bahut hurt kiya; maa hum sab jante hain ki Samrat Sujal Bhaiya ko le kar kitna possessive hai; phir bhi aapne aisa bol diya."

Ragini: -"Mein kya karun beta, gusse me mere mooh se nikal gaya."

Mayank: - "mein janta hoon apne yeh sab jan boojh kar nahin kaha, isliye Samrat ke aane par mein khud usse baat karunga, aap chinta mat kariye."

She nodded and Mayank continued: - "Chaliye, ab aap ja kar thodhi rest kar lo; kyunki Samrat ne aapka sara kaam kar diya hai."

Ragini: - "Haan wo to hai, par agar koi aur sunge to vishwas nahin kar payega."

Mayank laughed a bit and then say: - "Haan wo to hai; agar kisi heart patient ko pata chal gaya to usse heart attack zaroor aa jayega."

They laughed and then left the room.

Its evening time and there is no sign of Samrat, now everyone is getting tensed at home as this is something unusual with Samrat. Suddenly, there was a sound of horn and Ragini hurriedly opened the door but in spite of Samrat, Its Sanjeev there (Sujal's Dad).

Sanjeev: - "Kya hua Ragini, tum itni bechain kyun ho?"

Ragini: - "Wo Samrat gusse me ghar se chala gaya tha, aur abhi tak vaapis nahin aaya."

Sanjeev: - "Kyun? Aisa kya ho gay ab?"

Ragini explained him everything and then Sanjeev say: - "Mujhe to yakeen nahin ho raha ki Samrat ne itna kuch kiya aur humhe pata bhi nahin chalne diya."

Before Ragini can reply; someone replied to it

Voice: - "Kyunki jab wo sab kiya gaya tha to aap log ghode beech kar so rahe the."

Ragini: - "Samrat tum aa gaye? Mein kab se tumhara wait kar rahi thi?"

Samrat: - "Aapko isse kya?"

Ragini: - "Dekho Samrat, mein janti hoon ki mene tumhe kuch zyada hi bol diya. Apni maa ko maaf nahin karoge kya?"

Samrat: - "Maffi ki baat nahin hai Maa, aapne aisa socha bhi kaise ki mein Sujal Bhaiya se pyaar nahin karta."

Mayank: - " Samy Dekho, maa ne gusse me aisa bol diya; unka yeh matlab nahin tha."

Samrat turned his face and then Sanjeev say: - "Dekho beta, ab tum maan jao, varna me tumhare Bhaiya ko sab bata dunga; aur jab unhe pata chalega ki tum apni maa se gussa ho to wo bhi pareshan ho jayega na; kya tum aisa chahte ho?"

Samrat: - "nahin, mein Bhaiya ko pareshaan nahin kar sakta."

Sanjeev: - "Chalo, phir apna gussa khatam karo aur apni maa se gale milo."

He smiled and then moved towards his mom; touching her feet; he hugged her and thus, everything became fine again.

Is ghar ki yehi to ek khasiyat hai; is ghar ke sadasayo ka apasi pyaar aur vishwas. Har ghar ki tarah is ghar mein bhi jhagade hote the; is duniya me kabhi kuch perfect nahin hota, par yeh log apne us jhagade ko apne pyaar se suljha lete the. Aur inke is pyaar aur saath ki sabse badhi takhat hai Sujal; Sujal jiske naam se is ghar ki subah or sham hoti hai; jab bhi koi khushi ghar me aati hai to Sujal ka naam sab se pehle liya jata tha; aur jab koi pareshani aati hai tab bhi sabki nighahen Sujal ko talash karti hai; kyunki wo jante hain ki jo takhat unhe chahiye; wo Sujal dega.

They all took their dinner in a lite mood and then, all of them retired to their rooms.

Samrat entering his room; checked his e-mail because it's a daily routine for him. The time never matters for him; what really matters to him is to chat with Gunjan. Gunjan and Samrat used to chat for long times but these days both of them are busy; so they are sending long e-mails to each other describing their each and every activity.

