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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shalee🤗

first of all let me stedy maself n control ma breath
the first thing i wanna do iz to congratulate u az u pickd up really vry
delicate topic of AN! their lif aftr the revld the truth of abhiz marrig!
n u hav givn justice to that..
u hav proovd urself! n that too in ur 1st ff so hatz off! 👏👏⭐️
really to write smthing lik ths it needz mature writer othriws itz next to imposble!
n u r very mature thta resemblez in ur ff n the way story moved!
m really proud of u inspite of tim limit n being vry bussy u managed to finish it that too very beautifully! 👏👏⭐️


itz ma combined commnt on ur ff!
plzz bear ma childish commntz as m not that mature ...😳


thanx sooo much 4 giving us abhiz past az i had alwaz ths questn that y he marrid that jiyah ,in whch codition??, smthing shuld b ther whch made him to marry her!
u hav writtn that prt beautifully u cleard evrything in simpl n logical language!! i knw that mst b tough part i juz lov whol convo betwn jiyah-abhi!
vry wel done shalee!👏
while reading how jiyah seperate abhi 4m hez mothr we wil get to knw hw cheap n lusty her behaviour izz! hate her mor n mor day by day!

watevr the situation iz nikkiz gang iz alwaz thr wid her if not gang then atlest ridz waz thr ! i juz lov ridz-nikki relatn!
n most imo lov their grp hug!
that givz silnt invisbl support! 😊😊

but when armaan sed
"I think we should add one more rule to Sanjeevani Dr. Modi, so that no senior male doctor can take advantage of junior female ones"

I waz really scrd ! i thot seriously hez gona get a hard punch bt abhi controld himself that too 4 nikki1
when ths small thingzz he doz 4 her, i lov him evn more...

He knows that Nikki was not physically present with him but some where deep inside ,she is with him.😳😳

now i reallly dnt hav wordz 4 jiyaah!
shez so fake n she dared to lie abt havin baby ?? i mean nothing can be mor pathetic than that! that too to shw othrz thta evrything iz gr8t betw her n abhi n to increaz misundrstandin betwn nik n him1
oh gosh i really think using bad wordz 4 her iz itself an insult of thoz wordz!
so itz bettr to shut ma mouth in that!!😡


then abhi-armaan scn waz scarry coz whenevr thez two man com in4nt of eachothr smthing dizastorouz happnz 4 sure!
i really find it so cute when abhi dint want to prov hez lov 4 nik in4nt of armaan bt still sed widout realisin taht he lovez nik n shez hez life! 😊

"Armaan, I love her. My life starts and ends with her. She is my life, my reason to live..

aftr that watevr happnd waz so expected but nikki came in tim thatz y nothing happnd furthr!
Armaan-nik convo waz vry hurtful!
both wer rite in their places as armi felt lik betrayed by frnd n nikkki waz afraid of loosing her lov once agen! bt situation waz lik that !
lov the way u hav describd abhi-nik scn! seemd so real! gr8t!⭐️
she slowly leaned towards him and lay her head on his shoulder to set herself free from the pain which she was feeling in her heart.
Abhi was always a silent comforter for her who gave her strength at hard times.😊😊

that leav me of nikki, really formd tearz in ma eyez !
but I can't stop loving you sed by abhi , made me cry dear😭
u sooo goooood in this shale! to mak me cry ⭐️

no but i lov ur timing1, u knw how n wat shuld happen in respectiv situation!😃⭐️
so true.........
People say that Love is blind because love makes people forget the world around them, for them world is limited to their partner.👏


N then entry of most funny idiot but at th sam tim cutee person our sid!
hez simple name bringz broad smile on ma face!😃😃

then sidz interaction wid evryone waz really nice n hez prancz n sens of humor awesm!😆
but nik dint lik it i think ! seriously i wud hav don th same thing as she did!!
again no one iz at fault!

aww whole grp reunion wid nik waz so cuttee1
n their fightz aww i lov it coz it bringz vry cute smil on nikkiz face she lukz b'ful wid that! bechari koi kitna sahega yaar!

armaanz wordz wer really painful..😭


sid iz completely 🤪 i mean in that situation i waz confusd whethr to pinch hez nose 4 being so cuttee
or to kick him to pakaofy 😆😆
but ya atlst niki got him on rite tim so atlst hez madness distractd her 4m bitttr thoughtz n made hr smile😊 whch waz vry rare phenomenon!


n then pendantwala scn WOWwwwwwwwwwwwwww!👏😃😃
u really knw how to mak thingz serious in one momnt nd then to mak evrything good in anothr!
really lov it to bitz az u knw i alwaz lov AN- clozzness no mattr if they r kissin or juz staring in eachothrz eyez!
both thingz r so passiont! ☺️☺️


seroiously feel vry bad 4 abhi hez so alone, nd to live faar from jiyah he preffrd evn to live in hospitl1

i can clearly imagin this**
"I have not even started forcing you as yet, do you want me to ?" with that he stood up but Nikki took a seat opposite to him hurriedly.😆

even her decision to move on didn't change his commitment.

n aftr thz emotnl prt u agen flippd ma mood n made me smile!
ofcrse coz of our gr8t siddhant !! oh god he waz hillarious i mean he waz relly behavin lik lik a gal! 🤣
(that waz smthing i will do aftr meeting AT)😍☺️
n not ready to leav abhiz hand 😆 chodo mere abhika haath...😆

