|AN Writing Challenge~Closed*UPDATE pg 150* - Page 29

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

*EDIT*

And no, Honey...just because I'm editing my res post doesn't mean I've recovered yet. 😳 So no need to celebrate...😛

Now, coming to that scorcher of a scene you wrote...*rubs hands together*

I've a complaint to make. *places hands on hips and glares* WHY did you make Abhi come out of the shower fully clothed? 😲 It's prepostrous!!! *peers over glasses and makes eyes* This is just not done...you make Nikki wear a red swimsuit and Abhi drool over the said piece of clothing (which I'm sure was smaller than his pocket handkerchief) but how come Abhi was fully clothed and that too NOT in a UBS??? 😲 I'm appalled...

Anyway, let's leave that 😛

So coming to the scene...I needed ice packs after reading that but unfortunately all the ice vapourised when I sat in front of the screen that displayed that part 😲 Dekhaa...tumhare scene ne kamaal kar diya! Not melting, par seedha sublimation woh bhi H2O ke saath! 😲 👏 😆 Mere kaano se ab bhi dhuwa nikal raha hai, and that's why I feel like a steam engine at the moment. 😕 Weird, na? Kya karoon...itna bakwas issliye main kar rahi hoon kyunki (1) Kal mera geography test hai jiske liye padhai karne ke baad mera dimaag thoda sa hil gaya hai (2) mujhe badi neend aa rahi hai par phir bhi mujhe iss ke baad maths karna hai and (3) tumhare scene ne mere dimaag ke wiring do dewire karke mujhe confuse kar diya hai. Aur maine yeh kya bola abhi abhi? Main confused hoon...😕

Jo bhi ho, madam, aapko salaam iss scene ke liye! When you said ki mera bday scene kuchh bhi nahi tha, mujhe thoda sa shak tha par ab koi shak nahi hai. Mujhe ab sirf ek hi aur baat kehni hai...

I HOPE YOU DON'T GET BANNED...😆 😆 😆 😛 Continue! Continue! Never end this...main vapourise ho jaun toh bhi koi problem nahi...isse bhi hot scenes likhti raho! 😃 👏

@Annie...I have to say this was your best part yet. At least to me it seemed so. It was so horrendously cute, I can't explain. Goofy protecting Nikki 😆 😆 😆 As if that little Lilliput can do anything to sheild her from the GREAT Dr. Moody 😳 I just hope that furball doesn't interrupt their romance Can you make sure of that? 😳

I absolutely LOVE the Jealous Modi...he's a masterpiece in his own right. NO ONE should be allowed to be that sexy. Especially those cold stares and scorching glares...why am I not dead yet?

You and Honey are giving me a tough time...I'm gonna evaporate very soon if you continue with this! 😆 But don't worry about me...you keep writing!

That song is beautiful, and I'm sooooo glad Abhi apologised! ⭐️ Yay! 😃

Oh, and I also made a VM on that song...in case anyone wants to see 😳:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dEvK0sxLlqU

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Hey khushboooo,

u r so funny .... I alwys love reading your comments. you write as if u are sitting in front of me and talking non-stop .....

I am so glad u enjoyed the scene so much ....

And dekho to sahi .... what my goof ball does ... how he haresses Abhi .... it is going to be fun .... if anyone who can stand upto Dr. moody it is going to be ...... my dearest Goofy ....

And loved your VM .... not sure how I missed it earliar .... and thanks for pasting the link here. I am sure everyone will enjoy it once more .... looking at AN.