Samrat reading Gunjan's e-mail: -

Hi Samrat…Kaise ho?

Aaj me bahut udass hoon; tumhe call bhi ki thi par shayad tum busy the isliye tumhe phone pick nahin kiya; aaj papa ko humne bataya tha ki mein singer banana chahti hoon, par papa na kaha ki unki reputation ke liye mujhe singing chodhni hogi; kyunki unhe lagta hai ki singing badhe logon ke bache nahin karte; tum hi batao mein kya karun???

Gunjan

After reading her mail; Samrat closed the laptop and started thinking. He was sad to know this news as he knows that for gunjan; singing is a passion. He got lost in some of his past memories.

Flashback: -

It was a cultural program in their school and both the families were excited as Gunjan has participated in some program for the first time.

Samrat was standing along with Gunjan in a corner.

Gunjan: - "Samrat, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai; mene pehli baar participate kiya hai."

Samrat: - "To kya hua Gunjan; dekhna tum bahut acha perform karogi."

Gunjan: - "Tum mera saath doge na."

Samrat: - "Haan, hamesha ki tarah."

Then, her name was announced and both of them left the place. Wishing Gunjan All the Best; Samrat ran towards inside so that he can hear her. As she came on the stage; he eyes started searching for Samrat and there she found him entering the hall. A smile appeared on her lips. She began her song.



Aye Maalik Tere Bande Hum Ayese Ho Humaare Karam
nekee Par Chale, Aaur Badee Se Tale, Taankee Hasate Huye Nikale Dam

ye Andheraa Ghanaa Chhaa Rahaa, Teraa Insaan Ghabaraa Rahaa

ho Rahaa Bekhabar, Kuchh Naa Aataa Najar, Sukh Kaa Sooraj Chhoopaa Jaa Rahaa
hai Teree Roshanee Mein Jo Dam To Amaawas Ko Kar De Poonam

badaa Kamajor Hain Aadamee, Abhee Laakhon Hain Is Mein Kamee

par Too Jo Khadaa, Hain Dayaaloo Badaa, Teree Kirapaa Se Dharatee Thamee
diyaa Toone Humei Jab Janam Too Hee Zelegaa Hum Sab Ke Gam

jab Julmon Kaa Ho Saamanaa, Tab Too Hee Humei Thaamanaa

wo Buraee Kare, Hum Bhalaaee Bhare, Naheen Badale Kee Ho Kaamanaa
badh Uthhe Pyaar Kaa Har Kadam Aaur Mite Bair Kaa Ye Bharam



She finished her song and the hall went into applause, Samrat was really very happy to see the response.

It's the time for results, Gunjan was standing with Samrat, she was feeling very nervous and to cal her; Samrat held her hand. And gunjan was announced as the winner. Judges called her on stage.

Judge 1: - "Beta, kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aapne yeh song choose kyun kiya?"

Gunjan: - "Sir, yeh meri maa ka favorite song hai; issi liye."

Judge 2: - "Good, phir to aapki maa ne is mein aapki madad zaroor ki hogi?"

Gunjan: - "Nahin; yeh maa ke liye ek surprise tha; is song ko prepare karne me meri madad Kashish Di, Sujal Bhaiya aur mere best friend Samrat ne ki thi."

They all smiled and then handled her trophy. Gunjan came back smiling and gave her trophy to her mom. She was very happy to see the confidence in her daughter. Samrat was happy to see the smile on her face.

Flashback ends.

Samrat thought for some time and then, again opened his laptop and replied to her mail.

Hi Gunjan

Everything is fine here. Don't worry.

Mein samajh sakta hoon ki tum is wqt kasie feel kar rahi ho. Aur jan uncle ne mana kar diya hai to kuch aur kiya bhi nahin ja sakta. Par meri ek advice hai, tum Mayank Bhaiya ka college join kar lo; abhi ke liye mein itna hi kahunga and don't worry dekhna yeh problem bhi bahut jaldi solve ho jayega.

Take Care

Samrat

He then switched of the light and drifted to sleep.