I wish you go a long way in your career and never came across any situation where you have to give up your dreams".😭

juz love it how only one sentense that too 4m sid who waznt evn frndz wid armaan proprly, made him undrstand hez mistak!
sm thingz juz happnz juz propr tim haz to com thatz it!😃

lov armi-nik patch az alwaz!
az nikki got her frnd back she won half of the battle as he iz vry imp person in her lif!i waz missing their nautanki tooo!😃

juz lov thz prt! sau saal jiyo abhi! nikki tumhare baremehi soch rahi thi!😳
Sid asked again "Do you think your prince charming will enter from that gate right now?" Nikki lowerd her eyes and Sid said "Dr. Modi".

oh shale n suddnly ur ff convertd into songfic aww lov it!
nice choice of song!⭐️
nd finally when sid proposd nikki i felt vry bad 4 abhi-nik but dint get angry on sid! i mean he waz pretty fast if ny othr persn waz thr i wold hav killd him bt i really waznt angry on sid!
but got vry upset n waz sad 4 AN 4 sure!

then armaaan-abhi convo waz really nice part!👏⭐️
juz lov the way u wrote it!
armi had told somthing vry diffclt or imposbl to abhi!
giving hez lif waz vry easy 4 abhi rathr than convincing nikki to accpt nyone else!!
n armi waz evn emotnly blckmailing him to do so... poor abhi1
cn completely undrstand hez stat at that time!!

He can give her a bright, lovely and secure future which you never able to give her"😭


i juz lov thiz para nt gona post evrything..
He always fights with luck no matter how cleverly it plays with him but he never gives up and trys until he win....life takes him at that place where he has no power and strength to fight as his heart is on target, he is trying but everything is slipping from his hand like sand....
he never be like this before and want someone more than his dear life.
Everything which he wants in his life he makes his but fate always snatches it from him........

Awesom dear 👏👏 u hav potreyd ths character(abhi) purfectttly ⭐️❤️
🤗🤗

oh abhi-nikki misunderstood eachothr again due to anger,pain !!
dint listn to eachothr proprly n accusd eachothr.....made the situation ever worse!!

n then nikki abruptly accepted sidz proposal waz but bvious!but i dnt get one thing that hw can her frndz b so stupid that they really thought shez agree to accpt sidz proposl??
they dint undrstand it or they dint want do undrstand!
coz it waz clearly visible that
she waz doing it only 2 mak abhi jealouz! the way she waz talking to abhi....

i must sey only ridz is much clevr!
smtimes i feel lik waz armaan nikkiz best frnd or ridzi??😕😆


that cofee part waz so painful!
i mean both wer hurt! n nikkiz jalan ho rahi hai ??? was vry painful!!😭
she hurt abhi but she waz goin thru the same pain!😭

She wants to give him equal pain as she is in, wants him to suffer as she is suffering now, everything has to be shared between them equally whether it is love or pain.
i dnt think thr iz any bad thing abt it but nikki waznt knowing how hurt abhi waz already n wat jiyah did to him!
thaz y she thought only she iz the one whoz suffering 4m this pain so she did it pupasely! othrwise she wuldnt hav done ths to abhi!!
coz it ruind 3 lives!😭

sid iz ryly innocnt yar , they shud tel him th truth , bechara uski chatni ho rahi hai in sab ke bich me
now I have to think hard about my future as Nikki never wants me to work like Modi style". poor him!!

finally atlst ther misundrstanding cleard!
n hav no wordz to commnt on abhiz sweet torture!😳
poor niki!
y lif iz so unfair!!!!!!1

"Really, you don't love me" "You don't feel anything when I am near you". "You don't feel anything when I touch you". Abhi seductively said in her ear "you don't want me to be near you"
n then Abhi roam his mouth all over her face, neck and shoulder blade but didn't touch any of her body part with his lips.
wat waz he doin??
wat can be worse than ths 4 nik??
oh god! they wer in most complicated phaz of their life....
az they wnted to do,sey many thingz but couldnt....

"Its hurting here. That's what I want. I want you to feel the pain from which I am going through right now".😭

omg but that scene waz vry horrible when sid waznt ther n everyone bussy accusing abhi........
i knw hw he must waz fellin then
but situation stil waz under control untill jiyahz entry!😡
oh god when that women going to pay 4 al thiz n how??😡

but jo hota hai achhe ke liye hota hai........

as nikki got to knw the truth!
agen hatz off to u shale⭐️👏
i mean the way u hav reveald abhiz accdnt n how he got injurd arm
i mean in dmg they faild to giv us the explainatn whch waz vry imp...
so thanx sooo much 4 that......... really well writtn!!👏⭐️

omg abhi knew that it waz jiyah but still he dint do ny legal action against her...
I already loose the battle of my life, my mom not even taken up my accident news properly than how could I prepare her for another shock.
inspite of knowin all ths he still waz bearing her....

Abhi really needed sm support.. n m so so so happy that nik herd all ths convo betwn abhi-jiyah...
abhi waz soo alone he waz neede 2rue lov!
evryone deservz that!! itz a minimum thing then y not him....
m soo glad reading ths part not only coz we alwaz like ths clozzzness of abhi-nikki kiss n all ! ya thatz true i lov it☺️❤️
but got to knw anothr truth of humn behaviour..
human being alwaz needz touch ! touch of pure love!
to remov or if not remov then atleast to 4get that pain 4 while!
he needed dat lov,care touch.... whch nikki provided him!
it may waz wrong socially but tht waz pure love, need of eachothr need to b loved truely by other!😊😊
oh god i had goozbumpz all ovr ma body while reading it!
purfect! itz somthing iwantd to c in dmg!😳😃
i couldnt c abhi crying but i wanted him to cry bittrly in her armz so that
all hiz pain wil vanish wid thoz tearz!
dmg se hope rakhna waz 🤢
but u gav me exactly what i wanted😃🤗
thanx a tonn 4 thz.........
🤗

She provides comfort to him so that he can pour out all his pain in her embrace. She puts her head on him and crying with him, she wants to take away all his pain from him. Abhi snuggles more in her embrace, held her tight from waist and pull her close, he gets someone once in a life with which he can share his fear, pain and tears comfortabl😭😊



watevr happnd betwn them, i found that soo natural,pure n b'ful....waz needed!
itz human nature....cnt hold their emotnz back n some times they need to show their emotnz.. no othr option😊

Nikki roaming her hand which was resting on his shoulder lovingly on his face to touch every texture of his face with her fingers. Abhi close his eyes to feel her touch on his face, she start kissing gently on his cheeks, eyes, forehead, chin and travel down to his neck...................
Abhi also close his eyes as well in surrender and both their lips parted in order to explore each other. Both kiss each other as if there is no tomorrow, Abhi also pulled her more close by sliding his hand from her back to waist by clasping it tightly. They both drawn in their passion, desire and feelings that they forget where they standing and for how long they are like this. Both holding each other tightly in their embrace, kissing like as if there is no tomorrow.........


but then sidz call waz ..dnt hav wordz
that reminded them the reality of their relatn.....😭😭

"Don't come near me Nikki. You get nothing in return except infamy. I have nothing to offer you better in life like Sid. Go away!
" 😭😭
First time in life I am able to share my pain which hiding deep inside my heart to someone but when she is going away far from me in life.😭😭
thz whole incident made me cry!!!!

love all the engagemnt preprationz...
relly well writtn..⭐️
felt really bad 4 sidz mothr!

nd abhi-sidz mom convo waz pretty good!😃
lov it when she sed "What kind of wife you have? She doesn't even know whether you going to come or not.
atlst someone got to knw abt jiyahz tru colorz that too in first meeting wid her😊

You said it is my time to suffer the pain that's why I am here"


n ma fav song!❤️
ths song itself makz me cry so u can imagin ma state when i waz readin ths song imagining abhi-nikki in it
really vry painfull but too gud yaa👏

shale till ths much story it waz diffrnt i mean i could predict whatz gona happn but aftr engagemnt the story took complete turn whch waz unexpected !😲
u really a good writer not only 4 passionate,emotnal,angry acnz but also suspense..............😊
gr8t job.. ur ff iz veriety of alll............⭐️ lov it


watevr happnd waz sooooo scarry 1!
i mean unpredictabl... itz really diffclt 4 me to commnt!
u made me speechless ths time....😳😳

kay! i love how u described all the scenez i mean media,police,investigation was if evrything iz real! clearly visibl..
hatz off.........👏⭐️


abhi haz givn her hez swear
nw ths situation waznt limitd to them lik usual but it haz involved abhiz career,reputation,life ... it waz social issue now1
it waz delicate issue m proud of u coz u handled it that too vry well n agen proved urself 😳👏👏

hey shalee

first of all let me stedy maself n control ma breath
the first thing i wanna do iz to congratulate u az u pickd up really vry
delicate topic of AN! their lif aftr the revld the truth of abhiz marrig!
n u hav givn justice to that..
u hav proovd urself! n that too in ur 1st ff so hatz off! 👏👏⭐️
really to write smthing lik ths it needz mature writer othriws itz next to imposble!
n u r very mature thta resemblez in ur ff n the way story moved!
m really proud of u inspite of tim limit n being vry bussy u managed to finish it that too very beautifully! 👏👏⭐️


itz ma combined commnt on ur ff!
plzz bear ma childish commntz as m not that mature ...😳


thanx sooo much 4 giving us abhiz past az i had alwaz ths questn that y he marrid that jiyah ,in whch codition??, smthing shuld b ther whch made him to marry her!
u hav writtn that prt beautifully u cleard evrything in simpl n logical language!! i knw that mst b tough part i juz lov whol convo betwn jiyah-abhi!
vry wel done shalee!👏
while reading how jiyah seperate abhi 4m hez mothr we wil get to knw hw cheap n lusty her behaviour izz! hate her mor n mor day by day!

watevr the situation iz nikkiz gang iz alwaz thr wid her if not gang then atlest ridz waz thr ! i juz lov ridz-nikki relatn!
n most imo lov their grp hug!
that givz silnt invisbl support! 😊😊

but when armaan sed
"I think we should add one more rule to Sanjeevani Dr. Modi, so that no senior male doctor can take advantage of junior female ones"

I waz really scrd ! i thot seriously hez gona get a hard punch bt abhi controld himself that too 4 nikki1
when ths small thingzz he doz 4 her, i lov him evn more...

He knows that Nikki was not physically present with him but some where deep inside ,she is with him.😳😳

now i reallly dnt hav wordz 4 jiyaah!
shez so fake n she dared to lie abt havin baby ?? i mean nothing can be mor pathetic than that! that too to shw othrz thta evrything iz gr8t betw her n abhi n to increaz misundrstandin betwn nik n him1
oh gosh i really think using bad wordz 4 her iz itself an insult of thoz wordz!
so itz bettr to shut ma mouth in that!!😡


then abhi-armaan scn waz scarry coz whenevr thez two man com in4nt of eachothr smthing dizastorouz happnz 4 sure!
i really find it so cute when abhi dint want to prov hez lov 4 nik in4nt of armaan bt still sed widout realisin taht he lovez nik n shez hez life! 😊

"Armaan, I love her. My life starts and ends with her. She is my life, my reason to live..