Next day passed as usual in decorating the house with all the masti mazak.

Now, the time has come; when Sujal and Riddhima are coming back to Delhi. Their flight had landed and Sujal and Riddhima came out of airport.

Riddhima: - "Bhaiya, ghar se koi aaya nahin kya?"

Sujal: - "Nahin."

Riddhima: - "Kyun?"

Sujal: - "kyunki mene unhe aane se mana kiya hai; aise hi jhagada ho jata, Mayank aur Samrat ke beech ke kaun aayega."

Riddhima: - "To dono aa jate na." She said making a confused face.

Sujal: - "Agar dono aate to race lagate hue aate; aur aisa hota to 2 reaults possible the."

Riddhima: - "2 Results, wo kaise?"

Sujal: - "Kyunki yan to wo khud hospital me admit ho jate yan ab tak aadhe seher ko hospital pohancha chuke hote."

Riddhima: - "kya Bro aap bhi kitna mazak karte hain….." She said.

Sujal: - "Are meri baat par vishwas nahin hai to ghar ja kar dekh lena."

Riddhima: - "Dekhte hain…."

Then, both of them sat in the car which was sent by Sanjeev and reached their home. Getting out of the car, both of them heard some noises of a fight. Sujal take a sigh and said to Riddhima: - "Mene kaha tha na."

They moved towards the door and stopped to hear the conversation.

Samrat: - "Dad, aapne mujhe jane se kyun roka? Bhaiya ko to roka tha na; phir me to ja sakta tha." He said making a face.

Mayank: - "Kyun, tumhe kyun jane dete; agar mein se pehle nahin mil sakta toh tumhe bhi nahin milne dunga."

Samrat: - "To theek hai dono ko jane dete na; um race laga kar dekh lete ki kaun pehle pohanch jata hai."

Mayank: - "Haan Dad; aapne aisa kyun kiya?"

Samrat: - "Bataiye…."

Mayank: - "bataiye na ab…."

Samrat and Mayank together: - "Chup kyun hai ab aap?"

Sanjeev: - "Tum dono bolne doge to bolunga na; pehle mene tum dono ko isliye roka kyunki agar tum me se ek bhi jata to jhagada aur badh jata aur rahi baat dono ko saath me na bhejhne ki to agar tum dono saath me jate to ab tak aadha sehar hospital me pohanch chukka hota."

He said and on the other side; Riddhima looked at Sujal in amazement and Sujal gave her a smile.

Samrat: - "Kya Dad; isse bekar reason nahin mila tha kya aapko?"

Mayank: - "Life me pehli baar me Samrat ke saath agree karta hoon."

In their cat fights; no one noticed Sujal entering in the house.

Sujal: - "Are jisse lene jane ki baat par itna jhagada kar rahe ho; usse miloge nahin kya?"

Hearing this, all of them turned towards the door and Samrat & Mayank run to hug him. They hug him together and Sujal then moved towards his mom and dad. He touched their feet and then hugged them.

Parting from the hug, Ragini said: - "Kaise ho tum Sujal?"

Sujal: - "Jaise gaya tha bilkul vaisa."

Ragini: - "Haan wo to mein dekh rahi hoon; tu bilkul bhi nahin badla na."

Sujal: - "Aapka beta kabhi badal hi nahin sakta maa."

Ragini: - "Jaanti hoon." She said with tears in her eyes and hugged him again.

Riddhima who was standing quite spoke: - "Are kisi ko meri koi parwah hai; yan mein vaapis jaun?" She said with mock anger.

Mayank: - "Kya Di, aap kitna drama karti ho…" He said and moved towards her and hugged her.

Riddhima: - "Kyun na karun? Aakhir yeh masti mazak hi hamari life ko aur ranggen banata hai."

Sanjeev: - "Bilkul sahi kaha Beta."

Riddhima moved towards him and hugged him. "Kaise hain aap uncle?"

Sanjeev: - "Bilkul Fit & Fine." She smiled and then moved towards Ragini. She hugged her and then all of them rested in hall.