aftr that watevr happnd waz so expected but nikki came in tim thatz y nothing happnd furthr!
Armaan-nik convo waz vry hurtful!
both wer rite in their places as armi felt lik betrayed by frnd n nikkki waz afraid of loosing her lov once agen! bt situation waz lik that !
lov the way u hav describd abhi-nik scn! seemd so real! gr8t!⭐️
she slowly leaned towards him and lay her head on his shoulder to set herself free from the pain which she was feeling in her heart.
Abhi was always a silent comforter for her who gave her strength at hard times.😊😊

that leav me of nikki, really formd tearz in ma eyez !
but I can't stop loving you sed by abhi , made me cry dear😭
u sooo goooood in this shale! to mak me cry ⭐️

no but i lov ur timing1, u knw how n wat shuld happen in respectiv situation!😃⭐️
so true.........
People say that Love is blind because love makes people forget the world around them, for them world is limited to their partner.👏


N then entry of most funny idiot but at th sam tim cutee person our sid!
hez simple name bringz broad smile on ma face!😃😃

then sidz interaction wid evryone waz really nice n hez prancz n sens of humor awesm!😆
but nik dint lik it i think ! seriously i wud hav don th same thing as she did!!
again no one iz at fault!

aww whole grp reunion wid nik waz so cuttee1
n their fightz aww i lov it coz it bringz vry cute smil on nikkiz face she lukz b'ful wid that! bechari koi kitna sahega yaar!

armaanz wordz wer really painful..😭




sid iz completely 🤪 i mean in that situation i waz confusd whethr to pinch hez nose 4 being so cuttee
or to kick him to pakaofy 😆😆
but ya atlst niki got him on rite tim so atlst hez madness distractd her 4m bitttr thoughtz n made hr smile😊 whch waz vry rare phenomenon!


n then pendantwala scn WOWwwwwwwwwwwwwww!👏😃😃
u really knw how to mak thingz serious in one momnt nd then to mak evrything good in anothr!
really lov it to bitz az u knw i alwaz lov AN- clozzness no mattr if they r kissin or juz staring in eachothrz eyez!
both thingz r so passiont! ☺️☺️


seroiously feel vry bad 4 abhi hez so alone, nd to live faar from jiyah he preffrd evn to live in hospitl1

i can clearly imagin this**
"I have not even started forcing you as yet, do you want me to ?" with that he stood up but Nikki took a seat opposite to him hurriedly.😆

even her decision to move on didn't change his commitment.

n aftr thz emotnl prt u agen flippd ma mood n made me smile!
ofcrse coz of our gr8t siddhant !! oh god he waz hillarious i mean he waz relly behavin lik lik a gal! 🤣
(that waz smthing i will do aftr meeting AT)😍☺️
n not ready to leav abhiz hand 😆 chodo mere abhika haath...😆

I wish you go a long way in your career and never came across any situation where you have to give up your dreams".😭

juz love it how only one sentense that too 4m sid who waznt evn frndz wid armaan proprly, made him undrstand hez mistak!
sm thingz juz happnz juz propr tim haz to com thatz it!😃

lov armi-nik patch az alwaz!
az nikki got her frnd back she won half of the battle as he iz vry imp person in her lif!i waz missing their nautanki tooo!😃

juz lov thz prt! sau saal jiyo abhi! nikki tumhare baremehi soch rahi thi!😳
Sid asked again "Do you think your prince charming will enter from that gate right now?" Nikki lowerd her eyes and Sid said "Dr. Modi".

oh shale n suddnly ur ff convertd into songfic aww lov it!
nice choice of song!⭐️
nd finally when sid proposd nikki i felt vry bad 4 abhi-nik but dint get angry on sid! i mean he waz pretty fast if ny othr persn waz thr i wold hav killd him bt i really waznt angry on sid!
but got vry upset n waz sad 4 AN 4 sure!

then armaaan-abhi convo waz really nice part!👏⭐️
juz lov the way u wrote it!
armi had told somthing vry diffclt or imposbl to abhi!
giving hez lif waz vry easy 4 abhi rathr than convincing nikki to accpt nyone else!!
n armi waz evn emotnly blckmailing him to do so... poor abhi1
cn completely undrstand hez stat at that time!!

He can give her a bright, lovely and secure future which you never able to give her"😭


i juz lov thiz para nt gona post evrything..
He always fights with luck no matter how cleverly it plays with him but he never gives up and trys until he win....life takes him at that place where he has no power and strength to fight as his heart is on target, he is trying but everything is slipping from his hand like sand....
he never be like this before and want someone more than his dear life.
Everything which he wants in his life he makes his but fate always snatches it from him........

Awesom dear 👏👏 u hav potreyd ths character(abhi) purfectttly ⭐️❤️

oh abhi-nikki misunderstood eachothr again due to anger,pain !!
dint listn to eachothr proprly n accusd eachothr.....made the situation ever worse!!

n then nikki abruptly accepted sidz proposal waz but bvious!but i dnt get one thing that hw can her frndz b so stupid that they really thought shez agree to accpt sidz proposl??
they dint undrstand it or they dint want do undrstand!
coz it waz clearly visible that
she waz doing it only 2 mak abhi jealouz! the way she waz talking to abhi....

i must sey only ridz is much clevr!
smtimes i feel lik waz armaan nikkiz best frnd or ridzi??😕😆


that cofee part waz so painful!
i mean both wer hurt! n nikkiz jalan ho rahi hai ??? was vry painful!!😭
she hurt abhi but she waz goin thru the same pain!😭

She wants to give him equal pain as she is in, wants him to suffer as she is suffering now, everything has to be shared between them equally whether it is love or pain.
i dnt think thr iz any bad thing abt it but nikki waznt knowing how hurt abhi waz already n wat jiyah did to him!
thaz y she thought only she iz the one whoz suffering 4m this pain so she did it pupasely! othrwise she wuldnt hav done ths to abhi!!
coz it ruind 3 lives!😭

sid iz ryly innocnt yar , they shud tel him th truth , bechara uski chatni ho rahi hai in sab ke bich me
now I have to think hard about my future as Nikki never wants me to work like Modi style". poor him!!

finally atlst ther misundrstanding cleard!
n hav no wordz to commnt on abhiz sweet torture!😳
poor niki!
y lif iz so unfair!!!!!!1

"Really, you don't love me" "You don't feel anything when I am near you". "You don't feel anything when I touch you". Abhi seductively said in her ear "you don't want me to be near you"
n then Abhi roam his mouth all over her face, neck and shoulder blade but didn't touch any of her body part with his lips.
wat waz he doin??
wat can be worse than ths 4 nik??
oh god! they wer in most complicated phaz of their life....
az they wnted to do,sey many thingz but couldnt....

"Its hurting here. That's what I want. I want you to feel the pain from which I am going through right now".😭

omg but that scene waz vry horrible when sid waznt ther n everyone bussy accusing abhi........
i knw hw he must waz fellin then
but situation stil waz under control untill jiyahz entry!😡
oh god when that women going to pay 4 al thiz n how??😡

but jo hota hai achhe ke liye hota hai........

as nikki got to knw the truth!
agen hatz off to u shale⭐️👏
i mean the way u hav reveald abhiz accdnt n how he got injurd arm
i mean in dmg they faild to giv us the explainatn whch waz vry imp...
so thanx sooo much 4 that......... really well writtn!!👏⭐️

omg abhi knew that it waz jiyah but still he dint do ny legal action against her...
I already loose the battle of my life, my mom not even taken up my accident news properly than how could I prepare her for another shock.
inspite of knowin all ths he still waz bearing her....

Abhi really needed sm support.. n m so so so happy that nik herd all ths convo betwn abhi-jiyah...
abhi waz soo alone he waz neede 2rue lov!
evryone deservz that itz a minimum thing then y not him....
m soo glad reading ths part not only coz we alwaz like ths clozzzness of abhi-nikki kiss n all ! ya thatz true i lov it☺️❤️
but got to knw anothr truth that ..
human being alwaz needz touch ! touch of pure love!
to remov or if not remov then atleast to 4get that pain 4 while!
he needed dat lov,care touch.... whch nikki provided him!
it may waz wrong socially but tht waz pure love, need of eachothr need to b loved truely by other!😊😊
oh god i had goozbumpz all ovr ma body while reading it!
purfect! itz somthing iwantd to c in dmg!😳😃
i couldnt c abhi crying but i wanted him to cry bittrly in her armz so that
all hiz pain wil vanish wid thoz tearz!
dmg se hope rakhna waz 🤢
but u gav me exactly what i wanted😃🤗
thanx a tonn 4 thz.........
🤗

She provides comfort to him so that he can pour out all his pain in her embrace. She puts her head on him and crying with him, she wants to take away all his pain from him. Abhi snuggles more in her embrace, held her tight from waist and pull her close, he gets someone once in a life with which he can share his fear, pain and tears comfortabl😭😊



watevr happnd betwn them, i found that soo natural,pure n b'ful....waz needed!
itz human nature....cnt hold their emotnz back n some times they need to show their emotnz.. no othr option😊

Nikki roaming her hand which was resting on his shoulder lovingly on his face to touch every texture of his face with her fingers. Abhi close his eyes to feel her touch on his face, she start kissing gently on his cheeks, eyes, forehead, chin and travel down to his neck...................
Abhi also close his eyes as well in surrender and both their lips parted in order to explore each other. Both kiss each other as if there is no tomorrow, Abhi also pulled her more close by sliding his hand from her back to waist by clasping it tightly. They both drawn in their passion, desire and feelings that they forget where they standing and for how long they are like this. Both holding each other tightly in their embrace, kissing like as if there is no tomorrow.........


but then sidz call waz ..dnt hav wordz
that reminded them the reality of their relatn.....😭😭

"Don't come near me Nikki. You get nothing in return except infamy. I have nothing to offer you better in life like Sid. Go away!
" 😭😭
First time in life I am able to share my pain which hiding deep inside my heart to someone but when she is going away far from me in life.😭😭
thz whole incident made me cry!!!!

love all the engagemnt preprationz...
relly well writtn..⭐️
felt really bad 4 sidz mothr!

nd abhi-sidz mom convo waz pretty good!😃
lov it when she sed "What kind of wife you have? She doesn't even know whether you going to come or not.
atlst someone got it in first meeting wid that jiyah..😊