Ragini: - "Riddhima, tum Delhi me kaise? Sujal to keh raha tha ki tum Mumbai ja rahi ho?"

Riddhima: - "Bas Aunty last moment par plan change ho gaya aur mein yahan aa gayi….Kyun aapko mera yahan aana acha nahin laga kya?"

Ragini: - "Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho tum beta?"

Sujal: - "Maa aap isse seriously mat lijiye; har pal drama karti rehti hai yeh….."

Riddhima: - "Kya Bhai aap bhi…….."

She said and all laughed to it; they continued to chat for another one hour and then decided to take a break as Riddhima and Sujal need some time to rest.

Sujal was sitting in his room silently; his eyes were closed and he was smiling. A knock on the door disturbed him and he opened the door to found Mayank standing there.

Suajl: - "Mayank, tum yahan…..aao andar." He said giving him some space.

Mayank entered and stood there silent for some time, then he immediately hugged him.

Sujal: - "Kya hua Mayank?"

Mayank: - "Kuch nahin Bhai, aapki bahut yaad aa rahi thi?"

Sujal: - "Samajhta hoon mein tumhe." They parted and Sujal looked at him, "Koi aur baat hai kya Mayank?"

Mayank: - "Wo Bhaiya aap se kuch zarori baat karni thi."

Sujal: - "Haan bolo na."

Mayank: - "Nahin Bhaiya, abhi aap rest kar lijiye; mein baad me aata hoon." Saying this, he tried to move but Sujal stopped him.

Sujal: - "Ruko, aur batao kya baat hai?"

Sujal asked him again and Mayank said: - "Bhaiya Kashish Di bahut badal gayi hain; wo ab pehle jaise bilkul nahin rahi; jo Kashish hamesha doston ke beech rehti thi, aaj unka koi dost nahin hai; aaj agar unke koi kareeb hai to wo Armaan hai, aap jaante hain Bhaiya in 2 saalon me wo sirf 5-6 baar mujhse mili jab ki jab wo yahan rehti thi to hamesha mujhe apne bhai ke jaise treat karti thi, wo bahut badal gayi hai Bhaiya, bahut zyada. Iska reason kisi ko nahin pata, na Nupur ko aur na ki Gunjan ko."

Sujal listened to him quietly and then replied: - "Mein dekhta hoon ki aage kya karna hai…."

Mayank: - "Ji Bhaiya, ab aap rest kare." Sujal nodded and Mayank left.

Sujal sat on couch thinking about all what Mayank has said. He was lost in his thoughts, when Ragini came inside his room. Sujal was so lost that he didn't even notice that; he came back in the real world when Ragini placed her hand on his forehead. Slowly, Sujal opened his eyes to found Ragini standing there. He smiled and say: - "Are ma aap.."

Ragini: - "Haan mein, kahan khoye hue the tum?"

Sujal: - "Kahiin nahin Maa, wo bas thaka hua tha to rest kar raha tha."

Ragini: - "Jhooth bol raha hai na; kisi baat se pareshan ho tum?"

Sujal: - "Nahin maa, aisa kuch nahin hai; bas safar ki vajah se thak gaya hoon na to thoda headache ho raha hai."

Ragini: - "To tunhe pehle kyun nahin bataya; mein abhi tere liye chai banwa ke lati hoon."

Sujal: - "Nahin Maa, uski koi zarorat nahin hai; mene medicine le li hai, mein abhi theek ho jaunga, vese aap yahan kaise?"

Ragini: - "Wo tere papa ne sabko neeche bulaya tha na to tujhe lene aayi thi."

Sujal: - "Phir chaliye na…." He said moving towards the door but his mom stopped him.

Ragini: -"Koi zarorat nahin hai…."

Sujal looked at her confused and say: - "Kyun Maa?"

Ragini: - "Teri tabiyat kharab hai na issi liye, tu rest kar; mein unhe bol dungi ki jo baat karni hai wo kal kare."