You said it is my time to suffer the pain that's why I am here"


n ma fav song!❤️
ths song itself makz me cry so u can imagin ma state when i waz readin ths song imagining abhi-nikki in it
really vry painfull but too gud yaa👏

shale till ths much story it waz diffrnt i mean i could predict whatz gona happn but aftr engagemnt the story took complete turn whch waz unexpected !😲
u really a good writer not only 4 passionate,emotnal,angry acnz but also suspense..............😊
gr8t job.. ur ff iz veriety of alll............⭐️ lov it


watevr happnd waz sooooo scarry 1!
i mean unpredictabl... itz really diffclt 4 me to commnt!
u made me speechless ths time....😳😳

kay! i love how u described all the scenez i mean media,police,investigation was if evrything iz real! clearly visibl..
hatz off.........👏⭐️


abhi haz givn her hez swear
nw ths situation waznt limitd to them lik usual but it haz involved abhiz career,reputation,life ... it waz social issue now1
it waz delicate issue m proud of u coz u handled it that too vry well n agen proved urself 😳👏👏

nikki-abhi jail scene waz really nice!⭐️
that waz goin to b last time nik gona enter in jail....
to obey hiz swear...😭
oh how they both lov each othr.............😭❤️

n nik telling sid that she want to brk up n hez telling her abt her lov 4 abhi waz so painfull!
ths tim painfull 4 sid! poor him....
nevr wantd him to b hurt.. hez so nice n innocnt!!!1
but it waz rite tym to tel him th truth....
really lov the sid-nik scene too! that hw she told him n how he simply undrstood widout ny comlicationz........😊⭐️


i had rinckel on ma 4head n sadness in ma hrt when i waz reading the part where police dreggd him to van n during whch all media ppl made fool of that inspetor n clicked abhiz photo n evn all ppl tried to hit him

oh i cnt bear ths pain now..😭

i can undrstand how painful that must b to nikki
how dare jiyah to compare hrself wid nikkiz unconditional lov...😡

didn't you do the same today which I done at that time. You also left him to suffer alone didn't you?"😭


n then their meetin wid board membrz i meah m proud of nikki (abhiz nikki pehalwan) that atlst thz time she waznt silnt but she spok the truth n evrbody had to agree to wat she waz seying.... 😊
but again her resigning waz hurtful!
but shez nikki no one can stop her 4m doing wat she wantz 2 do..

but love meanz sacrifice... we cnt ignore it!
but watevr nikki did i mean she not only sold her car but also her home....
dint evn think abt herself 4 once..
that showz true love......... unconditionl love....😊😭

oh shale m sorry but i dnt hav wordz to praiz u dear⭐️

nd last entry arjun saraswat waz last ray of hope 4 her!!⭐️
i really lov the way u described abt him n hiz principlz!
n determination...😊😊

waznt evn imagind n cant evn imagin ths 😭
(The people showing their anger toward Abhimanyu by burning his mannequin, speaking bad words about him and demanding justice from court to hang him for killing a patient)😭


really lov the way story waz moving!
n wel-writtn! ⭐️
One visit of Arjun Saraswat in the police station to meet Dr. Abhimanyu Modi about the Shekhar Talpade's murder case is spread like fire in the jungle.
u hav writtn it as if u r newz editor n all.. proffesionl typz..
so real..... hatz off!😃

oh god nik n abhi both r equally stubbrn n no one is ready to backoff!
oh ma respct 4 their lov iz increasin mor n mor day by day...oh gosh
love AN!!!! here also both of them fighting....😊😃
arjun ki to wat lag gayi..😆

but due to ths fight nikki had to pay a lot i mean she sold her houz hw can nyone lov lik thiz ?? ths extnt ..only AN cn do tht.. lov iz seriously blind...😊
wel done shale...........👏⭐️

night scn waz too scarry when pll wer aftr nikki oh god
thnxz to u shale that nothing happnd to nikki

awwww........
Nikki puts her hand above her and teary replies "I know that Ridhimma but I am not helping him to make him mine. I just want to proof his innocence to all that's it". 😭


that bodyguard part waz really 😆
so typical of abhi! oh dear theze two ppl r crazzy ..😆😆
they r crazzy abt eachothr n we r crazzy about them 😃

Nikki thoughts "I regretted that times a lot to not support you when you actually needed it but not this time. I am not like Jiah".
awww nikz u dnt evn compare urself wid that chudail ..😡
( mai achi wali chudail hoon haan shale😳😆)


n then the court scn waz out standing !⭐️
abhi waz totlly ... i dnt knw to scold him or to hug him....
bt i lov AN'z love!
neithr nikki broke her swear not abhi backoff from hez statemnt!
aww gosh😭
th way u reveald the truth n proved abhi as wel as nikki innocnt waz really gr8t!😃⭐️👏
juz lov lov lov that!❤️
how nik took help of copz n caught jiyah red-handed waz gr8t!
really nice story n wel writtn⭐️

n finally arjun provd ANz innocence!😃😃
a perfct story !
na na na picture abhi baki hai na!!
main to ab start hoga!
AN confession.................😍☺️☺️


ohh that Abhi cald her n as usual dint pleasd but almst orderd her to cum as if itz her need!😆😆
aww butttt i lov abhi 4 ths.........🤗❤️
hez like use haak hai niki pe! awwwww 😳😳
🤗


hayeee when u mentioned the name marine drive na i jus jumpd4m ma seat n fell
down u know!
oww god u dnt knw hao haapy u made me by ths!
i dint evn expectd !!u again got succssfull 2 surpriz me dear......
oh i lov u i lov u i lov u 4 ths!❤️🤗
itz ur one of the dream destination n ma fav toooo!!😃😳
owww abhi-nikki ovr ther * faintz, diez*☺️
awwwwwww muuuuuuuaaaaaaahhhhhhhh 4 thz shale..


*high tidez??😲
bechare finally they r meeting still difficultiez r not leaving them!
small n simpl thingz also becom difficult in th case of AN!😆
but that makz their lov mor special na!!!😳
awwwwww 😍☺️
they n their lov iz unique!!!!⭐️☺️❤️

oh god cz of it i skippd ma hrt bit!😲😳
u pland to kil me na shale?????
Abhi and Nikki eyes are searching for each other there, Both turned and find each other 20 steps far from each other, the love, desire and longing fro each other rushing toward in their heart, body and soul. ☺️☺️

n then their exchage of hugz n emotionz, kissss................☺️❤️
i dnt hav wordz! i cnt tel u how happy u made me by that!!
first tim m speechless n m haapyy abt it...............😃😃
u alwaz do ths to me n i lov u mor coz of it🤗❤️

Abhi remain still standing there to watch his love standing right front of his eyes, he is too dazed in mesmerizing the beauty of his love whose standing all wet in the rain. The tears of happiness fill her eyes to watch her love standing there in front of her eyes, she can't resist herself to hold more and run toward him.☺️☺️
oh i lov each n evry bit of ths scene..........

cnt quote all thngz dear.......😳 so..
Abhi watch her running toward him and .....................................
................he also holding her tight above the ground near his chest.
☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️❤️❤️

n their stupid fightz here tooo in middl of road ,flooded water1
yeh dona kahin bhi shuru ho jate hai ...😳
chahe wo argumnt ho ya.... kisss 😆

After long time when..........After all you are responsible for all my sins"
☺️☺️

Nikki smiles to hear this and kept her head on his chest which is vibrating fast in back and forth in order to gasp oxygen to overcome the passion same as her condition.
(mine too waz same condtn☺️☺️)

Their longing and desire today can break any border and barrier, even they ready to faint in order kiss each other but don't want to let go of each other.
They both drawn into each other once again☺️😳

awww ths(abov) comlete scn waz brethtaking☺️☺️😍
n then their emotnl tlkz , care 4 each othr, love...........☺️❤️

"Promise me Nikki that you will not do anything like this in future"😭

abhi-armi exchane of talk n expression wz compltly shocking....😲
thanx 4 explaination 4 that tooo.......😃😉

n then inside abhiz houz...☺️😳

oww only abhi can do ths . i love him 4 ths hez such a gr8t man
Nikki put off her clothes, wore the bath robe than heard knock on door "Can I come in" ⭐️
oh lov AN............😍

n then the massage..😳 khatam hua nahi ke they start fighting wid each othr😆 n then .........☺️
Nikki gets frustrated and pushes him on bed while grabbing it from him but landed on top of him.☺️☺️

oh thank u so much 4 14 prt!
u dnt knw how m i feelin ryt now!😳🤗

n then final update came.......
i dint want ths to happn....
but ...........

love the whole scn on the bed☺️☺️

Nikki lends on Abhi on bed but before she move he swirl her down under his
.......................................... They get intoxicated with their taste and their passion works like a drug to them which taking them into pleasure.

aur yeh armaan bhi na !!😡
if he cnt com then callz her n disturbz them all the time.😡

bt i lov nikkiz reaction on hez call az if he waz watching them doing that stuff....😲😲🤣
lov it to the core!!!!!!!❤️

dinner at armaanz place waz hillariouz man........😆
armaan iz impossble....... n poor nikki!😆

and the lawn scene waz tooo cutee,hot...........☺️😳

yeah they had waitd 4 long........
Abhi said with seriousness "Don't stop me. Today I don't have any control on my feelings of getting you back in my life. Today I am scared of my own feeling for you. Let this day pass to control myself before I brake all barriers. Bye" and kiss her on cheek before leaving.
😳😃😃

aww the flat scn waz sooo cutee😳
"Hospital is near about by 30 min, Market is 5 min far and School is 15 min far".
"We are going to have two kids as they get company of each other but if they both fight with each other than don't you think we have to think about more company for them".
😲😲nikki to gayi kam se 😆😆

but at the same tim part waz emotnal... too ⭐️👏
When you have a house than why didn't you shift here rather than seeking accommodation in hotel". Abhi lower his head in order to meet her eyes "This house I brought for us. Leaving here without you is worse than hell for me. This house realized me more the emptiness in my life without you if I shifted here"
u really good in ths shale...........⭐️

aww lov how he held her hand unknown to her n slid the ring in hr fingre...
i cn imagine whole scene..... sooo peacefull.........😍
n nikki mimick like abhi waz shooo cutee!😆
nik can handl abhi but i can undrstand how her frndz must b feeling when abhi waz staring them lik that....🤣🤣 bechari galz...




n finally the day arrived 4 whch not only AN but also we wer waiting despirately........
THE AN MERRIGE CEREMONEY 🥳

aww thatz so sweet of him 2 ask her likingz to her frndz...
and the venue of the marrg waz awesome haye😍☺️ beach....

n abhi sang a song waz tooooooo cutee n adorable!😳

but yeh armaaan bhi na!!
nikki singin song waz hilariouz 😆oh poor abhi........... but i enjoyd it a lot!
aftrall they r AN!
ther marrg shuld b unique lik their lov na!!!!!!1😉😆😆

gr8t marrg i hav evr seeeeenn!!
oh i lov it shale.................muaahhhh!!!!!!11❤️
m so behavin lik wacko🤪😆😆
m soooo happyyy😃😃!!!!!