Sujal: - "Iski koi zarorat nahin hai Maa; bas thodha sa headache hi hai na.."

Ragini: - "Par tujhe rest to chahiye na…"

Sujal: - "Wo mein baad me kar lunga, kyunki agar papa ne niche bulaya hai to koi zaruri kaam hi hoga."

Ragini: - "R u Sure?"

Sujal: - "116%" He said with a smile.

The, both of them came in the room; where everyone was waiting for them.

Sanjeev: - "Tum dono ne itni der kahan laga di?"

Ragini: - "Wo Sujal ko headache ho raha tha to mein usse bol rahi thi ki tu rest kar le, par yeh mane to hi na…"

Sanjeev: - "Sujal Beta, tum theek to ho?" He said with concern in his voice.

Sujal: - "Mein bilkul theek hoon papa, abhi mein mama ko bhi yehi bata raha tha, aur aapne sab ko neeche bulaya hai to matlab koi important baat to hogi hi na."

Sanjeev: - "Baat to important hai, par tumhara health se zyada important nahin."

Sujal: - "Mein bilkul theek hoon papa, aap bataiye ki kya kaam hai."

Sanjeev took a sigh and then continued: - "Meri kal Sushant se baat hui thi, aur wo chahta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ki shaadi jald hi ho jaye."

All smiled on hearing this; but the smile on Sujal's face faded. Mayank has the same expression and he looked at Sujal to see his reaction.

Ragini: - "Yeh to bahut achi baat hai."

Sanjeev: - "Haan, baat to bahut achi hai; issi liye mene usse bol diya tha ki Sujal kea ate hi hum sab final kar ke unhe bata dun."

Ragini: - "Final kya karna Sanjeev; Jaldi se inki sagai ka mahurat nikalwate hain aur uske baad inki shaadi bhi jald hi kar denge."

Sanjeev: - "Haan, mene bhi yehi socha hai; mein abhi Sushant ko phone karta hoon."

He picked up his phone to call Sushant but Sujal stopped him: - "Nahin Papa, yeh Shaadi nahin ho sakti."

All looked at Sujal in shock.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Hi Friends
Here is the 1st part of Aazma'aish
I will try to post the next part by sunday and m waiting eagerly for ur response.
Press the like button if u like the update.
Fell free to comment or criticize.
PM me ur suggestions..
Luv Preet
Edited by preet09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
very interesting start..................liked samrat and mayank scenes and their quarrelings..........................oh my why did sujal say like that at the end?????????? he could have first approached kashish and then decided on something na..................now cant wait to read further............cont very soon..................thanks for the pm...........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
lovely part 👏 👏 👏........................
aaawww the beginning was so sweet & emotional .......... 😭.................. SK got separated 😭 😭 😭...........sujal was really sad........😔........

& now kashish has stopped interacting with frnds...&with sujal too............. hoping there is no big complication........ 😊 😊............

loved sujal's character..........his relation with his brothers & sister ......... 😃 😃..........

samrat & gunjan also seem to be very close to each other.......... 😃 😃........

so mayank expressed his doubts to sujal about kashish.......... 😊.......... lets see how sujal sorts it out..............
expecting SK meeting soon.......... 😃 😃...................

continue soon ASAP......... 😃 😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
very nice update👍🏼 👏
plz counti......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
superb, amazing n a very sweet part..

Waiting eagerly for the next part......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
lovely part dear.
really like the way u describe the relations b/w the family!!its seems so good and blessed to have such a grt family.
hope that sujal will u/s kash n try to make her as she ws earlier aur phir inki shaadi bhi honi hai
so eagerly waiting for update dear
pls do cont soon
the story is really nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
gr8 part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
preet update was fantastic dear
abbb jaldi iss cont karo
tc
ammu
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Hi Preet...

I was waiting for this update... so nice of you to update it... The first part was very nice...Liked samrat and Mayank's cute bickerings and also their feelings for Gunjan and Nupur... Sujal is so conccerned for Kashish...but why did he say so in the end... continue soon...

Love
Guglu

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