😆and then the last prt middl of night prt...☺️☺️

oh ma god they wer on deck of boat i mean no othr place iz az romantic az ths, that too 4 1st night aftr marrige!☺️😳

oh gosh shale r u trying to kill a dead person lik me again????😆
Abhi standing there holding the railing of boat, he is in Trouser and white shirt whose is totally unbutton. The cold breeze and wind blowing his shirt back ☺️☺️ *diez agen*

I know how long we wait for this moment sed nikki !
( we also waiting despirately.............)😍☺️
"Sshhhhh'..Don't say anything. Let me just feel that I am not dreaming it but its true that you are mine and only mine".☺️

oh gosh n agen i dnt hav wordz 4 ths
i mean i hav read many AN romantic momntz but u still mange to giv me somthing diffrnt than usual ,whch waz so sensuous, passionate,hott..... n wat not!!☺️
m speechless agen!
the way u described it na i had ghoozbumpz agen all ovr ma body n i got freezzd 😳 so engrossed in the story i dint evn move....☺️
misd ma breath n miss ma callz on cel tooooo dear i swear.....😆

but wow awesom!⭐️👏
juz lov how they becom finally one.....☺️
oh god lov each n evry description u hav givn!☺️
i feel shy to evn queto them
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

The night of their being together forever is taken place in the beautiful moonlight, in the middle of sea where lots of waves mingle with each other in silence and cold breeze which actually lighten the heat and passion in the body of two lovers. ☺️



awwwww....... lov it to the core!!!!!1❤️
The sun rise from the lap of sea, brighten both their faces not only from light but also with the joy and happiness of being one from two and life to start which they always dream. Nikki tilt her head up and Abhi bend to captures her lips in kiss to seal their new beginning of life will be happy, prosper and blissful together. ☺️

THIS NOT THE END
BUT NEW BEGINNING............. 😃


awww shale i want mor 4m u now...
i want one more story m greedy ..yezz i ammm
plzzzzzzzzzzz i begg!
i lov each n evry emotnal ,passionate, hot,sensuous ......
part of ur ff!
the way u hav potreyd the charactrz waz outstanding!
not only AN but their frndz ,sid, jiyah, advocate....evryone!!
lov it to the core!
u made me smile,cry,laugh, speechless,got goozbumpz,hert betz fastnd...
awwww ultimately u made ma day........🤗
thank u so much 4 ur petience az wel!
n sorry to mak u wait 4 long.................😳
lov it to bitz n lov u tooooo!🤗❤️
hatzz of!⭐️👏
u hav done a gr8t job!!!!
congratz once agen !!!!!!!!!
n best of luck jaana.......
🤗

Edited by chaitali_an - 14 years ago
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guyz i knw m really vry late
n due to whch i cnt evn vot 4 u!
m genuinly sorry 4 that!

bt nw m gona read echh ff as i hav holidez!
so sorry 4 that!!
wil coommnt one by one az i finish reading

thanx to all
1n all the best 4 2morrow🤗
jhappizz🤗

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guys tommorow is the big day for, u award ceremony
my all good wishes r with u
BEST OF LUCK TO ALL U GUYS WHO HAS GIVEN SUCH A LOVELY FF SHORT SCENES N POEMS
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
this is from me
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by muni-loveAN - 14 years ago
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wow cherry what a long comments good going girl👍🏼

Edited by muni-loveAN - 14 years ago
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@Cherry...ya know this page wasn't loading properly coz of that huge comment of yours?? WOW...it's amazing!
And it's crazy!!! *applause*
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okay, so I'm gonna reserve the next page for the awards...but first I need to get there...*spam*
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RESERVED.

For a scene I'm presenting to my best friend on her birthday 😃
Thought this would be a nice place to post 😳
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credit: Sayra 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome, welcome people!
🤗
*rolls out red carpet for everyone*
I would have brought Abhi Nikki themselves as our special guests for this auspicious occasion...😳 but we don't want them to get heart attacks after seeing all the things we made them do, na! 😆 They'd get scared...becharas 😲
Anyway, continuing...😳
It was a lovely journey, this. We enjoyed reading everything that was posted!
So now the time has come to honour this work...
So ladies and gentlemen (if there are any 😆), put your hands together for the awards ceremony!
Firstly...the nominees, as per your choices: 😉
Love Wager, A Birthday Gift, Just Another Day, You're Still The One, Love Doesn't Understand Logic.
Love Doesn't Understand Logic, Bairi Piya.


Can't Help Loving You, Mitzi's One Shot, A Birthday Gift, Just Another Day.
Bairi Piya, Love Wager, Ecoutez Moi, Love!, Love Wager, You're Still The One, Love Doesn't Understand Logic.

Love Doesn't Understand Logic, You're Still The One , Love Wager, A Birthday Gift.

You're Still Yhe One, Love Wager, Ecoutez Moi,love!

Can't Help Loving You, Love Wager, You're Still The One, Just Another Day.

Dying In Your Arms, Cold Stare, I Miss You.

Love Wager, You're Still The One, Love Doesn't Understand Logic, Bairi Piya.

Ecoutez Moi, Love! ,Love Doesn't Understand Logic, That Morning...Love strikes, Love Wager.
Bairi Piya, Love Wager, Ecoutez Moi, Love!

Ecoutex Moi, Love!, Bairi Piya, Love Doesn't Understand Logic, Love Wager.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cXzNkV0tpc[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 years ago
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And now...the auspiscious moment has arrived, ladies! 😉 😆
Here, I announce our award winners...taaliyaan! 👏

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JcEhlLRwr0Q[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYo--gs3v2A[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYiJyq_NicM[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJvw6_txyh4&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1JavWsLuRg[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MgGiPxMYyAk[/YOUTUBE]


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EniEaMyZYgI[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wg9ygjBpz44&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOVdSjO0IS8[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFzizcdHOcM&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9xnDlKkVMY&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uknKOBE5J1g&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
Well...that's it! 😃
Hope you had fun, people!
And my heartfelt congratulations to everyone who won! 🤗
And also a huge thanks to all who participated! 😃
Love you all...😳
So ending this ceremony with a beautiful VM by Mich:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IHGSGcBKu9E[/YOUTUBE]
Video credits: to the uploaders,
and to AT and SG for enacting them lolz! 😳
Award Sig credits: to Marausha, Maryam, and me. 😃
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 years ago

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